第一篇:初中英語作文技巧和
(一)掌握技巧:
(1)注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu),合理布局
開始部分(opening paragraph)——說出文中的要點、核心問題。
正文部分(Body paragraphs)——圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。
結(jié)尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——對全文的總結(jié)和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機地聯(lián)系,內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng),祛除與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。
(2)確定主題句
主題句是對全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點睛”的作用。通常主題句出現(xiàn)
在一篇文章的開頭,而后,全文對主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進行解釋,擴展。
寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點:
①歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個要點
②提煉出一句具有概括性的話
③主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性,抓住、吸引讀者。
(二)巧用連接詞
要想使文章有整體性、連貫性,就要學(xué)會正確使用連接詞
表示羅列增加
First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing…for another…,On(the)one hand…on the other hand,Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,表示時間順序now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with,later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the momentform now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,表示解釋說明now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreoverfurthermore, in fact, actually表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the otherhand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except(for), instead, ofcourse, after all,表示并列關(guān)系or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, both…and, either…or, neither…nor表示因果關(guān)系because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a
表示條件關(guān)系as(so)long as, on condition that, if, unless表示讓步關(guān)系though, although, as, even if, even though, whether…or…, however, whoever,whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how(who, what, which, where, when,whom)表示舉例for example, for instance, such as…, take…for example表示比較be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with(to)…just like,just as,表示目的for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,表示強調(diào)in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,obviously, above all,表示概括歸納in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as faras I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in
1考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑:
1.問題現(xiàn)狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).2.觀點型作文:要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為。。2.另一些人認為。。3.我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some eople say A is heir favorite.They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由
二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that⑨----------------原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing,⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法).3.作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, itgoes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ isresponsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons
to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.1:投訴信
Dear_______,I am.(自我介紹)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(總體介紹).In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一個方面).In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二個方面).Under these
circumstances, I find it ___(感覺)to ____________________________(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建議和請求), preferably __________(進一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(設(shè)定解決事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
2:詢問信
Dear ______,I am _________________________(自我介紹).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要詢問的內(nèi)容)
First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一個問題)Secondly, when will________________________________?(第二個問題)Thirdly, is _________________?(第三個問題)
I would also like to inquire _________________________________(將最重要的問題單獨成段).Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
3:請求信
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________(請求的內(nèi)容)
The reason for ______________is
that______________________________(給出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(給出細節(jié))
I would also like to request ________________________(提出進一步的要求).I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(電話號碼).I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
第二篇:初中英語作文技巧
初中英語作文技巧
技巧1::認真審題,不能丟項。
拿到作文題目,首先要知道要求寫什么。例如是寫一件事,還是寫一個人,還是寫一份調(diào)查報告等。第二要明確題目中要求的內(nèi)容有幾條,例如要求寫一篇游記,那么有如下內(nèi)容:什么時間去的?和誰一起去的?去哪了?如何去的?做了什么?有什么感受?這就是內(nèi)容上的六條要求,作文中必須有所體現(xiàn),一條都不能丟。第三,題目中出現(xiàn)的單詞,詞組,句式必須應(yīng)用。這也是不丟項的一個內(nèi)容之一,切忌耍小聰明而不用題目中給的英文提示。
技巧2:檢查語法,時態(tài),語態(tài)是否正確。
語法,時態(tài),語態(tài)是一定不能錯的,這考察的是英語的應(yīng)用基礎(chǔ)。語法上要求明確句子當中的主謂一致,句子中只有一個謂語,動詞短語的固定搭配(比如enjoy只能加doing,介詞后如果要加動詞一定是動名詞的形式,即ing形式,情態(tài)動詞直接加do等。),名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式等。時態(tài)上要求非常嚴格,如果出錯將比其他地方出錯更為嚴重。判斷時態(tài)的根據(jù)在于題目要求寫的內(nèi)容,如果是紀事性文字,一般用過去時態(tài),有時用現(xiàn)在完成時(看到since/for),如果是議論性或說明性文字,一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(紀事性文字中議論抒情的部分一般也用一般現(xiàn)在時)。如果是一種計劃或打算,要用一般將來時。具體題目,具體分析,另外明確這些時態(tài)的概念,再去判斷。語態(tài)上要求也很嚴格,比如動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)形式,動詞的主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)等。
技巧3:句子與句子之間的連詞要準確的應(yīng)用。
連詞是讓作文連貫的重要組成部分,句子與句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系就是靠連詞體現(xiàn)出來的。作文是一個整體,決不是一個個孤立的句子,所以必須有連詞,但一定根據(jù)語意正確使用。常見連詞:if, as, for, because, so, however, though(雖然), even(甚至), since, until, 等等(不全,要自己總結(jié)。)另外,有些連詞不能一起使用。例如有because就不能有so,有though就不能有but等等。連詞的應(yīng)用會讓作文提高一大塊。
技巧4:使用從句表達(前提為有能力)。
如果英語的基礎(chǔ)相當好,那么從句是可以幫助提高分數(shù)的重要途徑。初中需要掌握的從句是主語從句,賓語從句,(時間,地點,讓步)狀語從句,定語從句這四大類。主語從句,就是主語是一個句子,多數(shù)用形式主語it代替,真正的主語用不定式或分詞ing形式表達,例如:it is adj for sb.To do sth.這句中it 就是形式主語,真正的主語是to do sth.賓語從句就是賓語是個句子。有時用it作為形式賓語。例如:I find it adj to do sth.這句中it是形式賓語,真正的賓語是to do sth.adj.其實大多數(shù)賓語從句還是直接表達的,例如:I wonder to know that ??等。狀語從句分三種,時間狀語從句,地點狀語從句和讓步狀語從句。只需注意介詞的使用,有時要使用逗號。特別的,讓步狀語從句中的if引導(dǎo)的是狀語從句,注意“主將從現(xiàn)”(即主句用一般將來時,從句用一般現(xiàn)在時。)。定語從句是初中比較難掌握的,一般是要求識別,主要在單選題當中考察。但應(yīng)用到作文中是出彩的地方,明確了先行詞,用對了關(guān)系代詞和關(guān)系副詞,就可以了?;A(chǔ)在于對定語從句基礎(chǔ)知識的理解,明確語法就可以應(yīng)用了。
技巧5:必須有精彩的結(jié)束句。
結(jié)束句是文章的主旨所在(信件除外)。結(jié)束句一般是自己的感受或者文章要表達的觀點,信件中是美好的祝愿等等。例如:I enjoy the trip very much, / the success depends on the details.(成功決定于細節(jié))/I am looking forward to hearing from you soon./Have a good time,等等表達。
第三篇:初中英語作文技巧和
(一)掌握技巧:
(1)注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu),合理布局
開始部分(opening paragraph)——說出文中的要點、核心問題。
正文部分(Body paragraphs)——圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。
結(jié)尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——對全文的總結(jié)和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機地聯(lián)系,內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng),祛除與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。
(2)確定主題句
主題句是對全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點睛”的作用。通常主題句出現(xiàn)
在一篇文章的開頭,而后,全文對主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進行解釋,擴展。
寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點:
①歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個要點
②提煉出一句具有概括性的話
③主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性,抓住、吸引讀者。
(二)巧用連接詞
要想使文章有整體性、連貫性,就要學(xué)會正確使用連接詞
表示羅列增加
First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing…for another…,On(the)one hand…on the other hand,Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,Especially / In particular,表示時間順序
now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with,later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the momentform now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,表示解釋說明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
furthermore, in fact, actually
表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other
hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except(for), instead, of
course, after all,表示并列關(guān)系
or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, both…and, either…or, neither
…nor
表示因果關(guān)系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a
result(of), otherwise, so…that, such…that
表示條件關(guān)系
as(so)long as, on condition that, if, unless
表示讓步關(guān)系
though, although, as, even if, even though, whether…or…, however, whoever,whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how(who, what, which, where, when,whom)
表示舉例
for example, for instance, such as…, take…for example
表示比較
be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with(to)…just like,just as,表示目的for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,表示強調(diào)
in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,obviously, above all,表示概括歸納
in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as faras I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in
1考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑:
1.問題現(xiàn)狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法
三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).2.觀點型作文:要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為。。2.另一些人認為。。3.我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some eople say A is heir favorite.They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由
一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that⑨----------------原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing,⑤-----------------(反對的理由之
二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法).3.作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, itgoes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ isresponsible for _______.Maybe there are some
other reasons
to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.1:投訴信
Dear_______,I am.(自我介紹)I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(總體介紹).In the first
place,_________________________(抱怨的第一個方面).In addition,____________________________(抱怨的第二個方面).Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感覺)to ____________________________(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果).I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建議和請求), preferably __________(進一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(設(shè)定解決事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
2:詢問信
Dear ______,I am _________________________(自我介紹).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要詢問的內(nèi)容)
First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一個問題)Secondly, when will________________________________?(第二個問題)Thirdly, is
_________________?(第三個問題)
I would also like to inquire _________________________________(將最重要的問題單獨成段).Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the
above-mentioned aspects?
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
3:請求信
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________(請求的內(nèi)容)
The reason for ______________is that______________________________(給出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(給出細節(jié))
I would also like to request ________________________(提出進一步的要求).I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(電話號碼).I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerelyLi Ming
初中英語作文高分秘訣
1.動筆之前,認真審題
《中考考試說明》指出,書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意?就是要認真審題,看到考題后,先不要急于動筆,要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面,確定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下筆,看懂題意,根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。
2.圍繞中心,擬定提綱
書面表達評分原則有四條:
(1)內(nèi)容要點;
(2)運用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量;
(3)運用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準確性;
(4)上下文的連貫性。
由此可見,要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點,同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力,把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,寫時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散,廢話連篇,嚴重跑題。書面表達,內(nèi)容廣泛,題材多樣,要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記,要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況;如果是書信,則要注意書信的格式,注意短文字數(shù)不要低于或超過規(guī)定的字數(shù)太多。
3.語言通順,表達準確
(1)避免使用漢語式英語,盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板。
(2)多用簡單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。
(3).注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。
1)語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤。
2)主謂語要一致,主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。
3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。
4)注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。
5)注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
標點符號特別注意漢英的不同,例如:
漢語英語
A.句號。.B.省略號………
C.頓號、無
(4)描寫人物時,要生動具體,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)動作描寫:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法:
1)表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or …
2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, yet, however …
3)表示時間關(guān)系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示對照關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示遞進關(guān)系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示強調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as …
13)表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不會表達,另辟蹊徑
中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好,造復(fù)合句容易出錯,容易被扣分,閱卷場上有句話:“錯誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達,可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡??傊?,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。
(1)迂回而行
當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時,可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路,然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。
(2)小詞大用
漢語中有些語意看來很復(fù)雜很文雅,但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3)借花獻佛
有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因為剛剛做過題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來,為我所用。
5.錦上添花,量力而行
如果你還有時間和精力,想把書面表達寫得更好,那么,請注意以下幾點:
(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。
(2)適當使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。
(3)進一步描繪人或事物時,適當使用定語從句。
(4)適當使用分詞或分詞短語,烘托謂語動詞。
(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。
(6)適當調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7)上下句子緊接時,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節(jié)省篇幅。
6.書寫工整,卷面整潔
字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認,要保持卷面的整潔。
7.寫完之后,勿忘檢查
中考作文時,由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此,改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手:
(1)格式是否有錯。2)拼寫有無錯誤。(3)語言是否用錯。(4)時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。
(5)標點錯誤。(6)人稱是否用錯。
【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動,以免顧此失彼,影響全局。
總之,只要平時同學(xué)們多練習寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧,合理分配時間,在中考時一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文,得到令人滿意的考分。
第四篇:初中英語演講稿技巧(共)
初中英語演講稿技巧(轉(zhuǎn)載)
初中英語演講稿技巧,對書面表達中常用的重要語言點進行系統(tǒng)化整理,從簡到難,逐步深入,符合語言學(xué)習的習慣。在知識點的表述上簡潔、直白;對必須掌握和理解的概念均通過例句加以剖析講解,便于記憶
1.根據(jù)聽眾對象,注意演講的總體措詞演講的總體措詞是嚴肅一些還是活潑一些,是有較明顯的說教口氣還是用平等的口吻,等等,都要根據(jù)聽眾對象而定。如果場下聽眾是同齡的學(xué)生,那么演講的內(nèi)容只要風趣一些往往就能引起共鳴。但另一方面,如果聽眾大多是上了年紀的教師,太多的笑料反而會被認為“不嚴肅”,“不尊重”,而引起反感。用英語演講,不要用太多 I feel, I think,老是用I,顯得十分主觀,狹隘。如果通篇全是 I feel, I think 的內(nèi)容,會給人覺得缺乏說服力。另外,perhaps, maybe 這樣的詞語,雖然有“客氣,謙虛”的成分,但太多會讓人覺得你演講的內(nèi)容有不可靠之處。還有,在演講中,要少用you,多用we。用you等于把自己與聽眾對立起來,而用we則拉近了與聽眾的距離。比如:You should not smoke.聽上去像教訓(xùn)人,而 Let's not smoke聽起來是一個不錯的建議。
2.演講要越短越好英語演講應(yīng)該簡潔扼要,直截了當。除非特別需要,一般不要采用中文中的那種迂回曲折的表達形式。據(jù)有關(guān)專家統(tǒng)計,一般人的注意力一次只能集中約13分鐘。所以,演講長度以10~15分鐘為宜。下面是美國總統(tǒng)林肯所作的著名的蓋茨堡演說,雖然全文只有短短200多個詞,卻帶有振奮人心、扭轉(zhuǎn)乾坤般的力量。其中 of the people, by the people, for the people(民有,民治,民享)已成為不朽佳句。對于中學(xué)生來說,這篇演講現(xiàn)在讀起來一定會覺得很難,但要寫好英語演講,這確實是值得認真研讀的經(jīng)典之作。Gettysburg AddressFour score and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure.We are met on a great battlefield of that war.We have come to dedicate a portion of the field as a final resting-place for those who here gave their lives that the nation might live.It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.But in a larger sense we cannot dedicate, we cannot consecrate, we cannot hallow this ground.The brave men,living and dead, who struggled here,have consecrated it far above our poor power to add or detract.The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here.It is for us, the living, rather to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced.It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us,----that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion,----that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain,----that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom,----and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.其實,我們中學(xué)生練習寫演講稿,可以短些,從4~5分鐘,500~600個詞,圍繞一個主題開始練習。
3.英語演講稿的基本組成部分從大的方面看,英語演講詞實際上是屬于一種特殊的說明文或議論文,其基本組成部分是:
1)開始時對聽眾的稱呼語最常用的是 Ladies and gentlemen,也可根據(jù)不同情況,選用 Fellow students, Distinguished guests, Mr Chairman, Honorable Judges(評委)等等。
2)提出論題由于演講的時間限制,必須開門見山,提出論題。提出論題的方法有各種各樣,但最生動,最能引起注意的是用舉例法。比如:你要呼吁大家關(guān)心貧窮地區(qū)的孩子,你可以用親眼看到的或者收集到的那些貧窮孩子多么需要幫助的實例開始。另外,用具體的統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)也是一個有效的引出論題的方法,比如:你要談遵守交通規(guī)則的話題,你可以從舉一系列有關(guān)車輛、車禍等的數(shù)據(jù)開始。
3)論證
對提出的論題,不可主觀地妄下結(jié)論,而要進行客觀的論證。這是演講中最需要下功夫的部分。關(guān)鍵是要把道理講清楚。常見的論證方法有舉例法、因果法、對比法等等,可參見英語議論文的有關(guān)章節(jié)。
4)結(jié)論結(jié)論要簡明扼要,以給聽眾留下深刻印象。
5)結(jié)尾結(jié)尾要簡潔,不要拉拉扯扯,說個沒完。特別是不要受漢語影響,說些類似“準備不足,請諒解”,“請批評指正”這樣的廢話。最普通的結(jié)尾就是:Thank you very much for your attention。
4.英語演講稿的語言特征
1)多用實詞,多用短句,少用結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的長句在英語演講中,and, but, so, then 等虛詞要盡量少用,that, which 等詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句也只會使句子結(jié)構(gòu)變得復(fù)雜,而使聽眾難以跟上演講者的思路,從而影響演講的效果。相反,多使用實詞,短句,可使得演講內(nèi)容更清晰,氣勢更磅礴。
2)演講要注意使用各種修辭手法,增加演講的感染力和氣勢。英語演講中常用的修辭手法有:漸進(climax)、對照(antithesis)、排比(parallelism)、警句(epigram)等等,例如:That government of the people, by the people, for the people shall not perish from the earth.(排比)這個民有、民治、民享的國家將不會從地球上消失。United, there is little we can not do;divided, there is little we can do.(對照)團結(jié),我們便將無所不能;分裂,我們則會一事無成。Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and the success of liberty.(對
照和漸進)
第五篇:初中英語演講稿技巧
初中英語演講稿技巧,對書面表達中常用的重要語言點進行系統(tǒng)化整理,從簡到難,逐步深入,符合語言學(xué)習的習慣。在知識點的表述上簡潔、直白;對必須掌握和理解的概念均通過例句加以剖析講解,便于記憶
1.根據(jù)聽眾對象,注意演講的總體措詞
演講的總體措詞是嚴肅一些還是活潑一些,是有較明顯的說教口氣還是用平等的口吻,等等,都要根據(jù)聽眾對象而定。如果場下聽眾是同齡的學(xué)生,那么演講的內(nèi)容只要風趣一些往往就能引起共鳴。但另一方面,如果聽眾大多是上了年紀的教師,太多的笑料反而會被認為“不嚴肅”,“不尊重”,而引起反感。
用英語演講,不要用太多 i feel, i think,老是用i,顯得十分主觀,狹隘。如果通篇全是 i feel, i think 的內(nèi)容,會給人覺得缺乏說服力。另外,perhaps, maybe 這樣的詞語,雖然有“客氣,謙虛”的成分,但太多會讓人覺得你演講的內(nèi)容有不可靠之處。
還有,在演講中,要少用you,多用we。用you等于把自己與聽眾對立起來,而用we則拉近了與聽眾的距離。比如:you should not smoke.聽上去像教訓(xùn)人,而 let’s not smoke聽起來是一個不錯的建議。
2.演講要越短越好
英語演講應(yīng)該簡潔扼要,直截了當。除非特別需要,一般不要采用中文中的那種迂回曲折的表達形式。據(jù)有關(guān)專家統(tǒng)計,一般人的注意力一次只能集中約13分鐘。所以,演講長度以10~15分鐘為宜。下面是美國總統(tǒng)林肯所作的著名的蓋茨堡演說,雖然全文只有短短200多個詞,卻帶有振奮人心、扭轉(zhuǎn)乾坤般的力量。其中 of the people, by the people, for the people(民有,民治,民享)已成為不朽佳句。對于中學(xué)生來說,這篇演講現(xiàn)在讀起來一定會覺得很難,但要寫好英語演講,這確實是值得認真研讀的經(jīng)典之作。
gettysburg address
four score and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure.we are met on a great battlefield of that war.we have come to dedicate a portion of the field as a final resting-place for those who here gave their lives that the nation might live.it is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.but in a larger sense we cannot dedicate, we cannot consecrate, we cannot hallow this ground.the brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it far above our poor power to add or detract.the world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here.it is for us, the living, rather to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced.it is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us,----that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion,----that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain,----that this nation, under god, shall have a new birth of freedom,----and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.其實,我們中學(xué)生練習寫演講稿,可以短些,從4~5分鐘,500~600個詞,圍繞一個主題開始練習。
3.英語演講稿的基本組成部分
從大的方面看,英語演講詞實際上是屬于一種特殊的說明文或議論文,其基本組成部分是:
1)開始時對聽眾的稱呼語
最常用的是 ladies and gentlemen,也可根據(jù)不同情況,選用 fellow students, distinguished guests, mr chairman, honorable judges(評委)等等。
2)提出論題 愛愛英語學(xué)習網(wǎng)站
由于演講的時間限制,必須開門見山,提出論題。提出論題的方法有各種各樣,但最生動,最能引起注意的是用舉例法。比如:你要呼吁大家關(guān)心貧窮地區(qū)的孩子,你可以用親眼看到的或者收集到的那些貧窮孩子多么需要幫助的實例開始。另外,用具體的統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)也是一個有效的引出論題的方法,比如:你要談遵守交通規(guī)則的話題,你可以從舉一系列有關(guān)車輛、車禍等的數(shù)據(jù)開始。
3)論證
對提出的論題,不可主觀地妄下結(jié)論,而要進行客觀的論證。這是演講中最需要下功夫的部分。關(guān)鍵是要把道理講清楚。常見的論證方法有舉例法、因果法、對比法等等,可參見英語議論文的有關(guān)章節(jié)。
4)結(jié)論
結(jié)論要簡明扼要,以給聽眾留下深刻印象。
5)結(jié)尾
結(jié)尾要簡潔,不要拉拉扯扯,說個沒完。特別是不要受漢語影響,說些類似“準備不足,請諒解”,“請批評指正”這樣的廢話。最普通的結(jié)尾就是:thank you very much for your attention。
4.英語演講稿的語言特征
1)多用實詞,多用短句,少用結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的長句
在英語演講中,and, but, so, then 等虛詞要盡量少用,that, which 等詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句也只會使句子結(jié)構(gòu)變得復(fù)雜,而使聽眾難以跟上演講者的思路,從而影響演講的效果。相反,多使用實詞,短句,可使得演講內(nèi)容更清晰,氣勢更磅礴。
2)演講要注意使用各種修辭手法,增加演講的感染力和氣勢。英語演講中常用的修辭手法有:漸進(climax)、對照(antithesis)、排比(parallelism)、警句(epigram)等等,例如:
that government of the people, by the people, for the people shall not perish from the earth.(排比)
這個民有、民治、民享的國家將不會從地球上消失。
united, there is little we can not do;divided, there is little we can do.(對照)
團結(jié),我們便將無所不能;分裂,我們則會一事無成。
let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and the success of liberty.