第一篇：高職高專寫作大賽投訴信例文

Direction：

Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem.Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement, Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time.But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.After we used it for several days.we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly.When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperature range from 0℃ to 9℃.This problem has affected our normal life.Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.Yours faithfully，Li Ming 這封投訴信可以說(shuō)寫得非常好，結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，第一段首先肯定對(duì)方按時(shí)送貨上門的做法，隨后簡(jiǎn)述冰箱出了問(wèn)題。第二段說(shuō)明具體問(wèn)題，第三段提出要求。

Dear General Manager, During the week-long May Day holiday, my friends and I went to Beijing and accommodated our-selves at your hotel from May first to May fifth.I am sorry to tell you that we are not satisfied with your service, which makes me write this letter after considerations.The focus of our complaint is the following.Firstly, the surrounding environment is too noisy.Even at mid-night, the noise from the nearby construction sites is constant and great.Secondly, I must say something about your food.Your menu is very expensive and the food quality is not so satisfying.Lastly, I must remind you that you should strengthen the security.Sometimes, even salesman came to knock on our doors, which made us feel annoyed and unsafe.The above-mentioned points are the unpleasant experiences during our stay in your hotel.I hope you will adopt some new measures to improve your services, which can prevent the image from damaging.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

第二篇：英語(yǔ)投訴信寫作

(一)投訴信 A letter of complaint

關(guān)鍵詞：委婉性 重要性 緊迫性

注意點(diǎn)：1.開門見山（寫信目的）2.委婉又據(jù)理力爭(zhēng)（詞句要有力量）3.條理清晰

寫作思路:1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，同時(shí)道出要抱和失望的總領(lǐng)句

2.羅列具體存在的問(wèn)題 ① ② ③ 體現(xiàn)重要性

3.問(wèn)題的緊迫性及表達(dá)自己希望解決問(wèn)題的要求或方式

投訴信結(jié)構(gòu)公式

右上角：日期

左上角：稱呼

正文：

第一段：表明自己的身份，說(shuō)明寫信目的，因何事投訴何人或機(jī)構(gòu)。

第二段：具體闡述投訴的內(nèi)容和投訴的理由。

第三段：提出解決建議并期望盡快解決，表示感謝。

右下角：署名

投訴信模板

Dear

，I am

.Here I am writing to you to call your attention to some problems about ______.For one thing，.For another，.Besides，.(強(qiáng)調(diào)重要性或委婉的恭維).So it is urgent to take measures to

.Here I do demand

.I am looking forward to

.Thank you very much.Yours sincerely

Signature

升級(jí)版

Dear_______，I am ______(自我介紹).I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____.The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(總體介紹).In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一個(gè)方面).In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二個(gè)方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ________(感覺(jué))_______(抱怨的方面給你帶來(lái)的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建議和請(qǐng)求), preferably ______(進(jìn)一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(設(shè)定解決事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

? Task one: ? 假如你是李雷，請(qǐng)你就本校食堂（canteen）的狀況，給校長(zhǎng)(principal)寫一封抱怨信, 內(nèi)容要求如下： ? 飯菜貴質(zhì)量差 ? 服務(wù)不好

環(huán)境嘈雜擁擠 Dear Mr.Principal，I am Li Lei from Class 10 Grade 3.Here I am writing to express my disappointment with the canteen problems on campus.First, the dishes at our canteen are rather expensive with by no means good quality and taste.Furthermore, far from being kind and warm-hearted, the workers always appear to be cold and impatient to us students.What’s worse, the canteen is becoming more and more crowed and noisy which definitely is not good for us to enjoy our meals in such environment.Nutritious and delicious meals do play a basically important role in our studying life, so it is urgent to take measures to improve the current situations.I look forward to hearing from you with a satisfactory answer.Thank you very much.Sincerely

Li Lei

用升級(jí)版模式寫

學(xué)校受污染

【內(nèi)容提示】

假如你是市一中的學(xué)生，名叫王紅。你要向本市一家報(bào)刊編輯（editor）寫封信，反映你校受污染的問(wèn)題，呼吁有關(guān)部門采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境，防止污染。請(qǐng)你用下面的素材寫100詞左右的一封信。

你校位于山腳下，一條小河從旁邊流過(guò)，院內(nèi)樹木四季常青，鮮花爭(zhēng)艷，景色美似花園。但兩年前，附近建起一家化工廠，排出大量污水、廢氣，造成校園污染，嚴(yán)重影響了師生健康。請(qǐng)有關(guān)部門出面解決這一問(wèn)題。

【作文示范】

School Polluted

No.1 Middle School

March 5, 1997

Dear Editor，Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by.It used to look like a beautiful garden.There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago.It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river.The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.It＇s time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.Yours ever，Wang Hong

【寫法指要】

投訴信（letters of complaint）通常是寫給廠家、商店、消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)、報(bào)界或廠家、商店的上級(jí)主管部門，揭發(fā)產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量的低劣、服務(wù)態(tài)度的糟糕，抱怨不應(yīng)出現(xiàn)的情況或問(wèn)題等，以求得解決的信件。寫投訴信要實(shí)事求是地把問(wèn)題講清楚，態(tài)度要冷靜，做到有禮貌，不能惡言傷人。

這封信的作者用的是對(duì)比法，先寫學(xué)校的地理位置和原先學(xué)校的優(yōu)美環(huán)境，后寫化工廠建起后對(duì)學(xué)校造成的污染，最后提請(qǐng)報(bào)界呼吁保護(hù)環(huán)境的問(wèn)題。寫得有理有據(jù)，令人信服。

第三篇：英語(yǔ)投訴信萬(wàn)能寫作

考研英語(yǔ)投訴信萬(wàn)能寫作模板

投訴信是對(duì)于產(chǎn)品、服務(wù)等的不滿意，進(jìn)而需要寫出自己的意見和要求。第一段需寫寫信的目的以及自己的一個(gè)概括的期望：常用套話比如I venture to write to complain about-----+定語(yǔ)從句;I would be grateful if you could do anything necessary to solve the problem facing me.第二段闡述兩、三方面所面臨的產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)的問(wèn)題及后果：there are several aspects underlying this complaint.For one thing,......For another,......In addition,......第三段給出具體的期望，比如退款或更換新產(chǎn)品：It is my sincere hope that you could give me full refund or replace it with a new one.Your kind reply to this letter at your earliest convenience would be very much appreciated.

第四篇：我校舉辦2011年高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽doc

我校舉辦2011年高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽

為了認(rèn)真貫徹教育部高等學(xué)校高職高專英語(yǔ) 類專業(yè)教學(xué)指導(dǎo)委員會(huì)關(guān)于在2011年上半年舉辦第二屆“全國(guó)高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽”的決定，以大賽為契機(jī)，激發(fā)學(xué)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)寫作的興趣和熱情，進(jìn)而提高學(xué)生的總體英語(yǔ)寫作水平，促進(jìn)我校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的總體發(fā)展。3月12日，我校主辦的“2011年高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽”在304，305,306三室舉行。

下午2點(diǎn)30分，比賽正式拉開序幕。賽場(chǎng)上，監(jiān)考教師宣讀了本次比賽的宗旨，要求各位同學(xué)認(rèn)真對(duì)待，嚴(yán)格考試。緊接著，教室只聽到“沙沙”細(xì)響之聲，每位考生都奮筆疾書，揮灑手中的筆，認(rèn)真寫下自己滿意的答卷。充分展現(xiàn)了自己的英語(yǔ)寫作能力。

此次比賽，極大的激發(fā)了我校學(xué)子對(duì)英語(yǔ)寫作的熱情，一定程度上提高了英語(yǔ)寫作水平。同時(shí)，對(duì)加快我校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)改革的步伐和促進(jìn)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)能力，具有極大的進(jìn)步意義。

圖/文：學(xué)生記者 鄧云

第五篇：全國(guó)高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽總結(jié) 計(jì)劃[定稿]

全國(guó)高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽總結(jié)

5月19日，第三屆全國(guó)高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作大賽在深圳職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院舉辦。本屆大賽自去年年底啟動(dòng)以來(lái)，歷經(jīng)院校選拔賽、賽區(qū)選拔賽和全國(guó)總決賽三個(gè)階段，覆蓋全國(guó)29個(gè)省區(qū)610所高職院校。

經(jīng)過(guò)層層選拔，來(lái)自全國(guó)的186名選手參加了總決賽，我院何丹鳳同學(xué)代表北京市參加了公共英語(yǔ)組的比賽，比賽結(jié)果將于下月中旬公布。

此次大賽是教育部高等學(xué)校高職高專英語(yǔ)類專業(yè)教學(xué)指導(dǎo)委員會(huì)，深圳職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院主辦，外語(yǔ)教學(xué)與研究出版社協(xié)辦的全國(guó)性的大賽。在比賽同時(shí)還舉辦了第三屆全國(guó)高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)論壇，來(lái)自清華大學(xué)英語(yǔ)系的張文霞教授作了“英語(yǔ)寫作測(cè)試的設(shè)計(jì)、應(yīng)用及研究”的大會(huì)主旨發(fā)言。另外，來(lái)自蘭州職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院的陳建彬老師，來(lái)自山東日照職業(yè)技術(shù)學(xué)院的孫德常老師和來(lái)自安徽工商職業(yè)學(xué)院的邵貴君老師就高職高專英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)交流了教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)和體會(huì)。會(huì)后，與會(huì)教師一致表示此次論壇對(duì)于今后高職高專英語(yǔ)的寫作教學(xué)有了堅(jiān)定的信心。

我院何丹鳳同學(xué)在寫作大賽中面對(duì)來(lái)自全國(guó)的高水平選手，沉著冷靜，發(fā)揮出了自己應(yīng)有的水平，讓我們共同期待著比賽結(jié)果