第一篇:2012中考作文分析張帆
2012中考作文分析
鐵四局 張帆
以“____在其中”為題,寫(xiě)一篇文章。
要求:
1、先把題目補(bǔ)充完整。你可以從“趣”、“美”“情義”、“做人"中選填,也可以填其他詞語(yǔ)。
2、可以大膽選擇你最能駕馭的文體進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。
3、文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地名、校名、人名等,否則會(huì)被扣分。
4、抄襲是一種不良行為,相信你不會(huì)照搬別人的文章,否則會(huì)影響你的成績(jī)。5,考慮內(nèi)容充實(shí),不要少于500字。
從今年的作文題目來(lái)看,所給的幾個(gè)供選擇的詞語(yǔ)不是很?chē)?yán)密,如果把“做人”改為“做人的道理”可能更容易讓學(xué)生理解,正是因?yàn)樽鋈诉@個(gè)動(dòng)作性很強(qiáng)的詞語(yǔ)誤導(dǎo)了學(xué)生,導(dǎo)致有些孩子寫(xiě)出了“走在其中”“行走在其中”“生在其中”“走進(jìn)在其中”“仰視在其中”“棗樹(shù)開(kāi)在其中”這樣的題目很難寫(xiě)出出彩的作文。
就學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作來(lái)看,今年的中考學(xué)生作文存在如下的問(wèn)題
1、學(xué)生沒(méi)有理解題目的真正內(nèi)涵。這個(gè)題目暗含著一個(gè)敘述主體——“我”,即要能寫(xiě)出“我”在“其中”感受到的生活中的“真、善、美”。這個(gè)“其中”也是代詞,需要考生從生活中去尋找,比如:學(xué)習(xí)、讀書(shū)、游戲、失敗、挫折等等。有的學(xué)生就沒(méi)有理解。比如有學(xué)生寫(xiě)的題目是“唐詩(shī)在其中”從他的作文來(lái),這里的“其”就是指“唐詩(shī)”,題目就變成了“唐詩(shī)在唐詩(shī)中”,自然就會(huì)寫(xiě)出偏題的作文。更有一些題目無(wú)從下手,比如“心臟里有什么在其中”“人人在其中”“中考迷人在其中”“我心在其中”“父愛(ài)如此在其中”“以責(zé)任在其中”等讓人難以下筆的題目。
2、題材陳舊老套。很多學(xué)生的作文題材比較陳舊,還是小學(xué)生寫(xiě)的那中簡(jiǎn)單的記事性文章。尤其以“愛(ài)在其中”為甚。大多數(shù)學(xué)生都是記敘自己生病時(shí)父親或是母親對(duì)自己的照顧,及時(shí)送自己去醫(yī)院,要不就是自己上學(xué)忘記帶傘,遇到大雨,家人及時(shí)送傘,要不就是寫(xiě)農(nóng)村的爺爺奶奶對(duì)自己的愛(ài),情節(jié)呈一直線(xiàn),沒(méi)有任何波瀾,也沒(méi)有新意。
3、套作范文。有的老師可能為了部分作文水平弱的孩子,整理了一些范文,讓學(xué)生套作,這樣雖然有可能提高部分孩子的成績(jī),但也可能導(dǎo)致原本靠自己能得高分的學(xué)生因此丟分,今年就有學(xué)生套作被發(fā)現(xiàn)。更有甚者,有的學(xué)生直接就抄襲高考的閱讀理解的內(nèi)容,甚至一個(gè)字都不差,還有學(xué)生就直接套用“羚羊木雕”的內(nèi)容,這些都是不可取的。
4、價(jià)值觀(guān)錯(cuò)位。作為一名初三的學(xué)生,雖說(shuō)價(jià)值觀(guān)沒(méi)有最后確立,但傳統(tǒng)的價(jià)值觀(guān)還是應(yīng)該具備的??墒怯械膶W(xué)生就沒(méi)有注意到。比如,有一篇“友誼在其中”的大意就是一項(xiàng)成績(jī)出色的自己竟然數(shù)學(xué)考試沒(méi)有及格,結(jié)果自己沒(méi)有拿到試卷,回家后被爸爸修理,就在這時(shí)自己的好友來(lái)了,送來(lái)了一分滿(mǎn)分的試卷,名字是自己的名字,但能看出是好友的名字修改的,這時(shí)自己感覺(jué)到友誼在其中。且不說(shuō)事件的真實(shí)性就讓人懷疑,就算是真的,這種欺騙家長(zhǎng)的行為能算友誼嗎?還有一篇“享受在其中”認(rèn)為自己最大的享受就是混世,混黑社會(huì),而且永不后悔。再有“樂(lè)在其中”認(rèn)為一局長(zhǎng)年年在家數(shù)別人行賄的錢(qián)真爽,兒子就說(shuō)“真是樂(lè)在其中啊!”雖然可說(shuō)這是在寫(xiě)小說(shuō),但通篇看不到任何辛辣的筆鋒,就像在記敘一件真實(shí)的事情。對(duì)于這些價(jià)值觀(guān)真的不敢茍同。對(duì)于初中生來(lái)說(shuō),文筆還不夠老練,最好不要輕易的嘗試自己不是很擅長(zhǎng)的文體。
5、純粹追求所謂的新穎構(gòu)思。也許是老師的要求,也許是受一些作文選的影響,有些孩子無(wú)論什么文章都采用寫(xiě)題記和后記的方式,有些可能有用,但有的就顯得牽強(qiáng)附會(huì)。還有就是在中間生拉硬拽強(qiáng)加小標(biāo)題,有些標(biāo)題加的讓人費(fèi)解。比如有一篇“愧疚在其中”的三個(gè)小標(biāo)題是“枯藤+老樹(shù)+昏鴉=優(yōu)秀木材”“小橋+流水+人家=人類(lèi)日用品”“古道+西風(fēng)+瘦馬=餐桌上的美食”看題目和小標(biāo)題應(yīng)該是反映人類(lèi)對(duì)環(huán)境的破壞,可作者東說(shuō)一
句西說(shuō)一句,根本不知道要表達(dá)什么?!案袆?dòng)在其中”的三個(gè)標(biāo)題“一月 狂躁”“三月 冷漠”“六月 沉靜”這樣的標(biāo)題讓人不知怎樣理解,而文章的內(nèi)容與月份沒(méi)有任何關(guān)系。這種生硬的套用格式只會(huì)給人畫(huà)蛇添足之感。
6、書(shū)寫(xiě)潦草,讓人難以辨認(rèn)。這是很多孩子沒(méi)有注意到的問(wèn)題。但是在改作文的時(shí)候,我們都明顯的感覺(jué)到那些書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀(guān)的孩子作文分自然就會(huì)上升。同樣的作文立意,那些書(shū)寫(xiě)好的孩子肯定分?jǐn)?shù)高些,不僅僅體現(xiàn)在卷面的5分上。這種潛在的分?jǐn)?shù)差距將近十分左右,這是很大的差距。這就提醒我們語(yǔ)文老師平時(shí)一定要注意孩子的書(shū)寫(xiě),面的丟掉冤枉分。
當(dāng)然,今年也有不少佳句佳作,讓人眼前一亮。比如“時(shí)間是鏈子,快樂(lè)是珠子,掛在胸前就會(huì)幸福一輩子;幸福是石子,煩惱是沙子,時(shí)間是篩子,用篩子濾掉沙子,石子就會(huì)陪你一輩子?!薄坝H情是唯一一朵不帶刺的玫瑰?!薄把惠喢髟?,攜一縷清風(fēng),品一盞香茗,捧一卷經(jīng)典,任思緒暢游,樂(lè)在其中”。“半舒半展,在風(fēng)中搖曳,茉莉葳蕤,漾著馨香,猶如往昔的種種甜蜜綻放在記憶的枝頭?!薄俺醭炕ɡ俚南M?,是朝陽(yáng)與雨露的呵護(hù);黃昏碧霞的希望,是夕陽(yáng)與彩云的擁抱,籬上翠蔓的希望,是細(xì)雨與暖陽(yáng)的愛(ài)撫,而我的希望實(shí)現(xiàn)夙愿?!币灿谐善募炎鳎纭斑z憾在其中”的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)就像高中作文那樣的篇章結(jié)構(gòu),三個(gè)小標(biāo)題:遺憾,說(shuō)不盡的愁腸李煜;遺憾訴不盡的項(xiàng)羽;遺憾唱不完的情詩(shī)。不僅結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,文采也很精美,這對(duì)一個(gè)初中孩子來(lái)說(shuō)非常難得。
總之,今年的中考作文是有喜有憂(yōu),對(duì)今年的孩子來(lái)說(shuō)已成定局,但是對(duì)老師來(lái)說(shuō)還是有一定的借鑒意義。
第二篇:個(gè)人分析報(bào)告(張帆)
個(gè)人分析報(bào)告
浙江省十里豐監(jiān)獄張帆
摘要:本文結(jié)合自己不同生活階段的成長(zhǎng)歷程,包括童年的家庭生活、學(xué)生時(shí)代遇到的挫折、醫(yī)生及警察的職業(yè)經(jīng)歷。深入對(duì)自己性格、處事方式、工作情況等各方面進(jìn)行了分析。在職業(yè)行為分析中,重點(diǎn)談到我為什么想要成為一名心理咨詢(xún)師。
關(guān)鍵詞:成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷、工作情況、心理咨詢(xún)
一、自我成長(zhǎng)分析
我出生于1979年11月6日,我的家庭是一個(gè)普通的三口之家。父母親是衢州市物資局的職工,他們都是龍游人,爺爺奶奶,外公外婆等親戚都在龍游生活。父母平時(shí)忙于工作,無(wú)暇照顧我,所以我經(jīng)常獨(dú)自呆著家里,很小我能做一些簡(jiǎn)單的家務(wù)事,自己照顧自己,獨(dú)立生活能力還算比較強(qiáng)的。父親脾氣比較暴躁,因?yàn)轭B皮,我經(jīng)常被父親打罵教訓(xùn)。而母親則是一名典型的賢妻良母,對(duì)我很少責(zé)罵,喜歡和我講道理,對(duì)我的教育方式更多采用的是鼓勵(lì)和表?yè)P(yáng),所以我從小就喜歡和她交流談心。我的性格脾氣也深受她的影響,樂(lè)觀(guān)、敏感心細(xì),做事認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé),處處替他人著想。小時(shí)候家里的生活條件還不錯(cuò),很早就買(mǎi)了電視機(jī),自行車(chē)等當(dāng)時(shí)的大件商品,我感覺(jué)我的童年是快樂(lè)幸福的。
我再簡(jiǎn)單的說(shuō)說(shuō)我的求學(xué)之路。我還清楚地記得第一天去幼兒園上學(xué),由于害怕,我一個(gè)人想偷偷溜走,結(jié)果被老師逮住了,于是我大哭大鬧,老師拿我沒(méi)辦法就以我年齡太小為緣由把我退回了家。后來(lái)父親又找關(guān)系把我安排在另一個(gè)幼兒園,我才漸漸適應(yīng)了離開(kāi)家庭的環(huán)境。從小我就很愛(ài)搞惡作劇,讀小學(xué)的時(shí)候,有一年暑假我偷偷爬上學(xué)校教研室的窗子,向里面丟石頭,把老師的茶杯打碎了好幾個(gè),結(jié)果被校長(zhǎng)當(dāng)場(chǎng)抓住了,氣的班主任當(dāng)著我的面掉眼淚,開(kāi)學(xué)后我被罰掃了一個(gè)學(xué)期的包干區(qū)。這件事的對(duì)我感觸還是挺大的,我決心要好好讀書(shū),給老師留一個(gè)好印象。小學(xué)畢業(yè)我考上了重點(diǎn)中學(xué)衢州二中。但是讀高中時(shí)我又放松了對(duì)自己的要求,迷上了打籃球,踢足球等活動(dòng),也結(jié)交了一幫不愛(ài)讀書(shū)的球友,平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)不抓緊,對(duì)父母的監(jiān)督和嘮叨表現(xiàn)出很強(qiáng)的逆反心理,總覺(jué)得自己聰明學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)能趕得
上。結(jié)果高考時(shí)發(fā)揮失常,本科線(xiàn)第一志愿沒(méi)有入取,母親堅(jiān)持讓我學(xué)醫(yī),所以我到浙江中醫(yī)藥大學(xué)中西醫(yī)臨床專(zhuān)業(yè)讀了專(zhuān)科。我的人生經(jīng)歷了第一次打擊,也出現(xiàn)第一次心理低谷,原來(lái)自信的我,進(jìn)入大學(xué)后變得有些自卑,總覺(jué)得的自己不如那些本科生,畢業(yè)后找不到好工作。幸虧細(xì)心的母親發(fā)現(xiàn)了我的心理變化,她勸導(dǎo)我,鼓勵(lì)我讓我放下了思想包袱,慢慢恢復(fù)了我的自信心,不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨怎能見(jiàn)彩虹,沒(méi)有蛻變哪能有成功,所以我相信這是我人生中的第一次考驗(yàn),漸漸的我不再自卑,開(kāi)始從挫折中學(xué)會(huì)堅(jiān)強(qiáng),從失敗中吸取教訓(xùn),在以后的大學(xué)生活里我認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí),積極參加課外活動(dòng),得到了比較全面的發(fā)展?,F(xiàn)在想想,那時(shí)的打擊又何嘗不是生活的另一種美好,她教會(huì)我生命有兩種情況在延伸著,每一刻都要我重新審視自己,該如何走的更好。我應(yīng)該感謝這段挫折經(jīng)歷,是它讓我逐漸走向了成熟。我的努力學(xué)習(xí)最終得到了回報(bào),畢業(yè)后我參加衢州市人民醫(yī)院的事業(yè)編制考
二、職業(yè)行為分析
(一)我為什么想要成為一名心理咨詢(xún)師
1、從工作情況看,我有必要掌握心理咨詢(xún)工作的能力。
我在衢州市人民醫(yī)院的工作崗位是急診內(nèi)科醫(yī)師。剛參加工作,親眼看到了書(shū)本上的所描述的病例,感到很新鮮也很好奇,工作和學(xué)習(xí)的積極性很高,一年多的病房輪轉(zhuǎn)下來(lái),覺(jué)得自己的醫(yī)療水平不錯(cuò)了,什么疾病都見(jiàn)識(shí)過(guò)了,也都能診斷和治療了。2002年我開(kāi)始單獨(dú)上門(mén)診和值夜班。我發(fā)現(xiàn)很多疾病并不像我想的那樣簡(jiǎn)單,我遇到了很多軀體疾病合并心理疾病的患者,特別是慢性病患者,如糖尿病、高血壓、腫瘤等疾病患者,他們多多少少都有心理問(wèn)題,痛苦、焦慮、抑郁,甚至因自殺而來(lái)院搶救。有很多病人能忍受疾病引起的痛苦或不適,但對(duì)癥狀或疾病的意義產(chǎn)生了誤解,引起了嚴(yán)重的心理問(wèn)題,甚至大過(guò)于原發(fā)病對(duì)身體的影響,我認(rèn)識(shí)到心理問(wèn)題給人們帶來(lái)的困擾最終會(huì)在健康狀態(tài)上得到充分的反應(yīng)。隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展和醫(yī)療水平的提高,慢性病與行為和心理相關(guān)性疾病已成為疾病譜的主流,傳統(tǒng)的生物醫(yī)學(xué)模式已越來(lái)越顯得陳舊,這種醫(yī)學(xué)模式只顧疾病的診治,而忽視病人的多方面需要,特別是忽視對(duì)病人心理問(wèn)題解決,導(dǎo)致試,以?xún)?yōu)異的成績(jī)成為三級(jí)醫(yī)院的一名醫(yī)生。
了社會(huì)對(duì)醫(yī)療服務(wù)的巨大不滿(mǎn)。目前我們國(guó)家已經(jīng)提出了集生物-心理-社會(huì)為一體的整體臨床醫(yī)學(xué)模式,所以我覺(jué)的我有必要學(xué)習(xí)和掌握心理咨詢(xún)知識(shí)。2010年我通過(guò)國(guó)家公務(wù)員考試,成為浙江省十里豐監(jiān)獄的一名醫(yī)務(wù)民警。在工作中我面對(duì)的是一群特殊的病人,他們既是病人又是罪犯,所以有心理問(wèn)題的人特別多,這讓我更加迫切地想成為一名心理咨詢(xún)師。
2、從主觀(guān)上看,我熱愛(ài)心理咨詢(xún)這項(xiàng)工作。
2011年單位安排我參加了心理咨詢(xún)師的培訓(xùn),隨著進(jìn)一步深入系統(tǒng)地學(xué)習(xí)了心理學(xué)的有關(guān)知識(shí),我被它無(wú)窮的魅力深深吸引了。我試著對(duì)我們單位的犯人開(kāi)展一些心理健康輔導(dǎo),我看到有的犯人精神狀態(tài)有了明顯的改善,我的心理也感到了極大的欣慰。這段經(jīng)歷,不僅使我和心理健康工作結(jié)下了不解之緣,而且讓我愛(ài)上了這項(xiàng)工作并決心致力于心理健康方面的實(shí)踐和研究,我對(duì)成為一名合格的心理咨詢(xún)師的信心越來(lái)越足了。
3、從行業(yè)的發(fā)展上看,心理咨詢(xún)師的前景對(duì)我有很大吸引力。當(dāng)今世界,發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家的心理咨詢(xún)不管在技術(shù)層面還是在制度層面都相對(duì)成熟,心理咨詢(xún)師的社會(huì)地位和收入待遇都較高。在中國(guó)心理咨詢(xún)行業(yè)還處在起步階段,但隨著社會(huì)生活壓力不斷增大,慢性病患者的不斷增多,有心理問(wèn)題的人會(huì)越來(lái)越多,心理咨詢(xún)將會(huì)得到人們普遍的認(rèn)識(shí)和接受。心理咨詢(xún)行業(yè)具有巨大的發(fā)展?jié)撃芎涂臻g。我希望自己可以在歷史的潮流中,抓住機(jī)遇,在有限的生命里體現(xiàn)個(gè)人更大的價(jià)值。
(二)我成為心理咨詢(xún)師的優(yōu)勢(shì)和和弱點(diǎn)是什么
優(yōu)勢(shì) :
1、我熱愛(ài)我的工作,從內(nèi)心深處希望能夠幫助我周?chē)娜藬[脫心理障礙。
2、從人格和能力看,我能成為一個(gè)合格心理咨詢(xún)師。首先,我認(rèn)為自己具備成為一個(gè)合格心理咨詢(xún)師的個(gè)性品質(zhì)。我有較強(qiáng)的責(zé)任心和愛(ài)心,敏感心細(xì),有較強(qiáng)的觀(guān)察能力,有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力,為人隨和熱情具有親和力。其次,我是一名醫(yī)生,11年的醫(yī)務(wù)工作經(jīng)歷,讓我有了較為豐富的臨床經(jīng)驗(yàn),能夠及時(shí)判斷一些心理癥狀,能
夠把一些心理問(wèn)題和軀體疾病結(jié)合起來(lái)治療,更加有助于患者的整體康復(fù)。
3、我目前在監(jiān)獄系統(tǒng)工作,有大量存在心理問(wèn)題的人群,可以讓我去實(shí)踐去摸索。我相信只要我肯花時(shí)間下苦工,我一定能成為一名合格的心理咨詢(xún)師。
弱點(diǎn):
1、我不是心理學(xué)專(zhuān)業(yè)科班出身,理論知識(shí)和專(zhuān)業(yè)技術(shù)都存在一定的缺陷。若要很好的開(kāi)展心理咨詢(xún)工作,還需要到專(zhuān)業(yè)機(jī)構(gòu)進(jìn)一步進(jìn)修學(xué)習(xí)。
2、我做事有時(shí)過(guò)于追求完美,對(duì)一些求助者容易出現(xiàn)反移情現(xiàn)象。
3、長(zhǎng)期從事醫(yī)生工作,更習(xí)慣于以醫(yī)生的角度和口氣說(shuō)服教育,也許會(huì)在今后的咨詢(xún)過(guò)程中無(wú)意識(shí)的體現(xiàn)出來(lái),影響咨詢(xún)效果。
(三)我對(duì)求助者有何期待
1、期待和求助者建立良好的咨詢(xún)關(guān)系。在心理咨詢(xún)的過(guò)程中,我充分認(rèn)識(shí)到與咨詢(xún)理論和技能相比較,和求助者建立良好的咨詢(xún)關(guān)系顯得更為重要。面對(duì)價(jià)值觀(guān)不一樣的求助者,我們應(yīng)該首先尊重他們的價(jià)值觀(guān),無(wú)條件地理解、接納他們,才能將咨詢(xún)的技術(shù)個(gè)性化地應(yīng)用于每一個(gè)求助者。
2、期待求助者能夠給予我信任,肯定咨詢(xún)師的工作價(jià)值。
3、期待我?guī)椭^(guò)的求助者能夠克服心理疾患,健康生活。
(四)我的職業(yè)奮斗目標(biāo)
我的奮斗目標(biāo)是成為一名合格心理咨詢(xún)師,能幫求職者解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題。我希望能成立一個(gè)心理咨詢(xún)門(mén)診。我希望經(jīng)過(guò)我心理輔導(dǎo)的犯人都能用健康的心態(tài)去完成服刑改造,當(dāng)他們重新走向社會(huì)時(shí)都能有積極向上的精神面貌。我希望能在監(jiān)獄系統(tǒng)推廣對(duì)罪犯的心理咨詢(xún)工作,這將有效減少監(jiān)獄出監(jiān)犯人的重新犯罪率。
心理咨詢(xún)既是科學(xué),也是藝術(shù)??茖W(xué)的道理不難理解,而將各種咨詢(xún)的技術(shù)合理地應(yīng)用于每一個(gè)求助者,則不是一件容易的事。作為一個(gè)初學(xué)者我要走的路還很長(zhǎng),千里之行,始于足下,我已經(jīng)做好了充分的準(zhǔn)備為之而奮斗!
第三篇:發(fā)言稿 張帆
首先很高興可以作為學(xué)生代表在這里發(fā)言,在這里我代表和我一樣來(lái)自不同院系的同學(xué)感謝學(xué)校提供給我們一個(gè)如此優(yōu)質(zhì)的交流平臺(tái),我們因此有了一個(gè)可以提升自我的機(jī)會(huì)。同時(shí)也衷心的祝賀在座的各位同學(xué),因?yàn)槟塬@得坐在這里的一張門(mén)票實(shí)在也不是很容易,盡管我們還不敢妄稱(chēng)精英,但從此刻起我們就開(kāi)始被貼上不同的標(biāo)簽,因?yàn)槟茏谶@里的,也不過(guò)才五十人而已。
在清華,有百年領(lǐng)軍人物的培養(yǎng)計(jì)劃,這與我們的訓(xùn)練營(yíng)培養(yǎng)宗旨是相似的。在中國(guó)的其他高校也有各種形式類(lèi)似的組織,學(xué)校會(huì)集中起一批優(yōu)質(zhì)的生源進(jìn)行重點(diǎn)的培養(yǎng)。我們的社會(huì)需要這種精英,而高校也因此責(zé)無(wú)旁貸的承擔(dān)起這樣的一個(gè)責(zé)任。不過(guò)什么是精英?應(yīng)該沒(méi)有人會(huì)給出一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案,同樣它也不需要一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案。我來(lái)自機(jī)電學(xué)院,在面試中我遇見(jiàn)了兩張比較熟悉的面孔,很高興的是我們一起都在這里,之所以面熟,不是因?yàn)橄蚍鹱嫠f(shuō)的前世的一千次回眸,而是我們屬于一個(gè)另外的集體—哈工大第四黨支部。我們?nèi)齻€(gè)都是預(yù)備黨員,在一個(gè)以精英著稱(chēng)的集體中看到如此多的黨員還是很令人振奮的,在座的我們中每一個(gè)人已經(jīng)或即將都會(huì)成為一名黨員,我們有理由活躍在校園的各個(gè)舞臺(tái)上,而這也是我們來(lái)到這里提升我們的原因,盡管只有短短的兩個(gè)月,但只要有舞臺(tái)的地方,我們還會(huì)重逢,不過(guò)希望你們可以比我幸運(yùn),碰到的不僅僅是漢子,還可以有妹子。
似乎我還有一個(gè)與你們不一樣的身份,我是一名國(guó)防生,我的入學(xué)成績(jī)的確你倒著看或與會(huì)比較方便找一些,在這里我或許可以正著數(shù),原因很簡(jiǎn)單,因?yàn)槿瞬皇呛芏?,看到最后一名也不是很費(fèi)勁。不過(guò)盡管如此,能和在座的各位坐在一起我還是很高興,我生活在與你們略有不同的集體中,如果你略有注意的話(huà),最近每周三周五會(huì)有一群穿著迷彩服的大約100左右在跑操,同時(shí)這也是我們集體打卡的時(shí)間。我們是校園里或許比較特殊的群體,因?yàn)楫?dāng)初的選擇注定會(huì)與你們的人生道路有所不同,或許我們?cè)谌雽W(xué)的那一刻起并沒(méi)有你們的成績(jī)優(yōu)秀,因?yàn)槲疫€記得當(dāng)初開(kāi)學(xué)時(shí)導(dǎo)員跟我說(shuō)往屆國(guó)防生的成績(jī)不是很好,要我努力學(xué)習(xí),我們似乎貼上了被前輩們留下的標(biāo)簽,似乎被穿上了弱者的戲服,我不敢為我們這個(gè)團(tuán)體代言什么,但希望有一天能和你們坐在一起的我只不過(guò)是團(tuán)體中很普通的一位。
最后,我好像忘記點(diǎn)什么,毋庸置疑,在未來(lái)的兩個(gè)月我們會(huì)收獲很多,會(huì)有一個(gè)很大的提升,在這里,我想與你們分享的是我一直未改變過(guò)的一個(gè)夢(mèng)想。我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想,我夢(mèng)想著有一天農(nóng)民工的孩子可以和我們的孩子坐在同一間明亮的教室里去享受到這個(gè)國(guó)家承諾給他們太久的教育公平。我夢(mèng)想著有一天我也可已在一間教室里撐起一片可以看到外面的世界,成為一個(gè)真正大寫(xiě)的人,一撇一捺之間,傳遞的是夢(mèng)想與知識(shí)。我希望我的夢(mèng)想有一天會(huì)成為我們共同的夢(mèng)想。在這里我將會(huì)與諸位一同去樹(shù)立起精英的意識(shí),將在這里所學(xué)到東西內(nèi)化到心靈的深處,有一天我們將會(huì)將這種力量外化出去帶動(dòng)更多的人,卓越更多人的未來(lái)。我們也將會(huì)十分珍惜這樣的一次機(jī)會(huì),因?yàn)闆](méi)有一個(gè)人不為自己坐在這里而感到驕傲的,我知道在訓(xùn)練營(yíng)的過(guò)程中我們會(huì)遇到很多困難,但如同我們從不同方向匯聚于此,還沒(méi)有哪一種困難能壓低我們夢(mèng)想的地平線(xiàn),我們是精英,將會(huì)在不久的將來(lái)去證明給你們看。在這里我們值得驕傲的不僅僅是成績(jī),這將不僅僅是一個(gè)成績(jī)優(yōu)異的集體,而是一片蘊(yùn)含無(wú)限潛力沃土,有一天井噴出的將是這個(gè)集體巨大的能量,我們因此去承擔(dān)起自己的責(zé)任,為有一天真正被打上精英的標(biāo)簽而奮斗。而我們也決不會(huì)成為流水線(xiàn)上所生產(chǎn)的的精英,因?yàn)槲覀兠總€(gè)人都將是絕版,我們會(huì)為一張獨(dú)一無(wú)二專(zhuān)屬的編號(hào)去變得卓越的與眾不同。
最后,希望大家會(huì)一起度過(guò)愉快的兩個(gè)月,同時(shí)也希望,有一天,我們?cè)谶@里的一幕將成為下一屆所神往場(chǎng)景,有一天,我們?yōu)檫@里代言。
第四篇:供應(yīng)鏈實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告-張帆(模版)
供應(yīng)鏈實(shí)驗(yàn)報(bào)告
專(zhuān)業(yè):工商管理
班級(jí):工管09
5姓名:張帆
學(xué)號(hào):2009160112
41一、實(shí)驗(yàn)?zāi)康模?/p>
1.熟練掌握系統(tǒng)管理的設(shè)置操作員、建立賬套和設(shè)置操作員權(quán)限的方法。2.掌握基礎(chǔ)設(shè)置的基礎(chǔ)信息建立方法,如部門(mén)職員檔案、供應(yīng)商檔案、客戶(hù)檔案、財(cái)務(wù)會(huì)計(jì)核算檔案、存貨檔案、倉(cāng)庫(kù)檔案、采購(gòu)和銷(xiāo)售類(lèi)型等。3.能熟練進(jìn)行賬套的輸出和引入處理。
4.能熟練運(yùn)用采購(gòu)管理系統(tǒng)對(duì)普通采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)進(jìn)行處理。
5.能夠與應(yīng)付款管理系統(tǒng)、總賬系統(tǒng)集成使用,以便及時(shí)處理采購(gòu)款項(xiàng),并對(duì)采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的賬務(wù)處理。
6.能運(yùn)用銷(xiāo)售管理系統(tǒng)對(duì)普通銷(xiāo)售業(yè)務(wù)進(jìn)行處理,以便及時(shí)確認(rèn)銷(xiāo)售收入,確認(rèn)并收取應(yīng)收款項(xiàng)。
7.熟練掌握采購(gòu)管理系統(tǒng)和銷(xiāo)售管理系統(tǒng)中統(tǒng)計(jì)賬表的查詢(xún)。
二、實(shí)驗(yàn)內(nèi)容:
(一)、普通采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)
(二)、普通銷(xiāo)售業(yè)務(wù)
三、實(shí)驗(yàn)器材:
硬件:處理器:Intel(R)Pentium(R)4CPU
主板:Intel Corporation D915 PDT
內(nèi)存:DDR400 512MB;硬盤(pán):WD160G.SSTA;顯卡:ATA X300SE;顯示器:冠杰 17吋液晶
軟件:Microsoft Windows XP金蝶K
3四、實(shí)驗(yàn)步驟:
(一)、普通采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)
1、采購(gòu)系統(tǒng)初始化
2、啟用期初數(shù)據(jù)
3、期初記賬
4、普通采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)
(1)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——采購(gòu)管理——請(qǐng)購(gòu)——請(qǐng)購(gòu)單(2)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——采購(gòu)管理——采購(gòu)訂貨——采購(gòu)訂單(3)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——采購(gòu)管理——采購(gòu)到貨——到貨單
(4)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——庫(kù)存管理——入庫(kù)業(yè)務(wù)——采購(gòu)入庫(kù)單
(5)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——采購(gòu)管理——采購(gòu)發(fā)票——專(zhuān)用采購(gòu)發(fā)票
(6)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——存貨核算——業(yè)務(wù)核算——正常單據(jù)記賬
(7)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——存貨核算——財(cái)務(wù)核算——生成憑證
(8)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——財(cái)務(wù)會(huì)計(jì)——應(yīng)付款管理——應(yīng)付單據(jù)處理
二、普通銷(xiāo)售業(yè)務(wù)
1、設(shè)置銷(xiāo)售管理系統(tǒng)參數(shù)
有委托代銷(xiāo)業(yè)務(wù) 有零售日?qǐng)?bào)業(yè)務(wù) 有分期收款業(yè)務(wù) 直運(yùn)銷(xiāo)售業(yè)務(wù) 銷(xiāo)售生成出庫(kù)單 普通銷(xiāo)售必有訂單
新增發(fā)貨單參照訂單生成新增退貨單、新增發(fā)票參照發(fā)貨單生成 其他設(shè)置由系統(tǒng)默認(rèn)2、3、單據(jù)設(shè)置
允許手工修改銷(xiāo)售專(zhuān)用發(fā)票號(hào)。
4、銷(xiāo)售管理系統(tǒng)期初數(shù)(銷(xiāo)售系統(tǒng)價(jià)格均為不含稅價(jià))
5、普通銷(xiāo)售業(yè)務(wù)(1)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——銷(xiāo)售管理——銷(xiāo)售報(bào)價(jià)——銷(xiāo)售報(bào)價(jià)單(2)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——銷(xiāo)售管理——銷(xiāo)售訂貨——銷(xiāo)售訂單
(3)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——銷(xiāo)售管理——銷(xiāo)售發(fā)貨——發(fā)貨單
(4)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——庫(kù)存管理——出庫(kù)業(yè)務(wù)——銷(xiāo)售出庫(kù)單
(5)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——銷(xiāo)售管理——銷(xiāo)售開(kāi)票——銷(xiāo)售專(zhuān)用發(fā)票
(6)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——存貨核算——業(yè)務(wù)核算——正常單據(jù)記賬
(7)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——財(cái)務(wù)會(huì)計(jì)——總賬——憑證——填制憑證
(8)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——供應(yīng)鏈——銷(xiāo)售管理——費(fèi)用支出——銷(xiāo)售費(fèi)用支出單
(9)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——財(cái)務(wù)會(huì)計(jì)——應(yīng)收款管理——應(yīng)收單據(jù)處理——應(yīng)收單據(jù)錄 入
(10)、業(yè)務(wù)工作——財(cái)務(wù)會(huì)計(jì)——總賬——憑證——填制憑證
應(yīng)收款管理系統(tǒng)參數(shù)設(shè)置初始設(shè)置
應(yīng)收款管理系統(tǒng)選項(xiàng)
五、實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)論:
供應(yīng)鏈?zhǔn)菄@核心企業(yè),通過(guò)對(duì)信息流、物流、資金流的控制,從采購(gòu)原材料開(kāi)始,制成中間產(chǎn)品以及最終產(chǎn)品,最后由銷(xiāo)售網(wǎng)絡(luò)把產(chǎn)品送到消費(fèi)者手中的將供應(yīng)商、制造商、分銷(xiāo)商、零售商、直到最終用戶(hù)連成一個(gè)整體的功能網(wǎng)鏈結(jié)構(gòu)。它不僅是一條連接供應(yīng)商到用戶(hù)的物流鏈、信息鏈、資金鏈,而且是一條增值鏈,物料在供應(yīng)鏈上因加工、包裝、運(yùn)輸?shù)冗^(guò)程而增加其價(jià)值,給相關(guān)企業(yè)帶來(lái)收益。
先是對(duì)采購(gòu)管理的學(xué)習(xí),也就是普通采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)。采購(gòu)管理是計(jì)劃下達(dá)、采購(gòu)單生成、采購(gòu)單執(zhí)行、到貨接收、檢驗(yàn)入庫(kù)、采購(gòu)發(fā)票的收集到采購(gòu)結(jié)算的采購(gòu)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程,對(duì)采購(gòu)過(guò)程中物流運(yùn)動(dòng)的各個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)狀態(tài)進(jìn)行嚴(yán)密的跟蹤、監(jiān)督,實(shí)現(xiàn)對(duì)企業(yè)采購(gòu)活動(dòng)執(zhí)行過(guò)程的科學(xué)管理。正常的采購(gòu)業(yè)務(wù)一般由請(qǐng)購(gòu)、采購(gòu)訂貨、采購(gòu)到貨、采購(gòu)入庫(kù)、開(kāi)具采購(gòu)發(fā)票、采購(gòu)結(jié)算等步驟組成,然后是對(duì)銷(xiāo)售管理的學(xué)習(xí),銷(xiāo)售管理是為了實(shí)現(xiàn)各種組織目標(biāo),創(chuàng)造、建立和保持與目標(biāo)市場(chǎng)之間的有益交換和聯(lián)系而設(shè)計(jì)的方案的分析、計(jì)劃、執(zhí)行和控制。通過(guò)計(jì)劃、執(zhí)行及控制企業(yè)的銷(xiāo)售活動(dòng),以達(dá)到企業(yè)的銷(xiāo)售目標(biāo)。銷(xiāo)售管理的流程包括銷(xiāo)售報(bào)價(jià)、銷(xiāo)售訂單、發(fā)貨、開(kāi)票等基本流程,也包括運(yùn)費(fèi)墊付等常有的相關(guān)業(yè)務(wù)的處理。從實(shí)驗(yàn)的細(xì)節(jié)中我們可以看出,企業(yè)對(duì)銷(xiāo)售環(huán)節(jié)的控制是非常重要的,U8系統(tǒng)的銷(xiāo)售訂單中列出兩項(xiàng)“報(bào)價(jià)”、“單價(jià)”,這就能夠讓管理者能夠清楚的了解到每一筆訂單的報(bào)價(jià)售價(jià)情況,即使是在對(duì)銷(xiāo)售業(yè)務(wù)不熟悉的情況下也能夠及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)異常,并對(duì)銷(xiāo)售部門(mén)的業(yè)務(wù)操作進(jìn)行監(jiān)管,防止出現(xiàn)假公濟(jì)私的情況出現(xiàn)。通過(guò)這次實(shí)習(xí)對(duì)供應(yīng)鏈的了解和學(xué)習(xí),剛開(kāi)始實(shí)習(xí)時(shí),以為實(shí)習(xí)應(yīng)該會(huì)很輕松,看到實(shí)習(xí)材料時(shí)才知道這次實(shí)習(xí)還是比較難的,首先就是大量數(shù)據(jù)的輸入和軟件的操作對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)都是一個(gè)難題,但我沒(méi)有松懈,而是按照老師的講解和書(shū)上的步驟,雖然跟著書(shū)上的步驟一步一步來(lái),數(shù)據(jù)輸入正確后還是會(huì)出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題,但是在老師的幫助下,我慢慢的解決了問(wèn)題,而且軟件的操作對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)還是比較陌生,在對(duì)軟件進(jìn)行操作時(shí),總是會(huì)出現(xiàn)這樣那樣的問(wèn)題和麻煩,剛開(kāi)始我試著自己解決問(wèn)題,但由于我在對(duì)軟件不熟悉,操作也不熟練的情況下,我自己是不能解決問(wèn)題的,最后只能求助老師,在老師的幫助下,我才能解決它,并最終完成了這次對(duì)供應(yīng)鏈管理的實(shí)習(xí),通過(guò)這次實(shí)習(xí),我學(xué)到了很多供應(yīng)鏈的知識(shí),供應(yīng)鏈對(duì)企業(yè)的發(fā)展影響非常之大,而且供應(yīng)鏈的過(guò)程和業(yè)務(wù)比較復(fù)雜,因此對(duì)管理人員數(shù)據(jù)準(zhǔn)確的輸入和操作要求比較嚴(yán)格。老師對(duì)我們的幫助是非常重要的,有老師的幫助,我們才能完成對(duì)供應(yīng)鏈的學(xué)習(xí)。
感謝老師在實(shí)習(xí)過(guò)程中對(duì)我們的講解和幫助
第五篇:中考作文分析
九年級(jí)中考作文指導(dǎo)
典型例句 1.one +of + 形容詞最高級(jí)+ 名詞復(fù)數(shù)One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.2.It's our duty to do sthIt's our duty to help them.3.As….as possibleWe shoud help them as much as possible.4.here be...Here are lots of things we can do.5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.6.make +sb+ 形容詞It makes many people homeless.7.too …..to They are too young to look after themselves
一、健康問(wèn)題(熱點(diǎn))健康問(wèn)題是中考??嫉脑?huà)題,出題形式多樣,有必要下苦功掌握。典型例句 1.It is very important to keep healthy。2.How can we keep healthy?3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late。
4.We should eat the food healthily。5.We should do more exercise。6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。
7.I didn't feel like eating anything。8.I decided to see the doctor。9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
11.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。例文
1、簡(jiǎn)要介紹一下如何才能保持健康,并展開(kāi)想象,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考答案: All of us want to be healthy.First,we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問(wèn)題我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛(ài)健康”為題的主題班會(huì),寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的演講槁。保持健康的重要性,保持健康的方法,保持健康的結(jié)論,1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強(qiáng)體;3.鄙棄不良習(xí)慣,(你的看法?),How to stay our health /fit?范文 Dear boys and girls :
Here is my advice about how to keep health? Today many teenagers are unhealthy,because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from drugs.Early to bed early to get up.Breathe the fresh air in the open air.you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals,Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next,keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or
smoke.They are bad for your health.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3、根據(jù)中英文提示,寫(xiě)出內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯的稿件。有寫(xiě)學(xué)生不愛(ài)吃學(xué)校的午飯,常到校外去吃他們所喜歡吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他們的身體健康。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇討論稿,談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。范文:We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat.But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.二、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)問(wèn)題(熱點(diǎn))環(huán)境保護(hù)問(wèn)題是中考熱門(mén)話(huà)題,難度較大,必須掌握。典型句子 1.It’s our duty to save wate 2.As we know , water is very important to man,3.we can’t live without water.4.But some people don’t care about it.5.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.6.Many rivers and lakes are polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.7.It's our duty to protect our environment。
8.It is very important to take care of our environment
9.We shouldn’t throw litter on to the ground10.We should not spit in a public place11.We should plant more flowers and trees。
12.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.、6月5日(June 5)是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日,我們周?chē)沫h(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕,污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重??。假如你是學(xué)生Jone.,你校要進(jìn)行“如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?”演講比賽,要求:
1、舉例說(shuō)明環(huán)境存在的問(wèn)題
2、如何保護(hù)好我們的環(huán)境,采取怎樣的措施,舉例說(shuō)明,字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。Dear headmasters,teachers,classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.Some people even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something to protect the environment..But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike.we can use shopping basskets not plastic bags.when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be
less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.Thanks!
4、保護(hù)環(huán)境。從2008年6月1日起,國(guó)家將禁止商家免費(fèi)提供塑料袋,掀起全國(guó)“拒塑”的環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)。假如你是李華,準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題,寫(xiě)一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語(yǔ)演講稿。參考作文:What Can We Do for the EnvironmentHello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
5.環(huán)境問(wèn)題:今天環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕,環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作,學(xué)習(xí),生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重..,如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示:存在問(wèn)題:1.水污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重 4.白色垃圾等。要求:如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境? 80字左右的。范文: How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollutionis worse and worse /more and more seriouslytoday.Water is polluted ,we have nocleanwater todrinkMany trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less.Somefactories is poring dirtyair in the sky , the populationis increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a greataffectionin thefuture.people's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect ourworld.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle ,reduce ,reusethings.Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t useplastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hopeour world is more andmore beautiful.6.為了保護(hù)地球有限的資源,我們應(yīng)該采取什么措施呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的短文,短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出。提示詞;1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources 參考作文:
Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them, something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.No water, no life.So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity.It is crucial.We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.三、語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí),這是中考中的老話(huà)題,形式多樣。典型例句 1.My favorite subject is English。2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful。
5.So English is very important and I like English very much。6.We have a lot of fun in the English class。
7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。
8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。9.I like English and try my best to learn it。
例文Ellen看到大家都對(duì)自己的未來(lái)充滿(mǎn)期待,感到特別高興。為了鼓勵(lì)大家學(xué)好英語(yǔ),他準(zhǔn)備出一期英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流專(zhuān)刊。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題和答案的提示并結(jié)合你的實(shí)際情況,以“My English Learning”為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三個(gè)問(wèn)題,并且不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和縣名等。提示: When did you start learning English?(in ? /?years ago)How do you learn English?(listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)What is difficult to learn?(listening, grammar…)What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?(watch English movies, sing English songs…)參考作文: English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.2、假設(shè)你叫李華,你的英國(guó)筆友Linda為了來(lái)中國(guó)參觀(guān)奧運(yùn)會(huì)而報(bào)名參加漢語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。她最近寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示和你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的體會(huì)給Linda寫(xiě)一封回信。注意:1.回信要包括全部要點(diǎn);2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 3.字?jǐn)?shù)60左右。參考作文: Dear Linda,I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games.I know it isn’t
easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.Firstly, it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class.Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.Then try to listen and read more in Chinese.What’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don’t give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I’m sure you will succeed through your hard work.Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.Yours,Li Hua
四、興趣與愛(ài)好(熱點(diǎn))興趣愛(ài)好是中考??荚?huà)題,1、介紹你的興趣愛(ài)好My HobbyI am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3.Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.One of my favourite hobby is reading.Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters.It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability.When reading, I can learn a lot.Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like.Reading Scorates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are.Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.Reading really affect my life.2、我的愛(ài)好(My hobby)Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine readers.?What exactly your hobby is;?When and how you became interested in this hobby;?Why you enjoy your hobby;?About your hopes and plans for the future.寫(xiě)作要求: 1.根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)拓展想象空間,靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。2.條理清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)60-80.My hobby is reading books When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Bookscan also teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.五、寫(xiě)人記事篇 ,這是中考出項(xiàng)頻率最高的話(huà)題,其特點(diǎn)是難度相對(duì)較小,學(xué)生都有話(huà)可寫(xiě),但掌握一些基本句子和模仿范文對(duì)奪取高分非常必要。典型例句
1.His name is Jack。2.He was born in London in 1982。
3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。4.He is 20 years old。5.He comes from England。6.He is a good ping-pong player。7.He is medium build。8.He has short hair。
9.He is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us。
10.He teaches English very well.11.He works hard.He works in No.5 Middle School。12.He loves watching football games after work。13.He often helps me with my English。14.At the age of six, he began to play football
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1、假如你是李華,你從報(bào)紙上看到2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者的招聘廣告。請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)封
簡(jiǎn)短的應(yīng)聘信,介紹自己的情況(見(jiàn)下表)表示愿意為奧運(yùn)會(huì)做一些工作,請(qǐng)組委會(huì)給予考慮,并能盡早予以答復(fù),詞數(shù):80左右。姓名:李華,年齡: 16。簡(jiǎn)歷 : 我市某中學(xué)學(xué)生。愛(ài)好 :繪畫(huà)、體育、唱歌、演講、英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)。獲獎(jiǎng)情況 :2007年12月獲我市中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng) 身體狀況:健康。聯(lián)系電話(huà): 0594--1356666。提示詞匯:1.志愿者voluteer2.作為work as3.答復(fù)reply to4.比賽contest
Sir/Madam,I read your ad.in the newspaper yesterday.I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics.My name is Li Hua.I’m sixteen.I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English.I am proud that I won the first prize in our city’s English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact I’m healthy and strong.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well.Please reply to me soon.My telephone number is 0594—1356666.Yours sincerely
Li Hua3.、回顧初中三年成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程,你一定有很多感受,從學(xué)習(xí),生活,愛(ài)好等方面作出自我評(píng)價(jià)(畢業(yè) 回顧評(píng)價(jià))I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math and physics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School.旅游和介紹地方篇(熱點(diǎn))中考高頻率話(huà)題,出題形式靈活。典型例句
1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…),it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)
2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to ?with my friends by bike 3.We enjoyed ourselves。4.We forgot the time.We didn't come back until 5 o'clock。5.Wefelt very tired, but we were happy6.I thought I would never forget this trip。7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。8.We visited a lot of places of interest。9.We had a good time there。10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap。
4、請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為劉公島寫(xiě)一篇題為Welcome to Liu Gong Island 的旅游宣傳材料。要點(diǎn): 劉公島概況威海東部,島長(zhǎng)4.08km,寬1.5km, 面積:3.15km2, 距陸地船程20 分鐘,花草樹(shù)木覆蓋,歷史博物館、動(dòng)物園等景點(diǎn),水、陸環(huán)島游等活動(dòng) 交通方式 :(來(lái)威海)汽車(chē)、火車(chē)、飛機(jī)等,交通便利。瀏覽時(shí)間: 一天 ,要求:1.包括以上要點(diǎn),但不拘泥于其順序,適當(dāng)使用描繪性語(yǔ)言,展示劉公島魅力。2.詞數(shù)100 詞左右(已給出的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾不計(jì)入詞數(shù))。Welcome to Liu Gong Island
The summer vacation is coming.Where would you like to visit? Haven’t you decided?
Come to Liu Gong Island!Liu Gong Island is in the east of Weihai, which has an area of 3.15km2.It is 4.08 km long, 1.5km wide.It will take you 20 minutes to get the island from the travel port by ship.The history museum on the island is educational.The zoo is interesting to visit.And it is more interesting to travel around the island either on land or by boat.There are all kinds of trees and grass everywhere.It’s very easy to travel to Weihai.You can come by bus, by train, or by plane.You can spend a day happily on the island.It is a good place to visit.Visitors from all over the world come to visit it every year.Wish you a good trip.六、新生事物評(píng)價(jià)(熱點(diǎn)),需要學(xué)生掌握方法,和基本句式,以做到考試時(shí)心中不亂。典型例句 1.Computer is becoming more and more important
2.we should make good use of it.3.It maybe get in the way of our study.4.We can do lots of things with it。5.It makes our life more easy
6.Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.例文
1、網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物Doing Shopping Online
With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job.Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished.You needn't step out of the room.It seems easy and quick.But there's always a trap online.If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble.You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big.If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.2、關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī) 贊成意見(jiàn):1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì),手機(jī)是最快的信息交流工具之一。2.應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)。如偶遇突發(fā)事故,可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。3.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。4.只要正確使用好手機(jī),緊跟時(shí)間并無(wú)過(guò)錯(cuò),追求時(shí)尚可以理解,但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。反對(duì)意見(jiàn):1.學(xué)校已提供了公共電話(huà),因此手機(jī)并不能帶來(lái)更多的方便,而且花費(fèi)較多。2.若課堂接聽(tīng)手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課。3.學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信,將無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。注意:1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)和連接詞,使文章通順連貫;開(kāi)頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.詞數(shù):80左右;參考作文:
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there’s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There’re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies.In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.1.我的夢(mèng)想是當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生(my dream is doctor): I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.May let the human change the health.At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully.Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.2.以后十年內(nèi)我的生活(MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS)In ten years,I think I 'll be a reporter.I wiil live in an apartement with my sister.Because I don't like living alone.And I can play with her inth aparement.So in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and I willgo to another places on business.In ten years,i will have many different pets.Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time.And I will go to london on my vacation.So,my life in ten years will be better and better!
七、煩惱篇 這類(lèi)作文難度較大,掌握基本句式,背誦范文非常必要。典型例句
1.I am sorry to hear that……2.you shoud learn to forget…… 3.you had better……4 you shoud learn to relax5.you can ask your teacher for help例文,假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發(fā)來(lái)的e-mail,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)e-mail 的內(nèi)容給她寫(xiě)一封回信,與她交流看法,并幫她排憂(yōu)解難。提示詞語(yǔ):listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smileDear Han Mei,I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so on.I'm annoyed(煩惱)。What shall I do?AliceDear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.