第一篇：2013年安徽省高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)如何

2013年安徽省高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)如何“審題”

審題是書(shū)面表達(dá)的第一步，也是非常重要的一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)?？忌谡嬲_(kāi)始動(dòng)手寫(xiě)作之前，必須舍得花相當(dāng)一部分時(shí)間認(rèn)真閱讀提示/題示，理解弄清題目要求，主題思想，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)等，這樣才有可能寫(xiě)出好文章。因此，筆者在此淺談一下高考英語(yǔ)作文如何“審題”。通常審題應(yīng)包含以下四個(gè)方面：

1、審體裁

根據(jù)情景提示首先要弄清寫(xiě)何種體裁的文章，是記敘文、說(shuō)明文、應(yīng)用文，還是議論文等?？v觀2013安徽高考英語(yǔ)作文提示：“假設(shè)你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以“On the Way to School”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文?！睆闹形覀儾浑y發(fā)現(xiàn)：“講求文明，從我做起”（to be civilized starts from myself）是文章的主題；“On the Way to School”只是作文的話題既情景。因此，本文應(yīng)當(dāng)是議論文，側(cè)重于“What I / we should do on the way to school”, 而不是”What I did on the way to school”.然而據(jù)筆者調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)不少學(xué)生寫(xiě)成了 “ a traffic story that happened on the way to school”.2、審格式

不同文體寫(xiě)作格式不同。既然我們確定了本文是議論文，習(xí)慣上采用“三段論”的格式，即：導(dǎo)入（主題）—拓展（論據(jù)說(shuō)明）—總結(jié)（歸納）。

文章的開(kāi)頭尤其重要，“Well begun is half done”，本文我們不妨由現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)入主題，These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are common, causing serious harm to life and the environment.What we should do on the way to school ?To be civilized starts from myself.文章的拓展部分是文章的主體，本文應(yīng)從兩大方面 “obeying traffic rules” and “ paying attention to our civilized behavior” 展開(kāi)說(shuō)明。文章的結(jié)尾起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛作用，”O(jiān)nly when every one of us carries these out , will our society be better!“

3、審內(nèi)容

內(nèi)容是文章的主題部分。為了使行文連貫，作者可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。內(nèi)容不僅要有圍繞中心的要點(diǎn)，即捕捉信息，組織要點(diǎn)，還應(yīng)包括譴詞造句，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，合理過(guò)渡，連句成篇等。

很明顯本文有兩個(gè)主要內(nèi)容：1.遵守交通法規(guī)；2.注意舉止文明。所選話題貼近學(xué)生生活，為學(xué)生所熟悉，學(xué)生有話可寫(xiě)，留給學(xué)生足夠的寫(xiě)作空間。對(duì)每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)我們都可以寫(xiě)出至少三、四個(gè)小要點(diǎn)。For example , “ run the red;walk on the right;don’t ride the motor;don’t cross the road until the light switches to green;don’t spit or throw litter away anywhere” etc.“ Firstly, Secondly, What’s more, Besides ” 等過(guò)渡詞自然用到。有了這些內(nèi)容然后就看各自的語(yǔ)言文字的運(yùn)用能力了。

4、審人稱和時(shí)態(tài)

根據(jù)本文特點(diǎn)和要求，我們很容易發(fā)現(xiàn)本文的人稱是第一人稱“I” 或 “we”, 文章的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

以上是筆者就英語(yǔ)作文“審題 ”這一環(huán)節(jié)的意見(jiàn)，有不到之處請(qǐng)指導(dǎo)老師和同行們批評(píng)指正。

第二篇：高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)技巧

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)技巧

通常，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)，聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫(xiě)、譯五項(xiàng)基本技能缺一不可?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》，對(duì)九級(jí)語(yǔ)言技能目標(biāo)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作有6點(diǎn)明確的要求。同時(shí)列出了寫(xiě)作技能與試題設(shè)計(jì)的要求和寫(xiě)作評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，其測(cè)試方式有五種。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語(yǔ)域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)是英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和語(yǔ)法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的綜合運(yùn)用，還要具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內(nèi)容清楚、意思連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、邏輯性強(qiáng)、主題突出、用詞準(zhǔn)確、文體恰當(dāng)。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時(shí)確實(shí)需要長(zhǎng)期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡(jiǎn)單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅(jiān)持內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)言、語(yǔ)法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素?，F(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫(xiě)作，只要求用書(shū)面語(yǔ)言基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的東西。一般原則是：不多寫(xiě)、不少寫(xiě)和不錯(cuò)寫(xiě)?，F(xiàn)結(jié)合存在的問(wèn)題和多年的教學(xué)積累，談?wù)劯呖加⒄Z(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)注重的五方面。用順

審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習(xí)慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語(yǔ)提示，或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過(guò)度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對(duì)

對(duì)每一個(gè)句子都盡可能避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在：

2.1動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書(shū)面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時(shí)態(tài)，但特定時(shí)間背景下時(shí)態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；過(guò)去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。千萬(wàn)不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由于漢語(yǔ)被動(dòng)色彩不濃，因此英語(yǔ)表達(dá)易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動(dòng)詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯(cuò)誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達(dá)。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)

用準(zhǔn)確地道的語(yǔ)言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見(jiàn)現(xiàn)象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫(xiě)句子，用語(yǔ)不準(zhǔn)，而根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫(xiě)作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語(yǔ)言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯(cuò)）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語(yǔ)作文，受漢語(yǔ)影響，雖語(yǔ)法正確，卻不符英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯(cuò)）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯(cuò)）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。簡(jiǎn)明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學(xué)寫(xiě)作要簡(jiǎn)單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復(fù)雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯(cuò)。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯(cuò)）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯(cuò)）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡(jiǎn)單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯(cuò)）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來(lái)源：

標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫(xiě)，造成失分。書(shū)寫(xiě)標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡(jiǎn)潔明了，有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對(duì)性，并注意單詞字母大小寫(xiě)。

格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開(kāi)頭，常常要交待通知的對(duì)象；日記開(kāi)頭，常常交待時(shí)間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫(xiě)信人的地址和時(shí)間，下一行要頂格寫(xiě)上稱呼，正文結(jié)束后，要有結(jié)束語(yǔ)，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無(wú)遺漏。

常識(shí)性。原材料不一定反應(yīng)，但仍然重要，既屬內(nèi)容，又承上啟下，增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫(xiě)通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫(xiě)參觀歡迎詞開(kāi)頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫(xiě)信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫(xiě)。整潔

文章寫(xiě)好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫(xiě)應(yīng)盡可能書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會(huì)增加得高分機(jī)會(huì)。

總之，了解、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面，就容易得高分。

第三篇：2011福建高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

2010福建高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

寫(xiě)演講辭

去澳大利亞做演講——主題是“水資源短缺”

材料提供三點(diǎn)措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的觀點(diǎn)

水資源問(wèn)題：

Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作為一名中學(xué)生，你是如何參與環(huán)保這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)？

As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面臨水資源危機(jī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文。1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）3.人類應(yīng)該怎么辦？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor

k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)水資源的英語(yǔ)作文5篇

有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語(yǔ)作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實(shí)際上淡水資源是很有限的。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water

Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水

水對(duì)生物很重要，沒(méi)有水，地球上就沒(méi)有生命。所有的動(dòng)植物都需要水。人

類也需要水。

水幾乎無(wú)處不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空氣中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。當(dāng)它是固態(tài)時(shí)，它可以像磚一樣硬；當(dāng)它是液態(tài)時(shí)，你可以將它從容器中倒出；當(dāng)它是氣態(tài)時(shí)，你看不見(jiàn)或感覺(jué)不到它。

雖然地球表面70％是水覆蓋著，世界上仍有許多地方缺水。所以我們要好好利用地球上的水。

The Importance of Water

As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性

正如我們所了解的，動(dòng)植物需要水，人類的生產(chǎn)生活也需要水。沒(méi)有水便沒(méi)有生命。

隨著工農(nóng)業(yè)的迅速發(fā)展，水的需要量越來(lái)越大。因此，許多地方缺水。而且，許多河流湖泊被工廠排放的污水所污染，魚(yú)不能生存。同時(shí)，廢水給人們的健康帶來(lái)極大的危害。

為了保持河流湖泊清潔，防止水污染，我們必須采取措施，阻止各種污染。

環(huán)境日英語(yǔ)作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想

根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。

1.上星期天，你隨父親去釣魚(yú)，看見(jiàn)河水污染，幾乎釣不到魚(yú)。

2.河水被污染的原因。

3.倘若全國(guó)各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？

4.環(huán)境污染對(duì)人類危害極大，我國(guó)政府正在努力采取措施與污染作斗爭(zhēng)。

5.希望在不久的將來(lái)，河水會(huì)變干凈。

詞數(shù) 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the water.As we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.環(huán)境日英語(yǔ)作文：Water Pollution-水污染

Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季節(jié)，天氣變得越來(lái)越暖和。我和我的同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了一次環(huán)城一日游，所到之處景色宜人。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過(guò)的河流時(shí)，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

隨著現(xiàn)代工農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的污水排進(jìn)河里，河水被嚴(yán)重污染。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水發(fā)出難聞的氣味。

我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立各種設(shè)備，例如污水處理廠，并且鼓勵(lì)科學(xué)家們想出更多更好的辦法以減少水污染。

水是生命之源，保護(hù)水資源十分重要。

My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried

about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”

今年春天，我和我的同學(xué)去春游，我們玩得都很高興。但同時(shí)，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重了。

沿途我們看到許多婦女在河邊洗衣，河面上漂著垃圾，一家化工廠正將廢水排入河中。河中看不到一條魚(yú)，河水也不像從前那樣清澈了，水質(zhì)很差。對(duì)此我深感擔(dān)憂，因?yàn)樗畬?duì)于所有生物都非常重要。沒(méi)有水人類將無(wú)法生存。我希望人們能多關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題，特別是政府部門(mén)，爭(zhēng)取及早解決水污染問(wèn)題。最后，我想說(shuō)“保護(hù)水就是保護(hù)生命。”

第四篇：英語(yǔ)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

英語(yǔ)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式

1． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一：如此結(jié)論

說(shuō)完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議

如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)?？歼@個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái)，你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英語(yǔ)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：

十五、（2009.遼寧卷）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。

要點(diǎn)：

時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果

報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：帶帽子、手套 注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：社區(qū) community 第二節(jié)：

一、評(píng)分原則

1.本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

2.評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

3.詞數(shù)少于80和多余120的，從總分中減去2分。

4.評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。

6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

1.時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00

2.內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果

3.報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前

4.提示：帶帽子、手套

5.歡迎踴躍參加

【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見(jiàn)的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。

第一步：審題

1、看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。

2、理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。可以先將活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來(lái)；然后再寫(xiě)5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫(xiě)作

可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語(yǔ)去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡(jiǎn)單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等，但句式不易過(guò)于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過(guò)渡自然。第三步：檢查

作文寫(xiě)完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)對(duì)了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)用對(duì)了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。

【專家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】

主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W?；顒?dòng)無(wú)關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開(kāi)展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開(kāi)闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事活動(dòng)。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語(yǔ)題干形式給出，對(duì)考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語(yǔ)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語(yǔ)題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對(duì)于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過(guò)難或過(guò)易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽(yáng)光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果.打掃.聊天等）。假如你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則100-120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。

1.時(shí)間.地點(diǎn).任務(wù).活動(dòng)；

2.老人們的反應(yīng)；

3.簡(jiǎn)短評(píng)論。

注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

【解析】

本文仍屬于提綱式半開(kāi)放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來(lái)寫(xiě)即可。

【專家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】

09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了無(wú)新意。但這并不就說(shuō)明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看，該卷第一次出現(xiàn)在題中直接給出漢語(yǔ)拼音人名，而不是漢語(yǔ)人名，這也算是一個(gè)首創(chuàng)。目的只有一個(gè)：避免考生出錯(cuò)。其實(shí)，遮掩在漢語(yǔ)拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個(gè)人名究竟是漢語(yǔ)中的哪幾個(gè)字，因?yàn)閷?duì)于外國(guó)人而言，字母人名只是一個(gè)符號(hào)，他們是無(wú)法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。

浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問(wèn)句式的標(biāo)題作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），請(qǐng)你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個(gè)問(wèn)題…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個(gè)對(duì)于檢測(cè)考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說(shuō)的是新聞報(bào)道，但實(shí)際上是一個(gè)典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫(xiě)作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質(zhì)的寫(xiě)作。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求。對(duì)于浙江考生而言，其寫(xiě)作難度應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)低于前五年的寫(xiě)作要求了，應(yīng)該是福。

十七、（2009.重慶卷）

國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。

內(nèi)容包括： 自我簡(jiǎn)介 寫(xiě)信目錄

話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）推薦的理由 預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.郵件格式已為你給出 3.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息 4.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答

【參考范文】

Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】

這是一篇命題巧妙地書(shū)寫(xiě)體半開(kāi)發(fā)性提綱式作文。話題樹(shù)有教育意義，符合中學(xué)實(shí)際引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。

2.但自我簡(jiǎn)介、寫(xiě)信目錄、推薦的理由、預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功都是圍繞話題展開(kāi)。3.注意分清段落層次，上下文的過(guò)渡。

【專家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】

從寫(xiě)作文體要求看，重慶卷04年要求寫(xiě)記敘文，05年則改成議論文，近四年基本上是陳說(shuō)性質(zhì)的文體。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動(dòng)或外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)。不過(guò)，09年的話題是涉外的話題征集，有些特點(diǎn)。六年來(lái)，三次短文寫(xiě)作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。李華同學(xué)出現(xiàn)3次（06，07，09）。總的說(shuō)來(lái)，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒(méi)有超出全國(guó)卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)，開(kāi)設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking）,防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，報(bào)名參加其中一門(mén)課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括：

你感興趣的課程

你期望從這門(mén)課程中學(xué)到什么 為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容 【參考范文】

Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。

Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是書(shū)信格式，報(bào)名參加其中一門(mén)課程的學(xué)習(xí)，屬于半開(kāi)放式作文。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.先談自己感興趣的學(xué)科，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說(shuō)學(xué)科，這是寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵，過(guò)渡要自然；

2.再寫(xiě)自己希望學(xué)到什么，要把握實(shí)用性。

3.然后談出想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容的原因，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)，理由合情合理。4.在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中可以嘗試句型的復(fù)雜化，適度增加情節(jié)

【專家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】 上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫(xiě)作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。還有一點(diǎn)，從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說(shuō)+議論。話題涉外，且與教育教學(xué)課程相關(guān)，是很好的話題。但對(duì)于上?？忌裕牧系奶峁┦欠襁^(guò)于豐富了些？！參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)上海卷習(xí)慣于提供簡(jiǎn)練的題干信息，以利于考生的發(fā)揮。這次算是一個(gè)異數(shù)了。

【總評(píng)】

2009年高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷地方卷共19套，短文寫(xiě)作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧·海卷共享全國(guó)卷I的短文寫(xiě)作題）。綜觀2009年高考英語(yǔ)短文寫(xiě)作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語(yǔ)文化輸出類話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個(gè)年份、某個(gè)卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來(lái)已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。這說(shuō)明各卷種的命題者們已經(jīng)認(rèn)識(shí)到了母語(yǔ)文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現(xiàn)實(shí)性，這是最令人感到欣慰的。

強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練

11、（1分）

假設(shè)你是你校京劇愛(ài)好者協(xié)會(huì)的成員，在一次同英國(guó)中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的聯(lián)歡活動(dòng)中，你協(xié)會(huì)將出一個(gè)京劇節(jié)目。在演出前，由你向外國(guó)朋友介紹京劇的由來(lái)，按以下提示介紹：

1．京劇在中國(guó)很受歡迎，歷史悠久，有200年歷史，在清朝乾隆年間，乾隆對(duì)地方劇

有興趣。

2．1790年，為慶祝乾隆80歲生日，他召集各地方劇團(tuán)來(lái)京為他演出，4個(gè)來(lái)自安徽

的劇團(tuán)在慶典后留在北京。

3．1828年，一個(gè)湖北劇團(tuán)來(lái)京，在京常與安徽劇團(tuán)一起演出，兩種唱派合在一起，逐

漸形成了一種新劇種，被稱為京劇。

4．下面演出開(kāi)始，希望朋友們喜歡。參考詞匯：

地方?。簂ocal opera

乾隆年間：the reign of Qianlong

表演：perform

劇團(tuán)：troupe

12、（1分）

你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上頭痛，醫(yī)生讓你休息兩天。你用英語(yǔ)給老師寫(xiě)一個(gè)請(qǐng)假條。

13、（1分）

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)的負(fù)責(zé)人，你們要組織一次英語(yǔ)講座，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一個(gè)通知，把講座的安排：時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，主講人，內(nèi)容，以及注意事項(xiàng)通知大家。

14、（1分）

李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國(guó)居住多年的華裔。因陳偉的兒子陳小明明年要來(lái)大陸李華學(xué)校學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，陳小明來(lái)信詢問(wèn)學(xué)校情況，以下是小華回信的內(nèi)容。

1．聽(tīng)說(shuō)你明年來(lái)我校學(xué)習(xí)，我們很高興。

2．我校是一所具有80年歷史的老學(xué)校。

3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹(shù)木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。

4．學(xué)校設(shè)備優(yōu)良，有體育館、計(jì)算機(jī)室和大圖書(shū)館等。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多

選修課，如：油畫(huà)、打字、烹調(diào)等。

5．最重要的是，學(xué)校有許多優(yōu)秀教師，課程有趣，老師既有知識(shí)又和藹，非常愿意幫

助我們，我愛(ài)我們的學(xué)校，我真希望你也能喜歡我們的學(xué)校。參考詞匯：

選修課：elective

體育館：gym

宿舍樓：dormitory building

15、（1分）

寫(xiě)信向友人介紹作家魯迅。

魏明的美國(guó)朋友杰克開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)文學(xué)，來(lái)信詢問(wèn)魯迅其人及作品。魏明回信介紹魯迅：

1．魯迅是著名的中國(guó)作家。他不僅是作家，思想家，而且還是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開(kāi)創(chuàng)者。

2．他的小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如《阿Q正傳》、《祝福》這兩部影片

深刻地揭露了舊社會(huì)。毛主席對(duì)他有高度評(píng)價(jià)。他的一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大

學(xué)課本。

3．認(rèn)為讀魯迅作品對(duì)他很有益處。參考詞匯：

創(chuàng)始人：Founder

中國(guó)文學(xué)：Chinese Literature

阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q

祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice16、（1分）

提示：為引進(jìn)外資，進(jìn)一步加快你家鄉(xiāng)A城改革開(kāi)放。你向一位外商介紹你家鄉(xiāng)A城。

1．A城是一新開(kāi)發(fā)的經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)。它是一座具有三十萬(wàn)人口的臨海小城。

2．解放前是一個(gè)小漁村，以漁業(yè)為主，沒(méi)有工業(yè)，只有幾所小學(xué)。

3．改革開(kāi)放以來(lái)，許多外商到這里投資，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)很快，建立了許多大工廠、一個(gè)大

港口。港口與國(guó)內(nèi)外許多城市連接。

4．教育有很大的發(fā)展，建立了該城第一所大學(xué)。已有三千人從該校畢業(yè)。我相信，A

城在不久的將來(lái)將更加現(xiàn)代化。參考詞匯：

投資：invest

經(jīng)濟(jì)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)：an economic-zone

港口：port

17、（1分）

11月11日，你將在家里為你的妹妹15周歲開(kāi)一個(gè)生日晚會(huì)，寫(xiě)信給你的外國(guó)朋友Peter，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)參加。晚會(huì)開(kāi)始時(shí)間是晚上6點(diǎn)，將持續(xù)到很晚。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家，請(qǐng)他給你打個(gè)電話告訴你他是否來(lái)參加生日晚會(huì)，并表達(dá)你盼望見(jiàn)到他的心情。

在信的開(kāi)頭告訴Peter你已收到他10月25日的來(lái)信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考試未能及時(shí)回信。

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在的住址是北京西城區(qū)云梯胡同1號(hào)樓4門(mén)2號(hào)。

18、（1分）

給筆友保羅(Paul)的一封信 提示：

1．過(guò)了一個(gè)很好的寒假，在寒假中與父親一起回老家河北農(nóng)村。

2．吃驚于家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。幾乎村里每家都有彩電，許多家蓋了新房。有的家還有了

摩托車(chē)和小汽車(chē)。

3．一位村民自豪地告訴我，他和一部分村民打算參加一個(gè)旅游團(tuán)到國(guó)外旅游。

4．我表示羨慕他們，我對(duì)父親說(shuō)，將來(lái)大學(xué)畢業(yè)要回老家來(lái)，父親也表示說(shuō)他一退休

就來(lái)。

5．你的名字小海。

19、（1分）

張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書(shū)。寫(xiě)信應(yīng)聘。以下是張紅的簡(jiǎn)歷。

年齡20歲，即將從職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。專業(yè)：經(jīng)濟(jì)管理（business management）。學(xué)英語(yǔ)8年，會(huì)計(jì)算機(jī)。在過(guò)去三年中一直是本校學(xué)生報(bào)編輯之一，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)?cè)诎嗌蟽?yōu)秀。主要是本人喜歡辦公室工作，相信能勝任秘書(shū)工作。如果能得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)將十分感謝。

請(qǐng)以張紅的名義向公司寫(xiě)信寫(xiě)聘。參考詞匯：

職業(yè)學(xué)校：vocational school

專業(yè)：major

20、（1分）

給朋友小林的一封信，談?wù)労偕睢?/p>

1．寒假很忙，因?yàn)榻衲昶咴乱獏⒓痈呖肌?/p>

2．每天埋頭讀書(shū)，復(fù)習(xí)每門(mén)必修課，做許多練習(xí)。

3．學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，每天學(xué)習(xí)10小時(shí)以上，累時(shí)看會(huì)兒電視，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，但總不去影劇院。不

得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請(qǐng)，只在除夕時(shí)打電話問(wèn)候。

4．多希望沒(méi)有考試，但又不可能，要盡力取得好成績(jī)?？忌峡释丫玫那迦A大學(xué)。參考詞匯：

必修課：required subject

埋頭于某事：bury oneself in sth.參考答案：

11、（1分）

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、（1分）

Dear Mr.Du，I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully，Li Qing

13、（1分）

There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION

14、（1分）

Dear Xiao Ming，I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua

15、（1分）

Dear Jack，I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming

16、（1分）

My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、（1分）

Doorway 4, building 1

Yunti Hu Tong

Xicheng District

Beijing 100037

China

November 4th,1995 Dear peter，Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!

I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves，Zhao Ning

18、（1分）

Dear Paul，How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!

I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?

Here are my best regards to you and your family

Yours Xiao Hai

19、（1分）

Dear Sir：

How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong

20、（1分）Dear Xiao Lin，I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours Wu Qi

第五篇：高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（六）抗震救災(zāi)，眾志成城

1、考題示例

假設(shè)你是李華，在得知四川大地震的消息之后，作為校學(xué)生會(huì)主席，你決定給災(zāi)區(qū)的中學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1、得知四川發(fā)生突如其來(lái)的特大地震災(zāi)害，心情非常難過(guò)；

2、看到你們表現(xiàn)得非常鎮(zhèn)定、堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，感動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶；

3、患難見(jiàn)真情，全校師生向你們表示慰問(wèn)的同時(shí)，共計(jì)捐款12萬(wàn)元；

4、美好家園可以重建，希望你們要看到希望、充滿信心。參考詞匯：捐款 make a donation to I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown.Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（五）觀光旅游、景點(diǎn)導(dǎo)游

1、考題示例

假設(shè)你是李華，你是一名奧運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者，你將帶領(lǐng)一個(gè)來(lái)自美國(guó)的奧運(yùn)旅游團(tuán)游覽某城市一著名的旅游景點(diǎn)---XXX。請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一個(gè)關(guān)于XXX和活動(dòng)安排的口頭導(dǎo)游詞，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1、歡迎來(lái)到XXX城市，我很高興成為你們的導(dǎo)游；

2、XXX是一個(gè)具有悠久歷史的城市；

3、XXX是XXX市的歷史性建筑，是XXX的發(fā)源地；

4、“XXX”已經(jīng)成為世界文化遺產(chǎn)；

5、祝愿大家在XXX玩得開(kāi)心。

2、參考范文

Ladies and gentlemen I feel honored to be your guide for the one-day tour to the XXX.First of all, on behalf my travel agency, I’d like to extend my welcome to all of you.Our schedule for today is to visit the famous scenic spot---the XXX, which is the historic architecture in the city of XXX.As the origin of XXX, the XXX has become the world cultural heritage.I’m quite sure that you will be impressed by the beauty of the royal construction and the long history of the city as well.Wish you have great fun during the whole day!

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（四）迎奧運(yùn)、講文明、樹(shù)新風(fēng)

1、考題示例(1)

為迎接奧運(yùn)會(huì)在中國(guó)舉行，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于講究文明禮儀的倡議書(shū)，具體內(nèi)容包括：

1、講究文明禮貌是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)；

2、面對(duì)外國(guó)友人應(yīng)熱情大方、彬彬有禮；

3、要堅(jiān)決杜絕公共場(chǎng)所大聲喧嘩、擁擠打鬧、隨地吐痰等不文明行為；

4、奧運(yùn)即將召開(kāi)，我們將代表中國(guó)形象。參考詞匯：喧嘩 uproar

2、參考范文(1)My dear fellow students, The Olympics are just around the corner.Today I want to talk about good manners and courtesy.We Chinese have always been respected and highly praised for good manners and courtesy, which have, as well, become precious traditions of our people.In a couple of weeks beyond, a large number of foreign friends will come to China to join us in enjoying the Olympics.Beforeforeign guests, we should have an easy manner and behave politely and warm-heartedly.In public places, such ugly behaviors as uproar, pushing or squeezing together, spitting and so on should be determinedly forbidden.In a sense, each of us will not simply stand forourselves but stand for China.Therefore, boys and girls, let’s do it well right now and the eyes of the world are to on us!

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（三）奧運(yùn)精神

1、考題示例

仔細(xì)觀看下列海報(bào)，寫(xiě)一篇短文闡述圖中所表達(dá)的奧運(yùn)精神。要求：表達(dá)連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，100詞左右。

參考詞匯：羽毛球 badminton 橄欖忮 olive branch 接力棒 baton

2、參考范文 Olympics in Posters There are two people in either posters, each of which tells something about Olympic spirits.In the first poster, two badminton players hold one gold medal together, which suggests that cooperation always comes first in Olympics.Although all the players struggles to be higher, faster, and stronger, the teamwork usually plays a very important role in a lot of events, such as football, group gymnastics and relay races.In the second poster, in the relay race one athlete is passing an olive branch, instead of a baton, on to the next one.What does it mean? It shows us that the Olympics mean more than just competition.Peace and friendship are also part of the Olympics!

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（二）奧運(yùn)與健身

1、考題示例

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)告，描述奧運(yùn)會(huì)給中學(xué)生生活帶來(lái)的變化。

迎奧運(yùn)之前迎奧運(yùn)之后 學(xué)校每周兩節(jié)體育課，并且有時(shí)被文化課占用每天一小時(shí)體活課，師生一起開(kāi)展戶外活動(dòng) 學(xué)生只顧學(xué)習(xí)，忽視運(yùn)動(dòng)鍛煉重視鍛煉，認(rèn)識(shí)到身體好可以促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)參考詞匯：忽視 neglect

2、參考范文

As the form reflects, with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games’ drawing nearer and nearer, some positive changes have taken place.Before that, each week, only two so-called PE lessons were scheduled, during which sometimes we were actually having lessons such as Chinese, Math, Physics and so on.Most of us, who mainly cared for our studies, always neglected physical training.高中世博會(huì)英語(yǔ)作文 魅力上海，閃耀世博

Throughout its existence of more than 150 years, the Expo will bring new knowledge from a specific period of time and trend of development, reflecting the human civilization.The main attractions of the first session of the World Expo in 1851 in the Crystal Palace in London: almost 500 meters long palace built of cast iron and glass.Subsequently, the participating countries will offer similar advantages to introduce from time to time every few years.Today EXPO is the economic and cultural Olympiad of the world, a competition among nations, as well as among exhibitors from the private sector on a given subject.At the same time, it is about marketing countries internationally.Expositions of the first category last a maximum of 6 months and may be held on an enormous area.But at a time when information as well as goods can be had through the internet and other technologies, they remain a place of rendezvous and of authentic experiences.