第一篇：2014屆上海市高三一模英語(yǔ)作文整合

2014 英語(yǔ)高三一模作文

Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.【寶山區(qū)】II.Guided Writing

在中學(xué)階段，英語(yǔ)課外閱讀有許多材料。比如：小說(shuō)、雜志、報(bào)紙、網(wǎng)絡(luò)、系列 讀物和習(xí)題等。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于中學(xué)英語(yǔ)課外閱讀的文章，內(nèi)容必須包括： ? 介紹你喜歡的英語(yǔ)閱讀材料 ? 簡(jiǎn)單闡述你在英語(yǔ)課外閱讀中的收獲和感受

【評(píng)分】15/20 I prefer the newspaper online.As we all know，it is hard for us to get the paper media，due to the high cost.Therefore, the most feasible way to get access to the foreign language is the Internet.It is because the words on the online newspapers is more suitable for a high school student to read that we can benefit from it more easily.Another reason why we choose newspaper website is that there is not only one type of article.For example.BBC Homepage involves articles of all types ranging from news and world to literature and science.Reading only the text books for knowledge cannot truly enable us to use a language.By reading the newspaper website, I can not only learn to use a languages but also can be more exposed to a variety of knowledge.As the online newspaper is free, relatively easy to read and rich in knowledge, I love it best.【長(zhǎng)寧區(qū)】 如今微信（WeChat）走進(jìn)了人們的生活，為大家?guī)?lái)了諸多便利，但有些人也 隨之成了“微信控”(WeChataholic)，請(qǐng)你就此事寫(xiě)一篇文章。你的文章必須包括： ? 對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的描述 ? 你對(duì)“微信控”看法 ① In present-day society, Internet has played an important role in our daily lives, while the new form.of communication “WeChat” is ② gaining increasingl y more popularity among people.Naturally, a great number of people have bec ome “WeChataholic” or “phubber”, which means they keep staring at the mobil e phone all the time and can’t live without it.WeChat surely brings us a lot of convenience of keeping in contact with o thers, ③ whereas the negative effects of being addicted to WeChat far overweig h its advantages.To begin with, the frequent use of electric devices does great harm to our health, especially for teenagers who are physically immature.In addition, ④ people who are obsessed with WeChat may easily neglect the peopl e around them and being isolated from their surroundings, which ⑤ poses a pot ential threat to people’s interpersonal relationships.⑥ Last but not least, the ove 1 / 10

ruse of WeChat interferes with the normal running of our lives, directly reduci ng the efficiency of people’s daily work and study.In conclusion, we should make full use of the merit of WeChat, and reduce it s demerit to the minimum as well.⑦ Only in this way, can we definitely make a better use of WeChat.【崇明縣】

Dear Jerry, Thanks for your letter!As you’ve recently heard of from the Internet that the air condition in Shanghai is rather bad, I would like to share with you my ide a about the haze.① The word HAZE used to be a common entry which could only be found in dictionaries;however, it has become a hot topic and keyword in some major metropolitan c ities like Shanghai in China.② When you open the window in the morning, y ou will seldom see blue sky and white clouds.When you jog on the school p layground, you will find it rare to freely breathe fresh air.③ The average city dwellers like me not only began to wear masks to self-protect but took some measures to crack it down.So, what are the reasons resulting in such terrible haze? I am sure no single c ause is responsible for such a big issue, but ④ talking about the wasted gases l et off from the tall chimneys located in the chemical factories and the polluted water running out from some unknown illegal small workshops, no one would doubt the responsibilities these pollution sources should take.No matter how serious the haze is now, it is no use complaining about it all day without any practical actions.⑤ It is high time our government took some forceful measures to combat the air pollutions and the individuals raised their awareness to make their due contribution to a clean environment.Anyway, everything is changing better and so will be the air condition.Best regards!Yours sincerely, / 10

Huang ming

【虹口區(qū)】

最近，學(xué)校就學(xué)生認(rèn)為“自己最苦惱的事”做了一次問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。你的報(bào)告必須包括以下內(nèi)容： ? 就前三種苦惱選擇其中之一，具體描述這一苦惱的具體表現(xiàn)、產(chǎn)生原因； ? 用你本人生活中的一個(gè)具體事例，說(shuō)明你是如何應(yīng)對(duì)或排除這一苦惱的。（報(bào)告中不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和校名）

【黃浦區(qū)】

某國(guó)際青少年互動(dòng)友誼營(yíng)正在招募志愿者，要求能安排并接待一位與你年齡 相仿的外國(guó)青少年在上海游玩一天。你對(duì)此很感興趣，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封 E-mail，申請(qǐng)擔(dān) 任志愿者，并告訴主辦方你的一天安排。（文中請(qǐng)不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名人名）Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the volunteer of your ①

International Adolescent Interactive Friendship Camp since I am rather interested in the reception part f or a foreign friend of my age.After full consideration, I have designed a perfect day tour in Shanghai for this new friend.In the early morning, he or she will be sitting at the table with my friends in the sidewalk snack booth, ② preparing to enjoy the most tra ditional Shanghai local breakfast.③ As is always said, one can never say he has been in Shanghai without v isiting the bund.After breakfast, I will show him around the bund, the well k nown scenic spots for tourists.④ Instead of glancing over the building hurriedly, I will try my best to be a qualified tour guide, introducing to him the histori es and interesting stories behind every architecture.In the afternoon, we are going to visit the former site of Shanghai Expo 2 010, appreciating the magnificent China Pavilion, the Crown of the East.The s hape of ⑤ a soaring inverted pyramid is so well designed that it has attracted a lmost one million visitors until now.What’s more, I am sure that my new frie nd will be definitely ⑥ dazzled by the endless array of exhibits with Chinese a rtistic characteristics from all over China.A perfect day ends with a delicious homemade dinner with dearest family.And I hope my company could leave him or her a good memory of Shangha i.Thanks for your consideration!Yours sincerely, / 10 Mary

【嘉定區(qū)】

據(jù)報(bào)導(dǎo)，在不久的將來(lái)，英語(yǔ)將不再列入高考科目。這引起了社會(huì)很大的關(guān) 注和爭(zhēng)議： 贊成的說(shuō)這可以減輕學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)；反對(duì)者認(rèn)為全球化背景下英語(yǔ)越來(lái) 越重要，如此將對(duì)中小學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響。請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)這一變化的看法和觀點(diǎn)。參考詞匯：globalization

【金山區(qū)】

高考將探索外語(yǔ)科目一年多次的社會(huì)化考試，學(xué)生可自主選擇考試時(shí)間和次 數(shù)。和目前的高考制度相比，你更喜歡哪種方式？請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。According to the reform program of the college entrance examination that the Ministry of Education has made，some of the subjects will be examed many times in a year.People have different oppinions about this.Some say that this program give students more free time.Students can choose the exam time themself and it's obvious an effective way to improve their grades of the university entrance examination.On the other hand,if some of the subjects are finished ahead of time,students will be in less pressure during the time.There are also many people against the program while others are in favour of it.It wil increase the burden of the students by the frequently tests.Also,it is a waste of the education resource cause the exam costs more in this case.In my oppinion，to pass the exam before the reference time is a good way to relax ourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination.So I'm looking forward to see the reform program to be brought into force.What about you?What's your idea of the program? 【閔行區(qū)】 假如你是啟明中學(xué)（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申請(qǐng)成為“愛(ài)共線”的暑 期志愿者。根據(jù)以下啟事，寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信（信中不能提到真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）。/ 10

志 愿 者 招 募

愛(ài)共線是由民間發(fā)起的愛(ài)心公益組織，主要致力于貧困地區(qū)兒童相關(guān)的援助項(xiàng)目。我們期待你的加入！崗位 1：網(wǎng)頁(yè)編輯（webpage editor）崗位 2：影像制作（cameraman）崗位 3：論壇管理員（forum administrator）崗位 4：活動(dòng)組織（event organizer）有意者請(qǐng)來(lái)信告知： 1)你個(gè)人的基本情況； 2)你所申請(qǐng)的崗位和申請(qǐng)的理由；

Dear Sir or Madam: Hello!I’m Li Ming, who is a student from Ming Qi Middle School.After seeing your advertisement, now I’m writing this letter immediately.I want to apply to be a volunteer in your organization.The job I want to take is webpage editor.First of all, I really want to devote myself to helping children in poor areas.Once upon a time, I saw some news about these poor children who had no access to education or lacked assistance of daily necessities, which left a deep impression on me.So I thought I would do something for them one day.Secondly, I’m good at programming.I have learnt programming for a long time.The prizes which I won in competitions are numerous.In my class, I’m responsible for designing my class’s webpage.As you can see, I think I have had much experience.Working as a webpage editor is easy for me.Last but not least, in summer vacation, I have no extra classes.So I can contribute all my energy to this job.As reasons above, this job is suitable for me.And I assure you that I will do a great job.Please let me join your organization!Yours sincerely Li Ming

【浦東新區(qū)】

目前，某某學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展推選“校園形象大使”(image ambassador on campus)活動(dòng)。假定你是該校的一名學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以書(shū)信的形式向校長(zhǎng)推薦一位同學(xué)或者進(jìn)行自薦，并結(jié)合具體事例闡明推薦的理由。(信中請(qǐng)勿出現(xiàn)具體校名和姓名)Dear Mr Princcipal, With the recent “Image ambassador on campus” campaign launched,a suitable candidate just comes up into my mind and I cannot wait to introduce this my dear fellow to you heartily.The guy,named Ben,has been class monitor since his first debut.He is such a person with a high sense of responsibility as is always ready to offer people a helping hand 5 / 10

with no hesitation and reluctance.He is also a role model possessing precious virtues which we all are endeavoring to learn from.Never is he arrogant no matter what achievements he has made in study.So he is never tired of learning from all that he finds a point in improving himself.He is always on the run of clarifying his own soul as well as ours.If you share the same opinion as mine, please take Ben into account.I’m sure he can assume the role of image ambassador on campus and maximize his positive energy for us students’ deeper internal development in the mean time.Anyway,thanksfor your reading time.Yours,Serena

【普陀區(qū)】

有的校園活動(dòng)讓你興奮不已，有的校園活動(dòng)讓你感到枯燥乏味。請(qǐng)描述你參與過(guò) 的一次校園活動(dòng)，并簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀銓?duì)該活動(dòng)的看法。? 請(qǐng)具體描述一次你參與過(guò)的校園活動(dòng) ? 并談?wù)勀銓?duì)此次校園活動(dòng)的看法或它對(duì)你的影響

【青浦區(qū)】

學(xué)校將組織“ ‘光盤(pán)’行動(dòng)”的活動(dòng)（“clear your plate” campaign），你將就此談?wù)?自己的想法。（“Eat-It-Up” campaign!）你的文章必須包括以下內(nèi)容： ? 簡(jiǎn)要描述身邊存在的浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)象； ? 進(jìn)行“光盤(pán)”行動(dòng)的必要性； ? 你的“光盤(pán)”行動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容

The human society has developed to the point where most no longer have to struggle with the food shortage.Accordingly, a string of scenes showcasing the food waste are commonplace in daily lives: diners leave the KFCs with their chips unfinished, party members fail to consume an excessive amount of meal prepared, or chefs occasionally dump the already-cooked dishes not up to consumers’ expectations.In light of this, a clear-plate campaign, intended to minimize squandering, is to be launched by our school.6 / 10

Apparently, the campaign aims to cultivate people ’s awareness of cutting food waste and eliminating deserted leftovers.But more significantly, the successful implementation of the campaign ensures that the energy and resources that went into the culinary process are equally saved, thus reducing the carbon emissions involved in it.Moreover, the positive effects generated by the action serve as decent learning material in morality and ethics, especially for the younger generations.What should be entailed in the campaign, as far as I am concerned, can be listed as follows: first, some drastic approaches such as on the spot fine should be imposed upon individuals who are found wasting excessively.Alternatively, students can be privileged to gain a 5% discount in price provided they round off meals with a clear plate.Also imperative is that the ways the courses are sold be altered: the dishes might as well be prepared in smaller portions so that the potential waste can be curbed.【松江區(qū)】請(qǐng)你根據(jù)參加過(guò)的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，談?wù)剠⒓由鐣?huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的體會(huì)以及這樣 的活動(dòng)對(duì)你將來(lái)的人生產(chǎn)生的影響。

【徐匯區(qū)】我們國(guó)家長(zhǎng)期實(shí)行獨(dú)生子女政策，現(xiàn)在政府將放開(kāi)這一政策，允許夫妻中一方是 獨(dú)生子女的家庭生育第二個(gè)孩子，對(duì)此你怎么看。請(qǐng)圍繞以下幾點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā? ? 談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前實(shí)施的獨(dú)生子女政策的理解； 對(duì)未來(lái)實(shí)施夫妻中一方是獨(dú)生子女可生育第二個(gè)孩子的政策的想法；

? 你對(duì)未來(lái)中國(guó)的人口問(wèn)題有何期望，簡(jiǎn)述原因?！癘ne Child” policy has been implemented for decades, which has benefited China ①since the struggle of an imbalanced development of population and economy in the late 1970s.②Not only has it released the child-raising stress for each family, but it has lessened the burden on the whole society.③However, every coin has two sides.Though “One Child” policy has been proved an effective way to control the size of our population, it has generated various consequences, such as ④aging problem, “empty nest”syndrome, deficiency of young labor, to mention just a few.In consideration of the current phenomenon, ⑤a new policy that couples with one spouse being an only child will be permitted to have two children is right on its way.⑥There is no doubt that it will bring about some advantages, including ⑦alleviating the pressure of pension as well as lowering the risk of child loss.In the long run, it will definitely transform our social structure.⑧Yet due to the profound impact of “One Child” policy, it still requires great effort to change 7 / 10

people’s concept of childbirth, which will consequently ⑨give rise to the ⑩achievement of harmony between population and society.【楊浦區(qū)】請(qǐng)?jiān)谥腔邸⒔疱X(qián)、真理、權(quán)力和美這五項(xiàng)中選擇你認(rèn)為最重要的，并闡述你 的理由。Wisdom, wealth, truth, power and beauty are all important things in our life, As far as I am concerned ,wisdom is the most essential thing.Wisdom is a tool which helps us handle daily things effectively and do our work perfectly.It is like a ladder which leads us to other important things such as truth and wealth in our life.What's more, the people with great wisdom may have deep understanding of the value of life.Instead of being aimlessly busy, great wisdom lets us know what we are pursuing and how we can do it.That's why I believed that wisdom is the most important quality for a successful and meaningful life.【閘北區(qū)】 / 10

第二篇：上海市楊浦區(qū)2018屆高三一模數(shù)學(xué)試卷

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國(guó)內(nèi)首家A股上市的全國(guó)性教育機(jī)構(gòu)

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國(guó)內(nèi)首家A股上市的全國(guó)性教育機(jī)構(gòu)

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上海龍文官方網(wǎng)址：004km.cn

國(guó)內(nèi)首家A股上市的全國(guó)性教育機(jī)構(gòu)

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第三篇：高三一?？偨Y(jié)

高三一模考試各科總結(jié)

語(yǔ)文

本次的語(yǔ)文考試考的還算滿意，這次考試有些題目答得還可以，但是在概括題和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)題做的還是太理想的，還有作文寫(xiě)的也不是太好的，如果這幾個(gè)地方能夠在好點(diǎn)的話，那么語(yǔ)文成績(jī)可能還會(huì)更好。

語(yǔ)文的五道選擇題是十分重要的，這關(guān)系著整個(gè)語(yǔ)文考試的分?jǐn)?shù)，只有把選擇題做得好，那么語(yǔ)文分?jǐn)?shù)肯定能夠上去。記得上次的通州區(qū)的重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn)的考試，語(yǔ)文就是因?yàn)檫x擇題做的不好才導(dǎo)致考的不怎么理想的，由此，可以看出選擇題的重要性。

語(yǔ)言表達(dá)題與概括題考的不僅是我們的基本功，同時(shí)也考了我們的表達(dá)和概括能力，這就要求我們有從一段文字中找出主干的能力。因此，我要加強(qiáng)這方面的練習(xí)和整理，以提高這種能力。

因?yàn)閷?duì)有些文言詞語(yǔ)的意思不理解，所以不能夠很好的理解文章的意思，因此在翻譯的時(shí)候不能夠正確的抓住得分點(diǎn)。在接下來(lái)的日子里要注意對(duì)這些文言詞語(yǔ)的積累。

古詩(shī)鑒賞對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)還是挺難的，因?yàn)橐獜倪@些簡(jiǎn)單而含義深刻的句子中領(lǐng)悟作者的思想感情是挺難的，所以每次考試對(duì)這個(gè)題型總是沒(méi)有把握，總是憑著自己的感情去寫(xiě)。

現(xiàn)代文閱讀還算可以，在最近的一些練習(xí)里有所進(jìn)步，能夠比較規(guī)范的回答問(wèn)題了，但是還是有提升的空間。

作文是語(yǔ)文的壓軸大戲，它決定著分?jǐn)?shù)，因此要多積累作文素材，以免到時(shí)候因?yàn)闆](méi)什么可以寫(xiě)而導(dǎo)致作文不能得高分。

數(shù)學(xué)

本次的數(shù)學(xué)考試分?jǐn)?shù)較上次而言沒(méi)有那么離奇，大體上還較滿意，但是我覺(jué)得還是沒(méi)有達(dá)到我心中的分?jǐn)?shù)，因此在最后的這兩個(gè)月中我一定要更加努力。

填空題一直以來(lái)就是老大難，每次都是那么點(diǎn)，如果在填空題上都得幾分是很容易的，所以我要加強(qiáng)對(duì)這些小題的訓(xùn)練。

解答題的前三道題還是十分基礎(chǔ)的，我一定要把這三題的分?jǐn)?shù)全部拿到，確保不失分。后面的三道解答題不是都是難的，因此我要盡我所能，把自己會(huì)做的都寫(xiě)上去，這樣分?jǐn)?shù)才會(huì)上去。這六道解答題中，我覺(jué)得自己在函數(shù)、數(shù)列這兩個(gè)方面有些困難，所以加強(qiáng)練習(xí)是必要的；三角函數(shù)還是挺簡(jiǎn)單的，所以做題時(shí)要細(xì)心，不能失分；幾何證明只要找對(duì)方法就能順利的解決；應(yīng)用題要注意題目的要求，不能答非所問(wèn)，這次考試就栽在這上面了；解析幾何雖然算的比較繁，但是只要在掌握了正確的解法后，耐心的解下去，還是能夠算出來(lái)的。

附加題的四十分，要確保其中的二十分不失，后面的兩道必答題有時(shí)簡(jiǎn)單有時(shí)難，因此我們要注意。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，概率和立體幾何還是挺好拿分的，最難拿分的是證明，我也是覺(jué)得證明比較難，方法雖然會(huì)，但是步驟卻不一定是對(duì)的。

我想我只要跟著以上的做，數(shù)學(xué)成績(jī)肯定能提高的。

英語(yǔ)

此次的英語(yǔ)成績(jī)讓我震驚了，它也是最讓我不滿意的成績(jī)。

聽(tīng)力錯(cuò)的還是挺多的，雖然語(yǔ)速有點(diǎn)快，但是這不是借口，我要從自己的身上找缺點(diǎn)，我認(rèn)為可能是因?yàn)槁?tīng)的時(shí)候不是太專(zhuān)注的。

這次的單項(xiàng)選擇錯(cuò)的是慘不忍睹啊，都怪沒(méi)有能夠?qū)⒂⒄Z(yǔ)單詞很好的記住，導(dǎo)致好多的單詞混淆了，把它們張冠李戴了，因此才會(huì)錯(cuò)這么多的。

完形填空這次做的還算可以，至少把分?jǐn)?shù)控制在十幾分，閱讀理解這個(gè)方面還是需要好好努力，要增加閱讀量，這樣才能看懂文章。任務(wù)型閱讀也是比較容易失分的地方，要想在這道題上提高幾分是很容易的，只要注意時(shí)態(tài)和拼寫(xiě)。

作文既是容易的，也是難的，只要是詞匯的應(yīng)用和時(shí)態(tài)，只要注意這兩個(gè)方面就行了。

一模過(guò)去了，成績(jī)卻還是那么不理想，原以為一?？梢钥汲鰸M意結(jié)果，看來(lái)我錯(cuò)了。光憑空想是提高不了成績(jī)的，想的同時(shí)應(yīng)該用100%的努力和無(wú)雜念的心去做。應(yīng)該多留宿，這樣有個(gè)安靜的環(huán)境去學(xué)習(xí)而不是去揮霍，省的在家里學(xué)不下去而在那里空想——空想可以說(shuō)是人類(lèi)愚蠢的思考方式，因?yàn)榇蟛糠謺r(shí)間都是空想而實(shí)際卻一點(diǎn)也不去做，而且學(xué)不下去時(shí)就覺(jué)得無(wú)聊，就會(huì)干點(diǎn)學(xué)習(xí)之外的事。最終耽誤了一天寶貴的時(shí)間。這樣還不如留宿呢，學(xué)校這邊沒(méi)什么雜念，因?yàn)橐贿M(jìn)學(xué)校不管有人沒(méi)人就讓你有一種學(xué)習(xí)的心情，讓心靈直接進(jìn)入知識(shí)的圣地。

這次考試失利的原因不用多想，很簡(jiǎn)單，就是心還是沒(méi)完全踏實(shí)下來(lái)，還有雜念，所以，一定要消除一切雜念，讓心靜如水。心靜如水，快步如飛，心里不著急，腳底不緊走。最后這60多天一是查漏補(bǔ)缺；二是要調(diào)整心態(tài)，讓你的心態(tài)在緊張的環(huán)境中能適應(yīng)，這樣才會(huì)讓你在高考的考場(chǎng)上不失利，不會(huì)突然忘記一些知識(shí)點(diǎn)。還有一個(gè)原因就是沒(méi)重視課堂上講的知識(shí)，當(dāng)堂課講的當(dāng)堂明白了，但是課下并沒(méi)有梳理，導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果就是老師講過(guò)的還不明白、還錯(cuò)，所以一定要把課堂所學(xué)到的知識(shí)重視起來(lái)。

一?？荚囯m然已經(jīng)過(guò)去，但是我并沒(méi)有灰心。它是我的一次教訓(xùn)，讓我在困難中越戰(zhàn)越勇，這并不是高考，所以我還有機(jī)會(huì)提高自己的分?jǐn)?shù)，所以我必須做好規(guī)劃，合理、高效率地利用剩余的60多天，努力了就不后悔。我相信只要我懂得努力，懂得父母、老師的良苦用心，我一定會(huì)拿下高考，實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的愿望，因?yàn)槲艺娴牟幌氚装桌速M(fèi)一年的大好時(shí)光，不想讓父母的錢(qián)白白浪費(fèi)、不想留下遺憾。所以我只有一條路：堅(jiān)持不懈地……學(xué)！！

第四篇：2013北京西城區(qū)高三一模英語(yǔ)作文

2013北京西城一模英語(yǔ)作文范文

情景作文People moving our school

Recently our school conducted an activity entitled “People Moving Our School”, aiming at awarding those who devoted much to others as well their jobs, which drew a wide attention in our school.Several weeks before the activity, a bulletin board was put up in advance, on which presented the photos of six campaigners, accompanied by their moving deeds.Carefully had I read the words before I went to the computer room to search for further information.Our school had already presented some more photos and detailed information on the website, which provided a platform for us to know more.I was deeply moved by an old granny who was doing the tiring cleaning work all the time yet keeping a sanguine(樂(lè)天的；自信的)attitude towards life.I decided to vote for her at once.On the voting day, crowds of people flooded into the voting hall, in turns, we put our votes into a box.I handed in my vote and solemnly swore that I would be as optimistic as the granny in my whole life.Three days later, our school threw an evening gala to announce the final result.On the stage stood four winners, including that old granny.Excited as I was, I clapped my hands to show my sincere congratulations.It was such a meaningful activity that I will never forget.開(kāi)放作文

Hi, Jim.I’d like to share my opinion of the picture with you.From my perspective, what the picture conveys is that we’d better think twice before take an action.On no account should we begin doing a work without concerning the possible results it may leads.The silly man in the thought-provoking picture contributes to my opinion above.As you can see, sitting on a branch of the tree, he is doing his utmost sawing the tree.Undoubtedly, when the branch cracks and falls, so does he.The picture reflects a profound message that whenever we do something, it’s vital for us to take everything into account.Take the man in the picture as an example.Had he been careful enough to saw the branch by standing on a ladder instead of sitting on it, he is bound to be safe and sound.This also applies to our daily life.If we are always tackling the problems hurriedly without considering its potential disadvantage or trouble, our efforts may end in vain.However, if we are wise enough to fully check its every single aspects, our way to success will be shortened.Thus, it’s high time that we paid attention to every aspects of a problem.Only in this way can we solve it validly.After all, we won’t hurt ourselves like the man in the picture.Do you agree with me, Jim?

第五篇：【名校一模】2018年上海市浦東新區(qū)高三一模作文(附)

【名校一?！?018年上海市浦東新區(qū)高三一模作文（附范文）

作文題目: 造成麻煩的，并不是我們不知道的事，而是我們所知道的事并非我們所想的那樣。對(duì)此你怎么看? 請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇文章談?wù)勀愕乃伎?。題意分析：

這是一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象類(lèi)的題目，它關(guān)乎我們的選擇前的思考。

“麻煩”，一個(gè)表達(dá)心理狀態(tài)的一個(gè)詞。同義詞有: 困惑、煩惱、不安等。

“并不是我們不知道的事，而是我們所知道的事并非我們所想的那樣”，重心在后半句?！拔覀兯赖氖隆笔俏覀兞私獾纳鐣?huì)事件或客觀狀態(tài)，它指向是事實(shí)、真相、真理;

“我們所想的”是一種主觀預(yù)想，它指向的是認(rèn)知。整體上看，材料有這樣幾個(gè)意義指向: 1.對(duì)于人們因認(rèn)知和客觀事實(shí)發(fā)生矛盾(不一致，極端的就是矛盾、沖突)而造成了麻煩(困惑、煩惱、不安)的情況，你怎么看? 2.對(duì)于人們因認(rèn)知和事件真相發(fā)生矛盾(不一致,極端的就是矛盾、沖突)而造成了麻煩(困惑、煩惱、不安)的情況，你怎么看? 3.對(duì)于人們因認(rèn)知和真理發(fā)生矛盾(不一致，極端的就是矛盾、沖突)而造成了麻煩(困惑、煩惱、不安)的情況，你怎么看? 立意分析：近幾年上海高考作文命題在內(nèi)容上有一個(gè)基本的趨勢(shì)是: 通過(guò)對(duì)人類(lèi)普遍的行為或現(xiàn)象的不同看法引導(dǎo)考生開(kāi)展思辨。比如2016 年秋季考指向的評(píng)論他人的行為，2017 年秋季考指向的是預(yù)測(cè)行為。本次浦東一模卷作文指向的是人類(lèi)普遍存在的選擇或做決定之前的判斷行為，意在引導(dǎo)考生針對(duì)認(rèn)知和客觀事實(shí)、真相、真理發(fā)生矛盾造成麻煩(困惑、煩惱、不安)的情況進(jìn)行分析與思辨，或揭示原因，表明態(tài)度，或分析根源，提出策略。我們知道，造成這種“麻煩”(困惑、煩惱、不安)的原因主要有兩方面:其一是主觀原因，如主觀臆斷、認(rèn)知的表象和膚淺、主體意愿與價(jià)值觀、思維的方法與角度、個(gè)體生命的經(jīng)驗(yàn)性、生活方式的影響性等;其二客觀原因，如事物的復(fù)雜性與多面性、事物的內(nèi)在本質(zhì)性、事物未來(lái)的發(fā)展性、社會(huì)環(huán)境的制約性、社會(huì)的復(fù)雜性等。因此立意上，一方面: 可立足于對(duì)主體自我的認(rèn)知和改變，如提升思維的品質(zhì)(縱橫度、格物致知)、拓寬思想者的目光(偏激與狹隘)、取舍價(jià)值觀念(世俗與理想)等。另一方面: 也可通過(guò)此現(xiàn)象的原因的分析，獲得認(rèn)知的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和感受，豐富對(duì)社會(huì)和人生的見(jiàn)識(shí)，如一知半解比一無(wú)所知更可怕;社會(huì)的復(fù)雜性與多變性(如潛規(guī)則)、社會(huì)的一些習(xí)慣陋弊的存在性、事物內(nèi)在的客觀規(guī)律的確鑿性(如文化發(fā)展、人生成長(zhǎng)、學(xué)習(xí)特征)等。比如，要擁抱真理，重構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí);去偽存真、求“真”是人類(lèi)高貴之處;要寬容異已;不可固守成見(jiàn)，要積極接受新知，拓寬視野等。例文：與真理邂逅65 分有人說(shuō)，真正造成麻煩的不是為人所不知道的事，而是人們所知道的事，而是人們所知道的事并不是如他們所想的那樣。這種現(xiàn)象在如今我們的生活中再也常見(jiàn)不過(guò)了。盲目是這種社會(huì)癥結(jié)所在。社會(huì)心理學(xué)家勒龐曾在其著作《烏合之眾》中提到，人的本性喜歡模仿而并非推理。人們對(duì)于權(quán)威和榜樣的迷戀勝過(guò)對(duì)于自身理性的堅(jiān)持。斷言、重復(fù)、傳染這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)造成了人們最終的一知半解甚至是渾然不知，只是盲目地追隨大眾的腳步,聽(tīng)從權(quán)威的所謂“真理”。法官的權(quán)威有一半來(lái)自他的法袍和假發(fā)，所以，人們?yōu)楸硐笏?，盲目?tīng)信他人的言論。人們的強(qiáng)烈主觀性或許也是造成這種現(xiàn)象的一大因素。我們喜歡主觀臆測(cè)，喜歡在客觀事實(shí)上夾雜太多個(gè)人主觀情感色彩。當(dāng)年波伏娃和薩特鼓吹革命不重要，主要是精神自由的時(shí)候，西蒙娜薇依的一句“顯然您沒(méi)挨過(guò)餓”讓人們不由反思。波伏娃將精神自由視作窮人應(yīng)被賦有的最高權(quán)力，可她不知道這不過(guò)是資產(chǎn)階級(jí)的羅曼蒂克，窮人們根本消受不起。她所知道的事并非她所想的那樣，因此造成了麻煩。但西蒙娜薇依知道，因?yàn)樗み^(guò)餓，她知道不能用個(gè)人主觀的立場(chǎng)來(lái)看待和決定他人的生活，看待別的事,否則會(huì)帶來(lái)無(wú)法挽回的后果。要讓我們所知道的事情事實(shí)上也要與我們所想的一致,這就要求我們要學(xué)會(huì)真正的理性思考。海德格爾的哲學(xué)觀，是去找尋古希臘哲學(xué)的源頭，去找尋蘇格拉底和柏拉圖的后人們漠視的真理。思想的探尋就如同在山林道路上尋路，林中走錯(cuò)路是十分常見(jiàn)的，因?yàn)榈览硗嗨?，但一旦發(fā)現(xiàn)眼前的道路杳無(wú)人跡，我們就應(yīng)后退一步，重新思考來(lái)時(shí)的路，甚至要反思起點(diǎn)是否正確。道路的蜿蜒曲折處往往意味著解蔽，偉大的思想中會(huì)包含美麗的錯(cuò)誤。同樣，生活中我們所知道的事情也會(huì)包含著疏忽和錯(cuò)誤。有錯(cuò)誤并不可怕，但對(duì)自身的錯(cuò)誤不加思考、渾然不覺(jué)的時(shí)候，麻煩離你也不遠(yuǎn)了。只有堅(jiān)持理性，我們才會(huì)真正領(lǐng)悟正確的事、正確的思想，找到正確的道路。理性思考，擺脫盲目，脫下過(guò)度主觀，讓自己與真理邂逅。點(diǎn)評(píng):《邂逅真理》一文，從分析原因入手，逐層深入地加以闡述。見(jiàn)解深刻獨(dú)到，行文從容有序。文章在引用材料之后，直接進(jìn)入原因分析。首先是強(qiáng)調(diào)了我們對(duì)于自己自以為知道的事情殘生認(rèn)知錯(cuò)誤的原因在于從眾心理。并引用了《烏合之眾》，作證自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二個(gè)原因，則是認(rèn)知主體強(qiáng)烈的主觀性。作者引用了波伏娃的例子來(lái)證明了這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。在完成了歸因分析之后，作者直接進(jìn)入了對(duì)于問(wèn)題的解決的階段。提出了需要理性思考的觀點(diǎn)。在這里作者用了海德格爾的事例，證明了回溯認(rèn)知發(fā)展的邏輯軌跡的意義與價(jià)值。另一方面，作者的語(yǔ)言本身也體現(xiàn)了相當(dāng)高的思維水平。比如，作者說(shuō)“強(qiáng)烈的主觀性或許也是造成這一現(xiàn)象的一大因素”。用語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確嚴(yán)密，體現(xiàn)了很多好的思維與語(yǔ)言素養(yǎng)。不足之處是，作者只是緊扣了人類(lèi)認(rèn)知產(chǎn)生偏差的原因，對(duì)這種偏差與“麻煩”之間的關(guān)聯(lián)關(guān)注或者說(shuō)強(qiáng)調(diào)得還不夠，這不能不說(shuō)是一個(gè)缺憾。萬(wàn)仞之淵，吾往矣

63分有時(shí)候，真正危險(xiǎn)的，不是一杯黑色而味烈的毒鴆，而是一杯無(wú)色無(wú)味的“水”。真正造成麻煩的，不是未知，而是我們所知道，所習(xí)慣的事，并非是我們所想的模樣。黑暗時(shí)代的歐洲，在教會(huì)的統(tǒng)治下，地心說(shuō)深入人心，但當(dāng)哥白尼站出來(lái)否定人們的常識(shí)，并提出日心說(shuō)時(shí)，人們被教會(huì)驅(qū)使，將他推上了火刑架，這反映出的不只是愚味，更是對(duì)自己的認(rèn)識(shí)與客觀事實(shí)相悖時(shí)表現(xiàn)出的恐懼與逃避。面對(duì)認(rèn)知與事實(shí)間的沖突，佛家指出: 要忍;道家指出: 要躲;而我傾心于儒家: 擁抱它。誠(chéng)然，對(duì)個(gè)人而言，當(dāng)面對(duì)疑似將被改變的認(rèn)知時(shí)，特別是發(fā)現(xiàn)客觀的事實(shí)比自我的預(yù)期要更加可怖時(shí)，本能的反應(yīng)會(huì)是排斥或逃避。但放長(zhǎng)視角，就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，這種對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)的接受無(wú)力會(huì)成為一塊橫亙?cè)诤绽死账箓兩砬暗木奘?，?duì)我們的前進(jìn)造成莫大的阻礙。不隨著現(xiàn)實(shí)改變自己認(rèn)知的人終會(huì)被社會(huì)放逐?？v觀人類(lèi)的歷史,我們何曾不是一個(gè)在黑暗中爬行摸索的嬰兒? 正是在一次次痛苦的重構(gòu)我們的認(rèn)知中，人類(lèi)才由茹毛飲血，一步步走向了文明文化的路途。留在我們身上的，滿是真理的疤痕。當(dāng)量子力學(xué)的莫基人馬克斯.普朗克提出“能量在微觀層面上是一份一份的”的量子理論時(shí)，當(dāng)愛(ài)因斯坦提出了他深思熟慮后想出的“時(shí)間空間都不固定，而是互相扭曲”的相對(duì)論時(shí)，他們又何嘗不是在正視“事實(shí)不是我們所想的模樣”的麻煩? 昔日遭到了物理學(xué)界的大肆反對(duì)的兩位先驅(qū)者，普羅米修斯，歷史早已為他們平反。量子力學(xué)與相對(duì)論也成為了近世物理學(xué)的殿堂中兩根最華美燦爛的支柱。其他新的科學(xué)理論也在襁褓中逐漸成形。去接受與自我認(rèn)知不符的事實(shí)是困難的，有時(shí)甚至無(wú)異于擁抱一株“客觀的仙人掌”。的確，塑造一個(gè)與自己的價(jià)值觀與人生觀相符合的美好烏托邦無(wú)可指摘，但對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)的態(tài)度卻不可摻雜一絲一毫的主觀臆斷。要看清事物本身是不是我們以為的樣子,就要懷著一顆“看山非山，看水非水”的懷疑之心，但這還不夠，還需要有和過(guò)去的謬誤思想撕破臉皮的勇力，最后，要有嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)探究的科學(xué)態(tài)度，方能掀開(kāi)真理的一角，窺見(jiàn)世界的本質(zhì)。事物異于我們的認(rèn)知，給我們帶來(lái)的困擾，會(huì)如一片萬(wàn)仞之淵，使我們產(chǎn)生本能的抗拒:但我們應(yīng)該像梭羅，去摒棄無(wú)理的經(jīng)驗(yàn)主義，像狄拉克，為身邊的一切去小心求證，拒絕心安理得的茍?jiān)?，大喊一?“萬(wàn)仞之淵，吾往矣！” 點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一篇充滿了對(duì)科學(xué)的真理勇敢探索的文章。作者能準(zhǔn)確地抓住材就人類(lèi)的認(rèn)知與客觀真理之間的矛盾展開(kāi)思考，提出“擁抱”“重構(gòu)”的觀點(diǎn)，料的核心，并給予了充分的論述。文章中作者援引了一系列人類(lèi)科學(xué)發(fā)展中的事實(shí)，或從正面，或從反面，批判了人類(lèi)的認(rèn)知的短淺，以及自然真理的客觀真實(shí)性，具有很強(qiáng)的說(shuō)服力。作者很形象地把“麻煩”比作“萬(wàn)仞之淵”，勇敢地提出“吾往矣”，極具鼓動(dòng)力。文章標(biāo)題化用得當(dāng)，醒目新穎，行文流暢，推導(dǎo)性嚴(yán)密，層次清晰，不失為一篇優(yōu)秀的考場(chǎng)作文。評(píng)為一類(lèi)卷下63分。

莫以所想定所知60分有人說(shuō):“造成麻煩的，并不是我們不知道的事，而是我們所知道的事并非我們所想的那樣。誠(chéng)然，“無(wú)知者無(wú)畏”，正因?yàn)闊o(wú)知，我們才不會(huì)恐懼，猶豫與逃避。而生活中的麻煩一一挫折、打擊、憂郁，甚至憤怒一一他們往往來(lái)自我們所知與所想的差異與碰撞。試想當(dāng)哥白尼首次提出日心說(shuō)，它所想的科學(xué)與宇宙和人們已知的地心說(shuō)產(chǎn)生了激烈的沖撞，正因如此，他才遭到了猛烈的抨擊與懲罰。因此，我們所需的并非簡(jiǎn)單的無(wú)知或已知，而是不以所想定所知，不因己知束縛未知。首先，人們普遍以所想定所知的原因無(wú)非有兩種: 其一，是過(guò)度理想化，導(dǎo)致現(xiàn)實(shí)與想象產(chǎn)生了巨大的鴻溝，從而產(chǎn)生了挫折和打擊。王小波曾說(shuō):“人的一切憂郁，本質(zhì)上是對(duì)自己無(wú)能的憤怒。”確實(shí)如此，我們總是習(xí)慣于幻想，喜歡將一切蒙上美化的面紗，殊不知現(xiàn)實(shí)并非如我們所想的那般簡(jiǎn)單。守株待兔與不勞而獲也許是大多數(shù)人的所想，但現(xiàn)實(shí)卻是日漸殘酷的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)。倘若一味以所想作為所知，那我們只能終日沉浸于夜郎自大的美夢(mèng)之中，這終究會(huì)被現(xiàn)實(shí)擊碎成泡影。其二，則是因?yàn)槿藗児淌赜谝阎狈?chuàng)新精神和批判性思維。就像房龍《寬容》序言中提到的平庸的眾人和固執(zhí)的守舊者，總是習(xí)慣抱著先人遺留下來(lái)的規(guī)則與知識(shí)，這些“所想”不僅束縛了我們的創(chuàng)新能力，更造成了我們對(duì)先驅(qū)者“異己”思想和創(chuàng)新舉動(dòng)的抨擊與盲目反對(duì)。殊不知，我們的所想也并非一成不變，而是不斷的發(fā)展創(chuàng)新。因此，單純以所想定所知毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)是錯(cuò)誤之舉，會(huì)造成不可勝數(shù)的麻煩?，F(xiàn)實(shí)的打擊會(huì)使我們輕而易舉就心灰意冷，止步不前;他人的創(chuàng)新也會(huì)引起人們的偏激與反對(duì)---倘若整個(gè)社會(huì)都是固守于己知，那么將再難前行。那么，我們?cè)撊绾巫龅讲灰运攵ㄋ? 首先，我們不可固守成見(jiàn)，過(guò)于偏執(zhí)，而應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)寬容異已之見(jiàn)，就像一位名人曾說(shuō)過(guò)的:“我不贊同你所說(shuō)的，可我誓死捍衛(wèi)你說(shuō)話的權(quán)利?！辈粌H如此，我們更應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)聆聽(tīng)和接受新知，讓所知一次次改變，刷新我們的所想。其次，我們應(yīng)該始終保持對(duì)事物的追求與渴望，唯有如此才能不斷前行和進(jìn)步。莫以所想定所知,這不僅是一種終身進(jìn)去的姿態(tài),更是一種對(duì)新知充滿寬容的博大胸懷。讓我們永懷對(duì)知識(shí)的渴望，攜手共進(jìn)，砥礪前行。

道無(wú)涯58分吾生有涯，而知無(wú)涯。故道也無(wú)涯?！稏|邪西毒》有過(guò)這么一句話:人生最煩惱的事就是記性太好，如果什么事都可以忘掉，每天都是新的開(kāi)始，你說(shuō)該多好? 說(shuō)出這句話的人為情所困，故有此嘆。其實(shí)并非是他不知道導(dǎo)致了他有麻煩，也并不是知道引發(fā)的愁緒，只是因?yàn)槭聦?shí)與他所想，他所希望的大相徑庭罷了。我們每個(gè)人的生命都有盡頭。所以我們?cè)谂W(xué)習(xí)暫時(shí)還不知道的東西。我想用這樣的比喻來(lái)描述先人與我們的關(guān)系。在知識(shí)、智慧的大道上,先驅(qū)者們已經(jīng)拿著刀在荊棘滿地中砍出一條較為平坦的道路。但這條路上滿是崩斷的刀尖和砍下的荊條木刺。后來(lái)者如同意氣風(fēng)發(fā)的年輕人，認(rèn)為前方已無(wú)坎坷，大可不必害怕，因?yàn)槠錅\陋見(jiàn)識(shí)。當(dāng)他們認(rèn)為前方是鵝卵石小徑時(shí)，卻驚愕地發(fā)現(xiàn)，滿地尖銳。這與他所原本設(shè)想便遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不符，于是崩潰大哭。這一點(diǎn)，與我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)先人經(jīng)驗(yàn)遇到困難時(shí)，何其相似?故而造成我們生活中麻煩的，本質(zhì)上說(shuō)，其實(shí)是自身眼界跟不上事物真像。在客觀事實(shí)與主觀心理兩者之間，心靈就越發(fā)遭受煎熬。但正如宇宙之間存在那個(gè)不變的“理”，如重力常數(shù)，引力常數(shù)，它們都不會(huì)變，所以，要改變的是我們自己，既然所思所想與所見(jiàn)所聞不符，不妨去學(xué)習(xí)，提升自我后，再看孰真孰假。所謂麻煩也就迎刃而解了。有人可能會(huì)反駁，那若是不知不思，那不是就沒(méi)有麻煩了? 沒(méi)錯(cuò)。我也很贊同這種說(shuō)法，甚至還想給這種人送上一口棺材,既然不知為什么而活。那又何苦活著? 人力有時(shí)有盡,故只能盡人事而聽(tīng)天命。所以，無(wú)論先驅(qū)者多么驚才絕艷，所開(kāi)辟的道路總有盡頭。若是無(wú)人接近衣缽繼續(xù)開(kāi)拓,那與畫(huà)地為牢有何區(qū)別? 無(wú)非是從一個(gè)大圈跳入更大的圈罷了。在我看，我們不但要趕到先驅(qū)者的盡頭。更要不怕麻煩，甚至創(chuàng)造麻煩。人不可能永遠(yuǎn)活在這一個(gè)圈里，故有儒生寫(xiě)春秋敬天地，武將振長(zhǎng)策御宇內(nèi)。既然所知有悖所聞，那不妨去求個(gè)“真”。道無(wú)涯，道無(wú)涯那么這幅波瀾壯闊青冥浩然的天地畫(huà)卷便要有人不怕麻煩地去偽存真，讓更多的人得以觀賞。我始終認(rèn)為，麻煩的意義就在于讓人克服，我始終認(rèn)為，天地之間有真理，無(wú)窮無(wú)盡。我始終認(rèn)為當(dāng)懷當(dāng)仁不讓之心，隨希言自然為態(tài)，挾氣沖斗牛之勢(shì)，為后世人一敬天地，二敬山河，三敬我等，自身一世壯懷激烈。