第一篇:3高考英語應對策略與基礎寫作指導(說明利弊題型)
高考英語應對策略與基礎寫作指導
浙江省溫州市龍灣區(qū)教師發(fā)展中心 盧曉江
第三講 議論文:說明利弊題型
一、題型特點
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A測)
1、說明事物現(xiàn)狀
2、事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(或一方面)3、你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
二、利弊題型作文模版
Nowadays many people prefer------------------A(事物現(xiàn)狀)because it has an important role in our daily life.Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優(yōu)點之一).Besides-------------------(A的優(yōu)點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).
三、實例演練
面對當前中學生“出國熱”,請你以此為題,談談中學生出國留學的利與弊。(可以從以下幾方面考慮,但不一定要面面俱到:年齡、生活經(jīng)驗、自理能力、生活學習費用、語言學習環(huán)境、傳播民族文化、學習國外先進科學技術(shù)。字數(shù):100—120個)
四、模板參考范文
Nowadays many middle school students prefer studying abroad because it has an important role in our daily life.Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.First it gives us a good surroundings for language study.Second we can learn foreign advanced science and technology.Besides we can also spread our national culture to foreign countries.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that middle school students are too young to care of themselves and that they are lack of life experience.To make matters worse,the cost for life and study is too high. Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to go abroad for my further education.
五、高分參考范文
Studying abroad in recent years has been popular.More and more students leave their own country to go abroad for their further education.They say that they can develop better with advanced facilities and teaching methods in those modern schools.By communicating with foreign students or staying a long time with them, a profitable experience is available to them.By the time they come back home, they are supposed to have a great advantage over the students at home in many ways.I quite agree with what they say.But one fact I’d like to remind them of is that quite a number of overseas students are disappointed as they can’t obtain what they hope for, let alone success.When they are abroad, they are helpless and have to be independent, which is quite contrary to what it is at home.They lack independence, can’t even tell right and wrong apart, and as a result some of them even commit crimes.Therefore, whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual.So take more factors into careful consideration.
第二篇:廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導
廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導(系列1)
第一講 記敘文:如何寫人
一、寫作指導
高考英語基礎寫作中的寫人側(cè)重人物的介紹,可以用第一人稱(如寫求職信),也可以用第三人稱,時態(tài)常常用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,具體的人稱和時態(tài)要依據(jù)寫作的要求來確定。寫作過程中要注意以下幾個方面的問題:
1.人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長、事跡、性格等多個方面,但英語基礎寫作需要嚴格按照寫作要求來寫,包括所給的全部信息點,既不能遺漏,也不能隨意添加。
2.對題目所給的信息要進行適當重組,安排好寫作順序,突出重點信息。重點信息通常是寫作的目的所在,比如求職要重點突出學歷、經(jīng)歷,新聞報道要重點突出事跡,介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點,等等。
3.正確運用描寫人物的詞匯和句型。
4.注意運用正確的時態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時,而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時。
二、常用詞語
外貌特征:
beautiful, big nose, black eyes,fat, good-looking,handsome, healthy, near-sighted,ordinary-looking,pretty,short,strong, tall,thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特點:
absent-minded, attractive,bad-tempered,be ready to help others, bright,charming,confident, diligent,friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous,independent, kind, kind-hearted,lazy,narrow-minded, naughty,patient,think of others, smart,talkative,warm-hearted,wise,etc.出生年齡:
a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one's fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.興趣愛好:
be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one's work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for(long to do), make rapid progress in, put one's heart into, take a pleasure in doing;wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景:
be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test,a master's degree, get on well with one's lessons, give sb.a passing grade,,go abroad to further one's study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor's degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.經(jīng)歷事跡:
become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one's business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one's life for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one's mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one's best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人評價:
an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb.as a genius, consider sb.as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.參考范文:
Dear Manager,I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company.My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981.I studied in Foshan No.1 Middle School from 1994-2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studiedcomputer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company.I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank you
Yours Truely
Li Hua
參考例文:
Hi, everyone.I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player.He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times.Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls.He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that.Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.參考范文
1.Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively.She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing.When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study.In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize.Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2.請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩,展開適當?shù)南胂?,寫一篇短文。標題為:My Teacher Mr.Moore
There's a teacher Mr.Moore.Who is lovely and thirty-four.Always encouraging us to try.He leads us to a world of “why”.We all admire him more and more.要求:1.不得照抄短詩原文。
2.必須突出短詩的主題,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語意連貫。3.短文不能寫成詩歌形式。
4.只能使用價值個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。
廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導(系列2)
高考英語基礎寫作指導(II)
第二講 記敘文:如何敘事?
一、寫作指導
敘事類記敘文通常要將時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果等六個要素交代清楚。好的記敘文具有描述事件具體、人物逼真形象、故事生動感人、材料表現(xiàn)中心和寫作主旨明確等特征。高考英語基礎寫作中的敘事類短文也需要具有記敘文寫作的一般特點,但要求相對比較低,其考查重點在語言運用正確、句子連貫通順、信息點表述完整等方面。寫作時要注意以下幾個方面的問題:
1.嚴格按照基礎寫作的要求完成各個信息點,不要為了文章的生動而隨意添加信息。
2.信息點的表述不要完全按照題目所給的順序,要適當重組信息點。
3.記敘文寫作的時態(tài)多數(shù)是用一般過去時,但也要注意靈活運用其它時態(tài)。
4.敘事類記敘文的話題通常和中學生的生活閱歷有關,如校園生活、旅游、交通、交友等,平時要注意積累這些方面的詞匯和短語。
二、常用語句
1.表達時間
a long time ago, at six o'clock in the morning, at the end of, at the weekend, before he came here, by the end of last term, during the summer holidays, in a few years' time, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in August 2002, in winter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, not...until, while , etc.2.表達地點
at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the airport, at the village, at the foot of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind the park, be situated in, five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangdong Province, in the middle of the park, in Class 3 Grade 2, in the front of the bus, in front of the bus, in the tree, in Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, onthe other side of the street, on both sides of the road,on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc.3.表達因果
as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, consequently, originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that..., It turns out to be..., The primary reason is..., etc.4.事件話題
(1)學校生活及學習成績
be active in class, be interested in, be interesting to sb., be fond of, be good at ,be poor at , be tired of one's work, be weak in, do one's homework, do sports after school,do well in;education for all-round development(素質(zhì)教育), examination-oriented education system(應試教育), fail in the test, get a doctor's degree, get on well with English, get an “A” in the exam, get 90 marks for English, give sb.a passing grade, have a good command of the language, have eight classes every day, help with each other, lay a good foundation in, learn...by heart, major in history, make friends with sb., make progress in, put one's heart into, pass the examination, study in groups, succeed in doing sth., take an active part in the activity,take several courses at school, work out a problem, work on a maths problem , work hard at, etc.(2)師生關系及其活動
be friendly to sb., be kind to sb, be a strict teacher, be strict with one's pupils, be strict in one's work, be satisfied with , blame sb.for sth, correct the students' homework carefully, devote all one's time to work, form a good habit of, get on wellwith sb, give advice on, give sb a lot of work , help sb with sth, make one's lessonslively and interesting, praise sb for sth., prepare for tomorrow's lesson, question sb on, teach sb.English , teach sb how to do sth., etc.(3)課余活動及周末生活
do some reading, enjoy a family trip, enjoy doing sth., go swimming, go for an outing, go to the cinema, have an outing at the seashore, have a swim, have dances on weekends, have a picnic at the weekend, have a party, hold a sports meeting, Internet bar, net friend, online love affair(網(wǎng)戀), play the piano, play chess(basketball), see the sights of Beijing, spend one's time in many different ways, teach in a family, etc.(4)交通情況
a big traffic jam, a traffic accident, be very crowded in the street, be seriously injured, by bus(train / ship / boat), drive a car, flight No.2130, in a small boat, give sb.a lift, keep right, lie on the street, meet sb.at the station, on the bus(train),on board, on one's way to London, on the journey, one way only , pick up sb., ride a bike, ride a horse , see sb.off at the airport, self-service ticket , take a flight to New York, traffic light, travel through China, turn right, etc.(5)度假旅游
New Year's Day, Women's Day, May Day, Youth Day, Children's Day, Teachers' Day, Mid-Autumn Day, National Day, valentine's Day, the Spring Festival, a hot spot, a place of interest, a tourist destination, a five-star hotel, a good restaurant, a return ticket, a single ticket, a city with a long history, a quiet village, a three-day tour, an experienced guide, Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, beautiful scenery, in peak tourist seasons, natural attraction, on one's way to France, on the back way , one of the great wonders of the world, spend one's holidays on the sea , the 11th Asian Games, travel agency, the tour route, the inner-ring road, travel to England, the Great Wall , the Summer Place , Zhongshan Park , etc.(6)環(huán)境保護
a good environment, area pollution, air pollution, air quality standard, Antarctic Circle, atmospheric chemistry, a heavy rain, a heavy snow, be polluted, be hot, be cold, be cool, be cloudy, be rainy, be sunny, be flooded, climate, carbon dioxide(CO2), chemical change, chemical cleaning of coal, climate change, dirty, drought, dry, flood, early warning system, environmental behavior, environmental quality, feel comfortable, global warming, minus 20 degrees centigrade(-20°), 30 degrees above zero(30°),sea level, warning center, wastes, water surface , water treatment, water pollution control, weather, windstorm , etc.三、典型例文
參考范文:
Dear Jane,I am very glad to tell you something about our school, Guangdong No.3 Middle school.It lies in a small town about 15 kilometres away from the sea and it has a history of over 80 years.Our school, covering an area of nearly 150 thousand square meters, has more than 200 teachers and 3000 senior students It has three teaching buildings and six dormitory buildings, with many flowers and tall trees all around, so it's very beautiful.In our school we learn Chinese, maths, science, English, computer,PE, arts and some other subjects.We warmly welcome you to visit our school in the summer holidays.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
參考范文:
A brief Introduction of the Chinese Spring Festival
The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year, which is usually in February.There is a name for each year, such as the dog, the monkey, the tiger or one of the twelve animals, and this year is the year of the pig.Before the New Year's Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a good cleaning and on the last evening of the old year, all the members of a family will get together and have a big meal.On the first or second day of the new year, peopleusually go to visit their relatives and friends and give some lucky money to children.I wish you have a good time during the Spring Festival.參考范文
1.On July 27th 2007, Friday, we 18 classmates, including John from Britain, Sinba from India and Keith from the USA, went to Lee Farm to help the farmers.We started off at 8 o'clock in the morning, and after an hour's ride on the bus, we walked for another 15 minutes.Lee Farm is about 60 kilometres northwest to our school.A few days ago it was hit by a strong tornado, and many apples were blown onto the ground, so we helped to pick up the apples and put the good ones in the baskets.We felt very tired after the work, but all of us thought it was a great help to the farmers.2.Last Wednesday I gave a lecture about China's culture and history to the 7th students from 9-11:30 in the morning.This is the first time I gave a lesson, so I felt very nervous and great pressure.I presented for one and a half hours, introducing from the dynasties in ancient times to the revolutionary in recent times, but I spent a lot more time on present China, the renovation, the open policy and the economic development.In the following hour we exchanged ideas and had a good discussion, but I was sorry to find that they knew little about China and raised a lot of strange questions.I think we need more cultural exchange of this kind, because we can get more practice and the foreign students can understand more about China.廣東高考英語卷基礎寫作指導(系列3)第三講 如何寫圖表類說明文
一、寫作指導
圖表類作文一直是高考的熱點,其體裁可以是記敘文、議論文或說明文。本篇介紹如何備考圖表類說明文。
圖表類說明文要求根據(jù)圖示、表格等所給的信息,通過定義、描述、數(shù)字對比和分類比較等方式,介紹圖表所顯示對象的特征,如形狀、構(gòu)造、性質(zhì)、變化、功能、因果和方位等。圖表類說明文常見的話題有:產(chǎn)品介紹、地點描述、方位描寫、觀點對比、變化分析、購物指南和操作說明等。寫作這類文章需注意以下幾點:
1. 正確解讀表格,不能添加或遺漏信息。
2. 寫作內(nèi)容要條理清楚,層次分明。說明科技方面的內(nèi)容常用定義法、比較對比法、分類法和因果法等;說明自然環(huán)境方面的內(nèi)容常用時空次序法與分類法等。
3. 說明文的語言要簡練,用詞要準確,避免夸張華麗的辭藻。
4. 時態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時,語態(tài)常用被動語態(tài),有時用虛擬語氣。
二、常用句型
1.介紹產(chǎn)品
The company has modern equipment and lots of senior experts.This kind of product contains much top and new technique.It's convenient to carry and easy to operate.It's about six feet long and nine feet high.It cost me 100 yuan to buy this dictionary.2.介紹學校
There were many subjects in our school, such as Chinese, history, drawing and so forth.Our school is located at the foot of a green hill.In the middle of the flower bed there is a fountain with many colored flowers around it.In front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on its right.At the back of the school are the students' dormitory and the dinning-hall, in front of which lies the large sports field.The teacher's dormitory stands between the teaching building and the students' dormitory.3. 行路指引
It is not very difficult to find your way from the Dongfang Hotel to the railway station.When you get out of the station, turn left and walk down the street until you see the traffic lights.Turn right at the third turning, and you will see a post office at the corner.Go eastward and you will see the museum opposite to the library.Bus No.2 will take you right there.It will take you about 10 minutes to get there by subway.4. 介紹地方
Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers an area of one million square metres.Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong Province, lies in the south of China.It has an area of 10,000 square kilometers with a population of over 2 million.It is rich in natural sources, such as coal, oil and gold.The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.Built in the18th century, the tower has witnessed too much coming and going in history.5. 新舊對比
Our hometown used to be a beautiful place, with thick trees and green grass everywhere.Nowadays some students cannot go to college because of high tuition fees.Great changes have taken place in the past few years.It is known to us all that the living standard of the Chinese people has greatly improved.In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past.6. 數(shù)量表達
Output is up 30% last year.Unemployment more than doubled in 1996.The population here is increasing year by year.According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.From the table we can see that the world population is increasing rapidly.The latest survey shows that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.An investigation shows that many emigrants think that working at city provides them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills.Statistics show a 20% rise(reduction)in traffic accidents compared with last year.Bicycle can't be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.三、實例分析
【例文1】父母為子女選擇小學的情況調(diào)查
最近學校研究性學習小組對3000多名年輕的父母做了一個調(diào)查,調(diào)查主題、結(jié)果等內(nèi)容如下表所示,請用英文給校英文廣播站寫一篇簡介,介紹調(diào)查的情況。
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括圖表所給的全部內(nèi)容;
2. 只能使用5個句子。
參考范文:
Recently a survey was done to investigate what parents care most in choosing primary schools.The survey shows that location is the key factor in choosing schools for their children-half of those interviewed said that being close to their homes was the most important factor in their choice.Teaching quality came second, with nearly 40% of the parents worrying about their children's future career.The survey also shows that one-tenth of them expect that schools have advanced facilities.More than 3,000 parents were surveyed in the research.【例文 2】樓盤介紹
假設暑假你到某樓盤打工,正好有幾名外國客人想買一套公寓樓,公寓樓及其周邊的一些基本信息如下。請書面用英文向這幾位客人介紹一下這套公寓樓。
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括圖表所給的全部內(nèi)容;
2. 只能使用5個句子。
3. 參考詞匯:公寓樓 apartment 公寓單間 flat
參考范文:
The flat has 110 square metres, with one sitting-room, three bedrooms, one bathroom and one kitchen.Facing south, it is quite bright in the rooms at daytime.Not far away from the apartment there is a supermarket, a clinic, a kindergarten and a bus-stop.The bus can access the subway directly.The price for the flat is about 6000RMB per square metre.四、即時訓練
【練習1】簡介我國高等教育的發(fā)展情況
假設你在政府部門見習,請根據(jù)以下圖標的信息,向幾位到訪外國客人詢問你所在城市的教育發(fā)Z展情況。
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括圖標所給的全部內(nèi)容;
2. 只能使用5個句子。
3. 參考詞匯:打基礎 lay foundation
改革開放 reform and opening up 【練習2】中學生使用媒體情況調(diào)查
假設你參加了一個網(wǎng)上國際中學生調(diào)查項目,調(diào)查13-20歲的年青人每周使用媒體的時間情況。請根據(jù)下面的圖表信息,用英文寫一篇簡介。
寫作要求:
1. 簡介必須包括圖標所給的全部內(nèi)容;
2. 只能使用5個句子。
參考范文
練習1
As we can see from the chart, our city's education is developing very fast.There were only about one thousand students when New China was founded in 1949, and ten thousand in 1978, while the number reached eighty thousand in 2007.Several factors have contributed to the quick development.Firstly, the rapid economic development in our city, especially during the thirty years of reform and opening up, has laid a sound foundation.Secondly, the government has been trying hard to encourage the development of education, and thirdly, most people have begun to realize the importance of education.練習2
Recently we did a surway about media consumption by teens and young adults in their spare time.According to the research, teens and young adults consume many different types of media, but the Internet surpasses them all in the amount of time spent.Most of the students spend ten hours in an average week, and watching TV comes second, with five hours.The other ways of time spent are as follows: four hours reading newspapers and magazines, three hours talking on the phone and two hours listening to the radio.It's a pity that they only spend one hour in reviewing textbooks in their free time.??
第三篇:09年高考語文作文題型應對策略 教案
09年高考語文作文題型應對策略
為了扎實有效地搞好作文復習備考,我們就幾種常考題型加以具體分析并給以寫作指導,希望考生能夠從中獲得啟迪。
一、關系型話題作文
關系型話題作文是近年考試的熱點。2004年全國十五套考題就有十套是考關系型話題,2005年全國十六套考題又有近一半是關系型話題作文,今后幾年還可能會考及。
寫好關系型話題作文要注意以下幾點:
整體把握
首先對話題題干及對話題核心詞的把握要有整體意識,要分析出彼此間的緊密聯(lián)系。比如面對多個核心詞的關系型話題作文,考生必須具有整體把握各個核心詞及其彼此關系的能力,丟掉任何一個核心詞,或忽略了彼此之間的關系,寫出來的作文都難以切合題意,甚至偏離題意。如2005年高考全國卷Ⅲ要求以“忘記與銘記”為話題寫作,有的考生只抓住了“忘記”一詞,全文闡述了該忘記什么,為什么要忘記等,其內(nèi)容僅僅涉及了話題中的“忘記”一詞;有的考生只抓住“銘記”一詞,大談人類應該記住什么,為什么要記住等。
其次對“關系”的把握要有統(tǒng)領主線,要有能夠統(tǒng)領全文的清晰鮮明的觀點。要做到這一點,必須首先找出這幾個詞語間的多種內(nèi)在聯(lián)系,并形成相應的觀點,在此基礎上篩選出一種自己最有把握闡述清楚的觀點,圍繞這一觀點回憶相關的人、事、景、物、理等多方面內(nèi)容,從中選出最貼切的內(nèi)容作為統(tǒng)領所有核心詞的主線,然后圍繞這一主線展開記敘或論述,寫出來的文章才會切合題意。還以“忘記與銘記”話題為例,“忘”是為了什么,“不忘”又是為了什么,“忘”與“不忘”的相通點是什么,最終歸宿是否一致等,只有從深層次上把握了“忘記”與“銘記”二者間的關系,才能從中提煉出自己的觀點和主張。也只有具備了這一點,才能使文章主旨鮮明,重點突出。
理性思維
關系型話題作文對學生的理性思維,特別是辯證思維能力要較高。而我們的考生在審題時最容易犯的一個毛病恰恰是割裂了兩者的聯(lián):在行文時大談一點,卻對另外一點置之不理,以致造成偏題、離題。如2005年高考全國卷Ⅲ要求以“忘記與銘記”話題寫作,有的考生的觀點如“痛崔是應該忘記的,歡樂都是應該記住能”感情都是應該忘記的,理智才是應永遠銘記的“等都顯得片面,缺乏辯證思想。還有的考生在價值取向和審美向上存在一定的偏差,夸大地看待了會的陰暗面,或重新對歷史加以評判;與社會主流觀點不符等,在內(nèi)容上顯得偏激和片面。
關系型話題作文要突出二者關系的同時,還應該有側(cè)重,要分清楚矛盾的主要方面與次要方面,要善于敏銳地捕捉重點,敢于突出重點,做到兩點論與重點論的統(tǒng)一。如2004年高考全國卷話題作文“遭遇挫折和放大痛苦”,審題時考生當然應準確把握兩個詞組間的關系,但面對挫折,人們的選擇有許多種,有人化解痛苦,有人放大痛苦,有人則以平常心視之。選擇不同,人生的境界也大有高低。如果考生在審題時能以“遭遇挫折”為側(cè)重點,能夠從如何對待挫折這個角度切入去行文,而不是流于表面的在兩者關系間泛泛而談。那么文章將在深度和廣度上得到有力的拓展。
二、命題作文
命題作文一直是高考作文的重要形式。從形式上看,命題作文一般沒有明確具體的要求,看似寬松而自由,實際上它要求更高,寫作起來也更難。因為其他作文在制定框框的同時,也往往或在審題上,或在立意上,或在選材上給你提供可供選擇的信息,給那些“無話可說”“無東西可寫”的考生開掘一下思路。命題作文則不同。它沒有限制,也就無從參考,需要“另起爐灶”,在上述各方面動更大的腦子。
那么在考場上如何寫好命題作文呢?
審文體
已規(guī)定文體的,按規(guī)定文體寫作,如2005年北京卷“說安”,要求自選角度寫一篇議論文;兩種文體均可的,選擇自己擅長的、準備最充分的。近兩年高考命題作文大多要求為“除詩歌外文體不限”,那么,考生就要根據(jù)平時作文得分情況考慮哪一種文體自己最拿手。比如2005年高考重慶卷要求以“自嘲”為題寫作,假如你擅長記敘,你不妨寫一個善于自嘲的人的幽默故事;假如你擅長議論,你不妨分析評價魯迅先生的自嘲本領,挖掘自嘲背后的無奈等。
未明確規(guī)定文體的,要審其隱含信息。帶有“論”“談”“說”一類字眼的,顯然是議論文;帶有“??記”字眼的,顯然是記敘文體。同時還要看題目“最”適合哪種文體。有些題目,雖未規(guī)定文體,但仔細分析,往往有“最佳文體”。如《時間啊,時間》,寫成記敘文或一般議論文都不夠完美,如果學習高爾基的《時鐘》,寫成散文化議論文,就可以取得形象化的說理效果,而且還可以多角度、多側(cè)面、多層次展開論述。又如2005年天津卷“留給明天”,這個文題當然可以寫成議論文,聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實生活議論今天與明天的關系,提出怎樣才算真正地為明天著想,批評一些人在政治上和經(jīng)濟上的短視。但最合適的文體莫過于記敘性的文章。不僅容易寫出文采,而且構(gòu)思上容易寫出個性。
審立意
命題作文的審題,關鍵在于弄懂題目的含義。含義弄懂了,立意就有了方向性,有了基礎。首先要分析題目的字面含義。其次是分析題目的語法結(jié)構(gòu),第三是分析把握題目中的關鍵詞語,第四是挖掘其言外之意。如“留給明天”,主語、賓語的空缺,給了我們很大的聯(lián)想、想象的空間。那么到底留什么給明天呢?留下時間?留下想象?留下遺憾?還是留下理想?留下和父母摩擦之后一直想說卻沒有說出口的道歉,清寒是青春期莫名甜蜜而又惆悵的情愫?今天享受前人成果的我們。又會給明天的子孫們留下什么呢?只要我們結(jié)合“留給明天”這個題目的結(jié)構(gòu)特點,填補上這個主語、賓語的空缺,就會成功地化解這個大題、虛題,避免寫得空泛、空洞。
又如遼寧卷“今年花勝去年紅”,在這個題目中?!皠佟本褪恰皠龠^”“超過”的意思,它實際上隱含著今天與昨天的對比。暗示著今天對明天的展望,而一個“勝”字,很斬截地告訴我們:世事在變化,時代在前進,無論暫時的情形是怎樣的,我們的明天一定會更美好!所以這篇文章應該寫得蓬勃樂觀、積極向上,要肯定“今年花”的紅艷度勝過去年。
立意方面還有兩個很重要的問題需要注意,一要內(nèi)容健康、充實,積極向上,杜絕不健康的庸俗的觀點,特別是那腐朽錯誤的甚至是反動的觀點。二要立意力求深刻新穎,同時,要處理好時代特征與傳統(tǒng)繼承之間的關系,不能一味地求新求活而失之偏頗。
三、給材料作文
材料作文(不包括漫畫作文)是高考作文的重要形式,材料作文又是考生最感頭痛,普遍反映無從下手的命題形式,有許多考生常常在這上面“栽了跟頭”,出現(xiàn)較大的失誤。其失誤往往不是出在謀篇布局或語言表達上,絕大多數(shù)是審題立意上出了偏差。
材料作文,所給材料一般包括題干、基本素材和要求(包括注意事項)三部分。所謂審題,必須對這三方面做深入、仔細、全面的分析。這個分析,是“精讀”,而非“略讀”;是反復揣摩,而非不經(jīng)意的瀏覽。立意在文章成敗中的決定性作用決定考生必須在審題上使出很大的精力和一定的時間,考生要寧愿在審題上多花一點工夫,拿準了再動筆,也不要倉促上陣,寫到“半截腰”發(fā)現(xiàn)立意錯誤再返工。精讀意識、研究意識、揣摩意識必須牢牢樹立在每位考生頭腦中。
如何寫好給材料作文呢?
分析挖掘本質(zhì)
有些材料,原文并沒有具體的議論,只有形象的甚至是零碎的語句。這就需要考生透過這
些詞語,分析挖掘它所包含的深層意蘊。如2005年上海高考文題,材料較多,審題的時候便需要多花一份力氣。其實,大量的材料完全可以用一個話題來概括——文化生活與青年一代的成長,不能把選材統(tǒng)一到這上面來,就應該算作偏離題意了。材料中的提示是“需要對當今的文化生活作一番審視和辨析”,所以,寫作的時候不宜對武俠言情小說、流行歌曲、卡通等做簡單的肯定或否定,而應當結(jié)合社會需要、現(xiàn)實狀況以及自己的親身經(jīng)歷進行深入分析??梢哉務劷鹩?、梁羽生、古龍等小說對你成長的影響,可以談談瓊瑤、三毛作品給你成長的啟迪,可以談談高曉松、老狼的校園民謠對你成長路上心靈的撞擊,可以寫變形金剛、奧特曼動畫片等給你童年帶來的愉悅,而今這種心情的變遷。當然,水平更高、視野更的同學應該深入分析到這些流行文化所帶來的深層影響和產(chǎn)生原因,從未來青年文化素養(yǎng)培植的角度冷靜地評價它。
提煉概括觀點
有些作文材料,特別是寓言和故事,它并不給你提供現(xiàn)成的觀點,需要考生自己去提煉概括。這時可運用分析綜合法。以1995年高考全國卷《鳥的評說》這首寓言詩為例,“麻雀說燕子是怕冷的懦夫,燕子說黃鸝,徒有一身美麗的裝束??蒼蠅說麻雀寸光鼠目”。材料雖然很長,但仔細對每一種鳥的表現(xiàn)進行分析、概括,就會發(fā)現(xiàn),它們犯了一個共同的錯誤。看問題的方法有問題。只看到人家的短處,看不到人家的長處。應該怎么辦?答案是顯而易見。于是論點出來了:不要只看到人冢的短處,不要求全責備。換一種角度看問題??
如2005年湖北卷,提供的材料是清末學者王國維的一段論述。試題要求考生根據(jù)這則文字談感悟,一直到結(jié)尾也沒有給出話題,但這并不等于什么都可以寫。因為仔細理解,材料中實際上仍然包含著一個隱蔽性的關系型話題——入乎其內(nèi)和出乎其外。所以,只有在這樣一個范圍內(nèi)談自己的認識,闡明各自的內(nèi)涵和兩者的關系,在實際生活中找到事例加以佐證,才應該說是正確理解了材料。
四、獨字題作文
近兩年高考出現(xiàn)了一種新的題型,即文章的標題只有一個字,如2003年上海高考文題“雜”,2004年上海高考文題“忙”,我們把它叫做“獨字題”。獨字題一般詞義明白清楚,看起來很簡單。但由于沒有修飾和限制,題目本身在文體、立意、選材以及其他方面沒有任何導向,寫起來往往要比多字題困難,尤其在審題和選材上難度更大,如何寫好獨字題作文呢?不妨從以下幾方面人手:
辨別詞性,確定文體
詞性對文體有一定的制約作用,寫前可以根據(jù)不同的詞性來確定文體。一般來說,是動詞的適宜于寫記敘性文章,如《悟》《悔》《醒》《求》《盼》《戀》《追》《誘》《考》等,像《悟》這個題目,就可以通過一個具體事件的敘寫,并領悟其包含的道理。是名詞的,大多數(shù)是跨類題,即可以寫成記敘類的。也可以寫成說明類或議論類的,如《路》《虹》《窗》《橋》《鎖》《鏡》《藥》《蝕》《霧》《煤》等??筛鶕?jù)自己掌握的材料、理解的深度、文體的特點和要求等方面而決定。
了解特性,把握內(nèi)涵
一個可以作為題目的字,它的內(nèi)涵往往是多方面的。既有它本質(zhì)特性方面的意義,又大都有它比喻、象征方面的意義。如2003年上海高考文題“雜”,其內(nèi)涵是相當豐富的,它既可以指具體事物的雜亂無章,也可以指情感的復雜多變,也可以指形勢或矛盾的紛紜繁雜。在審題時,要盡可能了解得廣一點,使自己有廣闊的選擇余地。
五、看圖作文
看圖作文題提供的主要材料不是文字,而是有一定意義的圖畫。作文的要求是把圖中用線條、色彩描繪出來的形象及包涵在形象之中的思想感情用語言文字表達出來。寫作時要注意以下幾點:
仔細觀察畫面。這里所謂畫面形象,包括畫面上描繪出來的人物形象(面貌、表情、服飾、動作等)和景物、器物??磮D時,要抓住人物、景物和器物的特征,對畫面上提供的每一個細節(jié)都不能輕易放過。
領會把握主旨
要做到這一點,就必須在仔細觀察畫面形象的基礎上。弄清人物與人物、人物與周圍事物之間的關系。只有這樣,才能體會到作者通過形象描繪表達了什么樣的思想感情。
發(fā)揮聯(lián)想想象
對于看圖作文,聯(lián)想想象極其重要,這是圖畫材料自身的特點所決定的。圖畫它只表現(xiàn)事物一瞬間的形態(tài),不能像文字材料那樣描述事件發(fā)生發(fā)展的連續(xù)過程,不能像文字材料那樣多側(cè)面地刻人物,不能直接地表達思想和抒發(fā)感情。一些抽象的事物,如“社會風氣”“道德水準”等,文字材料可以很方便地傳達給讀者,圖畫材料則難以勝任。正是圖畫材料的這些特點,決定了作文者必須根據(jù)畫面上提供的線索,展開合理的聯(lián)想和想象,進行種種必要的增補,這樣才能做到上下文聯(lián)貫,故事情節(jié)完整,人物形象具體豐滿,主題思想鮮明突出。
第四篇:高考英語寫作指導(發(fā)言稿)
高考英語寫作指導(發(fā)言稿)
高考英語全國卷中發(fā)言稿寫作導練
一、文體概述
發(fā)言稿主要用來交流思想、表達感情、發(fā)表看法;也可以用來介紹自己的學習情況和經(jīng)驗等。寫發(fā)言稿時,要注意三點:1.觀點要鮮明。2.條理清楚。3.語言簡潔明快。寫作分“三步走”:自我介紹并表明發(fā)言稿的主題→發(fā)言稿的具體內(nèi)容→進行總結(jié)并提出期望。
二、必備短語
.bequalifiedfor勝任
2.studyefficiently高效地學習
3.getactivelyinvolvedinclass上課積極參與
4.effectivelearningmethods有效的學習方法
5.enjoyacolorfullife享受豐富多彩的生活
6.takeresponsibilitytodosth.負責做某事
7.geton/alongwellwithsb.與某人友好相處
8.onbehalfofourschool代表我們學校
9.develop/form/acquireagoodhabitof..養(yǎng)成……的好習慣.0.expressone’swarmwelcometosb.向某人表示熱烈歡迎
三、套用句式
.Itismygreathonortohaveachancetospeakhere.能有機會在這里發(fā)言是我極大的榮幸。
2.welcometotheEnglishspeechcompetition/lecture.歡迎來到這次英語演講比賽/講座。
3.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.用真誠和忠誠我們創(chuàng)造一個和諧的環(huán)境。
4.Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfullifehere.我相信在這你將用努力會享受豐富多彩的生活。
5.Ihopewhatismentionedabovemightbehelpfultoyou!我希望我上面所講的對你們有幫助!
四、習作修改
Goodafternoon,everyone.welcometoourschool!Highschoolstudentsarefacingwithachoicebetweenartsorscience.Itwasnoteasychoiceformetomake.Aftercarefullyconsideration,though,Idecidedonscienceasmymainsubjectofstudy.Thereasonsareasfollow.First,sciencegraduatesareingreatdemandthanartsonesinchina.Second,thesciencemajorcanhelpesmeachievemychildhooddreamofbecomingascientist.Third,myparentswishmetostudyscienceatcollegebecausetheybelieveinIwillhaveabrighterfutureasasciencestudent.Lastbutnotleast,myphysicsteacherismyrolemodel,whichinfluenceonmehasalottodowithmydecision.ItisforthesereasonsthatIfinallymadeyourchoice.Thanks!
五、課堂練習
假定你是星光中學的高中畢業(yè)生李華,母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“whattolearninseniorhighschool?”的英語沙龍活動,特邀請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談談自己的體會。請根據(jù)以下提示準備一份英語發(fā)言稿。
.學會學習:方法,習慣等;
2.學會做人:真誠,友善;
3.學會其他:考生自擬。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。
2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3.開頭語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.Thankyou!
六、課外作業(yè)
假設你是某大學的學生李華,你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席,負責規(guī)劃、組織俱樂部的相關活動,你欲參選,請按以下提示,寫一篇競選演講稿。
.個人的優(yōu)勢介紹(如性格、特長等);
2.組織校內(nèi)的活動的設想(如舉辦講座、英語晚會等);
3.組織校際交流活動的設想(如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等);
4.表達競選的愿望。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。
2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3.開頭語已為你寫好。
參考詞匯:副主席vicepresident
競選runfor
Goodafternoon,mydearfriends,mynameisLiHua,Thankyou!
參考答案與范文:
習作修改
本演講稿是關于高中生對文、理科的選擇。作者首先表明選擇理科,然后闡述了選擇理科的理由。
.facing→faced因befacedwith固定搭配,意為“遇到,面臨”。
2.or→and因betweenAandB為固定搭配,意為“在A與B之間”。
3.在easy前加an因choice是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞,表示“一個”選擇,要用不定冠詞。另外,makeachoice可看作一個固定短語。
4.carefully→careful修飾名詞,應用形容詞。
5.follow→follows因asfollows是習語,不管句子的主語是單數(shù)或復數(shù)。
6.great→greater后面的than提示我們此處應用形容詞的比較級。
7.helps→help情態(tài)動詞后用動詞原形。
8.把believe后的in去掉因此處的believe表示“相信,認為”,后接賓語從句,不用in,故刪除。
9.which→whose先行詞myphysicsteacher與從句中influence有所屬關系,表示“我物理老師(對我的)影響”,用關系代詞whose引導定語從句。
0.your→my根據(jù)主語I可知,此處是我最終做出了“我的”決定。
課堂練習
Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.Firstly,weshouldlearntolearnefficiently.Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance.Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,getactivelyinvolvedinclass,andreviewwhathavebeentaughtafterclass.Inaddition,weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Inschool,Irespectedteachersandwasfriendlywithclassmates.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.withyourgreatefforts,Iamsurethatyouwillenjoyacolorfullifehere.Thankyou!
課外作業(yè)
Goodafternoon,mydearfriends,mynameisLiHua.I'moutgoingandgetonwellwithmyclassmatesandteachers.Iamskilledatorganizingallkindsofactivities.I'dliketorunforthevicepresidentoftheEnglishclubinourschool.Iknowasthevicepresident,Imustdothefollowingthingsfortheclub:Iwilltrytomakeitknowntoeverystudentandmorestudentsinvolvedintheactivitiesorganizedbytheclub.what
’smore,toimproveourEnglishandgetmorestudentsinterestedinEnglish,IintendtoorganizesomeactivitiesatschoollikelecturesandEnglishpartiesandinter-schoolonessuchasEnglishdebatecompetitionsandspeechcontests.Ihopeallofyouwillvoteforme.Thankyou!
第五篇:高考英語基礎寫作個人情感與人際關系
第五個話題: 個人情感與人際關系
第一項 話題預測
1.父母與孩子之間:敬重父母、尊重孩子的選擇、困擾
父母與孩子的問題、中學生做家務、孩子的秘密是否與父母分享等。
2.師生之間:師生關系在日常教學中的作用等。3.同學之間:同學交友、成長中的快樂和煩惱、性格因
素與同學關系、學習動機的激發(fā)與培養(yǎng)、宿舍文化建
設、營造班級和諧人際氛圍、“教師節(jié)”學生真誠道謝、對老師的敬意和感恩等。第二項 寫作語匯
一、常用單詞
hope 希望wish 渴望 expect 盼望 passion 激情 forgive 寬恕 excuse 原諒 envy 忌妒,羨慕 annoy 使煩惱 thank感謝thankful感激的gratitude感激grateful 感激的satisfied滿意的enthusiastic熱心的 affectionate摯愛的admirable 令人羨慕的 conscious意識到的anxious / anxiously 焦急的/渴望的 eager / eagerly 熱切的/渴望地 optimistic 樂觀的 unbelievable 難以置信的gloomy 令人沮喪的jealous忌妒的 sympathetic 同情的 suspicious 有疑心的 indifferent 漠不關心的 annoying令人惱人的annoyed煩惱的 frustrating令人沮喪的embarrassed 感到尷尬的 embarrassing 令人尷尬的 oppressed 壓抑的 positive 積極的 negative 負面的 stressful 緊張的 happy 喜angry 怒 upset, sad 哀pleased 樂proud驕傲lonely 孤獨的 worried 擔憂的 nervous 緊張的 afraid 害怕
二、參考短語
1.be satisfied with / be pleased with 對…感到滿意 2.be consious of 意識到
3.be optimistic about 對… 樂觀
4.be grateful to 對某人表示感激
5.express one’s gratitude to 表達感謝之情 6.be concerned about / with對…很關心 7.have a light heart 心情舒暢
8.be in good / bad temper 心情好/不好 9.be in high / low spirits 情緒高漲/ 低落 10.be in despair 某人處于絕望中 11.complain about(of)sb./ sth 抱怨 12.be objective about 對… 客觀/ 公正 13.be jealous of sth.對…嫉妒
14.be upset about sth.某人對某事苦惱 15.be sensitive to…對…敏感的16.be proud of / take pride in 以…自豪 必備表達: 個人情感
(1)be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高興/難過/不安/緊張/孤獨
(2)be pleased with對??感到高興
(3)be worried about / worry about 擔心,擔憂
(4)be / get angry with sb.about sth.因某事生某人的氣(5)be disappointed at sb.對某人感到失望
(6)be confident of sth./ in sb.對某事/某人有信心(7)We are deeply grateful to you for your support.我們深深感謝你的支持。
(8)It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow.我們明天必須離開,真是遺憾。人際關系
(1)learn from each other 互相學習(2)promote the friendship 增進友誼(3)improve the relationship改善關系
(4)show love and concern for sb.愛護和關心某人(5)Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于傾聽使我們彼此走得更近。
(6)A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.良好的師生關系對我們的學習很重要。
(7)To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other.要建立良好的關系,我們應該彼此信任。
8)Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship.只有這樣我們才能享有平等的關系。
(9)They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他們發(fā)覺很容易和老師溝通。
(10)With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university.在他們的幫助下,我努力學習,成功地被一所重點大學錄取。
(11)We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students.我們應該珍惜師生之間這種和諧的關系。
(12)With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life.在父親的鼓勵和支持下,我克服了生活中的許多困難。
第五個話題:個人情感與人際關系
一、基礎寫作
1.基礎寫作1:給剛從外地轉(zhuǎn)來的新同學的一封信
假設你是新華中學的學生李華,班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學李明,他一時無法融入到新的班集體中,感到很苦惱。[寫作內(nèi)容]請根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封信:(1)幫他分析原因:害羞,怕同學取笑。
(2)給他提出建議:學習普通話,跟同學交流意見。(3)陳述你幫助他的具體打算。
Dear Li Ming,I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class.One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.In my opinion,learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends.In our spare time,I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties.Also,I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.Best regards,Li Hua
基礎寫作2:給送生日禮物的朋友寫封感謝信
假設你是李華,昨天你出乎意料地收到你的好朋友Jack寄給你的生日禮物——一本電子詞典。請根據(jù)以下要點,寫一封感謝信。[寫作內(nèi)容]
(1)收到他的禮物,你感到十分高興,因為你正急需一本這樣的電子詞典,而且你幾乎找遍了全市的商店都買不到;
(2)這本電子詞典對你的英語學習很有幫助;
(3)感謝他送給你的禮物,并表示會努力學好英語作為回報;
(4)希望他暑假有空來你家一起學習英語。
Dear Jack,Yesterday, I received your present, a useful electronic dictionary, very unexpectedly and excitedly.Believe it or not, what you sent me is the very electronic dictionary I am anxious for.I have been looking for it in almost every store in my city.I’m sure this electronic dictionary must be of great help to my English learning.Thank you for your timely help and fine present,and I will work harder at English in return.If you have time this summer holiday,I’d like you to come to my home and let’s study English together.Best wishes to your parents.Yours,Li Hua
3.假設你是李華,現(xiàn)在正在高考考場上,場下當英語老師的父母正殷切期待著你。請你按如下提綱提示,給父母寫一封感謝信。【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.感謝父母多年來,特別是高三這一年來無微不至的關懷;
2.自己學習刻苦,進步不小。感覺高考考試順利,發(fā)揮出了真水平,請父母放心;
3.高考后想多幫父母做家務,尤其做菜,讓父母品嘗。
Dear parents,Now I wonder how anxiously both of you are expecting me to complete my college entrance exams smoothly.I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my gratitude to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, expecially since I went to Senior Three.These days I have been studying hard and have made much progress and so I believe that everything will have got along well with my examination because I have performed my ability in this exam.After this exam, I intend to help you do much more housework which I have seldom done before, and cook in preparation for a delicious dinner for you both in person.My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and I hope you both can set your mind at rest!
Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua
Best wishes,任務寫作1:父母與子女之間如何建立良好關系
以約120個詞就“父母與子女的良好關系”發(fā)表你的看法,包括如下要點:
(1)父母與子女關系良好的重要性;
(2)你希望與你的父母之間的關系是怎樣的;
(3)如何才能建立這種關系?
An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth.Parents always show love and concern for us.They are our good listeners,advisers and supporters.With their help,we can overcome many difficulties in our life.In my opinion,the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love,care and understanding,in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind,parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.(117 words)
任務寫作2:描寫老師或朋友幫你克服困難的一次經(jīng)歷
以約120詞寫一篇記敘文,回憶老師或朋友在你困難時候幫助你的一次經(jīng)歷,并包括如下要點:
(1)敘述你遇到困難的一次真實或虛構(gòu)的經(jīng)歷;
(2)你的老師或朋友如何幫助你解決困難的?
(3)你的老師或朋友對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響?你對老師或朋友的態(tài)度是什么?
I had such an experience when I was in junior school.I was doing badly in maths at that time.However hard I tried,I just couldn’t catch up with others.I almost lost heart when we had a new maths teacher,Mr Hu.Now and then he talked with me,telling me the ways to learn maths and encouraging me to keep on trying.Only then did I realize that I was not studying maths in a scientific way.With his help,I was doing a little better gradually.One year later,I made amazing progress.Now I am in a key senior high school and always one of the top students in my class.I am always grateful to Mr Hu.(123 words)