第一篇：留學個人陳述

個人陳述

我叫李彬，來自中國陜西西安。我在22年的生命歷程中，練就了堅韌、頑強的性格，2004年我以優(yōu)異的成績考入西安財經(jīng)學院，現(xiàn)正攻讀金融專業(yè)的金融學學士學位。我的大學是一所學科非常齊全的綜合性大學，大學生活使我不僅在學習方法、專業(yè)知識上得到了全方位立體化的發(fā)展，更重要的是提高了我對各學科知識的融合能力，同時也極大的提高了我的求知欲望。因此，我決定在畢業(yè)后去美國留學，通過了解，目前我希望申請底特律大學金融專業(yè)碩士學位。

家庭對每個人來說都非常重要，因為它是我們接受教育的第一課堂。我的外公曾是一個電力科學家，奶奶則是個樸實的農(nóng)民，父親是人民警察，母親是一位會計從業(yè)人員，他們對我的言傳身教，對我的人生觀、價值觀的建立和發(fā)展起到了極其重要的作用，同時也幫我建立起了誠實、勤勞、永不言敗的性格。所以受他們的影響，我對金融類學科有著十分的興趣。我的家庭是我一生中最重要的財富，是它賦予了我學習這方面學科的興趣，以及勇往直前的的性格。

通過對專業(yè)知識的學習，使我對經(jīng)濟金融類學科產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，我拜讀了胡碧教授的《貨幣銀行學》，書中他用通俗易懂的案例，將迷霧般的金融原理與人們普通的生活有機的結(jié)合到一起，使我掌握了將大多數(shù)人覺得枯燥的金融學原理，在實際生活中的學習方法，同時也使我對胡碧教授產(chǎn)生了崇拜之情。同年，我又拜讀了James C.Baker的代表作《國際金融》，通過這本書的學習，使我迷戀上了金融方面的知識。由于對知識的強烈渴求，使我更加專著的學習金融反面的理論知識，并且我遇到了一位良師，中國金融行業(yè)非常著名的胡碧教授。胡教授將貨幣銀行的理論與實踐相結(jié)合，向我們傳授貨幣銀行，以及經(jīng)濟投資方面的知識。這種教學方法很符合我的學習習慣，所以我很快就進入了狀態(tài)，我們經(jīng)常在一起探討中國期貨行業(yè)的發(fā)展和世界期貨市場的價格波動。

除了專業(yè)知識的學習外，業(yè)余時間，我還和我的同學，朋友一起在學校組建搖滾樂隊，并且經(jīng)常參加學校組織的各類文藝活動，2005年在學校舉辦的樂器大賽上以薩克斯獨奏《春風》獲得第一名，同年代表學校參加省首屆大學生才藝大賽并在樂器組獲得第三名的成績。我還和隊友一起代表學校去孤兒院和敬老院慰問演出，受到校領(lǐng)導的肯定。我在豐富的業(yè)余活動中，不僅實現(xiàn)了人生價值，同時也鍛煉了自己的組織能力，使我的個人素質(zhì)得到了極大的提高。除此以外，我還非常喜歡體育運動，擅短跑，籃球等。年輕，就應該充滿活力。

2007年暑假，我作為西安財經(jīng)學院學生代表，共參加了多場在西安舉辦的金融知識巡展的交流活動，通過參觀，學習了金融發(fā)展史，尤其是美國的歷史。我深深地被先進的運作模式和強大的科研能力所打動，對比自己的學校，盡管我們已經(jīng)發(fā)展很快，但距離世界頂尖教育還有一段差距。這種感覺，激發(fā)了我的學習熱情，我下決心要在回國后用自己的力量，為我的祖國發(fā)展做出自己的貢獻，這也是我申請貴校的一個重要原因，因為作為一個中國人的責任，我要用我在海外學習的先進知識來建設(shè)我的祖國。

“踏實，堅定，勤勞”是我繼承的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)，也是我的人生信條。面對大學即將畢業(yè)，強烈的求知欲及對專業(yè)知識的熱愛，我決定選擇美國繼續(xù)自己的專業(yè)學習，去接受美國大學嚴謹?shù)慕虒W，尖端的研究和新的思維方式，從而充實自己，實現(xiàn)自身的價值，也希望自己能成為中美兩國文化的傳遞使者。謝謝您的關(guān)注，期盼您的答復！

第二篇：出國留學個人陳述

Personal Statement

ByXXX

When occasionally reading the master piece Letter to a Young Lawyer by Alan Dershowitz, I was deeply attracted by words such as Lawyer, Justice, Practice Mentality, and Creed of Life.These words led to my further meditation on the qualities of a lawyer---critical thinking, efficient methods to defend one’s opinions, logical mentality.Living in a society in desperate need of justice and rightness, I had determined to devote myself to the cause of law resolutely.And the first thing is to be equipped with professional knowledge and practice skills.Thus, after graduation next year from Chongqing University, which is listed in 211/985 project, I intend to further my study at your university due to your prestigious reputation in this area

With great determination and sense of mission, I devoured the pages to learn and think in and out of class, resulting in the top-ranking score at various courses, for instance, 87% for Lawyers, Notarization and Arbitration Practice;85% for Corporate and Business Law;85% for Financial Law;and 90% for Jurisprudence.Nevertheless, I know that a consistent praise is far away to make my dream realized.Hence I submerged myself in the sea of reference books in the law field, such as The Concept of Law by H.L.A.Hart，An Introduction To The Principles of Morals and Legislation by Jeremy Bentham，Justice in Robes by Ronald Dworkin, Taking Rights Seriously by Ronald Dworkin, Constitution Law of United States, The laws by Plato, etc.Since many cases concerns economic disputes and my second major is economics, I also read some books in this field such as The Economics of Money, Banking and Financial Markets by Frederic.S.Mishkin, Economics by Paul.A.Samuelson，The Problem of Social Cost by Ronald Harry Coase, etc.Apart from that, after a half year’s training, now I am very confident to pass the Judicial Vocational Qualification Test in the near future.I had been the programme manager of SIFE(Student In Free Enterprise)programmes at my university, which is an international non-profit organization that works with leaders in business and higher education to mobilize university students to make a difference in their communities while developing the skills to become socially responsible business leaders.There I had leaded my team taking a series of social cases among which I would like to share the most unforgettable ones.Our first programme was the Bangbangjun Program.“Bangbangjun” is a typical Chongqing way to call the luggage porters, who are the migrant workers.Suffering from frequent discrimination, they live their lives at the foot of the social ladder.There are some companies to manage their business.Through on-site inspection we found that the situation was worse than our imagination in those companies.Deficiencies and shortages existed everywhere such as in legal security, internal systems, labor rights, and the financial management.With the help of the supervisor

as well as lawyers and business consultant we tried to find universal business modes to benefit as more porters as we can.After 3 years’ endeavor we succeeded in bringing the company with advanced business modes and legal aids, setting up websites and establishing brands, perfecting taxing structure and internal regulations;strengthening employees’ protection and helping the company in refunding.There, my tasks were to lead my team to supervise the operation of the procedures, provide legal guidance in equity and interest allocation, social insurance and the process of refunding.Additionally, I also did researches on the life status of migrant workers and guided them to protect their legal rights.In the end I wrote the annual report for the programme.Much as I applied of my professional skills and felt about the hardships of the migrant works, I congratulated myself that I had chosen such a noble cause.Moreover, I had participated in another programme named FedEx Migrant Workers’ Children Success Skills Program.The aim of the programme was to achieve better communications between migrant worker parents and their children, promote more educational opportunities for these children, and help them to establish a scientific life and social value.In order to lead my team to fulfill the task, I invited professionals to come to offer psychological consultation;gave inspiring speeches, recruited volunteers to teach them social etiquette and hygiene knowledge;and organized books and stationery donation activities.With these management experiences I had a more comprehensive understanding on how to lead a team to fulfill a task, making it so easier in the third programme called Global Entrepreneurship Week in Chongqing University.By patrols speeches and entrepreneur interviewing did we provide a communication and resource-sharing platform for university students.In this way did students could learn from the entrepreneurs’ experience and knowledge in a more vivid way.This time I followed up the whole process from scheme, arrangement, implementing, leading the team to solve problems encountered, especially in the status limitation, content prescription, and school official approval convincing.Besides, I took other programmes as well such as GSVC(Global Social Venture Competition), in which I was responsible for checking agreement and compliance;and EOP(Economic Opportunity Program), in which I took charge of protocoling the framework of their cooperation with primary school.Apart from my practice experience in SIFE, I had another internship in summer vacation in Beijing’s No.1 Intermediate People’s Court, where I had learned basic criminal litigation procedures, connecting processes with public security organ and procuratorial organ and the criminal litigation defending skills.One other internship I had was in Bangbangjun Moving Company from 2009~2011.In that company I helped the staff with my professional advice in checking agreement and compliance;

formulating the regulations, explicating the division and assign of stock rights, etc.When I was exhausted from my work and studies, I would do some exercise to get myself refreshed and revitalized.As the reward of unceasing efforts of being the national second-level athlete, I did a good job in 2008 Swimming Competition of the University Games in Chongqing, and won the third place of 50-meter freestyle, the third place of 100-meter butterfly, and the first place of 4 × 100-meter freestyle respectively.Additionally, I also performed well in 2009 Swimming Competition of Healthy Campus Games in Chongqing, and won the first place of 50-meter backstroke, the second place of 4 × 100-meter mix-style and freestyle respectively.As for career planning, I intend to pursue my further study of international business law or trade law after passing the Judicial Professional Qualification Test;In order to be a partner of law office, I would accumulating my experience mainly in non-lawsuit legal matters and foreign matters;afterwards there would be some further academic demands such as applying for Phd degree.The legal system in P.R.China now is changing with a higher pace compared with that of the economics globalization, resulting in a greater demand for qualified lawyers who can deal with international cases such as political disputes among countries, business disputes among enterprises, and cultural transmission.I want to be one of them who can handle international affair easily due to their domestic education and experience abroad.Wherefore hoping that by contrasting, coordinating and coalescing could I view law and justice from a new and unique angle, I intend to apply to study at your honored university.Sincerely hope that you would spare a careful thought on my considerate decision and I am looking forward to your favorable reply.Thank you!

第三篇：留學美國 個人陳述

個人陳述：重點（每一個段落都要有一個主題，第一句話是主題，下面以此來展開，支持第一句。）

個人PS分以下幾點：

一：個人基本信息及情況（包括家庭狀況，學習情況，性格，個人特長）。

二：個人特長（對一的拓展）--主要介紹三個與專業(yè)相關(guān)的特征

每一個特長自成一段，第一句是對特征的總括，下面是例子的舉證。如領(lǐng)導力，就要舉出相應的例子進行證明。

三：專業(yè)計劃（由二過渡過來，因為個人情況，興趣，能力而選擇了這個專業(yè)）

第一句是選擇的專業(yè)，下面是對此專業(yè)認識及自己的遠景計劃。

四：選擇美國的原因及錄取后，畢業(yè)后的計劃

總括下此專業(yè)在美國的排名境況，然后規(guī)劃下自己在此專業(yè)的長遠計劃以及學成后的打算。

總之：PS要簡潔，明了，每一個段落多有其特色，相應的見模板，從模板中理解上面說的要點。按照上面的要求先寫出中文的PS。類似議論文或敘述文。

下面是更細致的PS介紹（可參考）

1、保持真實性。

2、寫出特點。每個人的生活都大同小異，但是每個人又有獨具特色的一面，如果你寫出自己的特色，你就是一個獨特的，沒有人能夠模仿的人，同時你的個人陳述也會激發(fā)讀者的閱讀興趣。

3、細節(jié)支持。再次強調(diào)，個人陳述中不要有那么多的虛詞和空洞的內(nèi)容，一定要有細節(jié)去支撐你想突出的主題。把一個事物具體化，這樣不僅內(nèi)容充實，有細節(jié)，也容易讓別人相信，覺得這個事情是真的。

4、抓住他們的眼球。每個申請委員會的老師會閱讀每一篇個人陳述，因為這是他們的職責，如何在眾多文書中吸引他們的眼球，讓他們留下深刻印象？抓住老師眼球你就成功了一半，獨特的開頭和結(jié)尾，吸引人的細節(jié)描述比起虛詞更能抓住他們的眼球。

5、對自己有信心。信心是成功的源泉，不管怎么樣，都要相信自己是最好的。

搜集想法的方式有很多種，比如形象靈感，列單子，頭腦風暴等等?，F(xiàn)在讓我們先來一個頭腦風暴吧!或許會有一些東西是你未曾想到的!

1.你是誰?你是一個怎么樣的人?

2.你有什么樣的優(yōu)點和缺點?哪些優(yōu)點你認為對申請有利?為什么有利?哪些缺點你認為是斃命的?

3.你印象最深刻的一件事情?

4.你最有成就感的一件事?

5.你經(jīng)歷最大的挫折是什么?如何度過的?有什么感想或收獲?

6.你現(xiàn)在最想做的事情是什么?

7.回憶你最喜歡的一件物品，它對你有什么樣的影響和意義?

8.你的老師是怎么樣評價你的?朋友怎么樣評價你的?家長怎么樣評價你的?

9.你最重要的課外活動和社區(qū)活動是什么?

10.這個學校為什么要錄取你?

11.你的職業(yè)目標是什么?

12.為什么申請這個專業(yè)?

13.你將能為這個學校帶來什么?

14.你對現(xiàn)在所學專業(yè)或者將要學習的專業(yè)有什么樣的認識和看法?

個人陳述寫作程序第二步：精簡想法

通過以上方法，相信很多內(nèi)容會在你腦海中出現(xiàn)，比如目標，重要經(jīng)歷，個人優(yōu)勢等等，我們要把大量想法精簡，找出最能表現(xiàn)你自己的。你必須找出一個主題，這個主題不僅得將你的個性特征與經(jīng)歷完美融合形成一個連貫整體，還要表達你對進入這所學校的強烈愿望。審理材料的也是一個正常人，也會疲憊，如何給一個每天閱讀50-100份類似文稿的人留下一個持久的印象并非易事，這就要求你的文章必須精簡，有想法，有主題，不能把所有你認為優(yōu)秀的東西都列在上面，必須有所刪減。在刪減過程中要注意：你選的主題是否有利于突出你個人的價值?有沒有具體的事例以能更生動描述你的經(jīng)歷?你的主題有噱頭嗎?你的主題是不是申請表上一些內(nèi)容的簡單重復?文章中有支持主題的段落嗎?你能完整回答提出的問題嗎?能在限定的次數(shù)內(nèi)充分表達你的觀點嗎?你的主題會牽扯到許多其他人嗎?例如信奉上帝，民主黨或共和黨……爭議性的東西最好不要出現(xiàn)在這些主題中。

精簡想法，把主題確定下來以后，你要仔細搜索關(guān)于這些主題的細節(jié)，越詳細越好!這些細節(jié)要有力支撐你的主題。人們都不喜歡空頭話，都不喜歡虛的東西。只有細節(jié)撐腰，事實做主，寫出來的東西才有真實性，才能打動人。在搜索細節(jié)的過程中，你就可以計劃這個細節(jié)適合放在什么地方。

個人陳述寫作程序第四步：創(chuàng)建結(jié)構(gòu)和提煉大綱

主題確定了，細節(jié)想好了，結(jié)構(gòu)和大綱自然就出來了。這主要想說一下開頭和結(jié)尾。開頭千萬不要寫我是誰誰，來自哪，想申請貴校什么專業(yè)。這樣的開頭方式太過于開門見山，無任何特色可言。有特色的開頭是成功的一半，能讓讀者有繼續(xù)看下去的念頭。制造一個懸念，創(chuàng)造一個情境等等，都是不錯的開頭方式。結(jié)尾部分也很重要，材料審核者今天心情不好，可能不看你中間部分的內(nèi)容，但肯定也會看你開頭和結(jié)尾部分，所以一個好文章，不僅要有吸引人的開頭，也要一個給人留下印象深刻的結(jié)尾。

個人陳述寫作程序第五步：初稿及修改

提綱是初稿的根據(jù)，往提綱里頭加入細節(jié)和內(nèi)容，初稿就出來了。初稿完成以后，先休息兩天，過兩天再回頭看看你寫的文章，再回歸到最原始的問題。

1.文章能不能很好表現(xiàn)你自己?

2.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾是否真的吸引人?是否能給人留下深刻印象?

3.文章是否有明確的主題?所有內(nèi)容是否圍繞這個主題?

4.文章有詳細細節(jié)支撐嗎?

5.文章有語法錯誤嗎?

6.我能寫的再好一點嗎?

第四篇：留學申請個人陳述

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

Personal Statement

For nearly one year, when all other colleagues had gone back home after work or to the bars for relaxation, I kept myself busy with the designing, programming, and refactoring work.When I got home every day after ten o’clock in the night, I would read papers of XXX and continue for seeking the universities and professors attractive to me until one o’clock in the morning.My sense of responsibility for the company made me obliged to finish all the projects in my hands before I leave for America.And my yearning for the free American environment which is easy to inspire researchers’ potential made me willing to live such hard life under much greater pressure.Although over two years’ software development work in Beijing Grandsoft Technology Co., Ltd has already helped me accumulate considerable experience in software programming and designing and make some achievements admirable in others’ eyes, I, who will be promoted as a senior development engineer, know clearly that only the xxx program in your department can fully exert my strength and make my pursuit come true.I know that I belong to the kind of people who are able to better realize the life values and meaningfulness while doing certain interesting things, who enjoy challenges and thinking and who are always in pursuit of creative ideas.However, the work I was taking up now is almost always repetition of what has already existed.That’s why I gave up the achievement without hesitation.I know that I will be able to master the most advanced technology and thoughts in the xxx program.In such a bright and promising field, I believe I will be able to inspire all my ability in facing challenges, and finally become a top talent to make contributions to the development in the field.Moreover, my studying and working experiences make me very confident in myself to believe that I have got the ability and potential to realize my pursuit.I became interested in computer science in Chongqing Nankai Middle School, a school emphasizing cultivating personal interests.But my unusual performance in the National Entrance Examination failed me for entering the Department of Computer Science of Tsinghua University.Being clear of my interest and goal, I spent quite a lot of time in computer science besides the basic courses required by the university.Although I didn’t gain an extraordinary GPA, I succeeded in transferring to the School of Software.Afterwards, my GPA continued increasing and my foundation in the major was consolidated.I have a good habit in learning and working.No matter how great the pressure was, I would stick to my studies after work.And I finished reading books like Interconnection Networks-An Engineering Approach and reviewed(Introduction to Algorithms, Computer Networks, Database Systems Concepts)twice.In addition, I am very creative.I could solve the instability in file transmission by using FTP/HTTP method instead of the original Web Service/COM+ method to cope with different network situations after independent

Applicant for Computer Science Program from Tsinghua University

thinking;I could solve the problem of difficulties in managing the patch files by putting the client patch files on the server for Auto update, improving the clients’ satisfaction greatly.What’s more, I am very strict with myself and always keep a heart for excellence.I successfully became a formal employee in advance during the probation period.And I gained the Intermediate Engineer position in only one year which normally took three years by others.At the same time, my strong sense of responsibility helped me never disappoint my supervisors and colleagues even when it was necessary to work overtime continuously or all night.Besides, I can even get enlightened when facing failures.My experience in taking charge of the GCM—Grandsoft Cost Management project can be cited here as an example.In this project, we adopted C/S structure using COM+/Web Service as the communication method, and SQL Server 2000 as the database.Although the SQL was optimized and different DB engines and components were tried, the querying efficiency was not improved obviously when dealing with mass data and complex business logics.However, I learned in the course how to improve the efficiency of database query for huge amount of data, how to conduct efficiency test and experiment and how to use the simplest query to realize the huge business logics.In trial use of the Qlikview software of a professional data query company, although I was not able to solve the problem, I learned the BI thoughts to cache data into the memory to improve the application efficiency.However, though I have laid a solid foundation in my years of studies in Tsinghua University and my self-studies during the work, though I have improved my ability in practice and problem-solving, I still lack in theories which can be seen from the above examples.Only practice is not enough to solve problems completely.The importance of theories can be also seen in my adjusting the tree traversing algorithm.I improved the GCM product’s tree building efficiency by dozens of times after I analyzed the general law of data distribution.Therefore, I am more determined to continue my further education abroad.Having gone through the thinking during the learning-working-learning process, I believe that I’ve already found what I need.The xxx program will be the most meaningful place for me in my life.The next ten years of concentrative research coupled with my determination to accept new challenges will enable me to become a paving stone on the road of CS development.以上內(nèi)容由華恒海淀精品留學部提供

第五篇：留學申請個人陳述范例

Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of China

Personal Statement

My interest in finance can be initially traced back to the bestseller entitled Rich Dad, Poor Dad written by Kiyosaki Robert T.and Lechter Sharon L..Though a ten-year-old boy at that time, I was much fascinated with the economic knowledge conveyed in simple expressions of the book which I read for several times and shared the cases in it with my friends.My motivation to explore the financial world also benefits from my parents both of whom have achieved higher education in finance and engaged in the relevant fields.Having received a rigorous academic training for my past undergraduate study in Renmin University of China, I’m eager to educate myself on an international scale.Finance appeals to me by its extensive and profound nature.As far as I’m concerned, the relationship between finance and economy is akin to that between blood and body.Just as the physical conditions can be reflected from the circulation of blood according to the Chinese medicine, the economic operation of a country can be judged from its financial status, funds flow, etc.My exposures to the professional courses of Money and Banking, Corporate Financing, Macro/Micro Economics, Econometrics, International Finance, and Insurance as well as the mathematical courses such as Mathematical Analysis, Advanced Algebra, Probability Theory and Mathematical Statistics have enabled me to lay a solid academic foundation of finance.Meanwhile, bearing in mind sound interpersonal skills and hands-on ability are the basic personal qualities required of a successful financial person, I availed myself of various opportunities to undertake practices.I began to invest in the stock market in 2007.In face of the frustrations at the outset, I audited all the courses of security analysis and investment on campus, read a lot of financial magazines and newspapers and consulted some professors and my parents.I was uplifted during such a process, not only in money making, but also in grasping the principles and regulations behind the stock market.I value my experiences in conducting research programs which acted as bridges linking my theoretical knowledge with the larger world where it would be applied.More importantly, I got much enlightenment and inspiration from making presentations, like my presentations regarding the comparison and analysis of appreciations of Yuan and Yen along with the cases of insurances.In these presentations, I tried to arrive at flexible and comprehensive command of complicated knowledge.Besides, I derived self-confidence and sense of joy in immersing myself in the fields where my interests genuinely lay.My other unique assets are attributed to my internships in different units where finance invariably plays an important role.When I worked in China Foreign Exchange and Trade Centre, I gained a full understanding of the trading systems of commercial banks and raised my own proposals which were soon adopted about their function setting.Meanwhile, I found a trader’s work busy but interesting, which allowed me to see my own strength and weakness gauged with the professionals.I had my professional skills and teamwork spirit honed during my internship in People’s Bank of China where I learned about the functions of the central bank and my prominent performance won recognition from the persons in charge there.Furthermore, my on-the-spot investigations in a goal

Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of China

mine enterprise and a copper mine enterprise allowed me to see other fields where finance matters tremendously through my exposure to the financial conditions, profit resources and development trends of the enterprises.These experiences, combined with my bountiful extracurricular activities such as the volunteer position of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, involvement in organizing exhibitions and shows have prompted me to set my own career goals—compared to the research work, I prefer a more practical career.And I have learned to focus on the way to achieving my goals—to pursue more advanced education in America, the ideal place full of practical opportunities regarding finance and economy as a whole.I have long admired your esteemed university for its significant achievements in the teaching and research of finance.Your program of finance, with its well-structured curriculum, highly-productive faculty as well as a multitude of real-world projects matches my academic background and interest perfectly.I hope to work in a world-class financial institution or a transnational enterprise after the completion of my master program and your diverse student body and strong alumni work will no doubt become a stepping stone leading me to my career goal.Fully prepared and determined, I’m convinced that your university is precisely my starting point.以上內(nèi)容由華恒海淀精品留學部提供