第一篇：高二英語writing學案

投訴信范文

第三次校本檢測書面表達范文： Dear Sir or Madam, As one of your regular customers, I am writing to complain about the poor quality of the electric dictionary bought in your online store that enjoys years of reputation.In order to improve my English, bought it from your online store on January 1st,but I found it has some problems after using it for a short period of time.To begin with, the battery needs recharging after a mere 2 hours of use.This means that I need to carry my charger with me when I go out for a day.In addition, the buttons on the electronic dictionary are so small that it is nearly impossible to type anything with them.Personally, I find this to be completely unacceptable.Therefore, I would like to either change the electronic dictionary for another model that works well or a full refund.Your help is greatly appreciated.Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei

投訴信要點

語言注意點：投訴信應重點表明投訴的原因，敘事應客觀、準確、簡潔。最后提出的解決方法應切實可行。在表達自己的不滿時，語言要把握分寸，不失風度。

結構要點：投訴信是對產品或服務表示不滿的信件，一般分三個部分： 1.提出投訴內容； 2.說明具體情況； 3.提出解決辦法。1.投訴內容。一般放在信的開頭。常用的表達法有：

1)I am writing to you to complain about...which I received/bought...2)I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...2.具體情況。一般講述對商品質量或售后服務不滿意的地方。常用的表達法有：

1）When we checked..., we noticed...2）When I took...out of the bag and examined...closely, I found...3）When I unpacked...and tried to use it, it did not work.4)There are some problems with… that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, … For another,...5)I can hardly bear /put up with it any more.3.解決辦法。常用的表達法有：

1）Please let me know what you intend to do in this matter.2）I look forward to receiving a full refund of...3)We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to… 4)We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.投訴信模板

1）Dear_____，①I am ______（自我介紹）.②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______(商品質量或者服務).③The reason for my dissatisfaction is _____（總體介紹）.④In the first place,______（抱怨的第一個方面）.⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二個方面）.⑥Under these circumstances, I find it _____（感覺）to _____（抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果）.⑦I would appreciate it very much if you could _____（提出建議和請求）.And I would like to have this matter settled by _____（設定解決事情最后期限）.⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

2）Dear_____，①I am writing to complain about the poor service of your_______ which I received _______.(時間）

②The causes for my dissatisfaction are three points as follows: 1)_____(投訴的一個方面);2)_____(投訴的另一方面);3)(投訴的第三個方面).③Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to __________(客觀的評論).④I am sure that you are able to understand my discontent, and I hope for a satisfactory solution.⑤I would be grateful if you could _____(表達本人的愿望)as soon as possible.試一試：

假如你叫李明，上星期你買了一臺冰箱（refrigerator），但是收到貨發(fā)現(xiàn)有質量問題，現(xiàn)在請你寫一封投訴信，投訴信應當包括以下內容：

1)What’s wrong with the refrigerator?

the temperature in the refrigerating compartment：around 15℃（the standard（標準）temperature range: from 0℃ to 9℃）

the food stored in it: easily go bad 2)What do you want the store to do? eg.To repair it or to refund in full 注意：(1)短文須包括上述全部要點，應適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(2)詞數(shù)：100左右。短文開頭已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。Dear Sir，I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time._____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第二篇：english writing 英語寫作

如何避免由于漢語思維導致的英語寫作錯誤

對英語作文的典型錯誤進行分析既是檢驗漢譯英水平的最佳方法，也是提高英語作文水平的最有效途徑。在此我們充分展示一下錯誤分析的方法和作用。下面 列舉的學生譯文收入了學生們在練習和考試中普遍出現(xiàn)的、具有代表性的英語錯誤。我們要仔細對照原文，努力挑出其中的錯誤，并且學會改正它們。在這個過程 中，我們可以做一件非常有用的事，就是把找出的錯誤分門別類，然后根據(jù)自己容易犯的錯誤類型，有針對性地進行深入的英語學習和寫作訓練。

翻譯錯誤 的出現(xiàn)不僅是因為水平有限，而且往往出于思維的惰性。把漢語原文的詞語都變成英文詞語，按一定順序串成句子，確實已經讓初學者費了不少腦筋。這時尤其要認 識到，寫作過程遠遠沒有結束。你還需要自問:詞語是否譯得恰當?要避免虛假對應;詞語間搭配是否合適?要避免照搬漢語搭配;句子結構是否自然?要避免中式 英文和翻譯腔。

需要說明的是，有一類常見錯誤這里沒有列舉，那就是英語單詞的拼寫問題。因為它屬于英語學習的基礎內容，與漢譯英本身沒有直接關系。但大家還是要充分意識到正確拼寫的重要，勤查詞典，避免此類錯誤的發(fā)生。

原作文

Chinese have the custom that they eat sweet dumplings made of glutinousrice flour and appreciate festive lanterns at the night of January 15.錯誤分析

(1)少用冠詞:“中國人”應該譯為the Chinese(people)。再比較:“美國人”可譯為Americans，而“日本人”必須加冠詞，譯為the Japanese.(2)搭配不當:the custom that they eat…不通，應改為the custom of eating...。

(3)動詞使用不當:appreciate為“贊賞”(to value or regard highly)之意，而原文中的“賞”意思應該是“觀賞”(watch).(4)介詞使用錯誤:原文指具體某一天的晚上，譯文介詞應由at改為 on(on the evening of)。

(5)不忠實于原文:January 15是公歷一月十五日，而原文“正月十五”指陰歷(lunar calendar)的一月十五日。

英語作文正確句子

The Chinese have the custom of eating yuanxiao(sweet dumplings made of glutinous rice flour)and watching festive lanterns on the fifteenth evening of the first lunar month.單句寫作是英語寫作的基本功。在一個句子中，每個詞語都和其它詞語發(fā)生關系，互為語境，而句子本身則處于孤立狀態(tài)。所以當我們翻譯各個詞語時，要做到相 互協(xié)調，前后一致，邏輯嚴謹;而當我們對句子做整體處理時，就享有一定靈活性，也許能夠給出多種恰當?shù)淖g法，而這些譯法分別適用于不同的段落或篇章語境。無論在詞語的選擇還是句子結構的處理上，我們對其適用范圍都要作到心中有數(shù).

第三篇：writing英語作文300字

Which Is More Important About Younger and Older Generation

From my point of view, I think the younger generation more important in the modern word.First of all, as we know, with the economic development drastically and the society become more and more informational zed, the technology plays more and more essential role in the study and life.The younger generation knows the technology better, and they can use it very well.For example, they can communicate with others in online chatting rooms to practice their interpersonal ability and make the networking widely.What’s more, the younger generation can buy a lot of things through the computer or the mobile phone, such as ordering meals without going out、buying clothes with a bargain price and so on.It can save lots of time and keep energy to study or work more efficient.Second, most of the younger generation has been educated for many years, and they have a good understanding about the new words which were created by them.Obviously, they can use their rich imagination to create many new things which can make our world better.In addition, the younger generation is awfully passion, and they have the strong-willed to counteract every difficulty and change the

world.Furthermore, they are willing to contribute their energy and efforts to the world.Did you ever think about that why the older generation works so hard? Absolutely, they are working for their children—the younger generation.They want to create the best life for their children.The older generation has the responsibility to bring up their children and make every effort to make children better.This is their historical mission, and this is the recycle of human life.As the younger generation is on the way to powerful enough to control the whole world, meanwhile, the older generation is becoming more andmore older so that they even can not keep up with the great progress of the society.In a word, the younger generation is the hope of the world, and they do become more and more important.

第四篇：高二英語學案課堂工作總結

高二英語學案課堂工作總結

瀘化中學

劉嵐

這次在新課程改革下，學校在學習新絳中學學案導學的模式后，在瀘州率先推出了適合我校發(fā)展的學案導學模式。這次深刻的改革，強調新課程要促進每個學生身心健康的發(fā)展，培養(yǎng)學生良好的品質和終身學習的能力，注重科學探究的學習，關注體驗性學習，提倡交流與合作、自主創(chuàng)新學習。課程改革的成敗關鍵在于教師，教師是課程改革的實施者，作為高二備課組長教師的我做好了充分的準備，學習了新課程改革理論，更新了教學觀念，迎接了新課改的挑戰(zhàn)。從上學期開始,在我校掀起了一場“新絳教學模式”改革，經過研究和探索，我認為“新絳教學模式”之所以推廣，有其特殊性和先進性。另外，我也清醒地認識到，任何一種先進的教學模式和先進經驗都不能照搬，必須結合自己的實際情況，因此，為了將新絳教學先進經驗和本校實際想結合，我進行了一系列探索。所以，下面簡單地回顧一下開學以來在這些方面所做的一些英語課堂教學工作。

一、學案導學面向全體學生，為學生全面發(fā)展和終身發(fā)展奠定基礎。

1、創(chuàng)設各種情景，鼓勵學生大膽地使用英語，對他們在學習過程中的失誤和錯誤采取寬容的態(tài)度。

2、為學生提供自主學習和直接交流的機會，以及充分表現(xiàn)和自我發(fā)展的一個空間。

3、鼓勵學生通過體驗、實踐、合作、探索等方式，發(fā)展聽、說、讀、寫的綜合能力。

4、創(chuàng)造條件讓學生能夠探究他們自己的一些問題，并自主解決問題。

二、學案實施中藥關注學生情感，營造民主、和諧的教學氣氛。

1、尊重每個學生，積極鼓勵他們在學習中的嘗試，保護他們的自尊心和積極性。

2、把英語教學與情態(tài)有機地結合起來，創(chuàng)造各種合作學習的活動，促進學生互相學習，互相幫助，體驗成就感，發(fā)展合作精神。

3、關注學習有困難的或性格內向的學習，盡可能地為他們創(chuàng)造語言的機會。

4、建立融洽、民主的師生交流渠道，經常和學生一起反思學習過程和學習效果，互相鼓勵和幫助，做到教學相輔。

三、加強對學生學習策略的指導，讓他們在學習和使用的過程中，逐步學會如何學習，做到：

1、積極創(chuàng)造條件，讓學生參與到階段性學習目標，以及給他們介紹實現(xiàn)目標的方法。

2、引導學生結合語境，采用推測、查閱和協(xié)調的方法進行學習。

3、引導學生在學習過程中，進行自我評價，并根據(jù)需要調整自己的學習目標和學習策略。

新課程改革不是紙上談兵，它必須要與實踐相結合，所以，我將繼續(xù)努力學習，積極進取，積極參與課程改革，在課改中不斷學習，不斷實踐，不斷反思，愿與新課程共同成長。

第五篇：英語四級作文5--note writing

1.祝賀類便條模板

①獲悉值得慶祝的消息，說出祝賀事由；

②表達祝賀之情；

③指出對方成功原因，肯定其努力；

④肯定對方成績，說出對方優(yōu)點；

⑤表達對對方的信心和祝福

⑥表達真誠祝福

信件結尾與簽名

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Dear___,①I have heard with delight that you___.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on __.③ I know this is surely owing to___.④ It is a reward you richly deserve for your___.⑤ With ___, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.⑥ My best wishes for your further success.Sincerely yours,Tom

2.告示，通知類便條模板

①告示的內容；

②具體的細節(jié)；

③有關活動的具體地址；

④鼓勵有興趣的人聯(lián)系自己

⑤寫明聯(lián)系方式

信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①I am happy to announce you that____.②____.③ Those who are interested please go to____.④ If you need any further information, please don’t hesitate to call me up.⑤ My telephone number is___.Sincerely yours,Tom

3.安慰類便條模板

①安慰的事由；

②表達寫信人的心情；

③表達寫信人對事由的關心

④鼓勵；

⑤表達寫信人的希望； ⑥寫信人去看望所安慰之人 信件結尾與署名

Date Dear,①I have just heard from___ that ____.② I am very sorry to hear this news ③ I am very concerned about your ____.④ I just want you not to be so depressed and not to lose heart.⑤ ____________________.⑥ I will go and see you as soon as I can.Sincerely yours,Tom

4.道歉類便條模板

①不能實現(xiàn)的愿望或約定； ②誠懇希望對方的原諒； ③引出失約的原因； ④描述具體原因；

⑤提出建議，希望仍有機會實現(xiàn) ⑥約定新的時間地點 ⑦再次表達下次見面的愿望 信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that____.② Please accept my sincere apology with gratitude.③ I hope you will understand me and excuse me for___.④ _______.⑤ Naturally, I want to suggest ____.⑥ I shall be obliged感激的 if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____.⑦ We may meet again and I really hope to see you soon.Sincerely yours,Tom

5.邀請類便條模板

①開門見山提出事件以及時間，地點； ②表達邀請愿望； ③正式發(fā)出邀請；

④引出受邀人參加的理由； ⑤提出具體的時間和地點 ⑥再一次發(fā)出邀請 信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①____________.② It would be pleasant/an honor to have you here.③

Will you join us/give me the pleasure of your company?④ I know/believe that you are very interested in_____ and I am sure you will enjoy it.⑤ The ____ will begin at____.Is it possible for us to meet at____?⑥We do hope you can come.Sincerely yours,Tom

6.婉拒類便條模板 ①表示感謝，為拒絕埋下伏筆； ②正式表達拒絕之意； ③開始解釋拒絕的原因； ④陳述拒絕原因一； ⑤陳述拒絕原因二； ⑥總結原因，正式拒絕對方； ⑦真誠表達歉意，希望對方諒解 ⑧表達對對方的美好住院； 信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①Thank you very much for ____.② However, I have decided not to____.③ Two reasons contribute to my declining_____.④ On one hand, ______.⑤ On the other hand, _____.⑥ In view of these, I regret____.⑦ I am sincerely looking forward to___.⑧ I do wish that _____.Sincerely yours,Tom

Tom

7.建議類便條模板 ①寫信的原因； ②引出寫信人的建議； ③提出建議的理由一； ④提出建議的理由二； ⑤對建議內容所作的承諾； ⑥表達本人的愿望； 信件結尾與署名

7.建議類便條模板

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Dear, ①I am delighted to learn that____.②In my opinion, ______.③ On one hand, _______.④ On the other hand,______.⑤Please inform me______.⑥I am looking forward to_______.Sincerely yours,Tom 與你進一步詳談此事。

8.詢問類便條模板 ①寫信的原因； ②描述所詢問的事件或情節(jié)； ③詢問的細節(jié)； ④詢問的細節(jié)； ⑤表達想得到信息的渴盼； ⑥通知詢問人的方式； ⑦表達本人的愿望； 信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①I am delighted to learn that____.② I am very interested in ____.But I don’t know some specific details.③ what____?④ Where_____?⑤ Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it?⑥ Please inform me_____.⑦ I am looking forward to_____.Sincerely yours,Tom 8.詢問類便條模板實例

June 22, 2010

Dear Michael, ①I am delighted to learn that you are organizing a weekend excursion for ②But I don’t know some specific details.③ what should we bring?④ Where shall we meet?⑤ Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it?⑥ Please inform me at 123456.⑦ I am looking forward to your answer.Sincerely yours,Tom 9.感謝類便條模板 ①直接表達謝意； ②表達自己非常珍惜對方的付出/禮物； ③介紹自己的近況； ④提出希望下次見面的愿望；

⑤再次表達感謝； 信件結尾與署名

9.感謝類便條模板實例

May 2, 2010

Dear Mike, ①I am now writing these lines to express my sincere thanks for your I’d like you to know how much your meant to me.③④ How nice it would be to see you again and I amI repeat my thanks again.Sincerely yours,Tom 10.抱怨類便條模板 ①寫信人的身份； ②表示抱怨內容； ③提出抱怨內容的核心點； ④抱怨內容的一個方面； ⑤抱怨內容的里一個方面； ⑥提出仍有改進空間； ⑦表達本人愿望 ⑧結尾常用語 信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①I am ____.② I am writing to bring your attention to_____.③ The focus of the complaint is ____.④ For one thing, _______.⑤ For the other, ___ ____.⑥ All in all, there is still much room for improvement.⑦ I do hope______.⑧ Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Tom 10.抱怨類便條模板實例

July 20, 2010

Dear Jim, ①I am a customer of your hotel.② I am writing to bring your attention to my ③ The focus of the complaint is ④ I tried to take a shower and I found that only cold water came out.I tried every means to adjust it, but I failed.⑥ I do hope this incident will arouse your enough attention.⑧ Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Tom

11.求職類便條模板 ①直接點明想申請的職位； ②介紹大學時專業(yè)； ③強調自己符合要求；加深對方印象； ④告知隨信附詳細簡歷； ⑤希望被考慮； ⑥爭取面試機會； ⑦告知聯(lián)系方式； 信件結尾與署名

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Dear,①I am applying for the position of____ advertised in _____.② I major in _____in university.③ My training in ____ definitely meet your qualifications.④ My complete resume is attached.⑤ I hope that you will consider me for your position.⑥May I have a personal interview at your convenience?⑦ I can be reached by telephone_____.Sincerely yours,Tom