第一篇：2017年考研英語一小作文點(diǎn)評及

2017年考研英語一小作文點(diǎn)評及范文

今年英語一的小作文不出預(yù)料，再一次考到了推薦信。

在英語一的考試當(dāng)中，推薦信已經(jīng)考查過兩年了。例如我們英語一在2011年就考查過向你的朋友推薦一部電影。具體題目要求是Write a letter to a friend of yours to1)recommend one of your favorite movies and;2)give reasons for your recommendation.2015年考察的是you are going to hold a club reading session.Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.You should state reasons for your recommendation.而今年的作文題目要求給新來的澳大利亞國籍教授James Cook介紹你城市的tourist attraction。因此，考生不用驚慌只要把2011年或2015年的小作文，主要是推薦原因部分，稍作修改即可成文。這就啟發(fā)我們2018屆的同學(xué)們要高度重視歷年真題，因?yàn)榭歼^的話題或是書信類型會反復(fù)考查。

那么今年的作文具體該如何來寫呢?今年考題的Direction要求向新來的James Cook教授推薦旅游景點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目的要求，我們可以判斷本文為公務(wù)信函，語域?yàn)檎秸Z域，即不能出現(xiàn)縮寫、省略問句和和口語表達(dá)。

稱呼： Dear Prof.James Cook, 注意稱呼中，Prof后面的句點(diǎn)不能丟，稱呼最后的逗號號不可丟，也不能寫成冒號。當(dāng)然如果稱呼不寫Prof.寫成Mr.James Cook 也是可以的。

正文

第一段：寫作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：1：歡迎Cook 教授來中國;2：寫信目的，表明推薦。用到了這樣的表達(dá)Welcome to China.I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot-Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.第二段： 寫作內(nèi)容為推薦原因?？梢詮娜齻€角度來考慮：美景、美食和熱情的人們。用到了這樣的表達(dá)：I think you must like it for the reasons as follows.To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on.In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on theaverage street.Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)寫信目的。Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you.I am sure you will enjoy it.最后，表達(dá)祝福 Best wishes for you!落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號不能丟;新祥旭官網(wǎng)http://004km.cne to China.I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot—Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.I think you must like it for the reasons as follows.To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on.In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street.Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you.I am sure you will enjoy it.Best wishes for you!Yours sincerely, Li Ming

新祥旭官網(wǎng)http://www.xxxedu.net/

第二篇：2014考研英語一小作文

下面為大家提供了歷年研究生入學(xué)考試的11個小作文

模板，祝大家2014考研成功！

第一、投訴信

Dear_______________

I am ______________(寫信人的身份)。I venture(敢于、冒險)to write you a letter about_________________(為什么投

訴，即抱怨的內(nèi)容)。

The focus of the complaint is___________(抱怨內(nèi)容的核

心).For one thing,____________（抱怨內(nèi)容的一方面）。For another,____________(抱怨內(nèi)容的另一方面)。Honestly speaking,__________(可觀的評論).But_______（抱怨產(chǎn)生的原

因）。

All in all，There is still much room for improvement.Won’tyou please see what can be done to eliminate（消除、排除）this

terrible problem? Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

第二、求職信

Dear_____________,I am applying for the position of ________(想申請的職位).I majored in _______(主修的專業(yè)).My training in ____________(接受過的培訓(xùn))definitely meets your qualifications(職位要求)。My complete resume is attached.I will graduate on ______(畢業(yè)時間)from _________(畢業(yè)院校).In addition to the required courses of my major,I have ______(除專業(yè)外，選修的課程).I also have some experience in_______(曾有的社會工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)).I am a man with good team spirit and eager to learn.May I have a personal interview at your convenience? I can be reached by telephone.I am grateful for any consideration of my application you’ll give.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

第三篇：2018考研英語一小作文網(wǎng)友版

寫寫幫文秘助手(004km.cn)之2018考研英語一小作文范文（網(wǎng)友版）

考后關(guān)注》 》

以下是2018考研英語(一)寫作范文（網(wǎng)友版）：點(diǎn)擊查看寫作題目

dear sir or madam，i am writing this letter in order to invite you to attend the forthcoming graduation ceremony.the ceremony will be hosted in the auditorium on our campus, at 10 o'clock in the morning on next monday, january 15.it is advisable for you to dress formal.please let us know your decision as soon as possible so that we could send you further details concerned.since you are so popular among us that we sincerely hope you could accept this invitation and give the graduates a wonderful memory of our campus.if you are available, we request the honor of your company.it will be highly appreciated if you could give us an earliest favorable reply.your sincerely, li ming

第四篇：考研英語小作文經(jīng)典舉例及點(diǎn)評

考研英語投訴信經(jīng)典范文舉例及點(diǎn)評

范文之一

［Directions］: Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem.Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement, Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time.But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.After we used it for several days.we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly.When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperture range from 0℃ to 9℃.This problem has affected our normal life.Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.Yours faithfully，Li Ming ［文章點(diǎn)評］

這封投訴信可以說寫得非常好，結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，第一段首先肯定對方按時送貨上門的做法，隨后簡述冰箱出了問題。第二段說明具體問題，第三段提出要求。

范文之二

Dear Sir:

With reference to our order No.W98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged.The packages containing the computer sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question.We unpacked the computer sets with care and can only assume that damage must be due to careless handling at some stage prior to packing.We shall be glad if you will replace all 20 sets as soon as possible.Meanwhile, we have put the damaged computer sets aside in case you need them to support a claim on your suppliers for compensation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 范文之三

Dear Mr.Chang:

On September 10, our order for 280 women's cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers.We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

考研英語小作文四種英文道歉信范文講解

因過失或疏忽做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發(fā)覺后要立即寫信給對方賠禮道歉，這是一種禮貌。道歉信要寫得坦率，誠懇。

1、因未能踐約赴宴致歉Unable to keep one's promise Dear Miss Nancy，Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day.Hoping to see you soon.Truly yours, Tom 親愛的南希小姐：

小兒上周六突然生病，因此未能應(yīng)約赴生日宴，殊覺抱歉，希原諒，再見。

2、因遲復(fù)來信致歉Because of answering one's letter late Dear David: I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated 7, December sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable.When your letter arrived, I was just in Hong Kong.As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up.Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret.I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip.I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.Sincerely yours, Tom 親愛的戴維：

請原諒我收到您12月7日的來信后遲遲未復(fù)，現(xiàn)將原因告訴您，相信您一定會諒解的。您的來信到來時，我正巧在香港，家人無法及時轉(zhuǎn)遞。你的信一直放在我寫字臺上，直到我回到才看見，拖至今天才回信，深表歉意。

這次出去旅行飽覽了許多美麗景色，下次見到您時，將告訴您一切。

3、因未能及時還書致歉Unable to return borrowed book on time Dear Kate:

Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest.I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me.Never having seen the book, she was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer.However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner.Thanking you again for the loan.Sincerely yours, Tom 親愛的凱特：

我遲遲未能歸還您的那本《魯濱遜飄流記》，請原諒。該書我讀得津津有味。讀完后，正預(yù)備歸還您時，我的表妹來訪，見這本書也感興趣，定要借去一讀。為了讓別人也能分享您那本書所給予的樂趣，我不能及時歸還。我想再延遲些日子奉還，諒您不會介意的。

再次感謝您的慷慨。

4、因遺失借書致歉Because of losing a borrowed book Dear Frank:

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me last week.I read it everyday and intended to finish it next month.Last night when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame.I was so careless with my things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.Yours truly, Tom 親愛的弗蘭克：

很抱歉，上星期您借給我的那本書竟遺失了。我每天都在看，準(zhǔn)備下個月看完。昨晚我回到我的臥室，到處也找不到那本書。我將盡力找到它。萬一找不到，我只好買一本新的還您。

但是，新書恐怕不能代替那本舊書吧！舊書跟舊友一樣，一旦失去就不能再得。舊書與往事相連，這種不可彌補(bǔ)的損失，皆由我起。我對待一切太大意了，這次給我一個警告，叫我以后要小心。

考研英語小作文10篇經(jīng)典索賠信函范文

為應(yīng)對2006年考研英語小作文要求，本網(wǎng)站將定期為各位網(wǎng)友推薦一些英語應(yīng)用文的范文供大家參考。本文是關(guān)于抱怨信函方面的范文，大家可以借鑒一下也是很有幫助的！

抱怨和索賠信函（Complaints & Claims）的目的是為了獲取更好的服務(wù)，對已出現(xiàn)的問題求得盡快的、妥善的解決。它通常是買方由于對收到的貨物不滿而書寫，如：貨物未按時到達(dá)；貨物雖抵達(dá)，但與訂單所載不同；貨物有損毀現(xiàn)象；貨物數(shù)量短缺或多余；貨物質(zhì)量與樣品不符；服務(wù)不合理以及收費(fèi)過高等，這些均是抱怨、索賠的正當(dāng)理由。

書寫抱怨、索賠信函時，不妨開門見山出原先雙方同意的條件，然后列舉事實(shí)以表示有何不滿，以及為什么不滿，最后提出解決的方法。內(nèi)容應(yīng)明確、清楚、有理，語氣要簡潔、堅決。避免使用憤怒和使對方過于難堪的措辭（除非你所抱怨的問題反復(fù)發(fā)生，且多次投訴而毫無結(jié)果）。

1）For Delay in Shipment(由于發(fā)貨延遲而抱怨)Dear Sirs，The furniture we ordered from you should have reached us a week ago.Needless to say , the delay in delivery has put us to great inconvenience.It is therefore imperative that you dispatch them immediately.Otherwise we shall be obliged to cancel the order and obtain the goods elsewhere.Please look into the matter as one of urgency and let us have your reply as early as possible.Yours faithfully, John Thomas 親愛的先生們：我方從貴方訂購的家具應(yīng)于一星期前收到。不用說，發(fā)貨的延遲給我方帶來了很大的不便。因此，貴方必須立即發(fā)貨，否則我們將被迫取消訂單，到另處訂貨。

請緊急處理此事，并盡快告知結(jié)果。

2）For Poor-Packing（由于包裝不妥提出索賠）Dear Sirs , We are writing to inform you that the toys covered by our order No.519arrived in such an unsatisfactory condition that we have to lodge a claim against you.It was found upon examination that 10%of them are broken and some are badly scratched , obviously due to the improper packing.Therefore, we cannot offer it for sale at the normal price and suggest that you make us an allowance of 20% on the invoiced cost.This is the amount by which we propose to reduce our selling price.If you cannot accept , I?m afraid we shall have to return them for replacement.Sincerely yours, John Thomas 親愛的先生們：我們寫信通知貴方，519號訂單玩具已收到，但貨物狀況很不令人滿意，故我們不得不提出索賠。經(jīng)檢查，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)有10％的貨物破損，而且一些也有嚴(yán)重磨損現(xiàn)象。很明顯，這是由于包裝不妥造成的。因此，我們無法以原價售出貨物。建議貴方依照發(fā)票金額給予20％的折扣，這是我們所建議降低的售價額度。如果貴方無法接受，我們將不得不退貨，要求替換。

3）For Damage of Goods（由于貨物損壞而抱怨）Dear Sirs, Our order No.JT-8 the glassware you supplied to our order of 3rd July was delivered by the shipping company this morning.The 160 cartons containing the goods appeared to be in perfect

condition.But when I unpacked them with great care, I regret to report that 10 cartons of glassware badly cracked.We trust you can understand that we expect the compensation for our dam aged goods.Yours faithfully, John Thomas 親愛的先生們：訂單JT－8號我方于7月3日從貴處訂購的玻璃器皿已于今早貨運(yùn)公司送到。裝有貨物的160個紙箱完好無損。但當(dāng)我們小心打開檢查時，發(fā)現(xiàn)有10箱玻璃器皿嚴(yán)重破損。相信貴處能理解我方要求對損壞貨物進(jìn)行賠償。

4）For Inconformity（由于貨物不符而抱怨）Dear Sirs ，On March 12, we ordered 1,200 shirts size 42.But unfortunately, we received completely different articles-children clothes today.We can only presume that a mistake was made and the children clothes were for another order.As I have several customers waiting, please arrange for the replacements at once.Faithfully yours, John Thomas 親愛的先生們：三月十二日我訂購了一千二百件四十二號男式襯衣。但不幸的是，今天我們收到了完全不同的貨物――兒童服裝。我們想貴方一定搞錯了，兒童服裝是另一份訂單。由于有幾位客戶在等貨，故請貴方立即安排更換貨物。

5）For Unacceptable Substitute（由于無法接受替代物而抱怨）Dear Mr.Cliff, During the past three months I have placed two sizable orders for The Handy Desk Companion by Roy.specifying the hard back binding.But both time you sent me paper-back binding because you were out of stock on the hard-back.Fortunately, I am still selling a few of the paper backs, but more and more customers ask for the hard-back ones.(At least two of our competitors have this reference book in hard-back in our cities).Enclosed is my order for 75 copies of The Handy Desk Companion in hard-back.Please do not, under any circumstances, send me anything else.I have plenty of the paper-back in stock.Very sincerely yours, Jorn Thomas 親愛的克里夫先生：在過去的三個月中，我兩次向貴方訂購了相當(dāng)數(shù)量的由羅伊所著的《便利的辦公伙伴》一書，指定需要精裝本。但貴方由于精裝本缺貨，兩次寄給我的都是平裝本。

值得慶幸的是，我仍賣出一些平裝本，但越來越多的顧客索要精裝本。（本對少有兩家競爭者出售此書的精裝本）。

隨信寄上訂單，購買75本《便利的辦公伙伴》精裝本。請無論如何，不要寄給我其它替代物。我現(xiàn)已大量平裝本的庫存。

6）For Shortweight(由于短重而要求索賠)Dear Sirs ，We have just received the Survey Report from Shanghai Commodity Inspection Bureau evidencing that all drums of apple juice weigh short by form 1 to 5 kilogram, totaling 300 kilogram.As the drums were intact , it is obvious that apple juice was short weight before shipment.Under such circumstances , we have to file a claim against you to the amount of RMB

850 plus inspection fee.We are enclosing the Survey Report No.TE(95)115 and looking for ward to your settlement at an early date.Yours faithfully.親愛的先生們： John Thomas 我方剛剛收到上海商檢局的栓驗(yàn)報告，證明所有蘋果汁每桶少一至五公斤,總共減少三千公斤。由于果汁完好無損，顯而易見，蘋果汁估裝運(yùn)前就不夠重量。在這種情況下，我方不得不向貴方提出八百五十元人民幣的索賠，另加檢驗(yàn)費(fèi)用。現(xiàn)隨信附上第TE（95）115號商檢報告，希望早日解決這一問題。

7）For Over-Shipment（由于到貨數(shù)量過多而抱怨）Dear Sirs, We thank you for promptness in delivering the Chinaware we ordered on 20th Dec.The number of cartons delivered by your carrier this morning was 360, whereas our order was for only 320.Unfortunately, our present needs are completely covered and we cannot make use of the extra goods.Please inform us by fax what we are to do with the extra goods.Yours faithfully, 親愛的先生們：對于我方12月20日訂購的瓷器，非常感謝貴方及時發(fā)貨。然而，今早貴方承運(yùn)人送來360箱貨物，而我方只訂購了320箱。很不幸，我方目前的需要已完全飽和，無法接受多余的貨物。請傳真通知我方如何處理。

8）For Inferior Quality(由于質(zhì)量低劣而抱怨)Dear Sirs，With reference to our Order No.315, we are compelled to express our strong complaints for the inferior quality.Compared to the sample No.169, the arrived self-adhesive correction tape is very transparent and does not satisfactorily cover the error being corrected.We shall be glad to have your explanation of this inferiority in the quality, and also to know what you purpose to do in this matter.Sincerely yours.Jorn Thomas 親愛的先生們：關(guān)于我方第315號訂單，由于到貨質(zhì)量低劣，我主被迫表達(dá)強(qiáng)烈的不滿。同169號樣品經(jīng)較，此次運(yùn)到的修改帶稀薄，無法滿意覆蓋被改正的錯誤。我方希望貴方對這一情況加以解釋，并告知貴方對此事的處理方法。

9）For Errors in an Invoice(由于發(fā)票錯誤抱怨)Dear Sirs ，When your sales representative, Helen Xu, called on me in late December,she told me that you were offering a special price of $ 147 on the ,Wizard icemaker during the month of January.I ordered six on January 17, figuring the total amount of the order at $882.However ,the invoice that accompanied the shipment showed the amount due as $ 1098.It is apparent that I was charged the regular price of $ 183 instead of the lower price I was promised.I?m enclosing a check for $ 882 in payment of the order.Unless I hear from , you to the contrary ,I will assume that this is the correct amount and that my account is clear.If this is not the case ,I would like your permission to return the six Wizard icemakers to you at your expense.Sincerely yours, 親愛的先生們:當(dāng)貴方銷售代表海倫·徐去年十二月底拜訪我時,告知今年一月份奇術(shù)制冰機(jī)將以每臺147美元的價格銷售。我于一月十七日訂購了六臺，應(yīng)支付882美元。然而，貴方的銷售價常規(guī)價每臺183美元，而并非所許諾的低廉價格。隨函附上一張882美元的支票。除非我聽到異議，否則我將認(rèn)為款額正確、帳務(wù)已清。如果情形相反，請允許我退回六臺奇術(shù) 制冰機(jī)，所需費(fèi)用全由貴方支付。

10)、For Poor Performance on a Service Contract(由于服務(wù)質(zhì)量差而抱怨)Dear Mr..Weidner.Contract No.17854

You will recall that you and I have discussed at least three times during the past six months the low quality of service provided by your hotel.After each conversation, service is improved for a short time , and then reverts.back to the old standard that brought abort my original complaints.I will summarize in this letter my previous discussions about your performance.You may wish to refer to our contract as you read my comments.1.Windows :According to the contract ,all windows are to be cleaned once a month.This is not being done.Often from six to eight weeks elapse between cleanings.Even when the windows are cleaned ,the job is less than satisfactory.2.Carpets: The carpets should be vacuumed after each workday.Although your service people do show up each day , their efforts can only be described as careless.3.Miscellaneous : I could mention a dozen other cleaning responsibilities that are not being met satisfactorily--furniture , lavatories and ash trays , for example.I call your attention to paragraph 7c in the contract , Mr..Weidner , in which the provisions for revocation of the contract are described.I do not like to consider such a possibility , but I must have your written assurance that all provisions of the contract will be met.I will be pleased to meet with you once more to discuss the situation.I assure you that this a matter of some urgency to me.Yours faithfully, John Thomas 親愛的韋德羅先生：您會記得，在過去六個月中，我們至少三次討論過貴旅店服務(wù)質(zhì)量低劣問題。每次討論過后，服務(wù)質(zhì)量在短時間內(nèi)有所提高，但不久又退回到原先的水平。

在這封信中，我將就先前討論問題做一概述。您在閱讀此信時，也許需要參考我們的合同.1.窗戶：遵照合同，每月清洗一次所有窗戶。然而。此項(xiàng)工作并未得到落實(shí)。每次清洗相隔六至八周。即使窗戶被清洗過，效果也不盡人意。2.地毯：每個工作日之后，對地毯應(yīng)真空吸塵。盡管貴方服務(wù)人員每天露面，但工作很不仔細(xì)。3.各種事務(wù)：我可列舉許多令人不滿意的清潔工作，例如家具、衛(wèi)生間、煙灰缸等等。韋德羅先生，請您注意我們合的每7c一段，有關(guān)終止合同的說明。我本人并不想考慮這種可能，但您是必須書面保證履行合同中的所有條款。我很愿意同您再次會晤，討論目前情形。這事對于我至關(guān)重要，二盼急迫?？佳凶魑牧魧W(xué)申請信和獎學(xué)金申請信范文

留學(xué)申請信和獎學(xué)金申請信中須寫明下列幾點(diǎn)：(1)寫明申請學(xué)校和所學(xué)專業(yè)。(2)提供申請人的個人資歷。(3)索取申請學(xué)校相關(guān)的申請表等。

一、留學(xué)申請信(Application for Admittance)經(jīng)典范文之一 Dear Sir，I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University in June next year.I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D.degree.I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission.Thank you for your kind assistance.Sincerely yours, Wang Feng 經(jīng)典范文之二 Dear Sir，I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University.Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S.degree.I plan to continue my study and research in this field.I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics.I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school.And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours, Li Ming

二、獎學(xué)金申請信(Applications for Scholarships)經(jīng)典范文之一 Dear Sir:

I should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering to students from other countries.Would you please send me the necessary application froms and any further details about the scholarships.I am a postgraduate student in Beijing Science and Engineering University.I major in microelectronics engineering, and do some research work during my study years.I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my score report card.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to your reply.Respectfully yours, Ma Minghao 經(jīng)典范文之二 Dear Dr.Gomes:

I have read the announcement of the scholarship in chemistry that the University of Colorado is offering, and I would like to submit my application.The enclosed application form for admission to the graduate school of your university will give my educational history.However, I would like to point out that I have just received an M.S.Sincerely yours, Li Ming 經(jīng)典范文之三 Dear Sir:

I am writing to you in the hope of obtaining the scholarship in history to support my study and some research work.I am a graduate student in the Department of History in the Northeast University for Nationalities.In addition to study and research work, I also write books.Recently I have finished a book on the history of the Origen nationality in China, which is to be published by the World Book Publishing House in the coming year.I would like to focus on that field for my advanced studies.Enclosed please find three letters of recommendation and my resume.Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply.Respectfully yours, Li Ming

考研英語摘要題型寫作思路要點(diǎn)講解

考研英語摘要題型寫作是難度非常大的一種寫作形式，隨著考生英語水平的不斷提高，這種題型應(yīng)引起考生的重視。在2006年考研英語又出現(xiàn)該題型，盡管這種題型真正考到的概率不是很大，但是本人覺得各位網(wǎng)友還是要熟悉這種題型，以背急時之需。

1、摘要題型寫作要點(diǎn)：

① 動筆之前，考生一定要認(rèn)真仔細(xì)地閱讀所給原文，弄懂原文大意，掌握原文要點(diǎn)。

② 摘要的長度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一，考試時應(yīng)遵守規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)限制。

③ 在做摘要時考生切忌照搬原文。

④ 摘要應(yīng)與原文的觀點(diǎn)保持一致，并且仍按原文的邏輯順序排列。

⑤ 重點(diǎn)反映主要觀點(diǎn)，刪除細(xì)節(jié)。

⑥ 簡化從句，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。

⑦ 檢查與修改時，考生應(yīng)重點(diǎn)檢查是否遺漏了原文的要點(diǎn)或包含了細(xì)節(jié)。

2、摘要題型寫作實(shí)例

① 試題題目

Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one?s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.(246 words)

3.talk about death when millions of people die 4.become confused and anxious when each time the dead people are very few and the death rates are almost equal

5.people?s fearfulness 6.seem to control nature 7.avoid death ② 原文要點(diǎn)：

1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors 2.avoid talking about death ③ 參考摘要：

People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)用實(shí)例講解考研英語摘要的寫作要點(diǎn)

本文談?wù)勗鯓訉懹⒄Z概要(Precis)。要寫好一篇文章的概要應(yīng)考生應(yīng)具備兩種基本能力。首先應(yīng)具備理解原文，掌握全文中心思想的能力；其次應(yīng)具有用簡練的語言將原文的中心思想表達(dá)出來的能力。一般說來，概要的篇幅為原文的1/3至1/4，因此在寫概要時務(wù)必注意語言的概括和精練。概要寫作一般按下列步驟進(jìn)行：

1.認(rèn)真仔細(xì)地閱讀原文兩遍，理解和掌握全文的內(nèi)容。

2.仔細(xì)地閱讀考題指令，明確了解考題要求，在原文上標(biāo)出重點(diǎn)，如議論文中的論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)；記敘文中的發(fā)展、高潮、結(jié)局等。

3.再一次閱讀原文，并將所需要采用的要點(diǎn)列出。要點(diǎn)的記錄應(yīng)盡可能簡潔明了。

4.根據(jù)記錄的要點(diǎn)寫出概要的初稿，并盡可能不參照原文，除非當(dāng)你需要核實(shí)某個要點(diǎn)。這將十分有益于用自己的語言組織內(nèi)容，而不是照抄原文中的某些詞句。完成初稿后應(yīng)數(shù)一數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)，但千萬不可在寫完每一句句子即數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)。這樣不僅浪費(fèi)寶貴的時間，而且會攪亂寫作的思路。

5.進(jìn)行一些必要的修改和調(diào)整后，謄清完稿，并在最后注明具體字?jǐn)?shù)。

應(yīng)考生在重讀謄清稿時，有兩點(diǎn)還應(yīng)牢記：首先，你寫出的概要內(nèi)容必須忠實(shí)于原文，或者說精確(accurate)。概要中所有的內(nèi)容和信息必須來源于原文，既不可篡改原文內(nèi)容也不能包括原文未涉及到的內(nèi)容。其次，概要讀起來應(yīng)是一完整連貫的段落。要取得這一完整連貫，就應(yīng)該使用一些連接詞(link－words)，如?but?,?and?,?however?,?also?等連接要點(diǎn)；同樣，也可使用諸如?since?,?though?,?even if ?，?when?,?after?,?before?等詞。請看下面一例子：

The sentry watched a hawk that hovered overhead, looking for some unsuspecting prey to pounce upon.Then he heard the distant, muffled roar of planes, then silence.For the past week he had been told to take note of everything that happened on the hill within his range of vision, and to report anything suspicious.The hill led to an experimental factory, where new and secret weapons were tested.There was a threat of war and the factory would be invaluable to the enemy.So the approaches to it were watched day in, and day out.He shifted his position;he felt that he had been crouching in the heather since the beginning of the time, but only a couple of hours of the day?s duty had passed.Suddenly he saw something falling from the sky like snow, only it was not snow.[He put out his hand and caught bits of that were drifting near him.They were thin strips of metal to confuse delicate instruments, so that it would not be possible to detect the landing of enemy craft.Next he heard a long, low, continuous roar from the east and saw bundles descending from the sky which looked like umbrellas opening, but which be knew to be parachutes with men hanging from them.He wanted to go at once to give the alarm, but he had to be sure that the parachutes were not his own men out on an exercise.The men were on ground now.One of them pointed in the direction of secret factory and they all began marching toward it.He had no more doubts and set off at once down the hill.He crawled slowly, sometimes on his stomach, sometimes on his side, weaving decided that he had ample cover and started to run.But he had erred, for bullets were soon whistling past him.He drooped flat on the ground.Nobody came to search for him, so he counted up to a hundred and then began crawling again.He moved tortuously and as silently as he could to his camp at the foot of the hill.]

Describe in not more than 80 words what the sentry saw and did from the moment when the strips of metal fell from the sky until he got back to his camp.Use your own words as far as possible.Do not include anything that is not in the passage.1.Points(Saw and Did)

1)Put out hands;caught strip metal.2)Saw bundles.3)Waited.4)Saw men on ground.5)One pointed;all marched.6)Went downhill.7)Crawled—stomach, side—to stream.8)Started running.9)Dropped flat(why?—bullets).10)Counted 100;crawled.11)Silently to camp.2.Rough Draft(Linking of Points)（寫得不好的摘要）

When the sentry held out his hand to catch what was falling out of the sky, he found that it was strips of metal.The bundles began coming down.The sentry waited until men appeared on the ground.One of them pointed and the sentry saw them march towards the factory.Crawling on his stomach and on his side, the sentry moved downhill.He began running when he came to a stream, but dropped down when he was shot at.After counting up to a hundred to himself, he began crawling silently again downhill.(95 words)

3.Fair Copy(Corrected Draft)（寫锝比較的摘要）

After catching hold of metal strips falling out of the sky, the sentry saw bundles descending and, after a time, some men appeared on the ground.One of them pointed and they all began marching towards the factory.The sentry crawled downhill on his stomach and on his side.When he came to a stream, he began running but dropped down when the men shot at him.He counted up to a hundred, then silently started crawling again towards his camp.(80 words)考研英語小作文摘要題型常見的寫作句型

常見的摘要句型共有43個，競學(xué)網(wǎng)把它收集在一起，如果考生能熟練背誦出來的話，那么對備考這類題型肯定非常有幫助。

1）This paper deals with...2）This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3）This essay presents knowledge that...4）This thesis discusses...5）This thesis analyzes...6）This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8）This article gives an overview of...9）This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10）This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents uptodate information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This essay represents the proceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...21)This paper offers the latest information regarding...22)This paper is devoted to examining the role of...23)This article explores...24)This paper expresses views on...25)This paper reflects the state of the art in...26)This paper explains the procedures for...27)This paper develops the theory of...28)This article reviews the techniques used in...29)This paper investigates the techniques and procedures to...30)This article is about...31)This essay is related to...32)This paper concerns...33)This paper gives an account of...34)This article tells of...35)This paper tries to describe...36)This paper provides an analysis of...37)This paper reports the latest information on...38)The author of this article reviews...39)The writer of this paper discusses...40)The writer of this essay tries to explore...41)The aim of this paper is to determine...42)The purpose of this article is to review...43)The objective of this paper is to explore...

第五篇：2012年1月考研英語一小作文(標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版)

學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣

金龍中學(xué)—七年級（2）班

活動目的：

1.通過雷鋒的生平簡介，使學(xué)生知道雷鋒的一生是全心全意為人民服務(wù)的一生，從而激發(fā)學(xué)生自覺地向雷鋒叔叔學(xué)習(xí)。

2.通過“學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣”的主題班會活動，目的在于引導(dǎo)學(xué)生明白：雷鋒精神永遠(yuǎn)不會過時。

3.通過活動，希望更多的“小雷鋒”出現(xiàn)在我們的日常生活中。活動準(zhǔn)備：

1.收集一些雷鋒詩歌和學(xué)雷鋒三字經(jīng)。2.排練情景劇，學(xué)唱歌曲《學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣》。活動形式：朗誦、情景劇、合唱、討論等?；顒舆^程： 1.老師開場白

2.主持人宣布主題班會開始 主持人蘭甜甜: 尊敬的老師，主持人胡文怡: 親愛的同學(xué)們。

主持人（合）:大家早上好。三年（1）班主題班會“學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣”現(xiàn)在開始。

主持人蘭甜甜:三月，陽光明媚。主持人胡文怡:三月，萬物復(fù)蘇。主持人蘭甜甜:三月，春風(fēng)送暖。主持人東:三月，大地?fù)Q新顏。

主持人（合）:同學(xué)們，三月，是什么日子呢? 主持人蘭甜甜：“學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣”接過雷鋒手中的搶，我們要做新時期共產(chǎn)主義接班人。

主持人東:是啊，共產(chǎn)主義的接班人就要繼承革命英雄的光榮傳統(tǒng)。主持人蘭甜甜：同學(xué)們，雷鋒叔叔是我們永遠(yuǎn)學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣，我們每年都學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒叔叔做好事，可是我們并沒有真正地了解雷鋒叔叔。2.雷鋒簡介《雷鋒的生平》

主持人東:現(xiàn)在讓我們一起來走近雷鋒叔叔吧！請聽《雷鋒的生平》 主持人蘭甜甜：雷鋒叔叔的一生雖然短暫，但他的光輝形象卻永遠(yuǎn)留在人們的心中。

主持人東: 同學(xué)們，雷鋒叔叔有許多經(jīng)典的格言，你能說出幾句嗎？（請同學(xué)發(fā)言）3.詩歌朗誦《雷鋒》

主持人蘭甜甜：接下來請聽詩歌朗誦《雷鋒》。4.情景劇《學(xué)雷鋒》

主持人東:感謝兩位同學(xué)的深情朗誦。

主持人蘭甜甜：哎，梓東啊，學(xué)雷鋒不能光嘴上說，得體現(xiàn)在行動上啊。

主持人東: 有行動啊，大家看，那里有一群少年在學(xué)雷鋒呢。請欣賞情景劇《學(xué)雷鋒》。5.說說身邊的活雷鋒 主持人蘭甜甜：是啊，學(xué)雷鋒不丟人！雷鋒精神是鞭策我們前進(jìn)的不竭動力，雷鋒精神永放光芒。

主持人東：學(xué)雷鋒做好事不在事大事小，只要能幫助到他人，就是做了一件好事。同學(xué)們，在你的身邊有這樣的活雷鋒嗎？請大家討論一下。（請同學(xué)發(fā)言）

6.全班朗讀《學(xué)雷鋒三字經(jīng)》

主持人蘭甜甜：是的，只要我們有一顆善良的心，一對善于發(fā)現(xiàn)的眼睛，一雙助人為樂的小手，那我們一定也可以成為一個合格的小雷鋒！現(xiàn)在讓我們一起來朗讀《學(xué)雷鋒三字經(jīng)》。（請同學(xué)朗讀《學(xué)雷鋒三字經(jīng)》）

主持人東:學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒要真正體會“雷鋒精神”，并在學(xué)習(xí)，生活中實(shí)踐，讓我們以實(shí)際行動做雷鋒式的好少年！現(xiàn)在有請我們的班主任老師為我們今天的主題班會做總結(jié)。7.班主任總結(jié)

8.合唱《學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣》

主持人琪：謝謝老師，雷鋒精神在我們心中永駐，主持人東: 雷鋒精神已在我們心中生根。

主持人（合）:同學(xué)們，學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣，讓我們一起唱起來吧！讓我們在歌聲中結(jié)束今天的主題班會。（全班齊唱歌曲《學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒好榜樣》）