第一篇：英語記敘文

記敘文是以寫人、記事、狀物為主要內(nèi)容，以敘述和描寫為表達方式的文章。以寫人為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意肖像描寫、行動描寫、語言描寫、心理描寫以及對細節(jié)的描寫，考生應(yīng)根據(jù)寫作的要求，靈活掌握，突出重點。

以寫事為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意交待六要素（時間、地點、人物、事件、原因、結(jié)果），應(yīng)該注意描寫先后順序以及記事的相對完整，注意把握好事情的開始、發(fā)展、高潮及結(jié)局。

以與景為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該注意景物的主要特征，景物描寫的層次，以及人與物的情感交融。

記敘文寫作要點如下：

１． 明確寫作目的和敘述的中心思想，段落敘述始終圍繞著主題而展開，避免空間的敘述和與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。２． 一篇好敘述文需要直接或間接表達以下六個問題，即：when？該事發(fā)生的時間，where？該事發(fā)生的地點，who？人物角色是誰，what？發(fā)生的是什么事，why？該事發(fā)生的原因，以及how？事件的結(jié)果是如何造成的等等。３． 一篇記敘文，無論長短如何都應(yīng)該是一個完全獨立的事實，因此，在下筆時必須明確：該從何處開始敘述，該在何處結(jié)束敘述，以及應(yīng)該提供何種事實才能使敘述完整。４． 寫作順序可以采用“順敘”、“倒敘”和“穿插敘述”的方法，但初學者最好采用“順敘”的方法進行訓練，以情節(jié)發(fā)生時間的先后為序

記敘文也曾記事文，用于記敘事情的發(fā)展變化或人物的經(jīng)歷，它簡單易學又很常用，所以最適合學生學習英語作文。它可以通過記日記的形式進行練習。學記敘文時習作者可將自己一天的活動（或一次活動）依時間順序或空間順序記下來。當然，隨著寫作水平的提高，以后就應(yīng)該打破這種順序的限制。

記敘文必須包括以下幾點：

(1)所敘述的事件都應(yīng)包括開頭(beginning)，主體(main body)和結(jié)尾(ending)三個部分。不論敘述一個人或一件事，必須有情節(jié)發(fā)展的過程。有時可以有沖突、高潮，這樣文章不會平淡無奇。

(2）要確定用第一人稱寫還是用第三人稱寫。第一人稱使人讀來親切，第三人稱容易使讀者有身臨其境的感覺。

(3)記敘文應(yīng)該包括六要素，即：時間（when）、地點(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和結(jié)果(how)?？梢砸允录l(fā)生的時間次序?qū)懀部梢砸允录l(fā)生的先后寫。以寫“春游”為例，可先簡單寫如何準備（before the spring outing），然后是文章主體春游的過程（during the spring outing），碰到什么問題（如天氣、事故等突發(fā)事件），如何解決。最后簡單寫感想（after the spring outing）。寫活動細節(jié)要詳細得當，寫感想要有真實流露。敘述的方式可以分順序、倒敘和插敘。由于記敘文總是記敘一個事件，所以往往用過去時態(tài)。

（4）記敘文難免要用對話。對話可以襯托出說話者的個性，幽默的對話可以使記敘文顯得生動。

【例1】

Debbie and Simon are students.On Saturday mornings, when they are not at school, they are at work.They have part-time jobs with the Sunbeam Travel Company.They are sitting in the office.Debbie and Simon looked up as the door opened and a middle-aged, well-dressed lady entered.She glanced at them both, hesitated a moment, then walked over and sat down opposite Debbie.Debbie greeted her cheerfully, and got down to business.“I want to go by train from Germany to Paris.Can you…?”

Simon sighed, picked up some paper from his desk and took it over to the fax machine.Mr Yang, one of Sunbeam’s senior employees, was standing there.He said, “What’s up, Simon? You don’t look very happy?”

“Nothing,” Simon said.Mr Yang put his hand on Simon’s shoulder.“Come on,” he said.“Tell me.I’m your friend as well as your colleague.” He gave an encouraging smile.“It’s the customers,” Simon said.“They always prefer Debbie to me.I can’t understand it.” “I can.It’s the way you communicate.”

“How can that be?” Simon said.“I don’t even get a chance to speak to them.”

“Communicating is more than speaking and listening, Simon.Your body language is important, too.”

“What kind of language is that?”

“It’s the way you stand and sit and walk.It’s your gesture and the expression on your face and in your eyes.Your whole appearance communicates things, even when you are not speaking.”

“The way you look at customers doesn’t give them a good impression, Simon.For example, you often rest your head on your hand.You look downwards.You don’t smile.You don’t turn your head or your body toward the customers.”

“ But look at Debbie.She’s holding her head up.She looks at a customer’s eyes.She turns her head and her body towards the customer.Your body language is telling customers to go away.Debbie’s is making them feel welcome.That’s why they go to her, and not to you.”

After that, Simon tried to improve his body language.He sat up and smiled at the customers.This seemed to work.Minutes later, a very beautiful girl entered.She looked at Debbie and Simon and, without hesitation, sat down opposite Simon and gave him a big smile.A few moments late, she left, still smiling.Mr Yang came over at once and said, “Well, Simon, you certainly made a good impression on that customer.Well done.”

“That wasn’t a customer,” Simon said.“That was my sister.She wanted to borrow some money for lunch.”

這是一篇很典型的優(yōu)秀記敘文。有開頭、主體和結(jié)尾，有記敘文的六要素，有故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展過程。文章中的對話襯托了說話者的個性，結(jié)尾令人回味。

【例2】

A happy Journey During the Spring Festival holidays, Mother and I had been invited to spend several days at my aunt’s at Xiamen.As we had some rather heavy luggage, we had to go to the station by taxi, and father went to see us off.We bought our tickets and then sat down in the waiting room till it was time for us to leave.As we entered the platform, we had to show our tickets.We got into the carriage, which was not at all crowded, so we were able to find a good seat by the window.When the train started we said good-bye to each other, and father told us to take care of ourselves.At first I found it very interesting to look out of the window.The train traveled quickly and smoothly along, passing farms and villages, over one or two bridges and through some tunnels.After an hour or two, however, I began to feel tired of sitting still, although the seats and cushions were comfortable enough and I looked forward to the end of the journey.After a long train ride we reached our destination at last.As soon as we stepped down from the train we saw aunt and two cousins, who had come to meet us on the platform.文章第一段寫了這次旅行的緣由。第二段寫了買票、上車、與家人告別。第三段寫了旅途的所見所聞和感受。結(jié)尾一段寫了到達目的地，字里行間洋溢著作者的愉快心情。

【例3】

My Daily life I get up at six o’clock every day.I dress myself quickly and then I brush my teeth, wash my face and hands.I comb my hair.After that I go to the courtyard to do morning exercise.I read Chinese or English aloud for twenty minutes or more.I take my breakfast at ten to seven and get ready for school at sever sharp.I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.I study hard and always help my classmates with their lessons.I came home for lunch at noon and go to school again at half past one.School is over at five.After supper I read newspapers or watch TV for half an hour.I prepare my lessons between half past seven and half past nine.I go to bed at ten.The above is a brief account of my daily life on weekdays.There is no school on Sundays.I usually review my lessons in the morning and visit some friends or have a chat with my friends on the Internet in the afternoon.【例4】

An Interesting experience It was a fine day yesterday.Early in the morning, I went swimming in the sea with a friend of mine.We set out very early on bikes, carrying bottles of water, bags of cakes and so on.On the way we breathed the fresh air and laughed heartily.When we reached the shore there were already a large number of people enjoying themselves on the seashore.Some were playing in the sand and others were looking for seashells here and there.Many boys and girls were learning to swim in the sea.I couldn’t wait to jump into the sea.The sea water felt a little cold.But I was so happy that I forgot all about it.I was a little afraid at first, but my friend encouraged me and taught me.Little by little, I could swim a short distance.It was great fun to be able to float in the water.Tired from swimming we lay down on the seashore, bathing in the sun, drinking, eating, and talking about our life and future.At about 4 p.m.we returned home with salt on our bodies and freshness in our hearts.【例5】

根據(jù)提示，寫一篇記敘文。

去年冬天，你從自行車上摔下來，跌壞了一條腿，只好臥床。

一天晚上，教你們英語課的老師來了。她在你身邊坐下，安慰你不要擔心功課。她身體不好，工作又忙，你感到過意不去。

從那以后，她時常來給你補習功課。在她的幫助下，盡管以前你的英語成績較差，但卻趕了上來。

Last winter I fell off my bike.One of my legs was badly hurt and I had to stay in bed.One evening, when I was alone and feeling sad, Mrs Li, my English teacher, came to see me.I was too excited to speak.“I am very sorry to hear the bad news,” she began, taking a seat by my side.“You don’t have to worry about your lessons.I can help you.”

“Thank you, Mrs Li.But you are so busy.What’s more, you are in poor health yourself.” “Never mind.” With the words, she took out of the textbook and began to explain the text.From then on she came to help me every now and then.With her help, I caught up with my classmates though I was rather poor in English before.練習題：

1）記一次有意義的班級活動 2）一場難忘的考試 3）我的中學生活 4）我的周末

5）記一次有意義的班級活動

第二篇：記敘文英語

寫法指導(writing directions)1.記敘文的結(jié)構(gòu)

記敘文通常有三種結(jié)構(gòu)類型:(1)順序型:按時間發(fā)生的先后順序所作的敘述。它能使人物,事件的敘述有頭有尾,脈絡(luò)清楚，有較強時空層次性，比較契合我國讀者的接受心理。順序常常不單獨使用，多與其他敘述手法交叉，從而使敘述曲折生動，跌宕多姿.順序型的結(jié)構(gòu)模式是:總述+分述+結(jié)尾.這是一種按照事件開端→發(fā)展→高潮→結(jié)局的自然順序進行敘述的客觀記敘方法。(2)倒敘型:先寫結(jié)局,后寫事件經(jīng)過的敘述方法.所謂倒敘,是把事件的結(jié)局或其發(fā)展過程中的某一重要斷面提到文章前面，寫完結(jié)局或斷面,然后才按時間順序?qū)?這種筆法吸引讀者。倒敘的結(jié)構(gòu)式是:本事+往事.在這個模式中,本事=總敘開端+分敘發(fā)展或高潮+結(jié)尾結(jié)局.這是客觀事物發(fā)展過程中的主要事件被顛倒的自然順序的反映.倒敘文一般把本事中原有的往事寫在本事的結(jié)局之后.(3)合敘型:這是順序和倒敘互相結(jié)合的一種敘述方法.在敘述某事的過程中暫時中斷線索,插入另一件事的敘述。對全文來說，插入僅是一個片段，插敘完后，文章仍回到原來的事件敘述上來。這種插敘不是敘述的主體部分，一般不會發(fā)生在主流的時間范圍內(nèi)。若把這種插敘刪去，雖然會削弱主體的深刻性，但不明顯影響主要情節(jié)的完整性。合敘型的結(jié)構(gòu)模式是:總敘+結(jié)尾.2.英語記敘文的語言特點

英語記敘文的重要語言特點包括:(1)以一般過去時為主,各種時態(tài)為輔,合理使用豐富多采的謂語動詞時態(tài).(2)多用動詞，特別是動態(tài)強的行為動詞.(3)使用直接引語.要寫好英語記敘文,就語言運用方面而言,應(yīng)該在上述但方面多下功夫.3.寫作方法

寫好英語記敘文的基本方法是:首先明確所要記敘的要素，即五個w和一個h(when,where,who,what,why,how).一般來說，要把事件和人物活動寫清楚，這六個要素缺一不可。然后，確定以第幾人稱的視角以及何種順序展開記敘,以保證記敘的條理性;最后，多在塑造人物、展開情節(jié)上下功夫,使文章能引人入勝.敘文主要是由時間(when)、地點(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和結(jié)果(result)六要素構(gòu)成。一般來說，記敘文要把事件和人物活動寫清楚，這六要素缺一不可。

敘事類寫作以敘述事件為主，可以說事件是記敘的核心。寫事件要交代事情的來龍去脈，可按事件發(fā)生的時間先后順序依次敘述。同時要求重點突出，目的明確，詳略得當。當然，構(gòu)思新穎也是寫好敘事文 的重要要求。這里的構(gòu)思就是指文章的立意要新穎，組織材料和表現(xiàn)手法上要巧妙。在句式上，表示本人的經(jīng)歷或耳聞目睹的事件用第一人稱，表示他人的經(jīng)歷和事件用第三人稱。

【賞析】 a football game yesterday we had a football game against the team from class four.their players were good.we really felt a little afraid of them.but zhang xin, the leader of our class team, said, although they are good players, their team is weak.zhang xin is about 1.68 meters tall and his number is twelve.he can kick two or three goals every match.then he told us,remember that we are a team and well win the game.at the beginning of the match, a player from class four ran with the ball.zhang xin ran over quickly to stop him.he got the ball and kicked the goal!he kept on passing the ball to other players.we passed the ball to each other like him.the players from class four were getting anxious.they were angry with us.but we continued to pass the ball.at last we kicked four goals and they kicked two.we won the game!we were very happy.篇二：大學英語記敘文500字范文 a long way last semester, i worked in a restaurant at my spare time.at the beginning, it was extremely hard for me to learn the roles and remember the recipes.i had to stand there and smile.at the end of the day, i was so tired that i almost could do nothing.after a few days of working, the head waiter told me that i could take charge as a chief.i knew if i worked hard, i would take charge of a room.it meant i can get more tip.i was glad to do that.as new, it was not an easy thing to serve all customers well.sometimes, i dished up wrongly.or i forgot the customers requirements.what is worse, i overturned the plates twice.however, i could not be defeated because of these difficulties.one day, i was about to be off duty when three foreigners came here.because other colleagues could not speak english well, i had to stay to serve them.it was my first time to talk with a foreigner.however, suddenly, my mind was blank even though i had memorized 3000 words.how can i talk to them? i began to speak slowly, but think fast.excuse me, what can i do for you? i said it word by word.at the same time, i showed them the menu.no, we order ··· with some rice.they said so quickly that i seldom couldnt know what they wanted.pardon? i asked with embarrassment.oh, we want tomatoes and eggs.look at this, xi hong shi chao ji dan, he showed me a note with some chinese characters.i got it.what else? i tried my best to keep calm as i could.i had no reason to laugh at them because of my bad english.water, please.then, a pot of tea was on the table.the more terrible thing was that the rice was sold out.how can i explain this to them? we were closing the store for the night.it was normal.however, we had been alternative.hum, there is no rice left.how about noodles? like this and this.i felt embarrassed extremely.i could not translate the name to them and just showed the picture in the menu to them.maybe they were hungry, or they had no choice.they agreed me.they said something and laughed.i could hardly understand it.but it was not my business.the thing that i need to do was serve them more considerate.they were eating and i was to go back to hostel.before long, they finished their supper and said: how much? so, i had to stay more minutes.i gave them the bill.it is too expensive.they yelled.i knew it was too expensive here.but i had no idea.i could do nothing for them, just smiled to them.finally, i gave them the bills and i got rid of the serve.at the way to school, i saw them and we went the same way.they were students too.it is memorable.each for it was the first time makes a dent in my heart.gaining self-confidence means half success.i believe myself and wont lose confidence any more.篇三：英語記敘文寫法

記敘文大致可以分為兩大類：以記人為主的記敘文和以敘事為主的記敘文。前者主要是對人物的經(jīng)歷、活動或者性格特征進行敘述；后者則是對某一事件的發(fā)生、發(fā)展過程和結(jié)果進行敘述。前者重在描述人物的活動，而后者則重在表述事件的發(fā)生發(fā)展過程。

二．六大要素

記敘文的寫作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即時間(time)、地點(place)、人物(character)、事件的原因(cause)、經(jīng)過(process)和結(jié)果(effect)。1.簡要介紹你最好的朋友。2.你們之間的故事。3.你對朋友的理解。

范文：

my best friend upon the words “best friend”, a figure jumps into my mind(jump這個詞使一個人物形象活靈活現(xiàn)地展現(xiàn)在讀者眼前)—zhang ye—my schoolmate in senior high school and also my best friend.during the three years in high school, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow.(排比句式能使表達更有力度，而且將與朋友的共同經(jīng)歷描繪得豐富多彩)she is of medium height and slim figure.though not strong, she is really a girl with amazing stamina(毅力).despite the similarities in our outlook on life and living, it is always she, the physically weaker one, who encouraged and urged me to finish some tasks when i attempted to give up.when we were preparing for the national entrance exam, she cheered me up emotionally and would give me a hand whenever i was in trouble.but for everything she did for me, i couldn’t have had this opportunity to give a decent job with a decent pay.after the exam, she got enrolled by tsinghua university in beijing while i went to a college in south china.for the past several years, we have been in touch and share everything we are experiencing, sad or happy, dull or exciting.true friendship lasts life long.friendship is a magic.it can melt the ice in one’s heart and blow away the mist on one’s mind.it can inspire others and outdo the self.(再次應(yīng)用排比句式表達了對友誼真諦的理解，感人至深)i believe the friendship between zhang ye and me will be the life-time beacon for both of us.記敘文篇

第一篇：the first class i took at college 1．大學第一節(jié)課的時間和地點。2．大學第一節(jié)課的情景。

3．對這第一節(jié)課的感受以及其對自己的影響。

第二篇：the day my classmates fell ill篇四：英語記敘文的寫作方法

記敘文寫作方法與技巧 一．概念

記敘文也稱敘述文，是一種以記敘/敘述的手法來表述人物、事件的文體。常見的屬于記敘文文體的作品有：故事、游記、通訊、新聞報道、歷史、人物傳記、日記和回憶錄等。記敘文大致可以分為兩大類：以記人為主的記敘文和以敘事為主的記敘文。前者主要是對人物的經(jīng)歷、活動或者性格特征進行敘述；后者則是對某一事件的發(fā)生、發(fā)展過程和結(jié)果進行敘述。前者重在描述人物的活動，而后者則重在表述事件的發(fā)生發(fā)展過程。二．六大要素

記敘文的寫作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即時間(time)、地點(place)、人物(character)、事件的原因(cause)、經(jīng)過(process)和結(jié)果(effect)。

由于記敘文中所涉及的要素比其他文體相對要多、要復雜，所以整篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu)安排就顯得尤其重要，安排不合理就會使讀者產(chǎn)生混亂的感覺。

記敘文的展開一般都是以時間為主線來組織所要敘述的內(nèi)容，使讀者對文章中的人物或事件有一個比較清晰的了解。記敘文的結(jié)構(gòu)安排通常有三種形式:正敘、倒敘和插敘。正敘是英語敘述文中最常用的一種結(jié)構(gòu)，即以人物出現(xiàn)、活動或事件開始發(fā)生的時間點作為記敘的起點，然后按照人物活動的展開、事件發(fā)生發(fā)展的自然順序進行敘述。倒敘則是在文章的開頭就交待人物活動或事件發(fā)展的結(jié)果。插敘這一結(jié)構(gòu)在我們的英文寫作中很少用到。

三．時態(tài)

記敘文講述的大多是過去已經(jīng)發(fā)生的活動或事件，因此用過去時態(tài)(一般過去時、過去進行時、過去將來時、過去完成時)的作品比較多。但有時為了使文章顯得更加真實、親切和生動，也可以使用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)(一般現(xiàn)在時、現(xiàn)在進行時、現(xiàn)在將來時、現(xiàn)在完成時)。

四．人稱

記敘某個人物的經(jīng)歷、活動或某件事情的經(jīng)過離不開敘述的主體，即 “人稱”。記敘文中的人稱大多采用第一人稱或第三人稱的形式。第一人稱的敘述主觀色彩較濃，可以增強文章的真實感，有利于表述細膩的情感和細節(jié)的過程；第三人稱的敘述可以超越時空的限制，更加真實、客觀地表述某一人物活動或事件的全過程。

無論采用第一人稱，還是采用第二人稱，都要保持全文敘述主體的人稱的一致性。注意：句式盡量要多變，不要通篇文章的句子都以人稱代詞開頭，否則文章會顯得單調(diào)沉悶。例如: i loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine.then i found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me.i now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman.i realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.這一段描述在用詞、內(nèi)容、邏輯上都不錯，但過多地使用了以“i”開頭的句子，使文章略顯單調(diào)乏昧，給讀者的印象大打折扣。

五．措辭與表達

在全國大學英語四級考試的各種作文體裁中，記敘文需要應(yīng)試者具有更全面的語言技能與篇章組織能力。四級考試中常見的議論文和說明文分別要求語言的準確性和論證的合理性、可信性；而記敘文的語言則以生動、真實、貼切為準則。同一個記敘文題目，不同的人會描述不同的人物經(jīng)歷或事件，又很少有固定的表達或句式可供參考，這時作者的綜合語言水平就會表現(xiàn)出來，對能否取得高分起到了相當重要的作用。這就要求考生平時要多注意語言的磨練和積累。

六．記敘文寫作技巧

1.仔細審題，明確主題，選準素材，羅列提綱。2.寫好第一段 最好能采用一個復句并且用上幾個四級水平的單詞或詞組。這樣的文章開篇方式會使讀者或閱卷人確信接下來的文章也一樣精彩。

我們來看這樣一段文章的開頭: the results of the college entrance examination came.i tore open the envelope.as soon as i saw the score，tears streamed down my face.i fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day.all was over.what is the meaning to live on earth? for the first time，i thought of death，of being a vagrant and of being single all my life.i was only seventeen.wasn’t it cruel to me? my father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace.he was angry beyond words.my mother kept silent，and often i saw her in tears.horror filled the house.怎么樣，你自己是否也被一種失落與絕望的氣氛所籠罩，并且期待著看到作者接下來會做些什么呢? 3.結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰

下筆之前一定要對整篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有一個完整的構(gòu)想，作文的框架、主題和脈絡(luò)是最

重要的采分點。要清楚每一段要陳述哪些內(nèi)容，這樣不僅可以增強文章的邏輯性和可接受性，還可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不會有湊字數(shù)的煩惱。4.盡量多使用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、順接、因果和時間的連接詞

如first、second、moreover、for one thing?for another、on the one hand?on the other hand等。這樣既可以顯示語言功底，又增強了記敘內(nèi)容的連貫性和生動性。5.文章不要寫得太長

有的考生遇到觸動自己內(nèi)心情感的記敘文題目時就“一發(fā)不可收拾”，但由于時間有限，結(jié)果草草收尾，甚至沒有結(jié)尾。四級作文畢竟是應(yīng)試作文，只要充分發(fā)揮出自己的英語語言水平，表述出所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容就可以了。6.要多用四級詞匯，要使句式多樣化

沒有語言錯誤并不是高分作文的保障（基本沒有語言錯誤只是8分的基本要求)；作文想達到11分以上，四級詞匯和句型必須達到一定的比例。如，表示“重視”的詞匯有stress，emphasize等，但選用短語attach importance to更能吸引閱卷人的注意；disagree和frown on sth.都表示反對或不贊成，前者就平淡，后者表達意思很生動，更能引起閱卷老師的注意。

簡單句和復合句合理搭配，長短句交替使用，會增強文章的節(jié)奏感，使描寫更生動，給閱卷老師留下深刻印象。如：(1)名詞化手段：用名詞或名詞詞組替換一個句子或句子的主要部分，然后使這個名詞或名詞短語成為另外一個句子的組成部分，以達到合并句子的目的。如： we were very much surprised． mary refused the invitation． we were very much surprised at／by mary’s refusal of the invitation．(2)定語化手段：根據(jù)語義關(guān)系，可以把其中一句轉(zhuǎn)換成形容詞或形容詞性成分、分詞短語、定語從句等，如：

the winnerwas in no mood for speeches． the winner was hot and tired． thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches．(轉(zhuǎn)換成形容詞短語)7.字跡清楚，卷面整潔。盡量不涂抹。8.最后的2—3分鐘，進行修改檢查。

檢查的內(nèi)容不是“大處著眼”，而是“小處著手”；不是考慮作文的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，而是留心細枝末節(jié)。即檢查：(1)動詞時態(tài)是否正確(還包括主句與從句中的謂語動詞時態(tài))；(2)主謂語是否一致；

(3)代詞的指代關(guān)系是否清楚； ’(4)動賓搭配是否合適；(5)用詞是否錯誤；(6)冠詞；

(7)大小寫、標點符號；

(8)漏寫、誤寫和拼寫錯誤。

七．范文分析 directions: now you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the title my best friend.you should write at least 100-120 words following the outline given below in chinese: 1.簡要介紹你最好的朋友。2.你們之間的故事。3.你對朋友的理解。

范文：

my best friend upon the words “best friend”, a figure jumps into my mind(jump這個詞使一個人物形象活靈活現(xiàn)地展現(xiàn)在讀者眼前)—zhang ye—my schoolmate in senior high school and also my best friend.during the three years in high school, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow.(排比句式能使表達更有力度，而且將與朋友的共同經(jīng)歷描繪得豐富多彩)she is of medium height and slim figure.though not strong, she is really a girl with amazing stamina(毅力).despite the similarities in our outlook on life and living, it is always she, the physically weaker one, who encouraged and urged me to finish some tasks when i attempted to give up.when we were preparing for the national entrance exam, she cheered me up emotionally and would give me a hand whenever i was in trouble.but for everything she did for me, i couldn’t have had this opportunity to give a decent job with a decent pay.after the exam, she got enrolled by tsinghua university in beijing while i went to a college in south china.(對3年中兩人共同勉勵、共同奮斗經(jīng)歷的敘述為讀者展示了一段難忘的人生時光，確實不愧為best friend)for the past several years, we have been in touch and share everything we are experiencing, sad or happy, dull or exciting.true friendship lasts life long.friendship is a magic.it can melt the ice in one’s heart and blow away the mist on one’s mind.it can inspire others and outdo the self.(再次應(yīng)用排比句式表達了對友誼真諦的理解，感人至深)i believe the friendship between zhang ye and me will be the life-time beacon for both of us.評析：

這是一篇典型的人物記敘文。大多數(shù)人物記敘文都遵循一個比較固定的寫作套路，即: 第一段敘述文中人物與作者的關(guān)系，并對人物進行綜合評價;第二段敘述文中人物其個人或與作者共同的某段經(jīng)歷、活動;第三段進行綜合敘述。本文的第一段總體敘述了兩個人相識相知的經(jīng)歷并用一個排比結(jié)構(gòu)總括了兩人共同經(jīng)歷的苦與樂、歡笑與淚水(laughter and tears，joy and sorrow)。第二段通過對具體事例的敘述將人物的性格特點表現(xiàn)得淋漓盡致，也豐富了best friend這個稱謂的具體內(nèi)涵。最后一段作者陳述了自己對友誼真諦的感悟，使文章的主題得到升華。而其中所使用的句式和詞匯(melt the ice in one’s heart;blow away the mist on one’s mind;inspire others and outdo the self)也展示了作者深厚的語言功底。

八．參考模版 篇五：英語記敘文 記敘文_英語題庫

要點概述：

記敘文是以記人、敘事、寫景、狀物為主要內(nèi)容，以記敘、描寫為主要表達方式的一種文體，通常分為三類： 1.以人物為主的記敘文，即以人物為中心組織材料，圍繞這個人物來寫一件事或兩件事。2.以事件為主的記敘文。即以事件為中心組織材料，圍繞中心事件，可以寫一個人或幾個人。3.以寫景狀物為主的記敘文，應(yīng)注意的是，在一篇記敘文中，寫人、寫景、寫事往往是交織在一起的，不可截然分開，但各有側(cè)重。

寫記敘文通常應(yīng)遵循以下幾點： 1.交待要素，即人、時、地、事。2.按事件發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，做到完整具體。3.重點突出，目的明確，不要玩弄詞藻，講清言明即可。

寫作時還要注意，用第一人稱時主要是本人的經(jīng)歷或耳聞目睹之事；用第三人稱時則主要是他人的經(jīng)歷和事情。記敘文所記的都是過去發(fā)生的事，所以原則上通常都用過去時態(tài)寫，但有時也用歷史現(xiàn)在時和戲劇現(xiàn)在時。

名題剖示 1 下列圖畫描述的是你的一段親身經(jīng)歷，請根據(jù)此圖為一家中學生英文報的故事專欄寫一篇短文。

注意： 1.短文必須包括圖畫所表現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當增減細節(jié)，使其連貫、完整； 2.敘述必須用第一人稱； 3.詞數(shù) 100 左右。

生詞：違章者 offender n.十字路口 crossroad（s）n.分析：本文要求考生用記敘文的方式敘述自己和哥哥在看電影的路上違章被罰的經(jīng)過。

首先要仔細觀察圖，讀懂題意，然后依圖編擬提綱。

內(nèi)容要點： 1.哥哥騎車帶我去電影院 go to the cinema by bicycle 2.在十字路口被兩人攔住 3.半小時前他們因騎車帶人被警察攔住 be stopped by a policeman，half an hour ago 4.警察罰他們抓住下一個違章者 made them catch the next offender 5.于是我們照樣被罰，接他們的班 stand，wait to catch another offender 例題分析：

這是一篇記實的記敘文，敘述的是我和哥哥騎車受罰的經(jīng)歷。文章簡短、流暢，有兩處使用了直接引語，使短文顯得生動。

在動筆之前，考生應(yīng)明確題目要求，因為是“你的一段親身經(jīng)歷”，所以必須使用第一人稱?？忌鷳?yīng)認真審題，把握圖中人物關(guān)系及圖中的提示語。因為故事發(fā)生在過去，所以短文的時態(tài)應(yīng)以過去時為主。

范文中在寫作順序上采用了插敘的手法，增強了短文的感染力。文章的關(guān)聯(lián)詞和過渡語使用得體。如： the other day，as we came to??，but ??，so??.范文中使用了較復雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，如：

（1）現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語：① with me sitting on the seat behind ② pointing to a policeman ??（2）make 接不定式的復合結(jié)構(gòu)： ??and made us catch??（3）條件狀語從句： ??as long as we did 參考范文

名題剖示 2 《英語輔導報》高三版正在征集以 my grandmother 為題的文章。請根據(jù)下列要求，寫一篇介紹奶奶的記敘文，以便向該報投稿。1.70 歲，頭發(fā)花白； 2.和藹、善良、樂于助人，鄰里關(guān)系融洽； 3.身體健康，生活簡樸； 4.喜歡看電視，對《對話》，京?。╞eijing opera）感興趣； 5.教育我以誠待人，做有用人才。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)： 100 左右； 2.可適當增加要點，使短文連貫。

內(nèi)容要點：

根據(jù)短文提示，可以提煉出以下要點： 1.gray hair； 2.lead a simple life； 3.be ready to help?? 4.get on well with； 5.enjoys watching/ show interest in?? 6.told me to be honest??.因為奶奶如此善良，所以“她受人尊敬”，“我愛我奶奶”，這些語言盡管沒有明確提示，但應(yīng)是短文必不可少的要點。

例題分析：

本文要求考生寫一篇記敘文。首先考生應(yīng)根據(jù)提示，確定全文的時態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時，并注意人稱的使用，因為題為“ my grandmother ”，所以應(yīng)使用第一人稱。由于這是一種指導性寫作，考生應(yīng)緊扣所給提示，不能根據(jù)實際生活中的“奶奶”隨意發(fā)揮。

作者重視了人物形象的描寫，把一個慈祥、樂于助人、受人愛戴的奶奶展現(xiàn)在讀者面前。盡管年事已高，但“奶奶”也有自己感興趣的事情。文中較好地使用了較復雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，像定語從句，使用了較多的連接詞，文章銜接自然，層次分明。

參考范文： my grandmother my grandmother is seventy years of age who has a head of gray hair.my grandmother get along well with her neighbours.she is a kind-hearted person and is always ready to help others，so whenever people get into difficulties，they often go to her for help.she is respected by all her neighbours.my gradmother enjoys watching beijing opera on tv and she shows much interest in the dialogue of cctv.she leads a simple but happy life.she often tells me to be honest.she expects me to work hard at my lessons and be a useful person to the society in the future.i love my granny very much.本文《記敘文_英語題庫》來自中國教育文摘，查看更多與相關(guān)文章請到。

第三篇：英語記敘文

今年夏天，我在廣州一家生產(chǎn)圣誕樹的工藝品公司工作。可能這是至今為止我一生中最勞累和艱辛的經(jīng)歷。慶幸的是，在這段時間里，我的好友王燕陪我一起度過。

每天，我們六點起床，必須在7點之前吃完早餐，因為7點就是我們上班時間。我的工作崗位叫組合，就是把制作圣誕樹的葉子用鐵絲根據(jù)指導員所給的訂單做成不同類型的枝條。這些聽起來簡單，也確實不是難事，因為它們是體力勞動面非腦力勞動。我們的工作時間是從早上7點到12點，下午13：40到18：40，晚上17：40到21：40，一共12個小時。在我工作期間沒有椅子可坐，只能一直站著。如果我被發(fā)現(xiàn)拿來什么東西當作椅子，我將受到扣工資的處罰。因為在管理者的眼里，這項工作站著完成效率更高。公司還有很多其他苛刻的條款。比如，如果我是3樓的工作人員去了2樓的衛(wèi)生間上廁所，將被認為違反廠規(guī)。如果我去衛(wèi)生間的時間超過他們的規(guī)定，將被視為曠工。監(jiān)督的人不需要在車間內(nèi)視察，因為他們在每個角落都裝有攝像頭，只需坐在辦公室里瞪著他們的雙眼觀察視屏就夠了。如果發(fā)現(xiàn)某人違反了某條規(guī)定，立刻有人來到你工作的位置，遞給你一張寫有你違反某條規(guī)定并附有公司總裁簽名的內(nèi)部罰單。

剛開始的幾天，因為長久的站立，我的腳很痛，我的朋友也是。但我們互相鼓勵，我們相信我們可以堅持下去。后來，漸漸地腳麻木了，感覺不到痛了。在我的工作崗位上很容易被鐵絲弄傷。每天我的雙手，雙腿上有很多小傷口?？杀氖?，每天我都要洗衣服。你可以想象，滿是傷口的雙手泡在放有洗衣粉的水里是什么感覺，那種鉆心的疼痛讓我想大哭一場。很長一段時間，全身都是麻木的，手上，胳膊上，腿上受傷了都毫無感覺，直到晚上回到寢室洗澡才發(fā)現(xiàn)早已干枯的血跡。每個星期天的下午我們放假。也許你會認為我們可以好好的去放松一下，但對我們而言這是不可能的。一個星期高負荷的體力勞動耗盡了我們的力氣。我們?nèi)魏蔚胤揭膊幌肴?，只想躺在床上恢復體力。

正如哲學上常說的一句話：任何事都有兩面性。正因為工作的辛苦，使我認識到將來要以腦力勞動者而不是體力勞動者的身份工作是多么重要。人們常說：幸福要對比才能知道。當我在那個公司里工作時，我想幸福就是能坐在教室里認真啃課本，而不是在36℃的高溫下做體力勞動。

This summer, I was in Guangzhou Christmas tree arts and crafts a production company.Perhaps this is by far the most tired of my life and trying experience.Fortunately, at this time, Wang Yan, my friends with me through.Every day we get up at six, you must eat breakfast before 7 o'clock, because 7:00 is our time to work.I called the combination of jobs, is to make the leaves the tree with wire according to the order made by the instructors of different types of twigs.These sound simple, but are also not difficult, because they are non-mental, physical side.Our hours are from 7 am to 12 pm, 13:40 pm to 18:40, 17:40 to 21:40 at night, a total of 12 hours.Not in my chair to sit while working, one can only stand.If I found something used as a chair, I will be reduced if the punishment.Because in the eyes of managers, the work stands completed efficiently.There are many other companies demanding terms.For example, if I was on the 3rd floor staff to the 2nd floor of the bathroom on the toilet, will be considered a violation of factory regulations.If I go to the bathroom for longer than their requirement will be considered as absenteeism.Supervision of people do not need to visit the workshop, because they are equipped with cameras in every corner, just sitting in the office staring at their eyes observation screen is enough.If you find someone in violation of a provision, once someone comes to your place of work and gave you a read, you are violating article accompanied by a signature, president of the internal ticket.First few days, because the long-standing, my foot hurts, my friend, too.However, we encourage each other, we believe we can stick to it.Then, gradually, numb feet, do not feel pain.In my work on the wire can easily be hurt.My hands every day, many small wounds on the legs.Sadly, I have to do laundry every day.You can imagine, full of wounds placed his hands soaked in water, what it feels like washing powder, the kind of terrible pain makes me want to cry.For a long time, the body is numb, hands, arms, legs hurt feelings are nothing until the evening returned to the bedroom had a bath only to find dried blood.We leave every Sunday afternoon.You might think we can go to relax properly, but for us it is impossible.High load of manual labor a week exhausted our strength.We do not want to go anywhere, just lying in bed to recuperate.As philosophy often say: anything has two sides.Because of hard work, made me realize that going to be the mental rather than manual work as how important it is.People often say: happy to be compared to know.When I was working in that company, I want to be happy is to be sitting in a classroom textbook serious bite, but not in the high temperature of 36 ℃ to do physical labor.This summer, I in guangzhou that makes Christmas tree handicraft company work.It is so far in my whole life most overworked and hardship experience.Fortunately, during this time, my friend wang to accompany me together.Every day, we must get up at six, seven points in the breakfast before 7:00, because we work time.My job is to make that combination, the tree leaves with wire gave orders according to the instructor into different types of branches.These sounds simple, also do not difficult, because they are not physical labor surface mental labor.Our working hours from 7:00 a.m.to 12:00 PM, backs, night "to chose to therefore, altogether 12 hours.In my work, can sit chair during not only has been standing.If I were found to bring something as a chair, and I will receive wages of punishment.Because of the eye, the manager in a complete workstation efficient.The company has many other harsh terms.For example, if I was the third floor personnel to the floor of the toilet, will be considered violation is suggested.If I go to the toilet, more than they will be regarded as absenteeism.People don't need supervision in the workshop, because they were equipped in each corner of the camera, just sitting in the office stare with their eyes observe screen will be enough.If you find a person violates the stipulation, someone came to your work immediately, you have to write a pass your violation of a regulation and attached to the company President signature interior ticket.For the first few days of long standing, because my foot hurts, my friends, too.But we encourage each other, and we believe that we can persist.Then, slowly, feel numb anchor.In my position is very easy to hurt by wire.Everyday I hands, legs have many small wound.Sadly, every day I shall wash his clothes.You can imagine, is full of bubbles in the wound hands with washing water is what feeling ache, the pain makes me want to cry.For a long period of time, the whole body is numb, hand, arm and leg injured are no feeling, till the evening to bathe found that already dry blood.Every Sunday afternoon, our holiday.You might think that we can go to relax, but for us this is impossible.A week high load physical labor exhausted our strength.We didn't go anywhere, just lying in bed.As the philosophical often say a word: everything has two sides.Because of hard work, make me realize to mental workers in the future instead of manual laborer's identity is of great importance.People often say: happy to contrast to know.When I was working in the company, I think happiness is in the classroom can seriously, rather than in the textbook chew 36 Celsius temperature do manual work.

第四篇：英語記敘文：The Present

The Present

It was the old lady's birthday.She got up early to be ready for the post.From the second floor flat she could see the postman when he came down the street, and the little boy from the ground floor brought up her letters on the rare occasions when anything came.Today she was sure the would be something.Myra wouldn't forget her mother's birthday, even if she seldom wrote at other times.Of course Myra was busy.Her husband had been made Mayor, and Myra herself had got a medal for her work the aged.The old lady was proud of Myra, but Enid was the daughter she loved.Enid had never married, but had seemed content to live with her mother, and teach in a primary school round the corner.One evening, however, Enid said, “I've arranged for Mrs.Morrison to look after you for a few days, Mother.Tomorrow I have to go into hospital——just a minor operation, I'll soon be home.”

In the morning she went, but never came back——she died on the operating table.Myra came to the funeral, and in her efficient way arranged for Mrs.Morrison to come in and light the fire and give the old lady her breakfast.Two years ago that was, and since then Myra had been to see her mother three times, but her husband never.The old lady was eight today.She had put on her best dress.Perhaps——perhaps Myra might come.After all, eighty was a special birthday, another decade lined or endured just as you chose to look at it.Even if Myra did not come, she would send a present.The old lady was sure of that.Two spots of colour brightened her cheeks.She was excited——like a child.She would enjoy her day.Yesterday Mrs.Morrison had given the flat an extra clean, and today she had brought a card and a bunch of marigolds when she came to do the breakfast.Mrs.Grant downstairs had made a cake, and in the afternoon she was going down there to tea.The little boy, Johnnie, had been up with a packet of mints, and said he wouldn't go out to play until the post had come.“I guess you'll get lots and lots of presents,” he said, “I did last were when I was six.”

What would she like? A pair of slippers perhaps.Or a new cardigan.A cardigan would be lovely.Blue's such a pretty colour.Jim had always liked her in blue.Or a table lamp.Or a book, a travel book, with pictures, or a little clock, with clear black numbers.So many lovely things.She stood by the window, watching.The postman turned round the corner on his bicycle.Her heart beat fast.Johnnie had seen him too and ran to the gate.Then clatter, clatter up the stairs.Johnnie knocked at her door.“Granny, granny,” he shouted, “I've got your post.”

He gave her four envelopes.Three were unsealed cards from old friends.The fourth was sealed, in Myra's writing.The old lady felt a pang of disappointment.“No parcel, Johnnie?”

“No, granny.”

Maybe the parcel was too large to come by letter post.That was it.It would come later by parcel post.She must be patient.Almost reluctantly she tore the envelope open.Folded in the card was a piece of paper.Written on the card was a message under the printed Happy Birthday —— Buy yourself something nice with the cheque, Myra and Harold.The cheque fluttered to the floor like a bird with a broken wing.Slowly the old lady stooped to pick it up.Her present, her lovely present.With trembling fingers she tore it into little bits.El Nino El Nino means “l(fā)ittle boy” in Spanish;when capitalized, it refers to the Christ child.This innocent-sounding name originated in the 19th century, when Peruvian sailors noticed that every few years around Christmastime, waters near the coasts warmed up and the current shifted southward.But this “l(fā)ittle boy” plays havoc around the globe.El Nino occurs when weather patterns in the tropical Pacific shift violently.Normally, strong westward-blowing trade winds off South America push surface water toward Asia.Just as blowing on hot coffee pushes the liquid up against the opposite side of the cup, the trade winds pile warm water against the coastlines of Australia, Indonesia and the Philippines.Above the warm water, moist air rises, lowering atmospheric pressure and triggering the tropical showers that nourish the rain forests of Asia.Meanwhile high-altitude winds travel back toward South America.There, the cooled air sinks, raising atmospheric pressure and suppressing rain along most of the Pacific coast, making it one of the driest regions in the world.But with El Nino, the pattern reverses.Atmospheric pressure in the Western Pacific rises, setting the stage for drought from Australia to India.The trade winds decrease, or in extreme years reverse to blow eastward.As a result, a huge mass of warm water flows back toward South America, causing storms from Chile to California.Meanwhile, over the Pacific, ten-mile-high storm clouds further heat the atmosphere, fueling a stronger-than-normal jet stream, which often splits in two.One branch moves north, warming the Pacific Northwest, central Canada and Alaska.Another branch surges south, producing heavy rains in the U.S.Gulf States and Southwest.El Nino's vast impact on humans has often been catastrophic.The El Nino of 1982-83 inflicted $13 billion in damage and claimed some 2,000 lives.In Australia day turned to night when a dust storm blanketed Melbourne;brush fires raged in its wake.In place of its normal monsoon, Southern India got dried-up crops and the threat of mass starvation.At the same time, violent rainstorms devastated the Western Hemisphere: Peru's fishing industry — once one of the richest in the world — was wiped out, and seaside towns were washed into the Pacific.Is there a good side to El Nino? There can be.Zebiak notes that the number of tropical hurricanes in the Atlantic is reduced during an El Nino year.One theory is that winds created by El Nino shear off the tops of Atlantic hurricanes, aborting them before they reach full force.And a team of scientists in Israel who study tree rings and satellite cloud pictures concluded that El Nino may bring precious moisture to the thirsty Middle East.A new study even shows the EI Nino deserves credit for encouraging plant growth and helping to control pollutant to global warming.Forms of Transportation People traveling long distances frequently have to decide whether they would prefer to go by land, sea, or air.Despite the fact most of people choose to travel by train or bus, the most popular forms of transport in China, I like to go by air.(點出要比較的交通工具，表明自己的選擇是飛機)Hardly anyone can positively enjoy sitting in a train for more than 10 hours.（主題句）Though the price is reasonable, I can’t bear the notorious condition that train compartments often get cramped and stuffy.Reading or talking to your seatmates are only a partial solution, for the monotonous rhythm of the wheels clicking on the rail soon lulls you to sleep.（首先討論乘火車：其優(yōu)點是廉價，但缺點是不舒服，時間長）

Long bus journeys are even less pleasant, for it is quite impossible even to read.（主題句）Though you can travel fairly safely at high speeds since highways are built, the greater part of the journey is still spent on the narrow, bumpy roads which are crowded with traffic.Like the train journey, you arrive at your destination almost exhausted.（其次討論乘長途汽車：其缺點同樣是不舒服，耗時間）

Nothing can match airplanes for speed and comfort though they have the reputation of being dangerous(in fact, the accident rate is much lower than traveling by train and bus).For a couple of hours you sit in a deep armchair to enjoy an exhilarating experience: the extraordinary sight of mountains and deep valleys bellow, of unbroken clouds with the sun shining brilliantly above.The journey is so smooth and fast that you arrive at the destination before you know where you are.（最后討論飛機，其優(yōu)點是速度快有舒服）

True, airplanes have the grave disadvantages of being the most expensive form of transport.But nothing is precious than time.Not only does the flight take you only a few hours, but you arrive fresh and uncrumpled.You won’t have to spend the next day recovering from a long and arduous journey like traveling by train and bus.（承認飛機出游的缺點是價格昂貴，但通過對時間的看法，進一步說明乘飛機的好處）Chinese Children and American Children All young children, whatever their culture, are alike in their charm and innocence — in being a clean slate on which the wonders and ways of the world are yet to be written.But during the years I study in a college near Chicago, I learned that American and Chinese children are different in several ways.（引出要比較的主題：美國小孩和中國小孩）

First, young American children tend to be active, enthusiastic and direct.They express themselves openly whatever they want to say.Chinese children, on the other hand, tend to be passive, quiet and to beat around the bush when voicing their demand.They usually wait to be asked and are lacking in initiative spirit.（美國孩子主動，直率；中國孩子被動，婉轉(zhuǎn)）

Second, American children show their independence.They pride themselves on making their own decision and being responsible for it.Their Chinese counterparts, however, are still looking to their parents and grandparents to tell them what to do in terms of which school they should select and which job they should accept.（美國孩子獨立性強；中國孩子依賴性強）

Third, American children tend to more self-reliant.They are taught to believe that money is earned not given.They buy things with their own money.Every piece of housework — be it washing the dishes or mowing the lawn — has a price.But their Chinese counterparts don’t have any knowledge of earning money through housework.They take it for granted that their parents will pay for anything they fancy.（美國孩子做家務(wù)為了錢；中國孩子沒有做家務(wù)掙錢的觀念）Children who grow up in a particular culture share certain values and assumptions.It is not surprising that in a society where individualism and self-reliance are stressed, children behave more confidently and independently, while in a culture which places the value on respectfulness and moderation, children are more quiet and passive.（歸納：中美兩國孩子多方面的不同反映了兩國價值觀念的不同）

Modes of Traveling With the increased standard of living and the declining working weeks, more and more city-dwellers are taking their holidays in scenic spots and places of interest.Most of them like to join package tours as this mode of travel is said to be most convenient.But I prefer to travel individually for freedom.(傾向于自助旅游)It is true that joining a package tour can bring great convenience.You don’t have to worry about room and board during the travel, nor about your transportation.The guide will take care of everything.What you do is to follow the guide and enjoy the scenery.But you lose your freedom for this.At the sight of his/her flag waving, you have to take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to his schedule, regardless of the weather or your health condition.（先肯定旅行社優(yōu)點，馬上分析其缺點）

Individual travel, however, gives you a great degree of freedom.In climbing mountains, you can choose to drive up in cable cars, or take pleasure in the process of climbing.You can decide when to start your way, where to linger a little longer and which spot to be skipped over to save time for another spot.You can always adjust your plan.（轉(zhuǎn)到自助旅游，詳細闡述其優(yōu)點）

Traveling alone, you may encounter inconvenience such as getting accommodation for the night and a place for meals.But you can choose the hotel and restaurant to your liking, and avoid the embarrassment of being forced to share a table or a room with a stranger.（用一句話承認自助旅游有食 宿困難，但在這一點上繼續(xù)分析其優(yōu)點）

To have a holiday tour is to enjoy and relax yourself, and to relax thoroughly, freedom is of essence.If you lose the freedom of action, it is no longer a holiday in anything but name.For this reason I like traveling alone with several friends.（歸納自助旅游優(yōu)點，結(jié)論）

Studying Abroad With the improved living standard and China more open to the world, more and more young people choose to pursue their higher education in foreign countries, such as America, Britain or Australia.Generally speaking, the advantages of studying overseas outweigh its disadvantages.(利弊兼具，作者并無明顯的贊成或反對態(tài)度)The main benefit of studying abroad is academic one.Obviously in western colleges and universities, the laboratories are more sophisticated, and book resources more up-to-date.More importantly, they have first-rate professors who are aware of all the latest developments in their respective fields.Hence the standard of teaching is much higher.Besides academic benefits, there are other advantages.For example, exposure to foreign culture and contact with students from different countries and different backgrounds will broaden their mind and make them more tolerant.Living alone in the foreign land will also offer greater opportunity to develop their independence, their personalities and many other interpersonal skills.Despite these obvious advantages, we should not overlook negative effects.For example, the overseas students may experience loneliness and homesickness, an experience so overwhelming that many could not endure it.Though overseas study has its drawbacks, the advantages are obvious.Provided that it is financially feasible, an oversea education may do a person more good than harm.（謹慎的肯定態(tài)度）Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

According to a recent survey made by the China Daily, about 200 million Chinese are using phones as their daily communications means instead of writing letters.So some people say that phones will kill letter writing.But I don’t think so.My argument that phones will not kill letter writing lies in at least three aspects.First, letter writing as a traditional way of communication still has some advantages over phones.For example, if people want to express something confidential to their close friends, they will turn to letter writing.Another example is that rural workers who are working far away from their hometown are more likely to write letters to their families than to make phone calls for the purpose of saving money.Second, letter writing is more authoritative and formal in some way.For instance, people who are doing business will write formal business letters to do a deal;people who want to recommend or introduce someone to someone else will write letter of recommendation or letter of introduction, etc.Last but not least, letter writing is still regarded as a token of friendship among friends.People always write letters to show their everlasting love and affection.All in all, letter writing is still very popular among people.It is still a good way for people to communicate with each other and it is impossible to be killed by phones.Easy Ways to Avoid an Argument

It's natural to take offense if someone is rude.You may think, what a jerk!But blurting out how you feel will only make matters worse.Dealing with difficult people is a part of everyday life, and there are ways you can stand up for yourself without starting an argument.I call these techniques “ Tongue Fu!” Handle arguments with humor.All of us tend to lose our temper.If you find yourself in a difficult situation, try having fun with it.As an IRS worker explained to me, “ Almost everyone who comes in here is hostile.Instead of taking offense, we've posted bulletin boards with comic strips that poke fun at the IRS, which we jokingly call the Income Removal Service.When taxpayers see these, their attitudes change for the better.” When people complain, don't explain.The phone rings at work.You pick up and the caller launches into a complaint: “I asked for a catalogue three weeks ago and I still don't have it!What kind of business are you running, anyway?” Don't bother explaining that half the staff is out with the flu.Well-intentioned though they may be, such explanations usually add to the complainer's anger because they come across as excuses.Avoid explaining in detail what went wrong.Instead, agree, apologize and then move on to what can be done about it.Simply say: “You're right.I'm sorry you haven't received it yet.If I can have your name and address again, I'll personally put it in the mail to you today.” Agree to disagree.A man I know said he and his wife went to her parents' house for dinner one night.“While we were eating,” he recalled, “I mentioned that the highway construction was stalled again.My father-in-law said he was glad.'That highway never should've been built!It's destroying an important historical valley.' ”Well, I spend over an hour each way commuting to work.I told him I thought the highway was a necessary evil because there are four times as many cars as there were ten years ago, on the same number of road.My wife's dad grumbled that it was typical of my selfish generation to think more about our commuting time than a significant archeological site.“I lost my patience and said, 'You can't stop progress.' That did it.My father-in-law stood up and walked away, saying, 'I don't have to sit here and listen to this at my own dinner table.' ”I wish the whole thing had never happened.If I had been alert to his feelings about the matter, I could have prevented the whole unfortunate incident by saying, 'Let's agree to disagree about this,' and politely directing the conversation to something else.“ One effective way to avoid an argument is to say, ”We're both right!“ and move on to a safer topic.For example, you and your wife disagree about how to discipline your teenager, and your discussion is turning into an argument.Just because you aren't seeing eye to eye doesn't mean you're enemies.Saying ”Hey, we both want the same thing" can get you out of the quarrelsome mode and get you working together again.No matter what the situation, augments are a waste or, at best, a misuse of time.By avoiding meaningless arguments, everybody wins.

第五篇：中考英語記敘文

中考英語記敘文范文

中考英語記敘文范文

提示詞：Last Sunday,broken ,fly a kite,disappear,on the top of the tree

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite.The kite flew highly in the sky.Jim ran with it happily.Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away.Soon it disappeared.Where was it?

Jim had no idea.So he had to run here and there to look for the kite.At last he saw it on the top of the tree.He tried to get it down.But he couldn t.He felt sad.