第一篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文高分秘訣
1.動筆之前,認(rèn)真審題
《中考考試說明》指出,書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認(rèn)真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動筆,要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。
2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱
書面表達評分原則有四條:
(1)內(nèi)容要點;
(2)運用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量;
(3)運用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性;
(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見,要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,寫時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散,廢話連篇,嚴(yán)重跑題。書面表達,內(nèi)容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字?jǐn)?shù)不要低于或超過規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)太多。
3.語言通順,表達準(zhǔn)確
(1)避免使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板。
(2)多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型??蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。
(3).注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。
1)語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。
2)主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。
3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標(biāo)點符號和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標(biāo)點符號特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語英語
A.句號。.B.省略號………
C.頓號、無
(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法:
1)表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關(guān)系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對照關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關(guān)系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會表達,另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好,造復(fù)合句容易出錯,容易被扣分,閱卷場上有句話:“錯誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達,可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡??傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)慣。
(1)迂回而行
當(dāng)漢語詞義不會用英語表達時,可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路,然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。
(2)小詞大用
漢語中有些語意看來很復(fù)雜很文雅,但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3)借花獻佛
有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因為剛剛做過題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來,為我所用。
5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時間和精力,想把書面表達寫得更好,那么,請注意以下幾點:
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。
(2)適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。
(3)進一步描繪人或事物時,適當(dāng)使用定語從句。
(4)適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語,烘托謂語動詞。
(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7)上下句子緊接時,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節(jié)省篇幅。
6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認(rèn),要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時,由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯。
(2)拼寫有無錯誤。
(3)語言是否用錯。
(4)時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。
(5)標(biāo)點錯誤。
(6)人稱是否用錯。
【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動,以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時間,在中考時一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。149
初中英語寫作技巧初中英語作文分為四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。教給大家十個字,搞定初中英語寫作,幫你拿到一等文。
“結(jié)構(gòu)+要點+邏輯+語法+亮點!”
結(jié)構(gòu):中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式,深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。為什么尼?因為這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰?!坝^點——要點——總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一
段:簡單明了,開門見山,不超過2句話,如,我們想表達小強很強壯,第一段直接說 XQ is extremely strong.觀點明確,這一句足矣。第二段:分2-3點說為什么他強壯。1.每天吃10頓飯,He has ten meals everyday!詳舉吃的是什么。2.每天運動2小時,He does exercise 2 hours a day!詳舉做了什么運動。第三段:經(jīng)過第二段的論證,可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如,How strong and robust XQ is!I hope to behim one day!
要點:實際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個字,翻譯!因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點,要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫的再好,只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點,也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容,要做到全,圍繞中心。
邏輯:這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的,轉(zhuǎn)折的,總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。遞進:除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示總結(jié)的)。轉(zhuǎn)折:but, yet, however等。真正有經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞,因為這些詞體現(xiàn)了這個文章的思路。
語法:其他幾點都不是硬性的要求,不那樣做不能說是錯,只能說是不好,但是語法卻是硬性的。如,單詞的使用,時態(tài)等。
亮點:當(dāng)我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后兩個字,亮點至關(guān)重要。大家設(shè)想如果我們是閱卷老師。有兩篇寫人美麗的作文擺在我們面前,都是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的三段式,要點都很全,都用了一些邏輯詞,都沒有語法錯誤,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇卻用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我堅信正常人都會給B篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯,詞組,句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以,以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。只要把這十個字都搞定了,那么初中英語寫作就一定能搞定!
第二篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
熟悉寫作步驟:審題:審清作文體裁(類型)時態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié);列提綱(文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架):分幾段,以及每段大體內(nèi)容;寫作:在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補充要點;復(fù)查:2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點等問題;2遍不出聲讀查,靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等; 5 謄抄:不允許做任何的更改。
總之做到三審:體裁、時態(tài)、人稱;
三思:詞匯—>短語—>句式;
三查:要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。
作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強,最多2句話引入主題;
(2)正文——主要內(nèi)容:層次性強,一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面,每個方面最多2句話;
(3)結(jié)尾:緊扣主題,2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束,盡量升華。
四、學(xué)會列作文提綱:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利與弊
Para1:(綜述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings
Para4:(個人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:計劃安排型作文——談假期安排
Para1:(綜述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
例三:圖表、數(shù)字比例型作文
(提出討論或調(diào)查的事實)Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表達出不同看法或觀點)Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表達個人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 說明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 優(yōu)點1… Besides, 優(yōu)點2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺點1… On the other hand, 缺點2…
In my opinion,個人觀點 …
例五:不同觀點型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾問題.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方觀點.First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方觀點.On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2.。As for me,個人觀點 …
例六: 解決問題型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.范文1.How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time.It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.Don’r be afraid to show people what you are really good at.Talk about the things you like and do best.Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.Be a good listner.Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.Be friendly to a lot of people.Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.范文2.My view on television
Television has come into our life for many years.We can’t live happily without television.Jt can give us the latest information and news.It can open up our eyes and enlarge our knowledge.We can get happiness from the plays on television.We’ll be boring all day if there is no television.Television programs are attractive.After a whole day’s hard worlk we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea.How wonderful it is!
Television is also bad for people’s health.It’s bad for you to watch TV too long, especially bad for your eyes.It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior.However, it depends on what we do.范文3.My view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day.The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly.We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes.Our teachers believe that if we did that.We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies.We disagree.We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying.If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.We also think everyone should be different from others.That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
第三篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文寫作技巧
一、掌握常用過渡性詞語
敘事文常用的句子間連接詞
at first;at last;in the end…
then / next/ after that…
when / while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time;at times;once in a while;
so that
To one’s surprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
in a word/in all
議論文常用連接詞
表示并列:either…or;neither…nor;both…and;not only…but also;
表示遞進的:besides;what’s more;what’s worse;(moreover);
表示原因的:because;for…;because of…;thanks to…;(for the reason that…);
表示結(jié)果的:so;as a result;so…that…;therefore;
表示目的的:so that…;in order that…;(in order)to…;for…;
表示對比的:while;on the one hand + on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;prefer…to…;would rather do…than
do…;
表示轉(zhuǎn)折的:however;but;
表示舉例的:for example;for instance;such as…;like…;that is to say…
表示總結(jié)的:in all/short;in a word;in brief/ total;last but not least;last;
表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;…h(huán)ave great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit
sb.;sb.benefit from sth.affect;have an effect on sb.;
表示喜愛的:love/like/enjoy…;be fond of…;be interested in…;show great interest in…;lose oneself in…;put one’s
heart into…;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;
表達個人想法的:
I think/believe…;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;
其他:
in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up one’s mind to do;in a way;
二、記住作文萬能句式
??贾黝}的典型句子
1、環(huán)保
1.It's our duty to protect our environment。
2.It is very important to take care of our environment
3.We should not throw litter onto the ground
4.We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees
5.We should plant more flowers and trees。
6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
2、旅游
1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…),it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)
2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus,…
3.We enjoyed ourselves。
4.We forgot the time.We didn't come back until 5 o'clock。
5.We all felt very tired, but we were happy。
6.I thought I would never forget this trip。
7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。
8.We visited a lot of places of interest。
9.We had a good time there。
10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap。
3、比賽
1.Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two。
2.All of us went to watch it。
6.Class One won this match.Class Two lost。7.Class One played well.They deserved to win。8.Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance。
4、健康 1.It is very important to keep healthy。2.How can we keep healthy? 3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late。4.We should eat the food healthily。5.We should do more exercise。6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。7.I didn't feel like eating anything。8.I decided to see the doctor。9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully。10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
5、學(xué)科 1.My favorite subject is English。2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful。5.So English is very important and I like English very much。6.We have a lot of fun in the English class。7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。9.I like English and try my best to learn it。
6、節(jié)日 1.In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival。2.It comes in January or February。3.On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner.They have a lot of nice food to eat。4.During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do。5.People visit their relatives and friends。6.They greet each other with a hug and say, “Happy New Year”。7.As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways。
7、寫人 1.His name is Jack。2.He was born in London in 1982。3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。4.He is 20 years old。5.He comes from England。6.He is a good ping-pong player。7.He is medium build。8.He has short hair。9.He is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us。10.He teaches English very well。11.He works very hard.He works in No.5 Middle School。12.He loves watching football games after work。13.He often helps me with my English。14.At the age of six, he began to play table tennis。
8、生活 1.Jim got up very early。2.Jim cleaned the room and do the housework。3.Jim went to shop and did some shopping。
7.He washes the dishes。8.He has lunch at school。9.It is a busy day.He is very tired.But he feels happy。
三、熟悉寫作步驟:審題:審清作文體裁(類型)時態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié);列提綱(文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架):分幾段,以及每段大體內(nèi)容;寫作:在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補充要點;復(fù)查:2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點等問題;2遍不出聲讀查,靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等;謄抄:不允許做任何的更改。
總之做到三審:體裁、時態(tài)、人稱;
三思:詞匯—>短語—>句式;
三查:要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。
作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)綜述:概括性強,最多2句話引入主題;
(2)正文——主要內(nèi)容:層次性強,一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3 個方面,每個方面最多2句話;
(3)結(jié)尾:緊扣主題,2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束,盡量升華。
四、學(xué)會列作文提綱:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利與弊
Para1:(綜述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings
Para4:(個人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:計劃安排型作文——談假期安排
Para1:(綜述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
例三:圖表、數(shù)字比例型作文
(提出討論或調(diào)查的事實)Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表達出不同看法或觀點)Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表達個人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 說明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 優(yōu)點1… Besides, 優(yōu)點2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺點1… On the other hand, 缺點2…
In my opinion,個人觀點 …
例五:不同觀點型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾問題.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方觀點.First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方觀點.On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2…
As for me,個人觀點 …
例六: 解決問題型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.掌握了以上的寫作方法和技巧,經(jīng)過反復(fù)的寫作磨練,我相信,參加中考的學(xué)子們一定會在中考中寫出一篇能夠展示內(nèi)心世界的美麗的英語作文。
第四篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
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(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法:
1)表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關(guān)系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對照關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關(guān)系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
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第五篇:初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文高分秘訣 1.動筆之前,認(rèn)真審題
《中考考試說明》指出,書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認(rèn)真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動筆,要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱 書面表達評分原則有四條:(1)內(nèi)容要點;
(2)運用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量;
(3)運用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性;(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見,要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,寫時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散,廢話連篇,嚴(yán)重跑題。書面表達,內(nèi)容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字?jǐn)?shù)不要低于或超過規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)太多。3.語言通順,表達準(zhǔn)確
(1)避免使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板。
(2)多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型??蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。
(3).注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1)語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。
2)主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標(biāo)點符號和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標(biāo)點符號特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語英語A.句號。.B.省略號………C.頓號、無(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法: 1)表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or … 2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關(guān)系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as … 6)表示對照關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關(guān)系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會表達,另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好,造復(fù)合句容易出錯,容易被扣分,閱卷場上有句話:“錯誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達,可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡。總之,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)慣。(1)迂回而行
當(dāng)漢語詞義不會用英語表達時,可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路,然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。(2)小詞大用
漢語中有些語意看來很復(fù)雜很文雅,但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3)借花獻佛
有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因為剛剛做過題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來,為我所用。5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時間和精力,想把書面表達寫得更好,那么,請注意以下幾點:
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。(2)適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。
(3)進一步描繪人或事物時,適當(dāng)使用定語從句。(4)適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語,烘托謂語動詞。(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子緊接時,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節(jié)省篇幅。6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認(rèn),要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時,由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯。(2)拼寫有無錯誤。(3)語言是否用錯。(4)時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。(5)標(biāo)點錯誤。
(6)人稱是否用錯。
【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動,以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時間,在中考時一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。