第一篇：2014年上海高三二模中譯英

長寧

1.看，十年前種的那棵樹現(xiàn)在長得多高了呀！(how)

2.你看上去很疲憊，為什么不回家好好睡一覺呢？(tired)

3.普遍認(rèn)為在公共場合大聲說話是粗魯?shù)?，?yīng)該避免。（It）

4.二十一世紀(jì)以來，許多發(fā)達(dá)國家采取措施盡可能地吸引中國游客以拉動經(jīng)濟(jì)增長。(promote)

5.只有設(shè)定明確的人生目標(biāo)并為之不遺余力地奮斗，才能實現(xiàn)你成為有用之才的夢想。(Only)

1.Look, how tall the tree(that was)planted ten years ago is now!

2.You look very tired, and/ so why don’t you/ not go home and have a good sleep?

3.It is generally thought/ considered/ believed that talking loudly in public(places)is rude and should be avoided.4.Many developed countries have been taking measures/ steps/ action to attract as many Chinese tourists as possible to promote economic growth since the 21st century.5.Only by setting clear goals/ aims in life and sparing no effort/ making every effort to work on it/ and working on it with all efforts can you realize your dream of being a useful person/ make your dream of being a useful person come true.奉賢

1.18歲意味著你要對自己的言行負(fù)責(zé)了。(mean)

2.她顯出一副高興的樣子，好像什么事也沒發(fā)生過。(mood)

3.運動能增強(qiáng)我的體質(zhì)，也能讓我釋放學(xué)習(xí)壓力。(Not only)

4.我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成看報的習(xí)慣，因為讀報有助于我們及時了解發(fā)生在國內(nèi)外的各種事件。（inform）

5.如果我們把英語學(xué)習(xí)看成是了解文化的一種方式，而不是一門考試學(xué)科，我們也許就會體會到其中的學(xué)習(xí)樂趣。(regard)

1.Being 18 means taking responsibility for your words and actions.Being 18 means that you should be responsible for what you have said and done.2.She appeared to be in good mood,(and acted/looked)as if nothing had happened.She seems to be in a good mood as if nothing has happened.3.Not only can sports/(taking)exercising build up my body(health)/ strengthen/improve my fitness but also help me to release my study pressure/ help me relax from the pressure/stress of study..4.We should cultivate/develop/ form the habit of reading newspapers, because it helps us(to be)informed of various/ all kinds of events happening both at home and abroad in time.5.If we regard English learning as a means/way of understanding/ knowing / being aware of aculture but not a course / subject to be tested on/an examination subject/course,(then)we may experience/ understand the learning fun in it.閔行

82.千萬別卷入那件事，否則你將自尋麻煩。(involve)

83.寒冷的天氣讓大多數(shù)瀕危動物很難在這里生存。(it)

84.據(jù)我所知，提前預(yù)報地震仍是一個難以達(dá)到的目標(biāo)。（ahead）

85.直到高中畢業(yè)，大部分學(xué)生才開始意識到?jīng)]有最好地利用在校的時間。（Not?）

86.鼓勵孩子們閱讀的目的不在于讀多少本書，而在于培養(yǎng)他們熱愛讀書。(lie)

82.Be sure not to get involved in that matter, otherwise you will invite trouble.83.The cold weather makes it difficult for most endangered animals(species)to survive here.Be sure not to get yourself involved in that matter, or you will look for trouble.84.As far as I know, predicting specific quakes ahead of time has been a goal difficult to achieve.85.Not until their graduation from high school do a majority of(most of)students come to realize that they haven’t made the best use of time at school.86.The purpose of motivating children to read lies not in the number of books but in the cultivation of their love for reading.The purpose of motivating children to read lies not in how many books they read but incultivating their love for reading.浦東

1.當(dāng)?shù)卮迕竦纳屏几袆恿宋覀儭?touch)

2.過于強(qiáng)調(diào)個人成就是沒有意義的。(point)

3.雖然經(jīng)理盡力想挽留他，但看來他去意已決。(seem)

4.他忙于搞科研，無法騰出時間照顧家人。(So?)

5.這些相片讓我想起了那些艱苦的日子，那時，盡管困難重重，我們?nèi)詧允刂约旱哪繕?biāo)。（when）

We were touched by the kindness of the local villagers.The kindness of the local villagers touched us

There is no point in emphasizing /stressing personal achievement(s)too much.There is no point in putting/ laying /placing too much stress/ emphasis on personal achievement.The manager tried to persuade him to stay, but he seemed to have made up his mind to resign/ leave.The manager tried to persuade him to stay, but it seemed that he had decided to leave.So busy is he with his scientific research that he couldn’t /can’t set aside time to take care of his family.These photos remind me of the hard days when we still stuck to our goals /targets regardless of all the difficulties.普陀

1.考官將會問你幾個關(guān)于科技發(fā)展的問題。(related)

The judges/ interviewers will ask you several questions related to the development of science and technology.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，滿分4分：

Thejudges/ interviewers(0.5+0.5)will ask youseveral questions(0.5+0.5)related to(1)the development of science and technology(0.5+0.5).1.judges/ interviewers前沒有添加定冠詞，扣0.5分

2.science and technology兩者漏翻其一，均扣0.5分

2.他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面取得了比其他同學(xué)更大的進(jìn)步。(than?)

He has made more progress than other students in English learning.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，滿分4分：

He has made more progress(1+1)than other students(1)in English learning(1).1.make progress時態(tài)用錯、比較級漏翻扣1分，progress錯用復(fù)數(shù)形式扣0.5

2.other students錯用限定詞，扣0.5

3.in English learning錯用介詞，扣0.53.就你的觀點，缺少均衡飲食以及室外運動會有怎樣的負(fù)面結(jié)果？(consequence)

From your point of view, what are the negative consequences of lacking balanced diets or outdoor activities?

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，滿分4分：

From your point of view(1), what are the negative consequences of(1)lacking(1)balanced diets or outdoor activities(1)?

1.“就你的觀點”也可以翻譯為：As far as you are concerned,?

2.“負(fù)面結(jié)果”也可以翻譯為：negative results

4.在未來幾周內(nèi)，這些學(xué)校將要安裝網(wǎng)絡(luò)設(shè)備為了方便學(xué)生獲取所需信息。(install)

In the coming weeks, the schools will be installed with network devices/ equipment to make it convenient for students to get the information needed.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，滿分5分：

In the comingweeks(0.5+0.5), the schoolswill be installed with(0.5+0.5)network devices/ equipment(1)to make it convenient for students(1)to get the informationneeded(0.5+0.5).1.the schools will install network device也得分，即install主動、被動都得分

2.the schools限定詞不能缺失，否則扣0.5分

3.equipment不可數(shù)名詞，錯誤扣0.5分

5.韓國影星在女學(xué)生中大受歡迎，很多人為了見上一面甚至愿意在機(jī)場等上幾小時，這卻讓父母們很擔(dān)憂。(So?)

So popular are the Korean stars among the girl students that some are even willing to wait at the airport for hours just to have a look, which makes their parents feel worried.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，滿分5分：

So popular arethe Korean stars(0.5+0.5)among the girl students(0.5)that some are even willing to(1)wait at the airportfor hours(0.5+0.5)just to have a look(0.5), which makes their parents feel worried(1).1.倒裝句翻譯錯誤或缺失，或沒有翻譯so?that?結(jié)構(gòu)，均扣1分

2.“這卻讓父母們很擔(dān)憂”根據(jù)語義翻譯正確即得分

徐匯

1.20世紀(jì)末電子產(chǎn)品發(fā)生了巨大的變化。（see)

2.只有當(dāng)我們將計劃付諸實踐，我們才有可能會成功。(Only)

3.他是承認(rèn)錯誤還是掩蓋事實，舉棋不定。(whether)

4.新的高考改革能否減輕學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)引起了教育專家們的熱議。(arouse)

5.校園義賣活動不僅豐富了校園生活，還提高了學(xué)生們的組織活動能力，培養(yǎng)了他們團(tuán)隊合作精神。(In addition to)

1.The end of the 20th century saw great changes in electronic / digital products.2.Only when we put our plan into practice are we likely to be successful.Only when we put our plan into practice can we possibly achieve success.3.He is trying to make a decision whether to admit / confess his mistake or conceal the truth

4.It has aroused heated a discussion among education experts whether the new reform of college entrance examination can reduce students’ academic burden.It has aroused a heated discussion among education experts whether the new reform of college entrance examination can relieve students of their academic burden.5.In addition to enriching students’ school life, the school charity sale has also improved their ability to organize an activity and developed their team spirit

閘北

1．現(xiàn)在，很多年青人熱衷于在網(wǎng)上征求游伴。（keen）

2.起先觀眾們聽不清臺詞，但最終還是被演員們的表演打動了。（finally）

3.瑪麗在報紙上了解到相關(guān)信息，這才意識到糧食浪費的問題有多嚴(yán)重。（Not until?）

4.為了能陪伴孩子度過珍貴的童年時期，許多媽媽放棄了前景良好的職業(yè)生涯。（give up）

5.盡管回報豐厚且風(fēng)險不大，市場對銀行最近推出的金融產(chǎn)品仍反應(yīng)冷淡。（in spite of）

1.Now, many youngsters are keen on seeking tour pals on the Internet.2．At first audience couldn’t hear the lines clearly but finally they were moved by the actors’ performance.3.Not until she knew about the relevant information in the newspaper did she realize how serious the problem of food waste was.4.In order to accompany their kids through the precious childhood, many mothers have given up their work career of promising prospect.5.In spite of the good reward(returns)and low risk, the market reaction toward the financial product recently launched by the bank was still muted(cool).（靜安、楊浦、青浦、寶山）

1.不管你相信不相信，善于傾聽并采納別人的意見是明智的。(advisable)

2.能否堅持自己所做的事情是一個人取得成功的重要因素之一。(persevere)

3.在線預(yù)訂出租車雖然很時尚，但許多相關(guān)問題尚待解決。(as)

4.在北京的地鐵上吃東西、抽煙或躺在座位上的人可能會被處以50至500元的罰款。(fine)

5.有些青少年熱衷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，有時候竟然連飯都可以不吃，而且他們和家長的關(guān)系往往也比較糟糕。(keen)

1.Believe it or not, it is advisable to listen to others and take their advice.2.Whether one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success.3.Fashionable as booking a taxi online is, many related problems remain to be settled/ solved.4.Those who are found eating, smoking or lying across the seats on the subway in Beijing can be fined between 50 to 500 yuan.5.Some teenagers are so keen on online games that they sometimes prefer not to have meals, and what’s more, they usually have a bad relationship with their parents.崇明縣

1.你認(rèn)為有必要采取措施保護(hù)上海方言嗎？(it)

2.提前做出周密計劃可以幫你更有效地完成這項艱巨任務(wù)。(advance)

3.代表受害者，他期望社會給予他們更多的理解和幫助。(behalf)

4.她的內(nèi)心深處一直存著一個疑惑，她可能是18年前被父母領(lǐng)養(yǎng)的。(In the depth)

5.盡管時光荏苒，但和同學(xué)們一起為進(jìn)入理想大學(xué)而苦讀書的日子仍然是他難忘的記憶。(admit)

1.Do you think it(is)necessary to take measures to preserve Shanghai dialect?

2.Making a careful plan in advance can help you finish the tough task more efficiently.3.On behalf of the victims, he expected the society to give them more understanding and help.4.In the depth of her heart always lies a suspicion that she might have been adopted by her parents eighteen years ago.5.Although time flies, the days when he worked hard with his classmates to be admitted into their ideal universities are still his unforgettable memory.虹口

1.他們的建議聽起來和我們的同樣可行。(as?as)

2.一到機(jī)場，瑪麗就發(fā)現(xiàn)把護(hù)照忘在家里了。(Hardly)

3.正是他對我們表現(xiàn)的評價，表明我們已經(jīng)步入正軌了。(track)

4.我沒想到那個曾經(jīng)受到高度贊揚的鋼琴家結(jié)果卻令觀眾大失所望。(turn out)

5.如果不能獨立找出提高學(xué)習(xí)效率的方法，你就很難取得令人滿意的成績。(unless)

1.Their suggestion sounds as feasible as ours.2.Hardly had Mary got to the airport when she found/noticed that she had left the passport at home.3.It was their comment on our performance that showed we had already been on the right track.4.I never thought that the pianist who had once been highly praised/spoken highly of turned out to be a great disappointment to the audience.5.It is very difficult for you to gain satisfactory achievements unless you find out the method of improving the learning efficiency by yourself / on your own.黃浦

1.這位醫(yī)生已經(jīng)說服了很多人戒煙。(persuade)

2.直到完成了任務(wù)，他才發(fā)現(xiàn)時間已經(jīng)到了午夜。(Not until?)

3.他總是毫不猶豫地提出他認(rèn)為對別人有幫助的批評。(hesitate)

4.現(xiàn)在就預(yù)訂展覽會的門票，你將有機(jī)會欣賞到眾多的藝術(shù)作品。(chance)

5.藥品沒有廣告說得那么有效，我服了藥后，沒有緩解我的咳嗽。(as?as)

1.The doctor has persuaded many people to / into give / giving up smoking.2.Not until he completed the task did he find it was midnight.3.He never hesitates to make criticism which / that he thinks is helpful to others.4.Book the ticket for the exhibition now, and you will have the chance to

appreciate a great number of works of art.5.The medicine was not as effective as what the advertisement(had)claimed, for

it didn’t relieve my cough after I took it.

第二篇：2018高三二模作文

寶山區(qū)

三 寫作 70分

26.依據(jù)下面材料，按要求作文。

有明確的信仰，并不能證明有精神追求的勇氣；有精神追求的勇氣，卻能證明有明確的信仰。

要求：自選角度，自擬題目，800字以上。26．（70分）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

一類卷(63－70分)基準(zhǔn)分67分

能準(zhǔn)確把握題意，立意深刻，選材恰當(dāng)，中心突出，內(nèi)容充實，感情真摯，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語言流暢，有文采。

二類卷(52－62分)基準(zhǔn)分57分

符合題意，立意較深刻，選材較恰當(dāng)，中心明確，內(nèi)容較充實，感情真實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言通順。

三類卷(39－51分)基準(zhǔn)分45分

基本符合題意，立意一般，選材尚恰當(dāng)，中心尚明確，內(nèi)容尚充實，感情尚真實，結(jié)構(gòu)基本完整，語言基本通順，偶有語病。

四類卷(21－38分)基準(zhǔn)分29分

偏離題意，立意或選材不當(dāng)，中心不明確，內(nèi)容單薄，結(jié)構(gòu)不夠完整，語言欠通順，語病較多。

五類卷（20分以下）符合以下一項即為五類：

（1）脫離題意。（2）文理不通。（3）全文不足400字。說明：

（1）未寫題目扣2分。（2）錯別字1個扣1分，至多扣3分。（3）標(biāo)點錯誤多，酌情扣1－2分。（4）文面不整潔，酌情扣1－2分；文面整潔美觀，酌情加1－2分。崇明區(qū)

三、寫 作（70分）

27．生活中，我們常常聽到這樣的抱怨，道理都懂，為什么不按照道理去做。

對此，你有怎樣的思考？請寫一篇不少于800字的文章。要求：（1）自擬題目；（2）文體不限，詩歌除外。奉賢

三、寫作（70 分）

30.閱讀以下材料，自選角度，自擬題目，寫一篇不少于 800 字的文章。

沖突是指發(fā)生在兩個或兩個以上事物之間的互相對抗。達(dá)倫多夫在《社會沖突論》中認(rèn)為，沖突也是解決問題的有效方式。虹口

三 作文（70分）

26.閱讀下面的文字，按要求寫作。

網(wǎng)絡(luò)流行詞“佛系”，最早來源于2014年日本某雜志，指一種怎么都行、無須走心、看淡一切的活法，一切隨緣。該詞一出迅速流行，更有不少人自稱佛系，有佛系追星、佛系購物、佛系戀愛、佛系員工、佛系學(xué)生等種種說法。

請寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀銓Υ说乃伎?。要求：?）自擬題目；（2）不少于800字。

嘉定

三 寫作 70分

26.作文。（70分）

魯迅先生說過：“貪安穩(wěn)就沒有自由，要自由就要歷些危險。只有這兩條路?！边@句話引發(fā)了你怎樣的思考？請自選角度，自擬題目，寫一篇不少于800字的文章，不要寫成詩歌。

金山

三 寫作70分

26．根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀愕乃伎肌?/p>

我們每個人都生活在別人的眼光關(guān)注中。這些眼光中有鼓勵，有肯定，但也有質(zhì)疑甚至否定，然而，掌控人生的往往是你自己。要求：（1）自擬題目；（2）不少于800字。青浦

三、寫 作（70分）

26.根據(jù)以下材料寫作

現(xiàn)實生活中經(jīng)常面臨著新的開始與舊的結(jié)束。戀舊、懷舊是人之常情，但也有人說“相見不如懷念, 懷念不如忘卻”。如何看待并處理好新的開始與戀舊懷舊的關(guān)系是需要智慧和勇氣的。

看了上面材料引發(fā)了你怎樣的思考？請自選一個角度寫一篇不少于800字的文章，題目自擬。

徐匯

三、寫作(70分)26.當(dāng)了解信息的途徑越來越豐富、方式越來越便捷，人們會更容易獲取自己想關(guān)注的信息，從而將自己包裹在以個人需求為主導(dǎo)的世界里。

這種現(xiàn)象帶給你怎樣的思考？請寫一篇不少于800字的文章，題目自擬。

普陀

三 寫作（70分）

26.生活中，我們往往有意無意地和他人進(jìn)行各種比較。有人認(rèn)為這是人性的劣根、煩惱的根源，應(yīng)該努力避免。對此你是否認(rèn)同？請寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀愕乃伎肌Ｒ螅海?）自擬題目；（2）不少于800字。楊浦

三． 寫作（70分）

26.世上沒有移山的方法，惟一能改變我們和山的距離的途徑是：山不過來，我過去。

人們可以持有這樣的態(tài)度：改變可以改變的一切，適應(yīng)不能改變的一切。

根據(jù)以上材料，自選角度，自擬題目，寫一篇文章。

要求：⑴不少于800字。⑵不要寫成詩歌。⑶不要透露個人相關(guān)信息。

長寧——同嘉定 黃浦

三、寫作70分

26．有人說，人生的麻煩，大多是因為太快說“是”，太慢說“不”造成的。請寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀銓@句話的思考。

要求：（1）自擬題目；（2）不少于800字。

閔行

二 寫作 70分

27.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)要求作文。

生活中，我們自以為是某個事件的關(guān)注者，其實，我們往往不明就里，只湊了個熱鬧，沒過多久就忘記了，成為事件的忽視者。請寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀銓@種現(xiàn)象的思考。要求：(1)自擬題目；(2)不少于800字。

浦東

三 寫作 70分

26．想出新辦法的人在他的辦法成功以前，人們總是說他異想天開。針對這種現(xiàn)象，請寫一篇文章談?wù)勀愕乃伎肌?/p>

要求：（1）自擬題目；（2）不少于800字。

第三篇：2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

2015年上海高三二模之作文題目匯總及分析以及范文

【徐匯（松江、金山）】

生活中，人們大多相信自己的判斷。其實每個人的認(rèn)識不過是全景圖中的一塊碎片，只有承認(rèn)這一局限，才可能有接近真相的判斷。

1、承認(rèn)局限，認(rèn)識到自己的不足之處，判斷并追求真相。

2、從整體和局部的關(guān)系入手：認(rèn)識局限性產(chǎn)生的原因，分析相信自己判斷的原因。

3、結(jié)合現(xiàn)實談接近真相判斷的重要性，承認(rèn)局限以近真相

兩條長度完全不同的線段稍有不同的觀測角度呈現(xiàn)在人們面前，百分之八十的人認(rèn)定是一條線段長于另一條。這是一項著名的測試人類視角與大腦認(rèn)知局限的實驗。兩條線段長度完全一致的真想因人所天生的認(rèn)識局限而被人所忽視。

生活中，也常有人一己認(rèn)定的判斷卻與真相相去甚遠(yuǎn)。這，亦存在于人的認(rèn)知局限之中。上帝創(chuàng)人之初九限定了每個個體獨特的局限，這一局限既賦予每個個體最獨一無二的視角，但同時也阻礙了個體看到最廣闊的全景。然而局限本身并不可怕，因上帝設(shè)定局限的本意便在于促使人與人將每一款不同的視角碎片拼湊起來，以得全景?？膳略谟诤鲆暼苏J(rèn)知的局限，才能使得個人從有限的視角里看出接近無限的真相。

《金剛經(jīng)》里總結(jié)人生有七苦：生、老、病、死、怨憎會、愛別離、求不得。每個人的日常生活都是有限的，輾轉(zhuǎn)于個人生活中，每當(dāng)生活不順風(fēng)順?biāo)畷r，人便憑借自己的一己之?dāng)?，認(rèn)定自己是最不幸的人。但若是能夠承認(rèn)自己看到的生活是局限的，自己認(rèn)定的判斷并非準(zhǔn)確，那才能接近真相，那便是：在人類漫長進(jìn)化過程中，所有苦難只不過《金剛金》中的那七點。人總以為自己的苦難銷魂蝕骨，但在百川不停向前奔流、日月自然交替之中，沒有什么個人的苦難會留下不可磨滅的印記。而在承認(rèn)自己認(rèn)識局限接近這一真相后，人的生活才有可能更廣闊。

對于真相的判斷不僅僅局限于人生真相的判斷，大可以擴(kuò)充至更廣義、更多領(lǐng)域的致力于對真相的接近。若非人開始承認(rèn)自己的臆斷是局限的，恐怕人類依舊處于盤古開天辟地的混沌之中。人可能永遠(yuǎn)接受“燃素論”的迂腐理論，而無法發(fā)現(xiàn)元素之間發(fā)生氧化還原的反應(yīng)才是物質(zhì)燃燒產(chǎn)生熱量的緣由。如此人類取得進(jìn)化歷程中土坯的例子不甚枚舉，其根源皆源于人類不畏于承認(rèn)自己的局限，通過客觀的判斷以及個體經(jīng)驗的交流以達(dá)到共同接近真相的渴求。

局限是人無法回避的，但同時它也并非人所想的那般可怕，甚至，正是因為這每個個體間所固有的局限，才能推動人去無限地接近對真相的判斷。也許上帝賦予個體認(rèn)識局限的本意并非要阻礙人接近真相，而是希望人類能夠看清自己擁有承認(rèn)局限的勇氣，從而在將個體之間的交流、貫通和共同努力中，以局限的視角拼出對真相最無限接近的全景。

拼圖

你抬頭看天，粗糙的邊緣為你勾勒出一方天空，干凈又清澈，你以為這就是一個世界，卻被人笑稱井底之蛙。自己眼中的世界卻只是世界全景圖中那樣微小的一塊拼圖。可惜你不知自己眼界的局限，自然也就迷失在世界拼圖中，遠(yuǎn)離真相。

井底之蛙的悲，在于它既缺乏完整的認(rèn)知又不自知，身處困境，亦無法跳離其中。而生活中，人們亦有井底之蛙的愚，更多了一份過分自信的傲。我們相信自己的判斷是出于自信，然而過度的自信卻只會導(dǎo)致盲目，使人不知并不愿承認(rèn)自己的局限。黑塞筆下的《德米安》中就塑造了一個彷徨的少年的形象。主角辛克萊少年時固執(zhí)地向往至善的世界，相信自己對于善的執(zhí)念是正確的判斷。這份自信就像每一個青春期孩子的堅持自我一般，過分夸大了主觀認(rèn)識在客觀世界中的比重。而辛克萊，幸運地?fù)碛徐`魂導(dǎo)師德米安，引領(lǐng)其正確地認(rèn)識善惡，正確看到自我認(rèn)識與世界的關(guān)系。對于我們亦是如此，即使沒有靈魂導(dǎo)師，謙卑與敬畏之心正是我們漫游世界拼圖的導(dǎo)引，使自己的判斷契合世界，又豐富世界。

然而，當(dāng)敬畏確立了我們的方向，認(rèn)清了自己的局限，接近真相的判斷又源于個人的全局認(rèn)識。社會學(xué)家勒龐提出了“烏合之眾”一說，便道出當(dāng)個人認(rèn)識的碎片雜亂堆積之后，會造成的社會凌亂之狀。即使承認(rèn)了 2 局限，若世界的拼圖只是一味碎片堆積，如此的整體仍發(fā)揮不了部分的作用，只陷入烏合之眾怪圈之中。唯有全局把握，方可在局部尋找整體的統(tǒng)一，揭開真相隱秘的面紗。

可惜的是，少有人能正確處理好自我認(rèn)識與世界全局的關(guān)系。莫不是汲汲于滾滾紅塵隨波逐流，抑或盲目自信，缺少清醒。實際上，我們本就是社會的成員，做世界全景圖中的一塊碎片又有何妨？在相信自己判斷的基礎(chǔ)，揉以敬畏之心，籠以全局之觀，做好世界的一塊拼圖。就像柴靜在《穹頂之下》中說的，人會去做是因為心底有愛惜。當(dāng)我們以愛惜之心，成為拼圖一員，完善自身，方可拼出世界的壯闊、豐富、高遠(yuǎn)之境。

你抬頭望天，聽見了鳥兒們的嘲笑。井底之蛙亦可不自怨自艾，囿于局限。終有一天，將有人帶你上天，去看看世界拼圖的每一部分，去重新成為全景圖中非凡之一。

鴻鵠之見于泰山

每個生命都擁有一個相對孤立的世界。我們逐漸習(xí)慣于從自我的雙眼猜測世界，卻總會忽略，那只能算是一片碎片。

鴻鵠環(huán)泰山三日而還，仍不一定能見到泰山全貌。春之繁茂，秋之蕭瑟；晴之萬頃，雨之雷鳴，都是景色的一部分。同樣，我們的認(rèn)識或許也一樣只是冰山一角。人們何嘗不感受到所知甚少，但不愿承認(rèn)的理由，大多不愿示人。

不愿承認(rèn)的理由，或許是因為固執(zhí)。不是僅指那種性格上的固執(zhí)，還包括了對于既定判斷不愿深思的介于懶惰與固執(zhí)之間的那種性格。曾讀過一本書：“懶惰與無知有時并非毫無關(guān)聯(lián)?！蔽矣X得，與其無知，倒不如說是片面化的理解所造成的局限。如果鴻鵠立于一石曰：“吾至泰山矣。”與其說是可笑，不如說是悲哀。這種片面化的固執(zhí)在阻隔著許多人認(rèn)清自己片面性的同時，也會造成更多的困擾：如果說一個無知的人容易被他人鼓勵，那么一個惰于思考固執(zhí)己見的人，更容易被自我鼓勵，而其結(jié)果，往往不可預(yù)知又令人驚悸。

不愿承認(rèn)的理由，或許是因為不相信。外在的世界紛亂嘈雜，無法辨別絕對的真與假，因此很多人選擇了逃避，超脫外物以靜心。可我們無法學(xué)莊子垂釣，學(xué)梭羅隱居于森林的盡頭，因為我們必須活著，以現(xiàn)代人的身份活著并奮斗著。在此背景之下，人們寧可相信自己所知的便是世界，因而免于卷入自己并不認(rèn)可的各色漩渦之中。鴻鵠繞華山而曰至泰山，尤不聽鸞鳳之勸誡，不失笑？

而消除這種對局限的無法認(rèn)識的本源，其根本之道在于我們的內(nèi)心。每個個體都是無知的促進(jìn)者，但與此同時，每個個體也都是知識的建構(gòu)者。我們必須以一個不同的視角來俯視，才能看見更廣闊的天空—即使仍只是全景圖中的一塊碎片然更接近真相的碎片，也是真實的判斷的來源。

鴻鵠飛之越高，其見必越奇。而一個更高的視角，不僅需要包括我們自己，還需要考慮到別人的觀點和利益，而這一點，必須要克服心態(tài)的懶惰與對他人的不信任。雖然并非一朝一夕之事，但我相信，一定會有曙光出現(xiàn)的時候。

鴻鵠游于泰山，以萬丈之姿飛三日，其見必奇。

第四篇：2013上海高三二模作文分析

2013上海高考二模作文分析

今年二模作文的類型皆為新材料作文。

1、從材料的內(nèi)容來看，可發(fā)現(xiàn)主要有以下幾種類型：

（1）名言警句性材料

普陀：我們都知道“己所不欲，勿施于人”的道理，那么“己所欲”是否應(yīng)該廣施于人呢？請寫一篇文章說說你的看法。u

閔行：中國有句古話，叫作“遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰”。身處21世紀(jì)的你，對這句話會有怎樣的體驗和認(rèn)識呢？請自擬題目，寫一篇不少于800字的文章（不要寫成詩歌）。

（2）敘述性材料

虹口：中國人喜歡爭先恐后，常常可以看到這種情況：支援災(zāi)區(qū)，遠(yuǎn)在千里之外的人爭搶獻(xiàn)血；400米跑道上，運動員在為得到好名次拼命奔跑；斑馬線前，行人都下意識地往前擁；綠就浸到了馬路上……

黃浦：

南京大學(xué)在校慶前夕將移植牛頓故鄉(xiāng)林肯郡的蘋果樹枝，校辦說，屆時，“砸中牛頓的蘋果也將有可能砸中南大學(xué)生?！?/p>

引進(jìn)牛頓的蘋果枝，并非該大學(xué)首創(chuàng)。天津大學(xué)校長就曾剪下“牛頓蘋果樹”的枝條帶回校園；李嘉誠轉(zhuǎn)增的“牛頓蘋果樹”枝條也已落戶汕頭大學(xué)。

（3）觀點看法型

奉賢：在百度時代，什么樣的學(xué)問似乎都變得不太重要了。為什么？因為沒有必要嘛。你在百度上搜一下關(guān)鍵詞，一長串的東西全出來了——你記那么多干嗎？

崇明：所有偉大的事業(yè)，都不會只是馬拉松的成績，而更是接力賽的成果。

2、材料大多貼近時代，關(guān)注社會，思考人生，如虹口的“爭先恐后”關(guān)注的是社會心理，黃浦的“牛頓蘋果樹”涉及的是高校的學(xué)術(shù)氛圍，楊浦靜安青浦寶山四區(qū)的“三人三法”關(guān)注的是藝術(shù)文化，徐匯松江金山的“無過是不是功”探討人生的處世態(tài)度，閔行區(qū)關(guān)注的是鄰里關(guān)系，浦東關(guān)注的是內(nèi)心感受…….3、審題大多數(shù)沒有難度，有些可以直接從材料中提取話題。

? 閘北：天底下，“門”的這類很多：有形的，諸如房門、店門、車門、閘門、石庫門之類；無形的，諸如智慧之門、機(jī)會之門、情感之門、地獄之門、心靈之門等，有人說，“門”，既是一種拒絕，又是一種誘惑；也有人說，“開門”、“關(guān)門”是人生中含義最深的動作。對于“門”，你肯定有很多感悟和體會，認(rèn)識和看法，甚至有一些感人至深的經(jīng)歷與故事……

? 虹口：中國人喜歡爭先恐后，常?？梢钥吹竭@種情況：支援災(zāi)區(qū)，遠(yuǎn)在千里之外的人爭搶獻(xiàn)血；400米跑道上，運動員在為得到好名次拼命奔跑；斑馬線前，行人都下意識地往前擁；綠燈還沒亮，人群就浸到了馬路上……

不過有幾個區(qū)審題時要特別注意。

崇明：所有偉大的事業(yè)，都不會只是馬拉松的成績，而更是接力賽的成果。

浦東：當(dāng)你作決定時，更需要接受別人的意見還是堅持自己的見解？請談?wù)勀愕目捶ê屠碛伞?/p>

? 難度比較大的作文題可能是以下幾個區(qū)

1、徐匯、松江、金山

明代《菜根譚》書中說：處世不必求功，無過便是功。

也有人說：不作為便無過，無過也無功。

2、嘉定、長寧

莊子說，高山上看到的山下人，皆如螻蟻，大小高低如一，何必去爭誰高誰低。胡適先生說，我是山下人，就在山下看人，怎能不計較大小、高低、胖瘦？

第五篇：2017屆上海英語高三二模翻譯

長寧卷

72.只有多練，你才能提高駕駛技術(shù)。(Only)73.在旅游旺季機(jī)票訂得越早越便宜。(book)74.無論白天在學(xué)校發(fā)生了什么事情，晚上要盡量把負(fù)擔(dān)卸下。(No matter)75.隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，海量信息唾手可得，或許你覺得在也沒有必要去圖書館了。(need n.)72.Only through frequent practice can you improve your driving skills 73.The earlier you book a plane ticket in a tourist season , the lower its price will be.74.No matter what happens at school during the day , as early in the evening as you can , put all your burden down.或者..., burdens should be put down as many as possible in the evening.75.With the development / growth of the Internet , an enormous amount of information is at hand./ at our fingertips / available so that you may think there is no need to go to the library.楊浦卷

1.新頒布的禁煙令得到了廣大市民的支持。（ban）

2.出乎我的意料，年輕人對中國古詩詞顯示出了極大的熱情。（passion）3.共享單車不僅解決了最后一里路的問題，而且還有助于改善空氣質(zhì)量。（Not only）

4.一考定終身的日子已經(jīng)一去不復(fù)返了，但不可否認(rèn)的是考試越多，學(xué)生壓力越大。（denying）

72.The newly-issued ban on smoking has been supported by most citizens 73.Beyond my expectation, young people showed tremendous passion for ancient Chinese poetry.74.Not only do shared bicycles solve the last-mile problem but also they help improve air quality 75.Gone are the days when one examination could determine students' fate, but there is no denying that the more examinations they have, the more stressful they will feel.青浦卷

72.演講前，花點時間看一下提綱，你會更自信。(spend)73.兩年后這個主題公園將對公眾開放，但是它是否會盈利尚未確定。(remain)74.詩歌大賽吸引了大批觀眾，他們從中領(lǐng)略到了漢語的魅力。(which)75.不管那個推銷員如何極力鼓動，我還是能保持冷靜沒有買那套位于城東的房子。(No natter)72.Before making a speech, spend some time taking a look at the outline so that you will be more confident.73.This theme park will be open to the public in two years, but whether it will make profits remains to be seen.74.Poetry contest attracted a large audience, from which they had a taste of the charm of Chinese.75.No matter how hard the salesman urged me, I still kept cool/calm and didn't buy the flat located east of the city.寶山卷

72.她在舞臺上的表現(xiàn)讓她成了“網(wǎng)紅”。（become）73.李教授寫的這本書是面向?qū)W術(shù)讀者的。（intend）

74.當(dāng)球迷們向籃球隊員獻(xiàn)花時，隊員們激動得熱淚盈眶。（So...）

75.一項新的研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，那些擁有年輕心態(tài)的人比自我感覺年齡大的人更加長壽。（those who）

72.She has become famous online/She has become an online star/ celebrity because of her performance on the stage.73.The book(written)by Professor Li is intended for academic audience/ readers.74.So excited were the basketball players when their fans presented flowers to them that their eyes were filled with tears.75.A new study has found that people who are young(er)at heart live longer than those who feel older than they truly are.普陀卷

72.想和我一起看電影的人請舉手。（those）

73.背包旅行（backpacking）不僅是一種度假形式，也是一種受教育方式。（Not only）

74.人們理所當(dāng)然地認(rèn)為花的錢越多就越有可能獲得高品質(zhì)的服務(wù)。(grant)75.網(wǎng)購是一種電子商務(wù)，它讓顧客可以足不出戶地購買心儀的商品或服務(wù)。（commerce）

72.Those who want to see the movie with me, please raise/put up your hands.73.Not only is backpacking a way of taking a holiday/going on holiday/ spending a vacation, but also it is/ but it also is a means of being educated/ education.74.People take it for granted that the more you spend, the more likely you are to get a quality experience.或者It is taken for granted that the more you spend, the more likely you will get quality experiences.75.Online shopping is a form of electronic commerce, which allows consumers to purchase ideal goods or service without stepping out of their houses.閔行卷

72.看孩子們在沙灘上打排球很有趣。(fun)73.我剛交卷就意識到少回答了一個問題。（Hardly?）

74.這本詞典需要做徹底修改，什么時候再版還不得而知。（revise）75.這種收音機(jī)已經(jīng)很落伍了，不增加新功能的話很難有銷路。（unless）76.公共場所全面禁言有助于人們養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣，并能有效預(yù)防某些疾病的發(fā)生。(prevent)72.It’s fun to look at the children playing volleyball on the beach.73.Hardly had I handed in the test paper when I realized I missed a question 74.The dictionary needs to be thoroughly revised , and it’s unknown when it will be republished.75.This kind of radio is quite out of fashion , so it’s hard to sell unless new features/ functions are added(to it).76.The comprehensive ban on smoking in public places can help people develop healthy lifestyles and effectively prevent certain diseases from happening.徐匯卷

72.鈴聲一響，孩子們就沖了出來。（Out）73.出事后不久，朱莉(Julie)就被停職了。(suspend)74.會當(dāng)凌絕頂，一覽眾山小。(when)75.一些歐洲國家一直不愿接受非洲移民，部分原因是他們擔(dān)心社會安全問題。(reluctant)72.Out rushed the children as soon as the bell rang.73.Julie was suspended from her job shortly after the incident.74.When I stand on the top of Mount.Tai, the other mountains appear so small.// When reaching the top of Mount.Tai, I hold all other mountains in a single glance.（注：本句中未提及泰山，不扣分，只要提及站在高山頂。）

75.Some European countries have been reluctant to admit African immigrants, partly because they are concerned about social security problems.黃浦卷

72.永遠(yuǎn)不要對你孩子的缺點熟視無睹。(blind)73.任何情況下，你都不應(yīng)該惡意評論他人。(Under?)74.申請人必須精通英語，否則他無法勝任這個崗位。(command)75.除了美味的咖啡和甜品，這間咖啡館還提供各種書籍，從小說到詩歌，應(yīng)有盡有，足以讓你安靜地 度過一個下午。(range)72.Never turn a blind eye to your kid's shortcoming(s).或者Never be blind to your kid's shortcoming(s).73.Under no circumstances should you make ill/ evil/ bad comments on others.74.The applicant must have a good command of English/ command English well, or he won't be qualified for the job.75.Besides nice coffee and dessert, the café provides all kinds of books, ranging from novels to poetry, so that you can stay for a whole quiet afternoon.崇明卷

72.這只訓(xùn)練有素的警犬對任何聲響都很警覺。(alert)73.利用好圖書館無疑會對你的學(xué)習(xí)有益。(doubt)74.新的交通法規(guī)規(guī)定，機(jī)動車在任何情況下都得避讓行人。(way)75.共享單車不僅使用方便，而且價格合理，為短途出行提供了一種額外選擇。(Not only)72.The well-trained police dog is alert to any sound.73.There is no doubt that taking advantage of the library will benefit your study.No doubt/ Without doubt, taking advantage of the library will benefit your study.Taking advantage of the library, without doubt, is good for your study.74.The new traffic regulations make it a rule that vehicles must give way to pedestrians in any case/ under any circumstance.75.Not only are shared bikes convenient to use, but also their prices are reasonable, so they provide an additional choice for short trips.奉賢卷

72.根據(jù)最新頒布的交通法，車內(nèi)任何人員都必須系好安全帶。(fasten)73.這是一個簡單的故事，但是簡單并不代表缺乏深度。（lack）

74.正是他良好的英語聽說能力使他在這次英語演講比賽中脫穎而出。（it）75.說起健康時，世界各地的人都將增加睡眠放在第一位，而非飲食健康、加強(qiáng)鍛煉或補(bǔ)充 維生素。(priority)72.According to the newly-issued traffic laws, anyone in a car must fasten the seat belt.73.This is a simple story, but simplicity doesn’t mean a lack of depth.74.It was his English listening and speaking ability that enabled him to stand out in the English speech contest.75.When it comes to being healthy, the top priority for people all over the world is having more sleep rather than eating health food, exercising more or taking vitamins.或：When it comes to health, people all over the world give priority to having more sleep rather than …

或：When it comes to health, people all over the world think their first priority is having more sleep rather than ? 嘉定卷

72.現(xiàn)如今人們越來越關(guān)注自己的生活品質(zhì)。（concerned）73.春游的小學(xué)生們沒能抵制住商販們的花言巧語。（resist）

74.只有通過參與志愿者活動才能有效地增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生服務(wù)大眾的責(zé)任感。（Only）

75.家用轎車普及帶來的便利不容否認(rèn)，但隨之產(chǎn)生的能源浪費、空氣污染和交通擁堵等問題發(fā)人深思。（While）

72.Nowadays people are more and more concerned about the quality of their own life.73.The children going for a spring outing/ attending the spring excursion failed to / couldn't resist the sweet words of the dealers/ vendors.74.Only by participating in volunteer/ voluntary activities can high school students enhance/ improve/ strengthen their sense of responsibility to serve the public effectively.75.While the convenience brought by the popularity of private cars can't be denied, the consequent(ial)problems such as waste of energy, air pollution and traffic jams set people thinking/ are thought-provoking.While there is no denying that the popularity of private cars brings convenience,...虹口卷

72.看到他的表情，我忍不住把實情告訴了他。(resist)73.隨著時間的推移，那本日記上的字跡現(xiàn)在已模糊不清，難以辨認(rèn)。（With）74.把難記的單詞或句子同一件有趣的事情聯(lián)系起來，記住它們就輕而易舉了。（associate）

75.正是因為學(xué)習(xí)方法因人而異，所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中適合你的不一定就適合我。（vary）

72.Seeing his facial expressions/ look, I couldn’t resist telling him the truth/ telling the truth to him.73.With time passing by, the writing/ handwriting in the diary has now become so faint/ illegible/ vague that it is hard to identify/ recognize/ make out/ distinguish.74.It will be/ is very easy to memorize difficult words or sentences if / when you associate them with interesting/ funny things.… if / when they are associated with interesting/ funny things.75.It is because learning methods vary from person to person that what is suitable for you may not/ doesn’t necessarily suit me in study and life.浦東卷

72.正巧這幾天有空，去公園散步如何？(happen)73.一幅油畫贈與了該美術(shù)館，以紀(jì)念兩個城市間的珍貴友誼。（honor）74.與詩歌欣賞有關(guān)的電視節(jié)目倍受歡迎，以至于越來越多的人開始關(guān)注中國古典文學(xué)。(So?)75.這位年輕的科學(xué)家把獲得的眾多突出成就歸功于從高中時期開始就博覽群書、做事持之以恒、不甘落后。（owe）

72.It(so)happens that we are / I am free these days.What about / How about taking / having a walk in the park? 或者What about having a walk in the park as / since we / I happen to be free these days? 73.An oil painting/A painting/ A picture was given/presented/has been given/has been presented to the gallery/art museum in honor of/to honor/honoring the precious/valuable friendship between(the)two cities.74.So popular/well-received are the TV programs about poetry appreciation that more and more people are beginning to pay attention to Chinese classic/classical literature.或者So well are the TV programs about poetry appreciation received that? 75.The young scientist owed many of his outstanding/ great/ marked/ remarked/ distinguished achievements/ much success to reading widely/ extensively/ many books, persevering/ persisting in(doing)everything/ what he was doing/ keeping doing everything/ things and being unwilling to lag behind/ fall behind/ be left behind since(he entered senior)high school.或? to the fact that he(had)read widely/extensively,(had)persevered/persisted in everything/what he was doing and was/had been unwilling/reluctant to …

靜安卷

72.由于缺乏獨特的文化，一些地方將不再吸引游客。(lack)73.自律和有經(jīng)驗的員工非常受青睞。(prefer)74.嘉賓們的故事以及他們朗讀的文章如此感人鼓舞人心，在大眾中激起了讀書的熱情。(So)75.雖然他之前的表現(xiàn)出挑，但由于對公司文化一無所知，他還是沒通過面試。(ignorance)72.Lacking unique/ peculiar culture, some places will not attract tourists / visitors any more.For lack of unique/peculiar culture, some places will no longer attract tourists / visitors.73.Self-disciplined / Self-managed and experienced staff are most / much preferred.74.So moving / touching and inspiring are the guests' stories and the articles they read that a passion / enthusiasm for reading has been aroused / stirred(up)among the(general)public.75.Despite/In spite of his previous remarkable performance, he failed in /didn’t pass the interview because he was in ignorance of the company culture.Although/Though his previous performance was remarkable/ outstanding/ extraordinary/ amazing, he failed in /didn’t pass the interview due to/ owing to because of his ignorance of the company culture.名師押題卷

1.他由于缺乏日常訓(xùn)練而未通過駕駛考試。(lack)2.直到上了地鐵二號線她才想起把書包忘在上?？萍拣^了。(Not)3.以犧牲健康為代價而減肥的人應(yīng)該意識到改變這種生活方式的重要性。(cost)4.盡管幾天來非常勞累，戰(zhàn)士們還是迅速趕到另一水災(zāi)地區(qū)實施救援。(despite)1.He failed to pass the driving test for lack of daily training./ because he lacked daily training.2.Not until she got on the Metro/ Subway Line 2 did it occur to her/ she remember that she had left her bag in the Shanghai Science and Technology Museum.3.Those who try to lose weight at the cost of their health should realize the importance of changing their way life/ lifestyle.4.Despite/ In spite of the great tiredness for days, the soldiers still rushed to another flooded area/ another flood-stricken area for the rescue/ to carry out the rescue.