第一篇：2014.1 閔行區(qū)高三英語一模優(yōu)秀作文

2014.1閔行區(qū)高三一模優(yōu)秀作文

I am Li Ming from Ming Qi Middle School.Recently I have learned from your webpage that “Aigongxian” is a public organization whose major work involves programs relevant to helping children in poverty-stricken areas.Almost at the same time, word came were recruiting some volunteers during this summer vacation.I’d like to join you without the slightest hesitation, and my reasons are as follows:

To begin with, I prefer to apply for the post of a cameraman.Not only am I fond of taking photos, but I also have professional skills.I believe that people will have a clearer knowledge of the living conditions of the children there through my photos.Apart from what I have mentioned above, I believe that my photos will appeal to more people to realize the lack of education in remote areas as well as the increasingly large gap between urban cities and countries.Consequently, there will be more kind people to join you to improve the children’s living conditions.In a nutshell, I am eager to do my part as a volunteer of you.Poverty has become a social phenomenon and no easy way is at hand to tackle it.However, it’s high time that everyone volunteered to help poor children.Combined efforts will make a great difference.I hope that you will accept me as a cameraman in the organization.（232 words）

第二篇：2013閔行區(qū)初中一模

2013閔行區(qū)初中一模

作文題目：嘿!再往前一步

范文：

距離，并不遙遠(yuǎn)，只要你往前一步;機(jī)會，并不遙遠(yuǎn)，只要你勇敢往前……

記得剛開學(xué)的時候，每次看到的都是我一個人孤單的背影……

來到這個陌生的學(xué)校，陌生的班級，面對陌生的同學(xué)，本應(yīng)高興和激動，卻不知怎的，心里平添了一份恐懼和擔(dān)憂。因為通過這些天，我發(fā)現(xiàn)，我融入不到這些陌生的同學(xué)中去。我畢竟是轉(zhuǎn)來的，在小學(xué)認(rèn)識的同學(xué)一個都沒有，所以我形成了下課就往外跑的習(xí)慣，我去找我的小學(xué)死黨，聽她說她班有好多在小學(xué)的同學(xué)，我很傷心，又很氣憤——別的班就那么多小學(xué)同學(xué)，我班就我一個人!

爸爸給我說，要多與新同學(xué)交往，不要總是去找那些老同學(xué)，在初中還是和同班同學(xué)接觸多!其實我，又何嘗不想多與現(xiàn)在的同學(xué)交往，建立真摯的友誼，成為朋友呢?只是我感覺，我們之間的距離太遙遠(yuǎn)，我不知該如何與他們溝通，仿佛我們根本就是兩個世界的人。后來，我干脆連原來的同學(xué)也不怎么來往了，我不能因為我交不到新朋友，而占用他們結(jié)交新友的時間……所以那段時間，我一個人看書，上體育課時，一個人靜靜地坐在那兒，看著他們有說有笑，放學(xué)回家，還是一個人，總感覺那路是那么漫長……那一段時間，是最難熬的時候……

終于，我熬不住了，一個人的學(xué)習(xí)生活實在太枯燥，連商量題，都沒得人找。我決定主動跨越那距離，拋棄那自我主義，與同學(xué)溝通、交流。我首先想到的，就是月考。在小學(xué)的時候，我的成績就還行，所以身邊的朋友也不少，畢竟大多數(shù)人還是比較愿意和學(xué)習(xí)好的同學(xué)交往吧。我下定決心要好好考，每天不斷地努力，終于，月考第一名，有的同學(xué)向我祝賀，我便與他們聊了幾句，許多同學(xué)與我成為了朋友，可還是有一部分同學(xué)沒有太多的交集，不過，我想印象應(yīng)該不是很差吧，以后慢慢來……

一個月過去了，我結(jié)交了很多朋友，期中考試悄悄地靠近了我們，可在此之前，我們還要去一個地方，紅沙溝。聽到這個消息，我很高興，因為我知道這是個結(jié)交朋友的好機(jī)會，當(dāng)我聽到我要和***她們一個宿舍時，我更是開心，我知道她們都學(xué)習(xí)很好，我很早就想和她們成為朋友了，只是沒什么機(jī)會，現(xiàn)在好了，我擁有和她們交往的機(jī)會和時間了……在紅沙溝的一周很快就過去了，在這一周里，我們一起吃零食，一起唱歌，一起聊天，一起討論問題……我突然發(fā)現(xiàn)，她們離我并不那么遙遠(yuǎn)，她們很平易近人，之間也很平等，學(xué)習(xí)很好，也很團(tuán)結(jié)，突然發(fā)現(xiàn)有朋友，真好!

回到學(xué)校，我們開始了我們的學(xué)習(xí)生活，我也融入到了這個班級，還擁有許多要好的朋友……發(fā)現(xiàn)，這個學(xué)校，這個班級，這些同學(xué)，不再那么陌生，和他們共同學(xué)習(xí)，真好!距離，并不遙遠(yuǎn)，只要你往前一步;機(jī)會，并不遙遠(yuǎn)，只要你勇敢往前……

我望著我的朋友們，笑了，那個孤單的背影，不見了……

第三篇：2011學(xué)年區(qū)一模高三英語作文學(xué)生

2011學(xué)年高三英語作文學(xué)生范文

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Nowadays people have a wide selection when they go traveling.Some prefer a package tour, while others choose self-organized tours.As for me, I like package tours better.First of all, it is safe to be led by tour guides.Tourists can have an idea of the dangerous places such as cliffs and iceburgs according to the introduction given by their tour guides.Also, when we go to somewhere unfamiliar, we’d better avoid getting lost and avoid going to the spots that are not worth the ticket money!

Second, in a package tour, tourists never have to worry about the food, the vehicles and the accommodations.All they’ve got to do is just to put on their coats and press the “shoot” button on the camera!Furthermore, a group of tourists can often enjoy discounts in restaurants and hotels.Third, the group members can easily make friends with each other.Getting along well enough, they may even come to figure out the plan for their next trip together!

As you can see, what a wise choice it is to go on a package tour!I’m really looking forward to having my personal safety, daily necessities and social network guaranteed by a tourist agency.（2）

Gone are the days that we stay at home during vacation.Instead, we travel here and there.However, some people prefer package tour while some people tend to choose self-organized tour.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer package tour.It not only costs less but also

provides us with tour guides.So convenient is it that we don’t need to worry about get ting lost in a totally new city, and guides will show us around all the places of interest.Furthermore, package tour makes it easy for us to make friends with different people from various cities.In the tourist team, we may establish some precious friendships.However, every coin has its two sides.Package tour is not free enough, which may

result in much inconvenience.For example, we must follow the schedule of travel agency, thus limiting our free time.To sum up, each of the ways has its own advantages as well as disadvantages.What matters most is that we should choose the better way which is fit for ourselves.(3)

While recently more and more people are in favour of self-organized tour, I always hold the idea that package tour is still my favourite.Above all, package tour can bring much convenience.I still remember the time when I first went abroad.I didn’t know how to go through the customs and fortunately the tour guide helped me.Besides, I don’t have to think much about

spending too much money as package tour has a lot of discounts.I can stay in a 4-star hotel at a rather low cost.That must be nice.What’s more, package tour brings more than travelling.We are sure to meet

strangers from different parts of China and within several days of staying together, we share a lot of our experiences of traveling and thus we become friends.I believe that is much more fascinating than just traveling itself.Many people may criticize that package tour lacks freedom.However, it just depends on how you define it.When I’m traveling, I am free of worries and I’m in the realm of freedom.So, come on!Join our package tour!You’re sure to meet with more splendors.（4）

Nowadays，people have more ways to travel.Some people prefer package tour due to its low expenses and the guide available.But for me, I prefer self-organized tour.An obvious advantage is that the timetable is more flexible.You can arrange the schedule on the way at any time.You don’t have to visit the tourist attractions one by one as you do during package tours.Without the time limit, you can get closer to the local culture, especially in some unfamiliar area.Local inhabitants can tell you more than the guides do.You can enjoy to the greatest extent at your destination.However, self-organized tour may be exhausting that you need to manage the meals and accommodations by yourself.But to be optimistic, you can enjoy the local cuisine more.In my opinion, you can take a package tour or get enough information on the Internet before you decide to take a self-organized one.（5）

Nowadays there are a variety of traveling ways from which people may choose.Some people choose a self-organized tour while others choose a package one.From my perspective, I prefer the former one.Travel is one of the best ways to release oneself and relieve the pressure.In a self-organized tour, people around me are all my friends and family members, people who I enjoy being with.So I will feel more free and casual during the tour, which ensures that the tour will be more fun and reach the goal of relaxing ourselves.By organizing the tour by myself, the schedule is tailored for my needs.I can arrange the destinations as I like.This will help me learn more from the tour whether the history, the traditions or the culture of my destinations, making the whole tour more meaningful.I am certain to collect a lot of precious memory there.However, there is something inconvenient.I have to deal with my meals and hotels.But as every coin has two sides, my friends and I can pick what we prefer to taste and where to stay in the course.After all, food culture is also interesting and important.And we can choose a more satisfying hotel to stay in.The key of travel is to experience.I believe my friends and I will experience a lot of beautiful things during a self-organized tour.And that is enough.(6)

With the rapid development of China’s economy, people tend to go traveling to relieve their pressure.When it comes to how to travel, opinions vary from person to person.Some people are in favor of package tour.They argue that it costs less but has

good service.What’s more, they can make friends easily, although they may not be so free.In my humble opinion, I enjoy self-organized tour better.Listed below are some reasons that I hold.First and foremost, there is no denying that the self-organized tour provides us with much freedom.We can stop for a rest wherever we want.Second, without the tourist guide, we are able to choose the tourist attractions that interest us most.It’s a perfect way to develop our ability to organize and arrange.What should be taken into consideration is that since we are with parents or friends, we have the same taste, and there’s no need for us to argue over where to eat.No garden without weeds, so it may cost more, when we look for hotels by ourselves.All in all, as long as we enjoy ourselves and follow the way that suits us best, it’s totally a perfect way.

第四篇：2010高三英語一模分析會發(fā)言稿

2010高三英語一模分析會發(fā)言稿

溫州市第二十二中學(xué) 張曉玲

一：試卷總評

大家好！我是張曉玲，來自溫州市第二十二中學(xué)。今天有幸代表我們高三英語備課組發(fā)言，請大家多多關(guān)照，多提寶貴意見！我們組認(rèn)為2010年溫州市高三第一次適應(yīng)性測試（英語試題）（簡稱一模）參照09新課標(biāo)新高考的題型和總體結(jié)構(gòu)，主觀題部分保留短文改錯和作文題材，要求學(xué)生寫一篇新聞報道及學(xué)生的感受和評價。這是一份難度適中，較能考察學(xué)生英語實際水平的試卷，體現(xiàn)了高考“選拔性”考試的特點。

一模英語試卷單選部分較全面的考查了高中英語語法現(xiàn)象，除冠詞，代詞，介詞，動詞，名詞，動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)，連詞，非謂語動詞，定語從句外，還考查了考試詞義辨析的能力，如7，10，18和20； 側(cè)重考查了4道省略句和其他語法點的結(jié)合（第8，11，15，19題）。個別題目略有難度，如題12，15。我校學(xué)生單選平均得分5.03，主要失誤的題目是6，7，12。學(xué)生普遍反映有點難，選題的時候有些猶豫，有些糾結(jié)。

完型填空難度適中，夾敘夾議，符合高考試題的特點。側(cè)重考查學(xué)生對全文的理解，以及上下文之間的聯(lián)系。我校學(xué)生失分最多的是在第23，29，34，37，其次是24，26 和38.平均得分在11分.閱讀理解部分題材比較廣泛，對于學(xué)生的認(rèn)知詞匯有比較高的要求，詞匯基本定位在module5單元中出現(xiàn)的詞匯，個別題目屬于區(qū)分度很高的題目。部分閱讀篇幅生詞較多，但選項整體難度中等，猜測詞義要求學(xué)生前后聯(lián)系，注重考查學(xué)生對篇幅中已知信息的捕捉，也較好地考查了學(xué)生的邏輯推理能力。如A篇第43道題，學(xué)生的失誤率就很高。閱讀拿滿分的學(xué)生有，拿10分的學(xué)生也有。主要原因是詞匯量的大小。詞匯量決定了閱讀的速度，個別學(xué)生來不及就在最后倆篇閱讀文章中亂蒙，所以57—65失分就特別明顯。平均得分為31.39.任務(wù)型閱讀有點偏難。

短文改錯，我校平均得分為5.31.最大的失誤點是最后一個改錯，加入it.考查的是句型結(jié)構(gòu)：feel it+n.to do.學(xué)生沒有看出來。還有一個失誤是help 改為helping，學(xué)生知道help有名詞用法，但不知道本篇需要動詞用法，而且還要做主語的。the改為a, serious改為seriously也存在失誤。主要的原因是學(xué)生在平時的寫作過程中自己也會犯同樣的錯誤。所以很難改出文章的失誤。今后短文改錯在寫作練習(xí)中提高。寫作作為語言輸出的重要部分，其重要的一項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是：要運用較高級的詞匯并注意句式變化。而學(xué)生的特點就是中文式思維，學(xué)生的文章就是機(jī)械性翻譯，我們稱之為“吐魯番”式作文。學(xué)生時間來不及，匆匆下筆，想到什么就翻譯下什么。尤其是第二段要求描寫處理方式。詞匯，優(yōu)美句子的儲存量遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠輸出。心理的因素也是導(dǎo)致失分的原因。平均得分為15.96.二：主要問題

1.個體差異大

我校學(xué)生文科平均分72，聽力22，理科平均68，聽力21。文科最高分137，最低分39（含聽力）。理科最高分138.5，最低分40（含聽力）。

2.單選得分低。動詞的用法及詞組辨析仍然是學(xué)生的弱點，很多學(xué)生詞匯量達(dá)不到考試的詞匯要求，英語語法知識簿弱。語言運用能力較差。尤其是省略部分。

3.閱讀得分低。在閱讀理解中，學(xué)生對那些需要邏輯推理、深層理解和綜合分析的題目，解答有些困難?；A(chǔ)較簿弱的學(xué)生閱讀速度達(dá)不到大綱提出的“每分鐘70-80詞的要求”。

最后是時間把握的問題。往往學(xué)生試題做不完，而導(dǎo)致學(xué)生心理考試不穩(wěn)定。有些同學(xué)害怕時間不夠，學(xué)生先從做閱讀題開始，碰到閱讀挫折了或是看了前4篇后花費時間太多，學(xué)生就慌，隨意做單選和其他剩余題目。按他們的話說，就是蒙的?？窟\氣了。整個是在混亂緊張狀況下考試。于是在書面表達(dá)中，學(xué)生存在著審題不清，遺漏內(nèi)容，層次混亂，用詞單調(diào)，語言組織能力不強，語句中常見錯誤太多，書寫不認(rèn)真等問題。

三：復(fù)習(xí)對策

1.因材施教

對于學(xué)生個體存在較大差異，一個班級里也有差異。我們的教學(xué)中心在于中等偏上的學(xué)生。對于在課堂上吃不飽的學(xué)生，我們采用“放養(yǎng)式”管理。你上課好好聽，下課的作業(yè)對于懂的，可以挑著做，但是一定要做。再布置其他可以提高閱讀能力的文章讓他們做。讓他們學(xué)會自己學(xué)習(xí)，培養(yǎng)自學(xué)和取舍材料的能力。對于學(xué)英語比較困難的學(xué)生，增加他們的詞匯量，在模塊課文復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)過程中，讓學(xué)生學(xué)會和掌握詞匯。在他們身上舍得花時間，花力氣狠抓詞匯，運用聽寫、默寫、翻譯、造句、背誦優(yōu)美詞句等各種訓(xùn)練手段來掌握重點詞匯的用法?？荚囌f明上所提及的2500個字務(wù)必落實，每天一欄進(jìn)行中文標(biāo)注，聽寫，失誤講解。

2.單選適量

我們的突破口在于5年高考3年模擬這本練習(xí)書。每天必須布置的作業(yè)是5.3上的語法項目，規(guī)定一個語法一個專題分兩天或三天完成，寫出規(guī)定的頁碼。第二天必須檢查，跟他們的平時成績掛鉤。對于學(xué)生的不重視，我們一定要督促學(xué)生寫好做好5.3。

3.完型靠悟

在做完型填空的時候，先要讓學(xué)生完義，整體理解最重要。學(xué)生在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中要求學(xué)生“回填法”。即把正確的答案填回到文章中，之后來朗讀文章，整體理解文章。再出現(xiàn)問題，教師來解答。做到有的放矢。自己能解答的問題自己解答，留下時間多練習(xí)和他們自我總結(jié)。讓他們多讀多記，強化語言基本知識及加強基本技能的培養(yǎng)，特別要注重同義詞，近義詞的辨析，弄懂每個詞的內(nèi)涵與外延，確切的意義和適用的場合，同時還應(yīng)具備提煉文章主題思想及依據(jù)相關(guān)信息的推斷能力。

4.閱讀突破

我們的突破口是每堂課前的限時訓(xùn)練，材料是Superstar高考閱讀完型自練測，一周練3次，并及時講解。材料的選擇務(wù)必是教師做過的，最好配合模塊復(fù)習(xí)的主題。其他三次，是用CCTV-9的新聞材料，也是配合主題，自編題目，基本涉及5個wh，或是自選模塊題5中的一題，就劃線句子講講你的理解。要求學(xué)生在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)讀完，并回答問題。教師自己查找新聞材料，一讓學(xué)生了解時事動態(tài)，也符合高考的閱讀期中一篇文章可能是新聞報道類，讓學(xué)生了解新聞報道類文體的特點。新聞報道的中心話題務(wù)必出現(xiàn)在首段。二也讓選擇自選的同學(xué)提供訓(xùn)練的機(jī)會。最后劃出個別的單詞讓學(xué)生來記憶，增加詞匯量。這樣的新聞材料，學(xué)生是歡迎，是有興趣的。這比什么都有效。

5.寫作背默

每周一套試題（從天利38套中選出），試題中的作文要認(rèn)真寫過，上交批改，18分以上的同學(xué)給他們分?jǐn)?shù)，低于18分的同學(xué)要求重新改過，改到18以上為止。這類學(xué)生至少該過兩次。之后我們從中挑選好文章，再讓學(xué)生修改，做短文改錯一樣來修改文章，最后老師定奪，把優(yōu)秀的作文打印出來供全體同學(xué)背誦，第二天并默寫。要求保持好文章，以便在臨考前一定要復(fù)習(xí)作文，分類型背誦已經(jīng)背默過的作文。這樣學(xué)生在考試時一是穩(wěn)定心理，二是心中有底，下筆有靈感。學(xué)生發(fā)揮就好。

我們組預(yù)計在三月底完成5.3語法復(fù)習(xí)和模塊7的復(fù)習(xí)，四月份是專題訓(xùn)練，分單選，完型，閱讀，改錯，寫作訓(xùn)練。材料由教師分任務(wù)完成，可以再次挑選5.3其中容易出錯的試題，讓學(xué)生溫故已學(xué)的，并糾正學(xué)生錯誤的思維。最后就是練天利38套，精講精練。教無定法。在離高考只有三個月的日子里，能激發(fā)學(xué)生興趣，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的聽、說、讀、寫能力的教學(xué)方法都是有效的。

四：復(fù)習(xí)困惑

我校早晚聽力各一次。一模聽力成績比9月份的考試沒有明顯的提升。我們聽力材料用快捷英語和暢想英語。學(xué)生反映我們聽的材料簡單，考試的時候聽力材料有些難度。我們是在困惑聽力材料的選擇和聽力時間的安排。

第五篇：咸陽市2013—2014學(xué)高三(英語)一模答案

咸陽市2014年高考模擬考試

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