第一篇：高職高專寫作大賽投訴信例文

Direction：

Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem.Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement, Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time.But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.After we used it for several days.we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly.When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperature range from 0℃ to 9℃.This problem has affected our normal life.Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.Yours faithfully，Li Ming 這封投訴信可以說寫得非常好，結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，第一段首先肯定對方按時送貨上門的做法，隨后簡述冰箱出了問題。第二段說明具體問題，第三段提出要求。

Dear General Manager, During the week-long May Day holiday, my friends and I went to Beijing and accommodated our-selves at your hotel from May first to May fifth.I am sorry to tell you that we are not satisfied with your service, which makes me write this letter after considerations.The focus of our complaint is the following.Firstly, the surrounding environment is too noisy.Even at mid-night, the noise from the nearby construction sites is constant and great.Secondly, I must say something about your food.Your menu is very expensive and the food quality is not so satisfying.Lastly, I must remind you that you should strengthen the security.Sometimes, even salesman came to knock on our doors, which made us feel annoyed and unsafe.The above-mentioned points are the unpleasant experiences during our stay in your hotel.I hope you will adopt some new measures to improve your services, which can prevent the image from damaging.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

第二篇：英語投訴信寫作

(一)投訴信 A letter of complaint

關(guān)鍵詞：委婉性 重要性 緊迫性

注意點：1.開門見山（寫信目的）2.委婉又據(jù)理力爭（詞句要有力量）3.條理清晰

寫作思路:1.簡單介紹自己，同時道出要抱和失望的總領(lǐng)句

2.羅列具體存在的問題 ① ② ③ 體現(xiàn)重要性

3.問題的緊迫性及表達自己希望解決問題的要求或方式

投訴信結(jié)構(gòu)公式

右上角：日期

左上角：稱呼

正文：

第一段：表明自己的身份，說明寫信目的，因何事投訴何人或機構(gòu)。

第二段：具體闡述投訴的內(nèi)容和投訴的理由。

第三段：提出解決建議并期望盡快解決，表示感謝。

右下角：署名

投訴信模板

Dear

，I am

.Here I am writing to you to call your attention to some problems about ______.For one thing，.For another，.Besides，.(強調(diào)重要性或委婉的恭維).So it is urgent to take measures to

.Here I do demand

.I am looking forward to

.Thank you very much.Yours sincerely

Signature

升級版

Dear_______，I am ______(自我介紹).I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____.The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(總體介紹).In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一個方面).In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二個方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ________(感覺)_______(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建議和請求), preferably ______(進一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(設(shè)定解決事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

? Task one: ? 假如你是李雷，請你就本校食堂（canteen）的狀況，給校長(principal)寫一封抱怨信, 內(nèi)容要求如下： ? 飯菜貴質(zhì)量差 ? 服務(wù)不好

環(huán)境嘈雜擁擠 Dear Mr.Principal，I am Li Lei from Class 10 Grade 3.Here I am writing to express my disappointment with the canteen problems on campus.First, the dishes at our canteen are rather expensive with by no means good quality and taste.Furthermore, far from being kind and warm-hearted, the workers always appear to be cold and impatient to us students.What’s worse, the canteen is becoming more and more crowed and noisy which definitely is not good for us to enjoy our meals in such environment.Nutritious and delicious meals do play a basically important role in our studying life, so it is urgent to take measures to improve the current situations.I look forward to hearing from you with a satisfactory answer.Thank you very much.Sincerely

Li Lei

用升級版模式寫

學(xué)校受污染

【內(nèi)容提示】

假如你是市一中的學(xué)生，名叫王紅。你要向本市一家報刊編輯（editor）寫封信，反映你校受污染的問題，呼吁有關(guān)部門采取措施，保護環(huán)境，防止污染。請你用下面的素材寫100詞左右的一封信。

你校位于山腳下，一條小河從旁邊流過，院內(nèi)樹木四季常青，鮮花爭艷，景色美似花園。但兩年前，附近建起一家化工廠，排出大量污水、廢氣，造成校園污染，嚴重影響了師生健康。請有關(guān)部門出面解決這一問題。

【作文示范】

School Polluted

No.1 Middle School

March 5, 1997

Dear Editor，Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by.It used to look like a beautiful garden.There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago.It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river.The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.It＇s time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.Yours ever，Wang Hong

【寫法指要】

投訴信（letters of complaint）通常是寫給廠家、商店、消費者協(xié)會、報界或廠家、商店的上級主管部門，揭發(fā)產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量的低劣、服務(wù)態(tài)度的糟糕，抱怨不應(yīng)出現(xiàn)的情況或問題等，以求得解決的信件。寫投訴信要實事求是地把問題講清楚，態(tài)度要冷靜，做到有禮貌，不能惡言傷人。

這封信的作者用的是對比法，先寫學(xué)校的地理位置和原先學(xué)校的優(yōu)美環(huán)境，后寫化工廠建起后對學(xué)校造成的污染，最后提請報界呼吁保護環(huán)境的問題。寫得有理有據(jù)，令人信服。

第三篇：英語投訴信萬能寫作

考研英語投訴信萬能寫作模板

投訴信是對于產(chǎn)品、服務(wù)等的不滿意，進而需要寫出自己的意見和要求。第一段需寫寫信的目的以及自己的一個概括的期望：常用套話比如I venture to write to complain about-----+定語從句;I would be grateful if you could do anything necessary to solve the problem facing me.第二段闡述兩、三方面所面臨的產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)的問題及后果：there are several aspects underlying this complaint.For one thing,......For another,......In addition,......第三段給出具體的期望，比如退款或更換新產(chǎn)品：It is my sincere hope that you could give me full refund or replace it with a new one.Your kind reply to this letter at your earliest convenience would be very much appreciated.

第四篇：我校舉辦2011年高職高專英語寫作大賽doc

我校舉辦2011年高職高專英語寫作大賽

為了認真貫徹教育部高等學(xué)校高職高專英語 類專業(yè)教學(xué)指導(dǎo)委員會關(guān)于在2011年上半年舉辦第二屆“全國高職高專英語寫作大賽”的決定，以大賽為契機，激發(fā)學(xué)生對英語寫作的興趣和熱情，進而提高學(xué)生的總體英語寫作水平，促進我校英語教學(xué)的總體發(fā)展。3月12日，我校主辦的“2011年高職高專英語寫作大賽”在304，305,306三室舉行。

下午2點30分，比賽正式拉開序幕。賽場上，監(jiān)考教師宣讀了本次比賽的宗旨，要求各位同學(xué)認真對待，嚴格考試。緊接著，教室只聽到“沙沙”細響之聲，每位考生都奮筆疾書，揮灑手中的筆，認真寫下自己滿意的答卷。充分展現(xiàn)了自己的英語寫作能力。

此次比賽，極大的激發(fā)了我校學(xué)子對英語寫作的熱情，一定程度上提高了英語寫作水平。同時，對加快我校英語教學(xué)改革的步伐和促進英語教學(xué)能力，具有極大的進步意義。

圖/文：學(xué)生記者 鄧云

第五篇：全國高職高專英語寫作大賽總結(jié) 計劃[定稿]

全國高職高專英語寫作大賽總結(jié)

5月19日，第三屆全國高職高專英語寫作大賽在深圳職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院舉辦。本屆大賽自去年年底啟動以來，歷經(jīng)院校選拔賽、賽區(qū)選拔賽和全國總決賽三個階段，覆蓋全國29個省區(qū)610所高職院校。

經(jīng)過層層選拔，來自全國的186名選手參加了總決賽，我院何丹鳳同學(xué)代表北京市參加了公共英語組的比賽，比賽結(jié)果將于下月中旬公布。

此次大賽是教育部高等學(xué)校高職高專英語類專業(yè)教學(xué)指導(dǎo)委員會，深圳職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院主辦，外語教學(xué)與研究出版社協(xié)辦的全國性的大賽。在比賽同時還舉辦了第三屆全國高職高專英語寫作教學(xué)論壇，來自清華大學(xué)英語系的張文霞教授作了“英語寫作測試的設(shè)計、應(yīng)用及研究”的大會主旨發(fā)言。另外，來自蘭州職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院的陳建彬老師，來自山東日照職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院的孫德常老師和來自安徽工商職業(yè)學(xué)院的邵貴君老師就高職高專英語寫作教學(xué)交流了教學(xué)經(jīng)驗和體會。會后，與會教師一致表示此次論壇對于今后高職高專英語的寫作教學(xué)有了堅定的信心。

我院何丹鳳同學(xué)在寫作大賽中面對來自全國的高水平選手，沉著冷靜，發(fā)揮出了自己應(yīng)有的水平，讓我們共同期待著比賽結(jié)果