第一篇：2008年廣東省高考英語試卷及其作文評(píng)析

2008年廣東省高考英語試卷及其作文評(píng)析

試題評(píng)析：

今年的廣東卷英語題充分體現(xiàn)了《普通高中英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》對(duì)高中英語教學(xué)的要求，繼承了去年高考(Q吧)題的命題意向、題型和結(jié)構(gòu)。與去年的題目相比，語法填空和寫作部分比較容易，閱讀理解部分解題難度加大?？傮w而言，今年的題目主要有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：

1．強(qiáng)調(diào)文化意識(shí)：在聽力理解、完形填空、語法填空和閱讀理解等幾個(gè)部分都滲透了中國和西方文化的元素。中國的“春節(jié)“、”十二生肖“、經(jīng)典故事“拔苗助長”以及英國的關(guān)于“被偷換的小孩”的神話傳說和托爾斯泰筆下的拿破侖等內(nèi)容都被納入。這對(duì)教師和學(xué)生重視跨文化知識(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)起著很好的促進(jìn)作用。

２．時(shí)代感強(qiáng)：主要體現(xiàn)在閱讀理解和基礎(chǔ)寫作部分。閱讀理解的選材涉及現(xiàn)代父母與孩子間的關(guān)系，題材時(shí)尚。而基礎(chǔ)寫作部分與當(dāng)前世界關(guān)注的奧運(yùn)會(huì)有關(guān)。

３．貼近學(xué)生：在閱讀和寫作部分皆有體現(xiàn)，尤其是任務(wù)型寫作?！稙榇髮W(xué)生活作準(zhǔn)備》這個(gè)題目對(duì)于正對(duì)大學(xué)生活充滿憧憬的高考考生來說不但有話可寫，而且能幫助他們?yōu)榇髮W(xué)生活提前做好心理上的準(zhǔn)備。

作文評(píng)析：

基礎(chǔ)寫作：

今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作命題切中社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)——奧運(yùn)，具有強(qiáng)烈的時(shí)代感。題目提供的寫作內(nèi)容的排序已成邏輯，不需考生重新安排。寫作的難點(diǎn)主要體現(xiàn)在寫作內(nèi)容的組合方式和詞句的選擇上。其中“1904年中斷和1928年中斷”兩條含有相同內(nèi)容的信息的意義表達(dá)是張顯考生思維能力和語言水平考點(diǎn)，考生應(yīng)采取措施避免表達(dá)的重復(fù)。而“背景”與“現(xiàn)狀”兩方面內(nèi)容的表達(dá)則能體現(xiàn)考生使用復(fù)合句的功力。

任務(wù)型寫作：

“Preparing Myself for College Life”這個(gè)題目貼近考生的生活，引導(dǎo)材料清楚，考生不易跑題。寫作內(nèi)容的彈性很大，考生有盡情發(fā)揮的空間。寫作內(nèi)容符合考生的思維水平和語言表達(dá)水平，整體難度不大。

但審題時(shí)有幾個(gè)易錯(cuò)的點(diǎn)，可能會(huì)對(duì)部分考生造成影響。首先是文體方面。題目要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，這就對(duì)寫作的格式和語氣有特定的要求。其次是人稱方面。應(yīng)該寫自己的感受和打算，而非所有學(xué)生的情況。最后是時(shí)態(tài)方面。寫作的基調(diào)時(shí)態(tài)從過去時(shí)向現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)轉(zhuǎn)移，需要考生有扎實(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)知識(shí)和較好的語篇能力。

第二篇：2013年廣東省高考英語試卷評(píng)析

高三文科生必讀的學(xué)習(xí)方法——高考狀元的學(xué)習(xí)感悟

時(shí)間一分一秒地過去，青春飛逝，讓應(yīng)該用于學(xué)習(xí)的分分秒秒都有收益，應(yīng)該而且必須成為我們每個(gè)同學(xué)腦海中都繃緊的一根弦。如何讓用于學(xué)習(xí)的分分秒秒都有收獲呢，下面這些劉老師摘錄的來自幾年前全國部分省市區(qū)高考狀元們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)也許能給你啟迪。這些材料中介紹了許多高中階段學(xué)習(xí)的令人難忘和羨慕的場(chǎng)景，希望我們每個(gè)同學(xué)也來創(chuàng)造屬于自己的這種場(chǎng)景。

●每一天都非常寶貴

◇很重要的一點(diǎn)，三年的力氣要用勻，千萬不能把賭注都押在高三，準(zhǔn)備奮力一搏，龍門一躍。想努力的話，從高中第一天就開始，然后平靜地走向高考，不必有考前的挑燈夜戰(zhàn)，徹夜不眠。高中三年每一天都非常寶貴，任何一天都不能荒廢。（張涵冰，河北保定17中，文科663分（116，131，139，267），北京大學(xué)）

◇如果你一個(gè)小時(shí)能看兩本書的話，那就不要兩個(gè)小時(shí)看一本書。重視效率就要珍惜時(shí)間。如果你想學(xué)習(xí)好，那么你必須放棄玩，放棄穿戴講究和美食等，時(shí)間對(duì)于參加高考的我們來說太重要重要了！并不是我不喜歡美，世界上好象還沒有不喜歡美的女孩子吧?。ɡ铄\，陜西寶雞中學(xué)，文科645分，北京大學(xué)）

◇和別的同學(xué)一樣，在走過了這一段路后，誰也不愿每天強(qiáng)迫自己做大量的題，沒有什么自由，沒有什么時(shí)間去玩。但我同時(shí)認(rèn)為這一段經(jīng)歷是有價(jià)值的。因?yàn)槲矣凶约旱睦硐?，知道自己為什么而學(xué)習(xí)，自己今天取得的成績既是對(duì)過去的一個(gè)交待，又離自己的目標(biāo)前進(jìn)了一步。（史小楠，北京四中，文科646分（127，127，140，252），北京大學(xué)光華管理學(xué)院金融系）

●學(xué)習(xí)沒有捷徑但有方法

◇“做人一定要努力，不一定是第一名，但你要付出努力，因?yàn)槿绻慌?，你永遠(yuǎn)不能成功更做不了第一名?！睜敔?shù)倪@句話就像一盞航標(biāo)燈，指引著我十幾年的求學(xué)路。學(xué)習(xí)是沒有捷徑的，只有方法，而這種方法要靠自己去摸索，如果不適合自己，別人再好的方法也是沒有用的。（孔霏，吉林長春外國語學(xué)校，文科651分（123，134，139，245），北京大學(xué)法學(xué)系）

●溝通·交流·討論·切磋

◇常與老師溝通：小時(shí)候我特別喜歡提問題，經(jīng)常纏著老師問各種各樣的問題。這種習(xí)慣使我獲益非淺，因?yàn)槔蠋煵坏珜?duì)書本上的知識(shí)掌握得比我們豐富，而且在學(xué)習(xí)方法、學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)等各個(gè)方面都有足夠的積累，可以給我們最正確的指導(dǎo)。因此，我的第一個(gè)成功秘訣是一定要尊重老師的意見，它可以使我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)上事半而功倍。（孔霏，吉林長春外國語學(xué)校，文科651分（123，134，139，245），北京大學(xué)法學(xué)系）

◇我較為內(nèi)向，不善發(fā)問，僅是被動(dòng)接受老師所教的內(nèi)容。經(jīng)過與老師和同學(xué)的交談，我鼓起勇氣開始發(fā)問。最初所問的問題大多是公理、定理等一些客觀公式。但隨著時(shí)間的推移，所問問題也逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橹饔^思辯后所梳理的一些難題，甚至敢于討論老師在教學(xué)過程中出現(xiàn)的些許疏漏。經(jīng)過不斷的鍛煉，才使我由被動(dòng)的學(xué)習(xí)走向主動(dòng)的思考，與老師的關(guān)系也由傳統(tǒng)意義上的師生關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)為朋友關(guān)系。在學(xué)習(xí)過程中放開手腳，多角度全方位地理解問題。記得高中每節(jié)課后，我們都逐漸形成一種習(xí)慣，每當(dāng)下課時(shí)，許多同學(xué)都圍在黑板前共同向老師請(qǐng)教問題。即使暫時(shí)沒有疑問的同學(xué)，也認(rèn)真聽取他人的問題，參與討論。集體的智慧往往能創(chuàng)造出令人滿意的成果，能留下刻骨銘心的印象，集思廣益無異于借他人的腦袋為自己思考。（史方舟，陜西師大附中，理科704分（142，145，141，276），北京大學(xué)金融系）

◇在十幾年的求學(xué)過程中，朝夕相伴的是同學(xué)，所以一定要與同學(xué)相互溝通，絕不能故步自封。如今回頭看一看，我深深地感激我生活著的那個(gè)集體，我一直覺得，如果說我是優(yōu)秀的，那是因?yàn)槲液蛢?yōu)秀的人在一起，才變得優(yōu)秀。在長春外國語學(xué)校度過的寶貴的六年里，我和我的同學(xué)們真誠地相互幫助相互溝通著，我們都深信，只把競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的眼光放在身邊的人身上，是不會(huì)真正地成功的，要學(xué)會(huì)與身邊的人相互學(xué)習(xí)相互促進(jìn)，只有周圍的人都優(yōu)秀了，自己才是真正的優(yōu)秀。即便有的同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)成績不如我，我也會(huì)在他的身上發(fā)現(xiàn)其他值得我學(xué)習(xí)的地方，所謂尺有所短，寸有所長。而正是這樣的一種認(rèn)知使我最終通向了成功。（孔霏，吉林長春外國語學(xué)校，文科651分，北京大學(xué)法學(xué)系）

◇我在學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)，喜歡頻繁地與同學(xué)進(jìn)行熱烈的討論與交流，在活躍而融洽的學(xué)習(xí)氣氛中令自己得到進(jìn)步。學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候集中全部精力去投入，要求自己一定要達(dá)到高效率。（李濱兵，湖南湘鄉(xiāng)一中，文科666分（130，134，133，269），北京大學(xué)）

◇我所在的呼和浩特二中高三3班是個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)氣氛很濃厚的班集體，同學(xué)們自發(fā)地成立了許多個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)小組，相互切磋，討論學(xué)習(xí)。二中推行“開放式學(xué)習(xí)”，經(jīng)常組織同學(xué)們對(duì)各科的重點(diǎn)、難點(diǎn)進(jìn)行討論，大家各抒己見，共同提高。我和 1

同班的另外三名同學(xué)組成一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)組，誰有好的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，心得，或是搞到了一本習(xí)題集，都會(huì)和大家一起分享。結(jié)果這種學(xué)習(xí)方法效果出奇的好，高三全市階段考試，我們四個(gè)人包攬了文科六門功課的第一名！

也許是由于我為人比較熱情，對(duì)于需要幫助的人從來不會(huì)拒絕，所以同學(xué)們遇到難題總愛向我求助。不少同學(xué)都來我家問過題，一呆就是一下午。我從來不覺得被別人占用了這么多時(shí)間是種損失，其實(shí)幫助別人答疑解難的同時(shí)對(duì)自己也是種提高。（羅佳媛，內(nèi)蒙古呼和浩特二中，文科668分（143，125，145，255），北京大學(xué)）

◇賢于己者取其長，不如己者戒其短，等于己者重切磋。宇宙無限，人生有涯，個(gè)人太渺小，群體才萬能，登高能望遠(yuǎn)，天高地自闊。（史方舟，陜西師大附中，理科704分（142，145，141，276），北京大學(xué)金融系）

●全神貫注地投入課堂

◇上課是我最為珍視的環(huán)節(jié)：不要被動(dòng)地聽老師講，而是主動(dòng)地跟上老師的步伐甚至超前一步。全神貫注地投入課堂，揣摩老師的教學(xué)步驟與課本內(nèi)容，常常老師講出前半句，我便能接上后半句，久而久之達(dá)成默契，師生的頭腦融為一體，此時(shí)的課堂不再是枯燥無味，簡直是藝術(shù)享受，趣味無窮。我認(rèn)為，課堂上的45分鐘，頂?shù)蒙险n外通宵達(dá)旦的復(fù)習(xí)和補(bǔ)課。夜自習(xí)是我收集、整理學(xué)習(xí)資料的時(shí)段，我努力做到當(dāng)天的知識(shí)當(dāng)天復(fù)習(xí)，兩三天后進(jìn)行一輪系列復(fù)習(xí)，并做相關(guān)學(xué)習(xí)資料對(duì)知識(shí)進(jìn)行檢測(cè)。（朱蘿伊，浙江象山中學(xué)，文科684分（137，134，133，280），北京大學(xué)）

◇老師都是智者，學(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)鍵是抓緊課堂45分鐘，順著老師的方向復(fù)習(xí)，然后加上自己的理解，融會(huì)貫通，舉一反三，才能收到好的效果。（劉小溪，天津外國語學(xué)院附中，文科654分，北京大學(xué)國際貿(mào)易專業(yè)）

◇不管是文科還是理科，都要重視課堂學(xué)習(xí)，理解老師講的每個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)是關(guān)鍵。在理解的基礎(chǔ)上要往深度、廣度拓展，并利用聯(lián)想記憶、表格記憶等多種方法，進(jìn)行記憶。（劉帆，河南射旗一中，686分（140，144，136，266），清華大學(xué)計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)與技術(shù)專業(yè)）

●凡事預(yù)則立

◇每天應(yīng)有每天的計(jì)劃，每周應(yīng)有每周的計(jì)劃，每月也應(yīng)有每月的計(jì)劃。而自己則要在日末、周末、月末檢查自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況，以及計(jì)劃的完成情況。若自己沒有完成計(jì)劃，則應(yīng)找出自己出現(xiàn)差距的原因，使自己最終能達(dá)到計(jì)劃，甚至超出計(jì)劃。（史小楠，北京四中，文科646分，北京大學(xué)光華管理學(xué)院金融系）

◇“凡事預(yù)則立，不預(yù)則廢。”我十分注意學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃的制定和落實(shí)。學(xué)習(xí)主要靠自己，不能依賴?yán)蠋熀图议L督促，要學(xué)會(huì)自己管自己，制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃。每學(xué)期開學(xué)時(shí)，我都要制定總的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，每月、每周甚至每天都有一個(gè)計(jì)劃，弄清楚自己每月、每周、每天該學(xué)什么，怎樣去學(xué)，學(xué)得怎樣，總結(jié)自己一段時(shí)間里計(jì)劃完成的情況和得失。無論學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)多么繁重，我都每天堅(jiān)持寫日記。在日記里反省、檢討自己，檢查自己學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃完成得怎么樣，剖析自己有那些不足和差距，不時(shí)告誡自己和鼓勵(lì)自己，并不斷地進(jìn)行改正，以取得更大的進(jìn)步。（劉帆，河南射旗一中，686分（140，144，136，266），清華大學(xué)計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)與技術(shù)專業(yè)）

◇兩個(gè)因素助我成功：“萬事靠自己，靠實(shí)力說話”是我的人生格言，自立是我取得成功的一個(gè)重要因素。

計(jì)劃性是我獲得成功的另一重要因素。做每一件事都應(yīng)該有計(jì)劃有步驟地進(jìn)行，有了計(jì)劃，那么做事就會(huì)有條理性。舉個(gè)簡單的例子，在做飯時(shí)要用最短的時(shí)間把飯菜做好，到底是先做飯還是先炒菜呢？或者是同時(shí)做呢？我想每個(gè)人都會(huì)給出答案，那就是找到每個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)的空擋，見縫插針地完成必要的程序。這與學(xué)習(xí)上的用功方法相同。先復(fù)習(xí)哪一科，哪一科需要復(fù)習(xí)多長時(shí)間，這都是需要計(jì)劃來支撐的，不然只會(huì)忙得一團(tuán)糟。遇見任何一件事情我都會(huì)為這件事安排一個(gè)圓滿的計(jì)劃，有時(shí)候詳細(xì)到每一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)的步驟。比如我們喜歡出去玩，路線怎么走，該帶什么東西，遇見下雨或突發(fā)情況怎么處理，什么時(shí)候到哪個(gè)地方，玩多久等都要制定出詳細(xì)的計(jì)劃。做事有計(jì)劃成了我做事的先決條件。（陳健，廣州華師附中，復(fù)旦大學(xué)金融專業(yè)）

◇我有一個(gè)堅(jiān)持多年的習(xí)慣，做圖表。我在學(xué)習(xí)中比較重視總結(jié)，每隔一段時(shí)間便要把學(xué)過的內(nèi)容做成圖表，將題型歸類，對(duì)所學(xué)知識(shí)進(jìn)行一次梳理。我覺得這是一個(gè)非常有效并值得推廣的學(xué)習(xí)方法。（羅佳媛，內(nèi)蒙古呼和浩特二中，文科668分（143，125，145，255），北京大學(xué)）

●“天道酬勤”——投入、執(zhí)著、專注

◇我沒有什么學(xué)習(xí)秘訣，我只相信一句話：天道酬勤。我讀書非?？炭?，每天讀書超過16小時(shí)，盡管我規(guī)定自己一定要在晚上11：40前睡覺，但是很少做到。縣中學(xué)條件很艱苦，但我對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)幾乎到了癡迷的地步，我有時(shí)在老師辦公室里看書到深夜，困了就趴在桌子上打盹，一覺醒來已經(jīng)天亮。雖然學(xué)校離家僅有一小時(shí)路程，但整個(gè)高中階段我只回過4次家（寒假暑假除外）。（楊良松，四川宜賓屏山中學(xué)，文科658分（125，136，125，272），北京大學(xué)經(jīng)濟(jì)系）

◇大量的做題練習(xí)，分分秒秒的時(shí)間投入，絲絲縷縷精力的傾注，是成功的前提。（史方舟，陜西師大附中，理科

704分（142，145，141，276），北京大學(xué)金融系）3

◇我每天早上6點(diǎn)起床開始早自習(xí)，晚上11點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)時(shí)睡覺，中午睡一個(gè)小時(shí)，每天保持8個(gè)小時(shí)的充足睡眠，我會(huì)每個(gè)星期或是每個(gè)月給自己制定一個(gè)總的目標(biāo)，并且一定在這個(gè)期限內(nèi)完成計(jì)劃，具體的每天我會(huì)隨性安排學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，比如做數(shù)學(xué)題做累了就聽聽英語，英語聽煩了就看看歷史，兵沒有硬性地要求自己每天要做寫什么。（李濱兵，湖南湘鄉(xiāng)一中，文科666分，北京大學(xué)）

◇學(xué)習(xí)是一個(gè)長期的過程，對(duì)于每一個(gè)學(xué)生來說，最重要的是專心，不在乎學(xué)多長時(shí)間，而在于每次學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)都能真正學(xué)到東西。（周哲宇，云南師大附中，文科637分（121，134，130，252），北京大學(xué)文科實(shí)驗(yàn)班）

◇三心二意坐一天，不如一心一意干一小時(shí)。學(xué)習(xí)不是空想，不能心猿意馬，心游萬仞，只有在一定的時(shí)間內(nèi)心無旁騖，專神專注，才有希望得到靈感女神的垂青。（史方舟，陜西師大附中，理科704分（142，145，141，276），北京大學(xué)金融系）

◇我的學(xué)習(xí)方法很普通，只是我比較執(zhí)著。題目不會(huì)，決不放棄，一有空閑就思考它直至解決。這個(gè)過程中的艱辛是別人難以想象的，而它帶來的喜悅也是外人無法體會(huì)的。（許磊，河北淶源一中，理科699分（124，136，142，297），清華大學(xué)）

◇無論是考能力還是考素質(zhì)，請(qǐng)你相信題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)絕對(duì)無可匹敵。大量的練習(xí)不僅可以給你解題的思維、速度，還有準(zhǔn)確性與題感。但你應(yīng)該知道的不是答案是什么，而是如何得到這個(gè)答案，為什么會(huì)得到這個(gè)答案。學(xué)會(huì)舉一反三，適當(dāng)?shù)剡M(jìn)行聯(lián)想改題。（辛穎，黑龍江哈爾濱24中，理科662分（121，142，119，208），北京大學(xué)環(huán)境科學(xué)學(xué)院）

◇英語學(xué)得很棒，能聽懂、看懂原版VCD，今年1月參加大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試得了99分，拿到了四級(jí)英語證書。同學(xué)問她為何英語如此出色，她答復(fù)同學(xué)說：“你們只看到結(jié)果，我晚上一個(gè)人在教室里念英語，一念兩三個(gè)小時(shí)，口干舌燥，這個(gè)功夫你們可沒有看到?！睘榱诉_(dá)到上清華的人生目標(biāo)，她做了長達(dá)一年的精心準(zhǔn)備，給自己制定了精細(xì)的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃。她平時(shí)喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，開朗活潑，但只要一坐到書桌前就像換了個(gè)人一樣，變得不茍言笑，神情認(rèn)真，往往一看書就如同一座蠟像一樣，讓書本伴她三四個(gè)鐘頭，在這期間她把自己關(guān)在小屋里不讓任何人打擾。（張璇，江蘇常州高級(jí)中學(xué)，文科685分（120，150，147，268），清華大學(xué)）

第三篇：廣東省高考英語作文

寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分40分)

第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)

假設(shè)你是李華，你的一位美國朋友Jane在中國學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國，你們準(zhǔn)備為她舉辦歡送會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給她寫一封e-mail：

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．祝賀她順利通過考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；

2．感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語；

3．邀請(qǐng)她參加歡送會(huì)，并告知?dú)g送會(huì)相關(guān)事宜。

1）時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；

2）地點(diǎn)：陽光俱樂部（The Sun Club）302房間；

3）路線：在她所住賓館門口乘坐332路公共汽車可直達(dá)。

*參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party

【寫作要求】

只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容；e-mail的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性和復(fù)雜度；信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。

Dear Jane, Congratulations on your passing all the exams.____________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

第二節(jié)讀寫任務(wù)(共1小題，滿分25分)

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

In my last semester in university, we must take the graduation exams.The last exam was the English linguistics.Many of my classmates would cheat in exams.I hadn’t done it before.For this, sometimes my friends were surprised and laughed at me.When I felt it very difficult to remember the phonetics form, I finally gave up reviewing it and decided to try to cheat in this exam.I was too lazy to write it down on smaller paper.Therefore I directly cut the phonetics form away from the handouts.At the very beginning of the exam, I was so sad to find that there were 30–point questions about the phonetics form on the exam paper but suddenly I felt lucky because the phonetics form was just hidden in my pocket.I first finished other questions.To be honest, I was very timid and felt so bad to take out the phonetics form from my pocket.I felt so conflicted.I finally pinched the small paper into my left hand.However, I hadn’t opened the left hand to look at the form till the exam was over.I just guessed the remaining questions to finish the exam.Fortunately, I passed the exams with 75 points.But now I feel good for my failed cheating.[寫作內(nèi)容]

1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；

2．然后以約120個(gè)詞對(duì)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)學(xué)生考試作弊的原因；

(2)你對(duì)考試作弊的看法；

(3)你認(rèn)為學(xué)校怎樣才能杜絕考試作弊現(xiàn)象。

[寫作要求]

1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，每小題15分）Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China.We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English.It’s a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening.We sincerely hope you will come and I’m sure we will have a good time together.By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，每小題25分）

Being afraid of failing an English exam and influenced by her classmates, the author decided to cheat.She hid some paper in her pocket but gave up cheating finally, which made her feel good.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among some students.There are various reasons for this.Some students are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.Some want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Others cheat in order to win a scholarship or enter a key school.However, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ habit of study.Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard.Those who never cheat in exams will consider it’s unfair for them, thinking studying hard is no more necessary.In order to get rid of the bad effects, the school authority should take effective measures to help the students know how important honesty is.Meanwhile, a strict discipline for exams should be carried out.Whoever cheats should be severely punished.

第四篇：廣東省高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

廣東省高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

小作文的批改是看：

1、有沒有把題目所提供的信息點(diǎn)都寫齊

2、是否按照所規(guī)定的用5個(gè)句子完成

3、語法的錯(cuò)誤

小作文的批改顯然不是看關(guān)鍵句的大作文的批改是看：

1、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的概括（這里就要看關(guān)鍵句子了，踩中點(diǎn)子和語法沒有什么問題才得分。在內(nèi)容概括中，我建議你不要超過40字，40字以上也許會(huì)扣分）

2、考生所寫的內(nèi)容和所舉的例子是否切題）

3、語法是否出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤

4、是否有閃光點(diǎn)（就是寫得特別出眾的句子）

你平時(shí)的作文大概寫多少行字，在高考上面按照平時(shí)的習(xí)慣寫就可以，不用去數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)，一來浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，二來沒有這個(gè)必要。只要不是通過老師的目測(cè)就知道你超出字?jǐn)?shù)的情況下，是不會(huì)扣分的老師批改作文的速度雖快，但并不等于他只看關(guān)鍵句。如果你抱著這種想法去寫作文的話，是不可取的。畢竟這是作文，而不是主觀題，老師不可能在批改作文的時(shí)候像按照批改綜合科主觀題那樣，只看關(guān)鍵詞然后按點(diǎn)給分。

第五篇：2012年廣東省高考沖刺英語作文訓(xùn)練

高三英語作文參考范文

一．

Patience Is The Secret of Success

The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success.I have a similar experience.Once I waited for a bus at the stop for 30 minutes, but no bus came.I couldn?t wait any longer and decided to walk to school.But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I realize the importance of patience.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve more.Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, I?ll think of the experience of waiting for a bus.二．To help or not help

The passage mainly tells us that a man was hurt in a car accident, but people around him, including the writer did nothing to help him, which resulted in the injured man?s death on the street.After reading the passage, I was completely shocked.As far as I?m concerned，whenever people are in trouble, we should offer them help regardless of the consequences.If I had been on the spot, I would have called an ambulance and the police without hesitation.Once, I was walking in the street when suddenly a man came up to me and robbed me of my watch.Frightened, I called for help loudly.Just then, a young man shouted, “Stop that guy！”.Finally, people around united and caught the robber.To help or not to help shows a man?s quality.Wherever you are, if you have a chance to show your good qualities, just do it!Remember, your contribution counts!

三．Hold on to one[?s belief

This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn't give up his dream all the time even though he was discouraged, and eventually he succeeded in owning a horse ranch.For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life.As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Anyone who has strong belief can realize his dream and enjoy a colorful life.Otherwise, he will lose himself on his way of life.Belief is so important that it can change one's fate.As a deaf man, Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last years of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music.Marie Curie, a famous scientist, also set a good example.In 1898, Marie found a new element.In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hard.It was because of their great effort that they saw the dim blue light of new element--radium.Her dream came true at last.From my point of view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to make a great achievement and master his own life.2009高考作文

一． Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.二．Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can?t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them.The government is thinking of making the tourists? behavior illegal to protect the animals.When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals.Reasons for this are varied.Some people may think that taking photos with animals is fun in contrast with taking photos with other persons.Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.My life would be greatly affected and I won?t feel happy at all!I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.However, I don?t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals.Tourist pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can?t have a photo with an animal.Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time and during this time, tourists can take photos with animals.It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animas.2012年調(diào)考英語作文

讀寫任務(wù)高分作文：

Ashamed of his mother?s scar, a boy was disappointed at first when his mother attended the teacher-parent meeting.However, he became moved and regretful after knowing his mother had got the scar when protecting him in a fire.The story above reminds me of my experience.When I was a child, I was distinguished for telling lies.At first, people around me was cheated by me easily, and they didn?t trust me any more.One night, I caught a brothers for help.However, neither of them wanted to send me to the hospital.At that moment, my mother, who had been ill for years, sent me to the hospital immediately.Consequently, I became well but my mother had to stay in hospital for weeks.If my mother hadn?t sent me to the hospital, she wouldn?t have been in a worse condition.What the love she gave me.From then on, I realized that I shouldn?t lie to others any more and I always tried to behave myself.Gradually, I am no longer what I used to be and always praised by neighbors as a trustworthy girl.What a profound influence my mother have on me!

From my perspective, we children should devote ourselves to our parents in return for their love.Never should we ignore their feelings whenever they are in trouble.Besides , what we can do to please them is that we should try our best to study well and never give up in the face of difficulty.A little boy was ashamed of his mother?s scar.When his mother attended the parent-teacher meeting, he was disappointed.After knowing the cause of his mother?s scar, the boy felt ashamed of himself and cried, hugging his mother.There was a time when I was very naughty and always made my mother angry.As a result, many relatives didn?t like me and sometimes even scolded me without any reasons.One day, I got a fever and my mother took care of me all the time, taking me to the hospital and cooking healthy and my favorite food.At that time, I asked her whether she didn?t like me, she just replied, “You are the only son who can?t be taken place of in my heart.? Hearing that, I burst into tears.What my mother has done for me makes me know that no matter who you are, no matter who you will be, you?re just the person who will always be accepted and valued by your parents, in spite of your faults and difficulties.They will be always there to give you hope and courage when you?re confronted with misfortune and hardships.Therefore, be good to your parents and take care of them.In my opinion, only by realizing our dreams and making a better life for our parents can we live up to their expectations and repay their devoted love.基礎(chǔ)寫作高分作文：

There are 62 students in my class, and two thirds of them used to take a part time job or are taking one now, working in a shop or a library as well as in a restaurant as waiters.The reasons why they take a part time job are different.Around half of them are for the purpose of solving the financial problems in poor families, while others regard it as a good way to apply their knowledge to social practice as well as enrich their social experience.However, still some students don?t take a part time job because they are under great stress as a senior three student and they don?t have time.Besides, the low pay and no permission from parents are also the main reasons why don?t take a part time job.