第一篇：【專項突破】2017高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)短文改錯集訓(xùn)(二)（范文模版）

2017高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)

（二）【專項突破】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（?）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Passage 1 Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students? Union organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn?t show some interest and wasn?t very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher?s smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.But my teacher?s encouragement, I couldn?t have won the first prize.I?m proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2 As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited.Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night.A car hit a motorbike.The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital.After a while, the traffic police came.Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth.The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control.At last he was taken to the police station.All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously.It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu.It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3

Dear Sir/Madam，I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service.A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency.I found a little differences between your advertisement and action.As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner.Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand.We didn?t enjoy any kind of shower.In fact, we only bathe in cold water.As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time.As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen.We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4

As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games.One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily.In other words, they help to keep people strong and health.If people are playing games, they move a lot of.Having fun with their friends make them happy.Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.So that is why sports are good activities for people?s health.Passage 5

Last Sunday I went shopping with my father.We have a lot of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop.An hour late, we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn?t open the door.So we asked the policeman for help.It was glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.?How are you doing with my car?? We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6

Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season.Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收據(jù)）.When she got there，she refused.The salesman said that he wouldn?t take it back if she showed him the receipt.Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her.They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful.Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing.Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7 Changes create happiness.Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．

2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)

（二）答案與解析

Passage 1 本文是一篇勵志小故事。講述了作者(一位中學(xué)生)參加了本校一年一度的英語口語演講比賽。當(dāng)初，作者由于缺乏興趣和自信而不敢參加，因受自己的英語老師的開導(dǎo)和激勵，便報了名，但經(jīng)過自己的一番努力后，最終以第一名的好成績贏得了這場比賽。

1.organize→organized?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)的用法。句子Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students? Union organize an English Speech Competition中的謂語動詞organize，其動作時間應(yīng)與作者參賽的時間取得一致，故用一般過去時。

2.some→any?？疾橥x詞辨析。句子At first I didn?t show some interest and wasn?t very …中的形容詞some，通常用于肯定句或表示請求的疑問句之中。但在否定句，疑問句或條件狀語從句中常用any來替換。

3.去掉much?？疾楦痹~固定習(xí)語的用法。句中…and wasn?t very much confident中的much與very連用，通常修飾動詞。但其后緊跟形容詞confident，故much多余。4.Inspiring→Inspired?？疾檫^去分詞短語作狀語的用法。句中Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition…中的Inspiring，與句子主語I是邏輯上的動賓關(guān)系，應(yīng)用過去分詞，且有by短語提示，二者合起來作狀語，表示原因，相當(dāng)于原因狀語從句。

5.fully→full。考查副詞的誤用。句中…and made fully preparations for it中的fully是副詞，作狀語，通常修飾動詞。但其后緊跟名詞preparations，應(yīng)為形容詞作定語。

6.coming→came?？疾榫渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)的甄別。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)分析：本句是由并列連詞and連接的并列句，前一分句Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was…中的the time是主語，I had been looking forward to是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞the time，該分句中缺少謂語動詞。但是，又受and的制約，證明又由其連接了一個使用一般過去時的后一分句，此時句中coming不能單獨作謂語，只能改為came時，句子結(jié)構(gòu)才能成立。

7.his→my?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。文章是以第一人稱敘述了作者的所有境況。所以，此處應(yīng)用my來表示所

屬關(guān)系。

8.winner→winners?？疾槊~數(shù)別的判斷。句子I was one of the winner表述中可以看出，one of后跟名詞，須用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。

9.But→Without?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。文章最后表明了作者對老師的感激之情，便使用了Without…, … couldn?t have done ….句式結(jié)構(gòu)。所以，此處的without介詞短語表示條件。

10.or→and?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。最后作者以擁有這樣的老師和本次難得的比賽經(jīng)歷而表示自豪。所以，此處的Mr.Smith 和 the wonderful experience without是并列關(guān)系。

Passage 2

本文是一篇夾敘夾議文。講述了作者昨天晚上回家時所看到的一起醉駕行駛的小轎車撞上了一輛電動自行車的交通事故。傷情嚴(yán)重，在好心人的幫助下，傷者很快被送到了醫(yī)院進行搶救。于是，現(xiàn)場的目擊證人強烈譴責(zé)醉駕司機，要求其對本次事故負全責(zé)。作者又通過發(fā)生在杭州和成都的兩地多起交通事故來強烈呼吁：抵制醉駕，珍惜生命。1.去掉last前面on。考查名詞短語的習(xí)慣用法。句子…way home on last night中 的介詞on 應(yīng)該用在表示具體的某一日或某一天的早晨、下午或者晚上，但在last night名詞習(xí)語中，介詞on是多余的。

2.bad→badly?？疾樾稳菰~的誤用。句子…driver was bad hurt中 的形容詞bad 應(yīng)該用在名詞前作定語，但是，此處是在動詞hurt前，須用副詞，作狀語，即表示：傷者的被傷害的程度。

3.Under→With?？疾楣潭?xí)語的用法。句子Under the help of the people who…中的固定搭配with one?s help或with the help of somebody，表示 “在某人幫助下”，其介詞為with。

4.a→the?？疾楣谠~的基本用法。句子…police found out a truth中的冠詞，應(yīng)表示 “這次交通事故的真實情況”，表示特指，須用定冠詞the。

5.drinking→drunk?？疾楸粍诱Z態(tài)的用法。句子The driver of the car was drinking中的was drinking 是主動語態(tài)，由從句中得知，小轎車司機是喝醉了酒，應(yīng)用be+v-ed構(gòu)成的系表結(jié)構(gòu)來表示：The driver of the car的精神狀態(tài)。

6.think→thought。考查動詞時態(tài)的辨別。句子All the people there think the car driver was to blame…主句中的謂語動詞think應(yīng)與從句中的謂語動詞保持時間上的一致，須用一般過去時。

7.Which→As?？疾槎ㄕZ從句引導(dǎo)詞的辨析。句子Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving causes many people…中的Which is reported in the news reports是定語從句中的從句，drunk driving causes many people…是主句，本定語從句中能夠代替一個句子內(nèi)容的引導(dǎo)詞，只有as。

8.lose前加to?？疾楣潭ù钆涞挠梅ā＞渥印?driving causes many people lose their lives…中的固定搭配cause somebody to do something，表示 “導(dǎo)致/引發(fā)/引起……”意義時，其后跟帶to的動詞不定式作賓語補足語。

9.accident→accidents。考查名詞數(shù)別的判斷。句子… such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu表述中的accident須用復(fù)數(shù)形式,應(yīng)與that引導(dǎo)的定語從句中出現(xiàn)的in Hangzhou and Chengdu語意相吻合。

10.prevent→prevented或加should?？疾樘摂M語氣的用法。句子It is high time that we prevent drunk driving表述中的that從句里的謂語動詞須用“動詞過去式或should+動詞原形”來構(gòu)成虛擬語氣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)為It is high time that… 剛好（恰好）到了…時候了。

Passage 3 本篇是一封游客對旅行社失信服務(wù)的投訴信。信中講到：作者參報了一個為期三天去峨眉山旅游的旅行社，當(dāng)游客到了目的地后，竟然發(fā)現(xiàn)，旅行社的廣告宣傳與游覽景點和游區(qū)服務(wù)質(zhì)量相差懸殊，所有承諾均未兌現(xiàn)，胡亂頂用，最后造成重點景點遺漏，憾事連連。作者強烈要求有關(guān)部門采取相應(yīng)措施，制止類似事件的再次發(fā)生。

1.three-days→three-day?？疾閺?fù)合形容詞的用法。文中… joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain…里的three-days是復(fù)合形容詞，其由“基數(shù)詞+連字符+名詞單數(shù)”來構(gòu)成，作定語，修飾名詞trip。

2.little→few?？疾橥x詞的辨析。文中…found a little differences between…里的differences是可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故其前few作定語，起限定作用。而little則與不可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)形式連用。

3.with→without/any→no?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。文中已經(jīng)講明了游客坐的是沒有裝空調(diào)的車子，并且車況很差。所以，此處應(yīng)用否定意義的詞來表述。

4.and→but。考查邏輯關(guān)系。作者反映盡管旅行社在午飯時提供了飯菜，但是質(zhì)量很差，而且還有沙粒。所以，此處語義應(yīng)為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

5.terribly→terrible?？疾楦痹~的誤用。句子…the food tasted terribly中的terribly是副詞，作狀語。而此處應(yīng)用其形容詞terrible，置于系動詞tasted后作表語，才符合詞法要求。

6.bathe→bathed?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)的辨別。句子In fact, we only bathe in cold water中的謂語動詞bathe應(yīng)與全文背景時間保持一致，須用一般過去時。

7.what→which?？疾榉窍拗菩远ㄕZ從句的用法。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句子…the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time句中的souvenir shops，其后跟了一個非限制性定語從句來起補充或說明作用，因先行詞指物，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which來引導(dǎo)。而what則與定語從句無關(guān)。8.the→a?？疾楣潭?xí)語的用法。句子As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen中的固定搭配as a result用作插入語，表示 結(jié)果，其中冠詞為a。

9.can后加be?？疾榍閼B(tài)動詞被動語態(tài)的用法。句子We do hope something can done to prevent…中的something是動詞do的承受對象，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)。同時，其謂語中有情態(tài)動詞can，故正確表達式應(yīng)為：can be done。

10.happen→happening?？疾樘厥饩涫降挠梅ā＞渥印璽o prevent such things happen again中的prevent句型搭配應(yīng)為prevent…from doing something或prevent… doing something，故應(yīng)用happening。

Passage 4 本文是一篇有關(guān)運動有益于健康的議論文。文章主題鮮明，論點突出，論據(jù)充分。文章全面揭示了生命在于運動的這一永恒主題的內(nèi)涵。

1.and→but。考查邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)文中… playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play兩個分句間的邏輯關(guān)系來分析，中間的關(guān)聯(lián)詞y應(yīng)視為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。2.woman→women。考查名詞數(shù)別的判斷。根據(jù)語境推斷men and woman是并列的兩個名詞作主語，按照語法要求，它們在數(shù)別上應(yīng)當(dāng)保持一致。

3.call→called?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)的用法。句子Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together… 中的謂語動詞have call受since短語的影響，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時。

4.play→playing。考查特殊句式的用法。句子…their friends together to spend hours, even days play games里的句型搭配應(yīng)為spend…doing something或spend…in doing something，故playing符合句式要求。5.of 后加the?？疾楣谠~的用法。句子One of reasons why people like o play is that sports help them to move happily中，關(guān)系副詞why 引導(dǎo)了限制性定語從句，作定語，修飾先行詞reasons，表示特指，故其前面冠詞應(yīng)為the。

6.health→healthy。考查動詞習(xí)慣搭配的用法。句子…h(huán)elp to keep people strong and health句型搭配應(yīng)為keep + 名詞/代詞+形容詞，由此判斷，此處應(yīng)用healthy。

7.If→When?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。句子If people are playing games, they move a lot…根據(jù)語境推斷：每天我們在運動的時候，對什么都充滿了精神。所以，該從句的引導(dǎo)詞自然為when了。

8.去掉of。考查固定習(xí)語的用法。句子…they move a lot of中的a lot相當(dāng)于副詞，作狀語，修飾move。而a lot of相當(dāng)于形容詞，作定語，用來修飾名詞。所以，此處of多余。

9.make→makes。考查動名詞作主語的用法。句子Having fun with their friends make them happy中的Having fun with their friends是動名詞短語作主語，謂語動詞應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式。

10.watch→watching?？疾閯用~作賓語的用法。句子Many people enjoy sports by watch others play中的by是介詞，其后跟動詞時，應(yīng)用動詞-ing形式，作介詞賓語。

Passage 5

本文是一篇記敘文，記述了作者與父親上周日去購物時所制造的一件令人極其尷尬的事。

1.have→had?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)的辨別。句子We have a lot of things to buy中的謂語動詞have應(yīng)與全文背景時間保持一致，須用一般過去時。

2.去掉front前the。考查冠詞的用法。句子… stopped our car in the front of the shop中的名詞前有無冠詞，其意義甚遠。根據(jù)語境看來，此處表示車子停在商店門口的前面，即某一范圍外部的前面區(qū)域，front前須去掉定冠詞the。否則，front前須與定冠詞the連用。

3.late→later。考查形近詞的辨析。句子An hour late, we came back to the car里的late，表示未按照規(guī)定時間到達某一地點，即“遲到”。later表示某一時間點以后若干時間，即某一點時間開始后?？墒?，此處表示“一個小時后，我們才……”，由此判斷，later符合語境要求。

4.policeman前加a?？疾楣谠~表示類別的用法。句中So we asked for help中的policeman是可數(shù)名詞，其與不定冠詞連用表示類別，即“一類人，一種人”。由此判斷，作者和父親立刻請了一位警察來幫忙打開車門。

5.it→he?？疾橹复P(guān)系。句中It was glad to help us里的it是指那位幫忙的警察，應(yīng)用人稱代詞he來表示指代才符合邏輯。

6.minute→minutes。考查名詞數(shù)別的判斷。句子A few minute later, he got…表述中的minute須用復(fù)數(shù)形式,因其前面有a few來修飾。7.How→what?？疾橐蓡栐~的用法。句子How are you doing with my car表述中的疑問詞因受動詞do with的制約，須用疑問詞what，若動詞為deal with,其疑問詞則用how。

8.surprising→surprised。考查-ing和-ed詞尾形容詞的用法。句子We were surprising and went to see表述中的surprising，只能與表示物的名詞或代詞連用，說明“令……的”而surprised只能與表示人的名詞或代詞連用，說明“使……的”。由此判斷，此處應(yīng)為-ed詞尾的形容詞了。

9.you前加do?？疾樘厥庖蓡柧涞慕Y(jié)構(gòu)。句子What you think we did then表述中的Do you think是一般疑問句，其后跟了What we did then組成的賓語從句，按照句式要求，須構(gòu)成特殊疑問句，便將疑問詞前移了。10.speak→say?？疾橥x詞的辨析。句子We had to speak sorry to the man again and again表述中的speak強調(diào)開口發(fā)聲或講什么語言，其后通常跟表示語言的名詞。但是，say則側(cè)重說話者的講話內(nèi)容。由此推斷，此處say吻合與語境意義。

Passage 6 本文是一篇以第三人稱記述的顧客返回商場退貨時所發(fā)生的一件蹊蹺小事。

1.goes→went?？疾閯釉~時態(tài)的用法。句子Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt中的謂語動詞goes應(yīng)與全文背景時間保持一致，須用一般過去時。

2.refused前加was/got?？疾楸粍诱Z態(tài)的用法。根據(jù)語境分析，句子she got there，she refused里的she是動詞refuse的承受對象，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)。

3.if→unless?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。句子The salesman said that he wouldn?t take it back if she showed him the receipt…根據(jù)語境推斷：若she不能提供購物發(fā)票的話，售貨員是不會接受退貨的。所以，該狀語從句的引導(dǎo)詞應(yīng)當(dāng)是unless。4.it→there?？疾樘厥饩涫降挠梅?。句子Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left中的it was no way out句型搭配應(yīng)為there is no way…，意為“毫無辦法”。

5.guard→guards。考查名詞數(shù)別的判斷。句子Suddenly two shop guard stopped her…表述中的two已經(jīng)表明了名詞數(shù)別狀況。6.去掉for?？疾閯釉~近義詞的辨析。句子…and began to search for her表述中，search for，意為“尋找”，后面跟人或物作賓語，表示未看見或不見了的東西或人；search，意為“搜查，搜身”，后面跟人或地點作賓語，表示：搜某人的身或在…中尋找。由此判斷，介詞for多余。

7.careful→carefully。考查形容詞的誤用。句子…and looked at it careful中的careful為形容詞，常用作定語和表語。但是，此處被置于動詞looked at之后，應(yīng)用副詞carefully，作狀語，表示注意的程度。8.what→which?？疾榉窍拗菩远ㄕZ從句的用法。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句子Many eyes were staring at her其后跟了what made Li Mei very，一個非限制性定語從句來起補充或說明作用，指代整個主句的內(nèi)容，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which來引導(dǎo)。而what不能用來引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

9.embarrassing→embarrassed?？疾?ing和-ed詞尾形容詞的辨析。從全篇看來，此處是說明或描述she的特性時，應(yīng)用-ed 的形容詞才吻合語境意義。

10.a→the?？疾槎ü谠~的用法。從末段來，此處是指前面在商城拒絕收貨的那個售貨員。英語中，當(dāng)人或物再次被提到時，應(yīng)與定冠詞the來連用。

Passage 7 本文是一篇說明文，介紹了作者所處的村子里發(fā)生了巨變后的所呈現(xiàn)出的村容村貌。

1.去掉been?？疾楸粍诱Z態(tài)的誤用。句中Great changes have been taken place in my village來看，謂語動詞take place當(dāng)作不及物動詞來用，可以用happen來替換，其本身就沒有被動語態(tài)。英語中，只有及物動詞才有被動語態(tài)，由此看來，助動詞been多余。2.lie→lay。考查動詞時態(tài)的用法。句子… which lie on the north of…中的謂語動詞lie應(yīng)與Ten years ago時間保持一致，須用一般過去時。

3.the →a?？疾椴欢ü谠~的用法。句中…which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste…中的lake是本文第一次出現(xiàn)，表示類別，即有一個湖，應(yīng)與不定冠詞a來連用。

4.serious→seriously?？疾樾稳菰~的誤用。句子…the lake was serious polluted中的serious是形容詞，常用作定語和表語。但是，此處的serious放在was polluted中，應(yīng)用其副詞seriously，修飾was polluted，作狀語，表示受污染的程度。

5.that→which。考查非限制性定語從句的用法。從句子結(jié)構(gòu)來看，句子To the west was a sandy field其后跟了that was the source of dust一個非限制性定語從句來起補充或說明作用，引導(dǎo)詞指代整個主句的

內(nèi)容，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which來引導(dǎo)。而that不能用來引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

6.Better→Worse?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。句子Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great…根據(jù)語境推斷：這個湖泊的西南面的一個制磚廠竟然用完了大量的肥沃土壤來生產(chǎn)磚塊。因此，句中的插入語應(yīng)當(dāng)是Worse，表示不利因素的語義關(guān)系。7.Deal后加of。考查固定習(xí)語的用法。句子…a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil中的a great deal相當(dāng)于副詞，作狀語。但是，其后卻跟了good soil，這時，該詞應(yīng)相當(dāng)于一個形容詞，作定語，用來修飾名詞good soil。即a great deal of。

8.house→houses?？疾槊~數(shù)別的辨別。句子Now poor house have been replaced by…表述中的have已經(jīng)表明了名詞house數(shù)別狀況。

9.ploughing→plough。考查特定句式的用法。句子The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered…中的that the villagers used to ploughing作定語，修飾先行詞The sandy field?？墒牵趶木渲?，其謂語動詞的句式應(yīng)為used to do something，表示過去常常做……，此處自然是plough了。

10.his→their?？疾檫壿嬯P(guān)系。句子On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing中的his須得與the villagers取得對應(yīng)。

第二篇：山西省2012高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+寫作(22)

山西省2012高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+寫作（22）短文改錯

此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

Wise men don’t always act as wise

1.__________ 2.__________ 3.__________ 4.__________

5.__________

6.__________ as we think.At times they maybe do something silly, and then the stories about their foolish acts are stillwidely talked throughout the world in modern times.For example, Beethoven was said to having insisted onpaying a waiter in a restaurant for a dinner he has not

eaten or ever ordered;the British physicist Newton, while lives7._____ in London, cut two holes in the door, one big, other small,8.__________ so as for his two cats to pass by.He only thought the9.__________

10.__________ bigger cat couldn’t get through the smaller holes easily.書面表達

為了創(chuàng)造學(xué)校的英語學(xué)習(xí)氛圍，激發(fā)同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)英語的興趣，我校將舉行英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容以學(xué)生會名義向全校學(xué)生做口頭通知，介紹相關(guān)情況。

活動：英語演講比賽

比賽時間：5月22日下午；地點：報告廳

比賽要求：

（1）話題從備選的8個話題中自選（2）選手每人先進行一段20秒以內(nèi)的自我介紹，演講時間不超過3分鐘 獎勵辦法：各年級設(shè)一、二、三等獎

報名時間：5月15日前

報名地點：學(xué)生會辦公室

注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于60.2.通知的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

3.選手：contestant

Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you.1.wise→wisely2.√3.去掉then 4.talked后加about

5.having→have 6.has→had7.lives→living

10.holes→hole 8.other前加the9.by→through

One possible version:

Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.In order to provide an atmosphere of learning English and arouse the students’ interest in English, we will have an English speech competition.The competition will be held at our lecture hall on the afternoon of May 22nd.There will be eight topics for all the contestants to choose from.Before the speech, every contestant will have to give a self-introduction in twenty seconds and the speech can’t last more than three minutes.We’ll award the first, second and third prizes for each grade.Hurry up to the office of the Students’ Union before May 15th to enter your names for the right opportunity offered to you!

That’s all.Thank you.

第三篇：英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練

英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練（第一周）

Passage 1 Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day.After supper, my father went to see the film.But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later.I asked him what was the matter.He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema.He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers.Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different.So they looked at the tickets carefully.After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake.Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12.In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car.There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck.Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions.Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3 One week ago, we finished our mid-exams.Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over.Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.As result, the hurt in my foot became bad.Now I know I’m wrong.We can tell others our need for help and accept his help.Some day we can not help others in return.In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.Passage 4 Patience is of great importance in our daily life.Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past, but no bus came.Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet.But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes.Only then do I realize my problem.Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in.Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.Passage 5 How harmful cigarettes are getting now!My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer.She knows smoking was harmful, so she just couldn’t quit.She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking.My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much.Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live, so that I don’t have to go through which she did.Passage 6 Today it was a sunny day.In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand.On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog.We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell.As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it.Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.Passage 7 An most interesting thing happened to me last winter.During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma.One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for seniors.I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend.Upon receive the phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it.I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed.Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away.Under my help, she successfully called her good friend.That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her.They all praised what thoughtful I was.英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練（第二周）

Passage 1 Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school.Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize.I’m proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2 As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited.Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night.A car hit a motorbike.The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital.After a while, the traffic police came.Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth.The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control.At last he was taken to the police station.All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously.It often causes many thpeople lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu.It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3 Dear Sir/Madam, I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service.A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency.I found a little differences between your advertisement and action.As you say, you will provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner.Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand.We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower.In fact, we only bathe in cold water.As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time.As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen.We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4 As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports.Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games.One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily.In other words, they help to keep people strong and health.If people are playing games, they move a lot of.Having fun with their friends make them happy.Many people enjoy sports by watch others play.So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5 Last Sunday I went shopping with my father.We have a lot of things to buy.We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop.An hour late, we came back to the car.But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door.So we asked the policeman for help.It was glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car.What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6 Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season.Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收據(jù)）.When she got there，she refused.The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt.Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her.They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful.Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing.Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7 Changes create happiness.Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．

英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練（第三周）

Passage 1 It was for Alice to attend a chemistry class on Monday.Unluckily, she was not on time for school in this morning.She looked little tired when she met her chemistry’s teacher, Miss Green.She apologized for her being lately.Miss Green asked her if there was something wrong with her.The girl said that he was all right, so she didn’t have much sleep last night.She went to a football game and took some pictures.After she came home, she was busy developed them.She stayed up till midnight.Miss Green told her to get more sleep at night.Alice promises not to do that again.Then Alice showed Miss Green her beautiful picture.Passage 2 Nowadays, mobile phones are more and more popular in our society.Even many students of high schools have got their own mobile phone.The mobile phone does offer a lot convenience to us.With a mobile phone, we can call the others not matter where we are.We can also send short messages.But, the mobile phone brings trouble as well.The signals of the phone disturbed our living space too much.Sometimes it will be unsafe or impolite to use a mobile phone.What’s more, it can be bad for the students who pay too more attention to it.It seems it’s not necessary for our middle school students to have a phone.In a word, if they use the mobile phone in a proper way, it can help us a lot without bring us troubles.Passage 3 An advertisement is really playing an important role in our daily life or not? We can see advertisement here and there.TV, radios, lifts, buses, newspapers, magazines, and even the cars carrying the information of the products and services to a wide audience.Advertisements are delivered your hands, your shopping bags, your mailboxes, your house, etc.They are there you are.The advertisements have brought greatly convenience to people.If someone wants the information of a product, he doesn’t have to go in personal to the shop.What he needs to do is to look at the ads which he can find them everywhere.Sometimes, however, some ads misleads the consumers, for they exaggerate the benefits of their products.So far as the consumers are concerning, they had better have their own judgment and not were puzzled by ads.Passage 4 More and more families are now rich enough to have their own cars.Cars do benefit the families as well the society in many ways.With a car, it is convenient for the family members to travel to or from work.They can also drive to the countryside on the weekends.At the same time, the development of motor industry will sure give a push to many other related industries, it is obviously beneficial to the social economy.In the other hand, the boom of private cars is also causing traffic and environmental problem.Waste gases from cars are causing serious pollution to the air, which do great harm to people’s health.With an increased number of cars on the roads, the traffic has become very heavily.Passage 5 Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life.With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth.But, man’s changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results.Today, pollution of the air or water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet.As we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.Therefore, effective measure should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment.Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools in abroad.First, students study abroad can make friend with people of different cultures.Second, they can learn many more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, they can learn foreign language more quickly.But mostly of the students are so young to live by themselves without any living experience.However, it is the first time for the most of them to leave the main land.Be far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesick.英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練（第四周）

Passage 1 Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmate playing table tennis.Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn our techniques.Then I kept practicing while I became confidently enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players of my class.I really take proud in this experience, because it helped me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve to our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”

Passage 2 How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films.And a recent study proves this to be wrong.The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job.Emotionalexperiences is important to people’s well-being.People are less likely to share their feelingswith these who have had similar experiences.Similar, people prefer movies that reflect theirmood.That’s the reason ^a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.Passage 3 I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed.I have started to think about other people after I think about myself.I am happy that I am becoming the different person.I think my change started when I was at Palomar College.At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone.I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes.By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely.That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun.So I tried an experiment.I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help.That was real a big step for me.By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today.Passage 4 My friend Davis kept birds.He asked me to feed them for him in one day because he would be away for a week.He said that he have left the key in his mailbox.Unfortunately, I forgot all about birds until the night before Davis were to return.What was worse, it was already dark when I arrived at his house.I soon found the key left by Davis can’t unlock either the front door nor the back door.I was getting worrying.I was just about to give up while I noticed that one bedroom window was slightly open.I climbed up and opened the window.Just then a policeman and one of Davis’ neighbor arrived.I felt like a completely fool at that time.Passage 5 I often go to a weekend school.So did many of my classmates.This seems popular among students.Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies.Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.So every coin has two sides.Our school work is already a heavy burden.Extra lesson often take up too much of our time.In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects.We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate on the lessons in our own school..We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.Passage 6 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Many students are trying his best to go abroad.There are many Ladies and gentlemen, It is special pleasure to welcome our new staff member, Mr Tony White, who has come here to America.Mr White has recently graduated from the University of Chicago where he has majored in English Literature and minored in Teaching English as the Second Language.He will working with us here for at least two years.One of the goals of our school are to promote understanding and cooperation between the young people of our two countries.By have Mr White, who is willing to sacrifice the comfort of his friends and family to come to a strange country, we feel we are very lucky and our goals will be easily realized.On behalf of the whole school, I’d like to extend to you, Mr White, your sincerest welcome.We are indeed happy to have you here, and we wish you all the better during your stay in China.Thank you.Passage 7 Dear Sir，Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school.As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends.Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best.I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly.So I really hope to take this chance improve it.If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in.I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.Yours truly，Li Hua

第四篇：高二英語短文改錯專題復(fù)習(xí)高二英語短文改錯專題復(fù)習(xí)

高二英語短文改錯專題復(fù)習(xí)高二英語短文改錯專題復(fù)習(xí)知識總結(jié)歸納：

短文改錯的題是一篇意思連貫，但有九行文字中各有一個語法或用詞錯誤的英語短文。它所涉及的知識面很廣，能力要求較高。而且題中所設(shè)的錯誤常常是考生自己在寫作中經(jīng)常出的語法錯誤，是專門針對考生的弱點而設(shè)的。但它又從另一個角度考查了語法知識的運用。因此，做題時，應(yīng)從以下幾個方面著手解題：動詞使用錯誤；名詞使用錯誤；形容詞，副詞使用錯誤；連詞使用錯誤；代詞使用錯誤；冠詞使用錯誤；介詞使用錯誤，上下文邏輯錯誤等。

在研究每一行的句子時，首先把握句子的意思，然后劃分句子的成分：主語；謂語部分；賓語；狀語：地點，時間，方式等。如果句子是并列句或復(fù)合句，先分開各部分小的分句，根據(jù)各個分句之間的關(guān)系判斷使用的連詞是否正確。然后再研究各個分句的成分。

（一）名詞使用錯誤：名詞一般在句中做主語或賓語，名詞的錯誤主要在于名詞單，復(fù)數(shù)的錯誤使用。

1.They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.： question是可數(shù)名詞根據(jù)本句的意思，前面有l(wèi)ots of修飾，應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。2.We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.：subject是可數(shù)名詞根據(jù)本句的意思，前面有quite a few修飾，應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。

3.We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.：根據(jù)本句的意思match在此應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。

4.Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day.：return在此是名詞，應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式：many returns of the day是祝賀人們生日的固定用語：祝你健康長壽。

5.He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.：all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate應(yīng)當(dāng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

6.On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.：picture應(yīng)當(dāng)改成復(fù)數(shù)形式，因為作者一路上忙于照相，不止僅照一張像。另外還要注意名詞所有格形式上的錯誤使用。

That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….：根據(jù)句子意思：有時一個小小的謊言（善意的）可以使你的朋友的感情免遭傷害friend應(yīng)當(dāng)改為friend’s

（二）動詞使用的錯誤：

<一> 作為謂語動詞，注意謂語動詞在時態(tài)，語態(tài)，與主語是否一致以及用詞方面的問題。1.My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school team.：全句的基本時態(tài)應(yīng)當(dāng)是現(xiàn)在時，was應(yīng)改為am 2.Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.：主謂一致的錯誤。Give的主語是Playing football，動名詞作主語是單數(shù)形式，應(yīng)改為：gives 3.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.：前半句是說過去的事情used to do ：過去常常做某事。use改為：used 4.…the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came down.：時態(tài)錯誤。全句是過去時態(tài)，passes 改為passed 5.As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.：動詞形式的錯誤。句中有三個連續(xù)的動作做謂語。因此visit不是伴隨狀語，是第二個謂語動詞，應(yīng)該為visited.6.The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.：句中定語從句中的謂語動詞use 的主語是先行詞a computer network，是單數(shù)形式，所以按主謂一致的原則use改為：uses.<二> 作為非謂語動詞，現(xiàn)在分詞，過去分詞，動名詞，不定式形式的使用錯誤，同時注意非謂語動詞在平行結(jié)構(gòu)中出現(xiàn)的錯誤。

1.Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.：hang up在此做定語修飾先行詞clothes，應(yīng)改為現(xiàn)在分詞形式表示掛著各種衣服。

2.He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.：定語從句是說：他把業(yè)余時間花在學(xué)習(xí)上，按句型結(jié)構(gòu)：spend some time doing something.所以studied應(yīng)改為：studying.<三> 形容詞，副詞使用錯誤：

注意：① 形容詞和副詞的比較級，原級，最高級使用方面的問題。② 修飾比較級的副詞的錯誤使用。③ 以ing和以ed結(jié)尾的形容詞的混用。④ 形容詞和副詞的混用。

1.I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting：much修飾比較級形式，在此沒有比較級的意義，所以去掉much.2.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.：形容詞與副詞混用。Have a wonderful time：過得非常愉快。wonderfully 改為：wonderful 3.…h(huán)is mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.：本句含有so…that 句型。very改為：so 4.People will work few hours than they do now.：這是一個含比較級的句子。（句中有than），few 改為比較級形式fewer 5.Computers will be more smaller and useful….：比較級smaller前面的修飾詞應(yīng)該是副詞much。More與多音節(jié)形容詞或副詞原形構(gòu)成比較級。more改為much 6.Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved.形容詞moved指人受到感動。本句的定語從句的主語是movie。應(yīng)當(dāng)是moving.<四> 連詞使用錯誤：并列句連詞and與but的誤用是歷年高考題中?？嫉膬?nèi)容。復(fù)合句如賓語從句，狀語從句，定語從句中主，從句的連接詞的誤用根據(jù)主從句的關(guān)系可以發(fā)現(xiàn)。1.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.：前后兩句的關(guān)系是并列關(guān)系or應(yīng)改為：and 2.My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.前后兩句是并列關(guān)系不具有轉(zhuǎn)折意義。but改為：and 3.It deosn’t matter that I would win or not.Matter后面的從句是whether…or not結(jié)構(gòu)。That改為：whether 4.An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.：根據(jù)句子意思：在Eskimo男孩殺死他的第一只北極熊之后，才真正成為一名男子漢。Since改為：after 5.The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.：I work是定語從句修飾先行詞The fine-furniture store，The fine-furniture store在從句中做地點狀語，應(yīng)加關(guān)系副詞where.解題思路：

首先要理解整個短文的含義，邏輯關(guān)系，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。再仔細研究每一句的意義。借助劃分句子成分的方法判斷每一部分是否有錯誤。讀句子時一定以整句為單位?！镜湫屠}】

A（2004全國卷I）Dear Ralph I’m a newcomer here of a small town.I would 1.from describe myself as shy and quietly.Before my classmates, 2.quiet it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3.as them.I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4.at a fool.So I feel unhappy every day.5.√

Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6.why

don’t like to talk with me.Sometimes, we talked to each other 7.talk very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8.strangers once.I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9.but seem to work.Can you tell me about what I should do? 10.about去掉 分析：

1.來自一個小鎮(zhèn)的新生。強調(diào)“來自于”用介詞：from 2.describe oneself as +形容詞，所以quietly改為quiet 3.缺少連詞，這是同級比較結(jié)構(gòu)as…as，加上as 4.介詞錯誤：詞組laugh at somebody：嘲笑某人。

6.賓語從句連詞的錯誤，that 本身沒有意義可以省略，本句是說：我不知道他們?yōu)槭裁床幌矚g我。

7.時態(tài)錯誤，全篇用的是現(xiàn)在時。

8.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的錯誤，主語是we，賓語與主語呼應(yīng)，應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)形式。9.這是一個并列句，前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。10.根據(jù)句子意思，about多余。

B全國卷III2004 You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1.of a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3.having your books.Recently even though, many people 4.去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.5.√ They have been reports in America about people 6.There trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7.personal Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.easy information are good to society.For example, you 9.is can find such information like how to kill people.10.as The problem will become more serious in the future.分析：

1.all kinds of是固定詞組，of 不能缺少.2.a few 后面的名詞是復(fù)數(shù)形式。minute是可數(shù)名詞 3.without是介詞，后面跟動詞ing形式。

4.even though：即使，此處表示“雖然”。應(yīng)去掉even 6.此處表示：在美國有報道說…..應(yīng)當(dāng)用表示“有…”的句型：there be… 7.此處表示“個人的信息”，需要用形容詞做定語。personal：個人的。8.is后面是形容詞形式。

9.information是不可數(shù)名詞。后面的謂語動詞用單數(shù)形式。10.such…as是固定句型?！灸M試題】（答題時間：45分鐘）A You can find all kinds information in just 1._____ a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books.Recently even though, many people 4._____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5._____ They have been reports in America about people 6._______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.________ information are good to society.For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people.10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future.B This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________

The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________ Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________ but could make the most delicious dishes.One time, I just 4._________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner.As I was 5._________ about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6._________ the kitchen looking at me.Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7._________ isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8._________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.You 9._________ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10.________

參考答案 A 1.在kinds后面加of ：all kinds of 是固定短語。這里缺少了介詞of 2.名詞“數(shù)”的錯誤, minute是可數(shù)名詞，有a few修飾，應(yīng)改為：minutes 3.have改為：having：without是介詞，后面的動詞應(yīng)該是動名詞形式。4.去掉even：even though：即使。此處表示：雖然。5.此行正確。

6.They改為：There：本句表示：有一份報告。用there be 句型。7.person改為：personal：此處指個人的信息，應(yīng)該用形容詞形式。8.easily改為easy：be后面接形容詞。

9.are改為is：主語information是不可數(shù)名詞。

10.like改為as：such…as為固定句型，表示：象……這樣的……。B 分析：

1.boy是可數(shù)名詞，第一次提到，前面必須加a 2.本句是說：歡渡春節(jié)。When在此多余.3.用詞不當(dāng)，cooker：炊具。Cook：廚師。4.前后兩個分句是并列關(guān)系。

6.be about to do something 是固定句型。7.Shake her hand在本句中做伴隨狀語。應(yīng)該用ing形式。8.全句都在敘述過去的事，用過去時。

9.本句是說：控制自己。賓語應(yīng)改為反身代詞。10.several后的名詞應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第五篇：2017年高考英語短文改錯[定稿]

2017年高考英語短文改錯最全套路

一、短文改錯萬能公式

1.謂語動詞的錯誤是歷年考試的重點和熱點，常見動詞錯誤類型有：

①一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去時錯用;

②and前后動詞時態(tài)不一致;

③主謂不一致;

④缺少動詞,特別是be動詞;

⑤第三人稱單數(shù)形式錯用;

⑥主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)錯用。

2.名詞的常見錯誤：

單復(fù)數(shù)名詞錯用，可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞錯用。

3.連詞錯誤：

連詞包括關(guān)系代詞、副詞，并列連詞and/or/but等。

關(guān)于連詞，一般考查從句關(guān)系：who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。

4.冠詞錯誤：

誤用a和an(根據(jù)單詞的第一個音素來判定);

誤用a/an和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠詞或少冠詞)

5.形容詞和副詞錯誤：

系動詞后用形容詞(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性動詞smell/feel);

詞性的誤用(形容詞修飾名詞;副詞修飾動詞、形容詞)。

6.代詞錯誤：

代詞的主格和賓格(I/me;he/him;she/her;we/us they/them)錯誤;

反身代詞(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用錯誤;

代詞的單數(shù)和復(fù)數(shù)使用錯誤;

代詞指代錯誤;

多代詞或少代詞。

7.非謂語動詞的常見錯誤：

不定式、動名詞作主語、賓語時;

and連接的不定式或動名詞前后不一致(尤其距離較遠時);

介詞后用動名詞形式作賓語;

某些動詞后要求接動名詞或不定式。

8.介詞錯誤：

詞組中的介詞誤用;

介詞意思理解偏差;

介詞的多用或少用

二、短文改錯解答口訣

動詞形，名詞數(shù);

注意形和副;

非謂動詞細辨別;

習(xí)慣用法要記住;

句子成分多分析;

邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注。

1、動詞形

主要包括兩類錯誤：動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤，以及主、謂不一致的錯誤。

例如：My favourite sport is football.I was member of our school football team.Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library.(are)

上述兩例分別屬于時態(tài)錯誤和主、謂不一致錯誤。找出此類錯誤的關(guān)鍵是樹立牢固的時態(tài)概念，注意短文內(nèi)容發(fā)生或存在的時間，保持時間概念的一致性。

2、名詞數(shù)

指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。常表現(xiàn)為將名詞復(fù)數(shù)寫成單數(shù)。

例如：?so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subjects)

3、區(qū)分形和副

即區(qū)分形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯的常考點。例如：I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(wonderful)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.(Unfortunately)

需要注意的是，形容詞多用來做定、表、補語等，而副詞只能在句子中作狀語，修飾動詞、形容詞、副詞或整個句子。第一例中的wonderful作定語修飾time，第二句的Unfortunately作狀語修飾整個句子。

4、非謂動詞細辨別

這是考查最多的錯誤形式之一。主要有分詞和動名詞類錯誤，也包括不定式類錯誤。

例如：

?in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.(interested)

Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also ?(playing)

My parents love me? and will do all they can ∧ make sure?(to)

上述二、三例分別是動名詞作主語，和不定式作目的狀語。一般的，現(xiàn)在分詞有主動態(tài)和進行時的含義，而過去分詞具有被動態(tài)和完成時的含義，不定式有將來時態(tài)的含義。

5、習(xí)慣用法要記住

主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識。這也是歷年高考的常考點，其錯誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭配錯誤。

例如：It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and?(of)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves.(of)

6、句子成分多分析

不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類;不同的語景要選擇不同的詞語。這些都有待我們對句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子成分作細致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e誤。

例如：They∧eager to know everything about China and?(were)I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.(which)

第一例漏掉了謂語動詞were，這是受寒于習(xí)慣的影響而導(dǎo)致的錯誤;第二例則是詞類與它在句子中的成分不相符，where是副詞，不能作主語。

7、邏輯錯誤須關(guān)注

與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯誤。如稱謂上的張冠李戴，人名、地名、時間、方位等方面的錯誤，常是這類錯誤的考查對象。

例如：The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(their)First, let me tell you something more about myself.(去掉more)

?no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.(everyone)上述第一例中的主語是Smiths(史密斯夫婦倆)，因此后面的his不合邏輯。第二例中的more在這兒表“再”的意思，才開始告訴別人，怎么能說“再告訴你一些事”?第三例講的是為了解決看電視時的爭端，“我們”把電視機賣了;晚上沒電視看了，所以與從前一樣，大家又都讀書了，所以該用everyone。

除了上述錯誤類型外，?？嫉腻e誤形式還有：連詞but, and, or和so的用法錯誤(可以歸類為邏輯錯誤)，以及冠詞的用法錯誤等。

例如：

She was smiling but nodding at me.(and)

It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.(or)

We may be one family and live under a same roof.(the)

三、短文改錯參考原則 1.改動以最少為原則;2.虛詞以添加或刪除為原則;3.實詞以改變詞形為原則;4.以保持句子原意為原則;

5.核對錯項時，若的確有一時難以改出的地方，可以參考所改動項是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例：即多一詞1個，缺詞1個，錯詞8個;

6.核對改正的語法項目是否有重復(fù)，因為短文改錯往往覆蓋面廣，一般不會出現(xiàn)重復(fù)考查某個語法點的現(xiàn)象;

7.核對答題符號是否規(guī)范，位置是否準(zhǔn)確，看看有無遺漏符號，忽略字母大小寫和拼寫等問題。