第一篇:專八寫作解題策略
專八寫作解題策略
一、審題
1.2004班《英語(yǔ)專業(yè)八級(jí)考試大綱》要求考生“按題撰文”。
2.抓提示信息
(1)固定信息
一般情況下,題意要求規(guī)定了作文的大致結(jié)構(gòu)與各段落的主要內(nèi)容。(可取任意真題中作文的題意要求為例;“按題撰文”,任意發(fā)揮,必然失分)
(2)具體信息
(以2001年專八真題為例)
二、籌劃
1.45分鐘內(nèi)一般沒有足夠的時(shí)間寫出較為完整的草稿。
2.具體步驟
(1)提出自己的觀點(diǎn),確定文章的中心句。
(2)搜集相關(guān)資料,并對(duì)資料進(jìn)行分類,從而形成從不同側(cè)面證明主題句的段落雛形。
(3)對(duì)材料進(jìn)行取舍。
(取舍標(biāo)準(zhǔn):既與每個(gè)段落的主題句相關(guān),又能提供最為充足的證據(jù)證
明主題句。)
(以2008年專八寫作真題范文為例。)
三、寫作
打破陳舊開頭式、句句緊連絲絲扣、段段邏輯組一體、層次分明條理晰、字跡清楚加整齊。
四、檢查
文章的標(biāo)題是否得當(dāng)、句法結(jié)構(gòu)有無錯(cuò)誤、語(yǔ)法是否正確、過渡詞使用是
否恰當(dāng)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用的是否恰當(dāng)、字母大小寫是否存在問題。
第二篇:六級(jí)高分寫作解題策略
六級(jí)高分寫作解題策略
一、解題技巧
英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作解題時(shí)間為30分鐘,分為三步:5分鐘審題和構(gòu)思,20分鐘寫作,5分鐘檢查可能犯的錯(cuò)誤。下面分步驟說明。
(一)審題和構(gòu)思
事實(shí)上提供給寫作的時(shí)間不止30分鐘。一般來說,各考場(chǎng)會(huì)提前5分鐘左右將答題卡一發(fā)到學(xué)生手里,大一點(diǎn)的考場(chǎng)甚至可能提前10分鐘發(fā)卷。這5到10分鐘不允許學(xué)生作答,但考生完全可以用來做作文部分的審題和構(gòu)思工作。注意審題一定要仔細(xì),按要求寫作,不得擅自改動(dòng)題目,給定的提綱不得有遺漏,否則會(huì)按比例扣分。尤其注意,不要因?yàn)槭孪茸约罕尺^或練過哪篇相似的文章而死搬硬套。否則后果很嚴(yán)重。如,2008年12月六級(jí)寫作真題題目是College Students’ Mental Health,提綱為
1.心理健康對(duì)于大學(xué)生很重要
2.鑒于此,學(xué)??梢浴?/p>
3.我們自己應(yīng)該……”
而在考試之前我出過一道類似的模擬題,題目為“Psychological Problems Among College Students”,提綱為
1.很多大學(xué)生有嚴(yán)重的心理問題
2.產(chǎn)生這些問題的原因
3.如何解決這些問題”
可以看出,我給的提綱是按照比較規(guī)矩的三段論來的,即“提出問題、分析問題、解決問題”。但真題的提綱并未要求考生分析問題,反倒有兩段要寫解決問題。有的考生因?yàn)榭催^或背過模擬題的范文,就直接照搬,導(dǎo)致了失分。
另外,構(gòu)思不是打草稿。并不建議學(xué)生練習(xí)寫作時(shí)養(yǎng)成打草稿的習(xí)慣。因?yàn)榭紙?chǎng)上時(shí)間有限,打完草稿再謄寫很可能來不及。另外,更重要的原因是考場(chǎng)上不發(fā)草稿紙,一般也不允許往里帶紙,難以找到打草稿的地方??忌灰ㄈ宸昼娮鲆幌聵?gòu)思即可,即想象一下每段大致寫什么,可以記幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞(比如在準(zhǔn)考證空白的地方)提示自己,在接下來的二十分鐘里面按照這幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞提示的內(nèi)容擴(kuò)展就行。一般來說,要求不少于150詞的文章最好寫到180到200詞,就句子數(shù)目來說,如果分三段,每段也就三到五句話,平均四句一段。那么整篇文章大約10個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞就可以做好構(gòu)思。以2009年6月六級(jí)寫作真題為例。
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.有人說名字(或名稱)很重要
2.也有人覺得名字(或名稱)無關(guān)緊要
3.我認(rèn)為……
構(gòu)思第一段時(shí),想到可以來一句鋪墊的話,如“名字重不重要是個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的話題”,可以寫下controversial或topic,作為關(guān)鍵詞;下一句是“有人說名字(或名稱)很重要”,可以先寫下important.再往后想兩條理由或例證即可。理由如“好名字容易被記住,因而可以給人來機(jī)會(huì)”(關(guān)鍵詞remember或opportunity),和“按照傳統(tǒng)理論起的名字可能會(huì)對(duì)人起到暗中庇護(hù)的作用”(關(guān)鍵詞tradition或shelter);例證如“有人認(rèn)為毛澤東偉大是因?yàn)槊志痛髿猓珺ill Gates有錢是因?yàn)樗拿挚梢员硎锯n票,姓表示很多大門,很多大門都來錢,所以有錢”。第二、三段情同此理。其實(shí)第一段想好了,后兩段也就容易了。比如第二段可以將第一段的理由或例證反過來用,第三段可以總結(jié)或折中一下。字?jǐn)?shù)還是比較容易寫夠的。
(二)寫作
寫作的過程當(dāng)中,要注意這樣幾條高分策略。
字跡清楚,段落明朗(clear):字體不要太大,也不要太小,以行間距的三分之一到二分之一為合適;另外,大小要一致,不要忽大忽小;字母的傾斜方向要一致,不要東倒西歪;要抵著給出的虛線寫,不能上竄下跳;總之,要給閱卷人清楚、工整的感覺。段落一般為三段,采用段首縮進(jìn)式,即每段開頭空4至8個(gè)字母的格,每段段首縮進(jìn)的量要一致,要讓閱卷人一目了然。
內(nèi)容完整,緊扣提綱(complete):一般來說,六級(jí)寫作都會(huì)給出三點(diǎn)漢語(yǔ)提綱,考生應(yīng)嚴(yán)格按照三點(diǎn)寫成三段。不要有遺漏,也不要隨意改變提綱要點(diǎn)的順序。因?yàn)殚喚砣艘?0秒左右的時(shí)間打出分?jǐn)?shù),所以不希望看到與提綱嚴(yán)重背離的作文。
首保正確,再求閃光(correct):這一條是最核心的,因?yàn)樵趯懽鲿r(shí)間和篇幅都比較短的情況下,考生寫出的內(nèi)容幾乎是一樣的,唯一的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)幾乎就是語(yǔ)言的質(zhì)量。要首先保證語(yǔ)法和拼寫正確,哪怕用小詞、短句也可以。有能力的話再追求閃光的詞句。例如,有考生在寫2009年6月的作文時(shí),寫出了這樣的開頭句:There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China.這句話是套用我以往范文給過的句子,基本結(jié)構(gòu)是對(duì)的,但有兩處明顯的錯(cuò)誤。一處為vital,是個(gè)形容詞,而這里應(yīng)該用名詞。作者可能想用一個(gè)牛詞來替換importance以顯示用詞多樣,結(jié)果弄巧成拙。另外一處錯(cuò)誤為name之前應(yīng)該有冠詞a,其實(shí)題目中都給了,結(jié)果這位同學(xué)忽略了,缺乏基本的語(yǔ)法意識(shí)。其實(shí)作文中常犯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤除了冠詞錯(cuò)誤,還包括時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤、名詞和動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤、代詞不一致錯(cuò)誤、詞性錯(cuò)誤以及句子主謂不完整錯(cuò)誤。下筆時(shí)一定要謹(jǐn)慎。篇幅關(guān)系這里不能贅述。
先總后分,連詞用上(coherent):這里說的是段落的結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性的問題。英語(yǔ)文章特別喜歡先總后分或開門見山的格局,另外,段落之間和句子之間的形式連接手段特別明顯,即關(guān)聯(lián)詞用的很多。在寫作的時(shí)候,幾乎就是把給出的三點(diǎn)提綱作為每段的開頭句,然后再加上兩三個(gè)擴(kuò)展句即理由或例證句就可以了。當(dāng)然有時(shí)候?yàn)榱苏撟C自然或擴(kuò)展字?jǐn)?shù)也可以加上一點(diǎn)鋪墊的句子。如2009年6月真題作文開頭一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance.也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not.然后再說Some hold the positive view.后面再加上兩三句論證的話。論證句或擴(kuò)展句之間最好有連接詞,如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。
語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練,論據(jù)得當(dāng)(concise):不要?嗦,不要過于重復(fù)和堆砌。有些考生背誦了一些經(jīng)典的句型,為了湊字就全用上了,給人低層次的感覺。如最后一段用同學(xué)寫道:As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view.其實(shí)As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一個(gè)就行了。另外,盡管內(nèi)容不及語(yǔ)言重要,但也肯定會(huì)影響分?jǐn)?shù)的??忌鷳?yīng)盡量平時(shí)多練,以期在考場(chǎng)上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和貼切的例證。另外,要敢于表達(dá)自己的思想,不要一味地為了保證語(yǔ)言正確而裹步不前,只說一些小學(xué)生的話。如有同學(xué)寫09年真題第一段時(shí)寫道:Some people think that names are important.They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him.If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him.這樣的作文倒是沒有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,但肯定也得不了高分。
(三)檢查
其實(shí)考生應(yīng)該在下筆寫作的時(shí)候就謹(jǐn)慎,仔細(xì),避免錯(cuò)誤,但即便這樣,錯(cuò)誤也是會(huì)有的,包括語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤,尤其對(duì)于平時(shí)缺乏練習(xí)的同學(xué)來說。那么就需要留幾分鐘通讀一下,檢查和改正。注意,要改的是一些語(yǔ)法或拼寫錯(cuò)誤,而不是作內(nèi)容上的大的改動(dòng),換言之,是改一些詞或詞組,而不是改整個(gè)句子或段落,因?yàn)槟菢訒?huì)造成卷面混亂,導(dǎo)致低分。要想避免內(nèi)容上的錯(cuò)誤,構(gòu)思時(shí)就要想好,落筆時(shí)就要謹(jǐn)慎。還有改正錯(cuò)誤要注意方式,盡量不要用涂改液或涂改帶,以免有作弊嫌疑,也不要在一個(gè)詞上涂畫太多,影響卷面整潔。一般可以用一條斜線劃掉錯(cuò)詞,然后在其上方寫出正確的,或者用膠帶或刀片之類輕輕將錯(cuò)詞去掉,然后在原位置寫出正確的。
二、沖刺方略
即使到考前剩的時(shí)間不多,寫作也是大有可為的。要做的事情有兩件,一個(gè)是背,一個(gè)是練。
背主要是背范文,從實(shí)戰(zhàn)出發(fā),可以背模擬題的范文。背的目的有兩個(gè),一是掌握一些常用的經(jīng)典句型,在考場(chǎng)上應(yīng)急,另外是學(xué)習(xí)范文的思路和文章結(jié)構(gòu),以期為己所用。背不要貪多,一種類型的文章背一篇也就差不多。如果按我課上講的把作文分為五大類,那差不多背五篇就行。而且實(shí)在不能一字不差的背下來也不要太擔(dān)心,背下大部分就行。其實(shí),與背范文同樣重要的是背誦一些自己在閱讀里看到的比較有感覺的好詞好句,那樣可以避免與別人寫成一樣的。
練也是練模擬題,因?yàn)榭歼^的寫作真題再考的可能性幾乎是沒有的。數(shù)量大約5到10篇,也就是每種類型一到兩篇。練的時(shí)候可以用背誦過的模板,但最好還是能用自己的話,不敢肯定的話可以寫完之后去查查字典,實(shí)在不敢肯定的可以請(qǐng)教別人或使用范文的說法。其實(shí)練模擬題主要目的并不是為了押題,而是提高構(gòu)思和英漢轉(zhuǎn)換的速度,為了培養(yǎng)一批自己比較喜歡的好詞好句。
2009年6月六級(jí)寫作真題參考范文
On the Importance of a Name
There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not.Some hold the positive view.They claim that a good name, or a name that can be easily remembered, can bring one a lot more opportunities than others.Some Chinese may also believe that a name designed according to the traditional theory of five elements can bring good luck.Others, however, hold the opposite view.They argue that a name is nothing but a code to distinguish one from another.A person “good” name may not be as successful as the name indicates.In the same way, a person who has a common or casually given name can also achieve tremendous success.Personally, I believe that both sides have something right, so we should not go to extremes.On the one hand, we have to admit that a well designed name can help a person to some extent.On the other hand, we should not exaggerate the effect of a name on a person’s fate.Anyway, a person’s success mainly depends on his hard work and desirable personalities.(186 words)
第三篇:專八寫作話題精選(最終版)
如何看待在校大學(xué)生打工(1)
【題目】
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students.Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.【范文】
In many countries it is common for teenagers to take part-time jobs while they are still in high school, while in other societies this is virtually unheard of.In the latter situation, students are expected to spend all of their time on their studies and consider schoolwork their “job”.In my opinion, students benefit more from a more balanced lifestyle, which may include working at a part-time job.Therefore, I believe that it is a good idea for students to work while studying.While it is true that a student's most important goal must be to learn and to do well at his studies, it does not need to be the only goal.In fact, a life which consists of only study is not balanced and may cause the student to miss out on other valuable learning experiences.In addition to bringing more balance to a student's life, part-time work can broaden his range of experience.He will have the opportunity to meet people from all walks of life and will be faced with a wider variety of problems to solve.Furthermore, work helps a student to develop greater independence, and earning his own pocket money can teach him how to handle his finances.Finally, a part-time job can help a student to develop a greater sense of responsibility, both for his own work and for that of the team he works with.For all of these reasons, I firmly believe that most students would benefit from taking a part-time job while they are in high school.Of course, they must be careful not to let it take up too much of their time because study is still their primary responsibility.In sum, living a balanced life is the best way to be successful.[參考譯文]青少年與打工
在許多國(guó)家,青少年普遍會(huì)在高中時(shí)期打工。然而在有些國(guó)家,這幾乎是前所未聞的。如果是后者的情況,那是因?yàn)橐话阏J(rèn)為學(xué)生應(yīng)把所有的時(shí)間花在學(xué)業(yè)上,把學(xué)業(yè)當(dāng)作是自己的“工作”。我認(rèn)為,生活方式越均衡,對(duì)學(xué)生就越好,而均衡的生活則須包含打工。所以我認(rèn)為,在就學(xué)期間打工是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的想法。
雖然學(xué)生最重要的目標(biāo)的確必須是學(xué)習(xí),而且功課要好,但這不必是學(xué)生惟一的目標(biāo)。事實(shí)上,只重視學(xué)業(yè)的生活并不均衡,這可能會(huì)使學(xué)生錯(cuò)過其他珍貴的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。打工除了使生活更均衡外,還可拓展學(xué)生的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。學(xué)生可以有機(jī)會(huì)見識(shí)各行各業(yè)的人,而且會(huì)面臨更多各種不同的問題需要解決。此外,工作幫助學(xué)生更加獨(dú)立,而且自己賺零用錢還可以教導(dǎo)他如何處理自己的財(cái)務(wù)。最后,打工可以幫助學(xué)生培養(yǎng)對(duì)自己的工作和團(tuán)隊(duì)工作更大的責(zé)任感。
基于這些理由,我堅(jiān)決相信,大多數(shù)學(xué)生在高中時(shí)期打工都能獲益。當(dāng)然,他們也必須小心,不要讓打工占據(jù)太多時(shí)間,因?yàn)閷W(xué)業(yè)仍然是青少年首要的責(zé)任??傊?,過均衡的生活才是最佳的成功之道。
討論汽車快速發(fā)展利與弊(2)
以下文章主要討論小汽車的利與弊(Advantages and disadvantages of private cars)。
With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise.Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars.But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars.First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries.Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently.Finally, life will become more convenient.A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems.In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people.Next, private cars contr123te to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams.The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more 123rgy consumption.They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants.Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more.Jams waste our precious time.Therefore I am against developing private cars.每天養(yǎng)成存錢習(xí)慣的好處(3)
【題目】
Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.【范文】The Advantages of Saving Money
Everyone must work to live, but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need.What should they do with this extra income? While it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire, I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.By saving money, people give themselves more security.They cannot predict the future;perhaps one day they will be jobless.At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time.In addition, saving money allows people to build up a larger sum.They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away.For example, they may be able to buy a house with their savings.Finally, the practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future.In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately.Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants.However, if we learn to save our money, we can gain more advantages in the future.We will lead more secure and, thus, happier lives.We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.【參考譯文】:存錢的好處
每個(gè)人都必須工作以求生存,但是有許多人很幸運(yùn),能夠賺得比他們立即需要的還要多的錢。他們應(yīng)該如何處理這些額外的收入呢?盡管把錢全花在自己想買的東西上是很誘人的,但我認(rèn)為最好至少把一部分的額外收入存起來,以備將來之需。
通過存錢,人們能獲得更多的安全感。未來是無法預(yù)測(cè)的,或許有一天我們會(huì)失業(yè)。碰到像這樣的情況,存款可以讓我們免去許多痛苦,幫助我們渡過難關(guān)。此外,存錢可以使人積累較多的錢,可以用于買更有價(jià)值的東西,比馬上把錢花掉所能買到的東西更有用。例如,我們可以用存款買房子。最后,存錢能幫助我們培養(yǎng)設(shè)定目標(biāo)及為未來作計(jì)劃的習(xí)慣。如此一來,我們一定會(huì)過著更有意義并且更成功的生活。
大部分的人會(huì)想要馬上享用手邊的錢。沒有人想等到以后再買想要的東西。然而,如果我們學(xué)會(huì)存錢,未來可以獲得更多的好處。我們將過著更有安全感而且更快樂的生活。我們也能購(gòu)買我們真正想要但現(xiàn)在無法負(fù)擔(dān)的東西。
書本知識(shí)與實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)?zāi)膫€(gè)重要(4)
【題目】
It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
【范文】 Book Knowledge vs.Experience
Knowledge can be acquired from many sources.These include books, teachers and practical experience, and each has its own advantages.The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life.We can study all the places in the world and learn from people we will never meet in our lifetime, just by reading about them in books.We can also develop our analytical skills and learn how to view and interpret the world around us in different ways.Furthermore, we can learn from the past by reading books.In this way, we won’t repeat the mistakes of others and can build on their achievements.Practical experience, on the other hand, can give us more useful knowledge.It is said that one learns best by doing, and I believe that this is true, whether one is successful or not.In fact, I think making mistakes is the best way to learn.Moreover, if one wants to make new advances, it is necessary to act.Innovations do not come about through reading but through experimentation.Finally, one can apply the skills and insights gained through the study of books to practical experience, making an already meaningful experience more meaningful.However, unless it is applied to real experiences, book knowledge remains theoretical and, in the end, is useless.That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books.【參考譯文】 書本知識(shí)與實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)
獲得知識(shí)的來源有很多,其中包括書本、老師,以及實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn),而每一種都有其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。
從書本上及正規(guī)教育中所獲得的知識(shí)使我們知道在日常生活中沒有機(jī)會(huì)親身去體驗(yàn)的事。通過讀書,我們可以研究世界各地的資料,還可以向不曾謀面的人學(xué)習(xí)。我們也可以培養(yǎng)分析的技巧,并學(xué)習(xí)如何以不同的方式去觀察并理解周圍的世界。此外,我們可以通過讀書,從歷史中獲取教訓(xùn)。如此一來,就不會(huì)再重復(fù)別人的錯(cuò)誤,并且能夠以他人的成就作為我們行動(dòng)的基礎(chǔ)。
另一方面,實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)?zāi)軌蚪o我們更多有用的知識(shí)。大家都說從做中學(xué)的效果最好,我也認(rèn)為的確如此,無論一個(gè)人成功與否。事實(shí)上,我認(rèn)為犯錯(cuò)是最好的學(xué)習(xí)方式。此外,如果想要有新的進(jìn)展,就必須要付諸行動(dòng)。想要?jiǎng)?chuàng)新,只靠閱讀是不夠的,必須要去實(shí)踐。最后,我們可以將通過讀書所獲得的技巧和見解應(yīng)用于實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)中,使得原本有意義的經(jīng)驗(yàn)變得更有意義。不過,除非我們能將書本知識(shí)運(yùn)用于實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)中,否則書本知識(shí)終究仍只是理論,毫無用處。那就是為什么我會(huì)認(rèn)為從實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)中獲得的知識(shí)比從書本中所得到的知識(shí)更為重要。
居民住房附近有工廠的利弊(5)
【題目】
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.【范文】 A Factory near the Neighborhood
Having a factory near where one lives brings with it both advantages and disadvantages.An obvious advantage is an increase in the number of available jobs, and many people in the community might find employment in the new factory.The factory would bring money into the community in other ways as well.It would have to pay some taxes to the local government, and workers might go shopping or eat at a restaurant in the area before or after their shifts.However, the factory would bring some disadvantages, too.Depending on what kind of factory it is, it might pollute the environment and bring down property values.It would be sure to increase traffic in the area, causing congestion and making it unsafe for children to play outside.Finally, the neighborhood would become a noisy, busy place.For all of these reasons, I would be opposed to the construction of a new factory near my community.While the employment opportunities would help the community, I believe it would be better for residents to commute to work and preserve the peace of our neighborhood.【譯文】 住家附近的工廠
住家附近有工廠既有優(yōu)勢(shì)也有弊端。一項(xiàng)明顯的優(yōu)勢(shì)是工作機(jī)會(huì)會(huì)增加。社區(qū)內(nèi)的許多居民可能會(huì)在新工廠找到工作。工廠也會(huì)以其他方式為社區(qū)帶來收入。它必須上繳給當(dāng)?shù)卣糠侄惤?,工人也可能?huì)在輪班工作的前后在當(dāng)?shù)刭?gòu)買東西或在餐廳用餐。
然而,工廠也會(huì)帶來某些弊端,這取決于工廠的性質(zhì)。它可能會(huì)污染環(huán)境,造成房地產(chǎn)價(jià)格下跌。工廠一定會(huì)使當(dāng)?shù)氐慕煌髁吭黾?,?dǎo)致交通阻塞,使得小孩在外面玩耍變得不安全。最后,社區(qū)附近地區(qū)會(huì)變得既熱鬧又嘈雜。基于這些理由,我反對(duì)在社區(qū)附近興建新的工廠。雖然就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)能造福社區(qū),但我認(rèn)為還是居民乘車上下班,保持社區(qū)附近環(huán)境的安寧比較好。
運(yùn)氣在事業(yè)成功中的作用(6)
【題目】
“When people succeed, it is because of hard work.Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.【范文】 The Role of Luck in Success
It has been said that when people succeed, it is because of hard work and that luck has nothing to do with success.Although I believe that hard work is very important and is the surest way to success for most people, I must disagree with this statement.It cannot be denied that luck often plays an important role in success.For example, many important discoveries have been made by accident.There have been many cases of researchers and inventors making major breakthroughs while they were actually trying to solve another problem or create a different device.Furthermore, there is something to be said for simply being in the right place at the right time-perhaps meeting someone by chance who can offer a good job or rare opportunity.And of course, there are the rare examples of gamblers and lottery winners who beat the odds and achieve sudden and unexpected success.While the influence of luck cannot be ignored, this is not to say that one should depend on it and ignore the value of hard work.If one is willing to work hard, I believe that success will eventually be achieved, with or without the added benefit of luck.Moreover, hard work is often an essential ingredient of luck because it enables one to take advantage of a lucky encounter.If the scientist has not worked hard to develop his knowledge and skills, he may not recognize that lucky breakthrough when it comes along.Therefore, my suggestion is not to count on luck to bring you success.Instead, work hard and keep your eyes open for that lucky opportunity.參考譯文:運(yùn)氣在成功里所扮演的角色
有人說一個(gè)人會(huì)成功是因?yàn)榕?,而運(yùn)氣和成功則是一點(diǎn)關(guān)系也沒有。雖然我相信努力很重要,而且對(duì)大部分的人來說,努力是成功最可靠的方法,可是我不得不反對(duì)這種說法。能否成功,運(yùn)氣扮演著一個(gè)很重要的角色,這是不可否認(rèn)的事實(shí)。例如,很多重要的發(fā)現(xiàn)都是在偶然情況下發(fā)生的。有很多實(shí)例表明,有重大突破的研究人員和發(fā)明家,原本是要試圖解決其他問題或是發(fā)明別的儀器。而且,僅僅是天時(shí)地利這方面也有一些關(guān)系--也許是偶然碰到能提供好的工作和珍貴機(jī)會(huì)的人。當(dāng)然也有極少數(shù)賭徒和彩票得主得到突如其來、意想不到的成功。
盡管運(yùn)氣的影響力不容忽視,但也不表示人就應(yīng)該完全靠運(yùn)氣,而忽視努力的價(jià)值。如果一個(gè)人愿意努力,不論有沒有運(yùn)氣額外的幫助,我相信終究還是會(huì)成功。此外,因?yàn)榕δ茏屓顺浞掷眯疫\(yùn)的機(jī)會(huì),所以努力通常也是運(yùn)氣的必要因素。如果科學(xué)家沒有努力培養(yǎng)自己的知識(shí)和技巧,那么當(dāng)某個(gè)幸運(yùn)的突破出現(xiàn)時(shí),他可能也看不出來。因此,我建議大家不要指望運(yùn)氣能帶來成功。相反地,應(yīng)該努力,并隨時(shí)注意不要錯(cuò)過任何好機(jī)會(huì)。人們?yōu)槭裁匆獏⒂^博物館(7)
【題目】
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places.Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.【范文】 Why People Visit Museums?
Museums are great repositories of mankind’s historical artifacts and achievements in art.From them we can learn a great deal about the people of the past and their link to the people of the present.We can also learn about cultures other than our own.I believe this last advantage is the main reason many people visit museums when they travel.When someone chooses to visit a new place, he often does so because he is interested in seeing a different environment and a different way of life.To gain a better understanding of this new culture, many travelers will go to a history or cultural museum.Even those who never visit museums at home may be inspired by the new sights around them and want to find out more.Other people choose to visit museums abroad in groups to see things that they cannot see at home.They may have read of famous works of art and look forward to the chance to see them with their own eyes.Still others may have a specific interest, such as butterflies or eighteenth century furniture.It is not possible for every community to support a museum devoted to every field of study, but travelers can take advantage of the opportunity to pursue their interests.No matter why one travels, the journey often offers the opportunity to visit a new museum.It is an activity that will provide the traveler with a better understanding of the world, no matter what his specific interest is.That is why I think most people choose to visit museums when they travel to a new place.------------------
參考譯文:人們?yōu)槭裁匆獏⒂^博物館?
博物館是人類歷史文物及藝術(shù)成就的偉大寶庫(kù)。我們可以從中了解到很多與過去的人們有關(guān)的事以及他們與現(xiàn)代人之間的關(guān)聯(lián)。我們也可以從中了解其他不同的文化。我認(rèn)為最后這項(xiàng)優(yōu)點(diǎn)是許多人旅行時(shí)會(huì)去參觀博物館的主要原因。
人們選擇游覽一個(gè)新的地方是因?yàn)樗麄儗?duì)不同的環(huán)境以及不同的生活方式感興趣。為了更加了解這個(gè)新的文化,許多游客會(huì)去參觀歷史或文化博物館。即使是在國(guó)內(nèi)從不去參觀博物館的人,也可能會(huì)受到周圍景物的啟發(fā)而想要發(fā)掘更多東西。有些人在國(guó)外選擇參觀博物館是為了要看國(guó)內(nèi)所看不到的東西。他們可能已經(jīng)閱讀過一些著名藝術(shù)作品的資料而期待這個(gè)可以親眼目睹的機(jī)會(huì)。還有些人可能對(duì)某些事物有特定的興趣,如蝴蝶或18世紀(jì)的家具??墒遣⒎敲總€(gè)地區(qū)都能資助與每一種學(xué)術(shù)領(lǐng)域有關(guān)的博物館,所以游客就可以利用這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)去追求自己的興趣。
無論一個(gè)人為了什么而去旅行,旅行常能提供參觀新博物館的機(jī)會(huì)。這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)能讓旅行者更加了解世界,不管他的特殊興趣是什么。這就是我認(rèn)為為什么大部分人到新的地方旅行都會(huì)選擇參觀博物館的原因。
電影電視給觀眾帶來的影響(8)
【題目】
How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.【范文】 The Influence of Television and Movies
There is no doubt that watching television and movies can influence the way that people behave.Moreover, it seems that people are spending more and more time watching some sort of visual entertainment, whether it is television, a video tape or a DVD.Therefore, the effects of visual media cannot be ignored.One obvious effect of these media is that watching them induces people to buy certain products.Television advertising is widespread and, nowadays, even movie theaters permit advertisements.Another way TV and the movies affect people is that they give people either a broader view of the world or a distorted one, depending on what type of program they watch.Those who watch news and educational program can learn many new things while those who watch primarily entertainment shows may come to believe that most people in the world possess great wealth and good looks.It may make them become dissatisfied with their own lives.Finally, perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children, who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see on TV or in the movies.With the ever-increasing popularity of video entertainment, society must pay attention to these effects.Television and movies, while entertaining and informative, cannot take the place of real experience.控制影視暴力場(chǎng)景的意義(9)
[題目]
The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
[參考范文]
It is widely acknowledged that the amount of violence in films and on TV is one of the direct causes that lead to our high crime rate in our society.The voice of demanding the government to control violent scenes in media has been much louder than before.Personally, I totally agree with this voice, for it is the most effective way to reduce violent crimes in the real world.First and foremost, violence on TV or in films is often portrayed as extreme as possible in order to attract audiences.This will definitely set a bad example for those immature audiences, who, lacking correct parental guidance, are most likely to copy the violent behaviours and commit real violent crimes.Next, media, such as TV or film, is considered as the correct information source regulated by the government.It should be reporting and reflecting true phenomena in the society.Violence, as one of the facts in the real world, certainly has to be reported.However, excessive violence is offering misleading information to the public, which will exert detrimental influence to the society.For example, teenagers will regard those killers and murderers in the films and on TV as role models and copy their behaviors.It is recently reported in the news that a seventeen-year-old killed all his family members, one sister and two parents out of hatred and jealousy.In the real world, we are often reminded of the harm and hurt that violence in fictional world has brought us.n a word, our society is preoccupied by the violent scenes and plots at present.What the government has to do immediately is to take effective measures to control the amount of violence in media.Only in this way, can our society enjoy high level of security and peace.
第四篇:四六級(jí)寫作與翻譯解題策略.
四六級(jí)寫作與翻譯解題策略
一、寫作
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解題技巧
寫作解題時(shí)間為30分鐘,分為三步:5分鐘審題和構(gòu)思,20分鐘寫作,5分鐘檢查可能犯的錯(cuò)誤。下面分步驟說明。
(一)審題和構(gòu)思
事實(shí)上提供給寫作的時(shí)間不止30分鐘。一般來說,各考場(chǎng)會(huì)提前5分鐘左右將答題卡一發(fā)到學(xué)生手里,大一點(diǎn)的考場(chǎng)甚至可能提前10分鐘發(fā)卷。這5到10分鐘不允許學(xué)生作答,但考生完全可以用來做作文部分的審題和構(gòu)思工作。注意審題一定要仔細(xì),按要求寫作,不得擅自改動(dòng)題目,給定的提綱不得有遺漏,否則會(huì)按比例扣分。尤其注意,不要因?yàn)槭孪茸约罕尺^或練過哪篇相似的文章而死搬硬套。否則后果很嚴(yán)重。如,2008年12月六級(jí)寫作真題題目是College Students’ Mental Health,提綱為 1.心理健康對(duì)于大學(xué)生很重要 2.鑒于此,學(xué)??梢浴?3.我們自己應(yīng)該……”
而在考試之前我出過一道類似的模擬題,題目為“Psychological Problems Among College Students”, 提綱為 1.很多大學(xué)生有嚴(yán)重的心理問題 2.產(chǎn)生這些問題的原因 3.如何解決這些問題”
可以看出,我給的提綱是按照比較規(guī)矩的三段論來的,即“提出問題、分析問題、解決問題”。但真題的提綱并未要求考生分析問題,反倒有兩段要寫解決問題。有的考生因?yàn)榭催^或背過模擬題的范文,就直接照搬,導(dǎo)致了失分。
另外,構(gòu)思不是打草稿。并不建議學(xué)生練習(xí)寫作時(shí)養(yǎng)成打草稿的習(xí)慣。因?yàn)榭紙?chǎng)上時(shí)間有限,打完草稿再謄寫很可能來不及。另外,更重要的原因是考場(chǎng)上不發(fā)草稿紙,一般也不允許往里帶紙,難以找到打草稿的地方??忌灰ㄈ宸昼娮鲆幌聵?gòu)思即可,即想象一下每段大致寫什么,可以記幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞(比如在準(zhǔn)考證空白的地方)提示自己,在接下來的二十分鐘里面按照這幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞提示的內(nèi)容擴(kuò)展就行。一般來說,要求不少于150詞的文章最好寫到180到200詞,就句子數(shù)目來說,如果分三段,每段也就三到五句話,平均四句一段。那么整篇文章大約10個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞就可以做好構(gòu)思。以2009年6月六級(jí)寫作真題為例。Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.有人說名字(或名稱)很重要
2.也有人覺得名字(或名稱)無關(guān)緊要
3.我認(rèn)為……
構(gòu)思第一段時(shí),想到可以來一句鋪墊的話,如“名字重不重要是個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的話題”,可以寫下controversial或topic,作為關(guān)鍵詞;下一句是“有人說名字(或名稱)很重要”,可以先寫下important。再往后想兩條理由或例證即可。理由如“好名字容易被記住,因而可以給人來更多機(jī)會(huì)”(關(guān)鍵詞remember或opportunity),和“按照傳統(tǒng)理論起的名字可能會(huì)對(duì)人起到暗中庇護(hù)的作用”(關(guān)鍵詞tradition或shelter);例證如“有人認(rèn)為毛澤東偉大是因?yàn)槊志痛髿?,Bill Gates有錢是因?yàn)樗拿挚梢员硎锯n票,姓表示很多大門,很多大門都來錢,所以有錢”。第二、三段情同此理。其實(shí)第一段想好了,后兩段也就容易了。比如第二段可以將第一段的理由或例證反過來用,第三段可以總結(jié)或折中一下。字?jǐn)?shù)還是比較容易寫夠的。
(二)寫作
寫作的過程當(dāng)中,要注意這樣幾條高分策略。
字跡清楚,段落明朗(clear):字體不要太大,也不要太小,以行間距的三分之一到二分之一為合適;另外,大小要一致,不要忽大忽??;字母的傾斜方向要一致,不要東倒西歪;要抵著給出的虛線寫,不能上竄下跳;總之,要給閱卷人清楚、工整的感覺。段落一般為三段,采用段首縮進(jìn)式,即每段開頭空4至8個(gè)字母的格,每段段首縮進(jìn)的量要一致,要讓閱卷人一目了然。
內(nèi)容完整,緊扣提綱(complete):一般來說,六級(jí)寫作都會(huì)給出三點(diǎn)漢語(yǔ)提綱,考生應(yīng)嚴(yán)格按照三點(diǎn)寫成三段。不要有遺漏,也不要隨意改變提綱要點(diǎn)的順序。因?yàn)殚喚砣艘?0秒左右的時(shí)間打出分?jǐn)?shù),所以不希望看到與提綱嚴(yán)重背離的作文。
首保正確,再求閃光(correct):這一條是最核心的,因?yàn)樵趯懽鲿r(shí)間和篇幅都比較短的情況下,考生寫出的內(nèi)容幾乎是一樣的,唯一的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)幾乎就是語(yǔ)言的質(zhì)量。要首先保證語(yǔ)法和拼寫正確,哪怕用小詞、短句也可以。有能力的話再追求閃光的詞句。例如,有考生在寫2009年6月的作文時(shí),寫出了這樣的開頭句:There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China.這句話是套用我以往范文給過的句子,基本結(jié)構(gòu)是對(duì)的,但有兩處明顯的錯(cuò)誤。一處為vital,是個(gè)形容詞,而這里應(yīng)該用名詞。作者可能想用一個(gè)牛詞來替換importance以顯示用詞多樣,結(jié)果弄巧成拙。另外一處錯(cuò)誤為name之前應(yīng)該有冠詞a,其實(shí)題目中都給了,結(jié)果這位同學(xué)忽略了,缺乏基本的語(yǔ)法意識(shí)。其實(shí)作文中常犯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤除了冠詞錯(cuò)誤,還包括時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤、名詞和動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤、代詞不一致錯(cuò)誤、詞性錯(cuò)誤以及句子主謂不完整錯(cuò)誤。下筆時(shí)一定要謹(jǐn)慎。篇幅關(guān)系這里不能贅述。
先總后分,連詞用上(coherent):這里說的是段落的結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性的問題。英語(yǔ)文章特別喜歡先總后分或開門見山的格局,另外,段落之間和句子之間的形式連接手段特別明顯,即關(guān)聯(lián)詞用的很多。在寫作的時(shí)候,幾乎就是把給出的三點(diǎn)提綱作為每段的開頭句,然后再加上兩三個(gè)擴(kuò)展句即理由或例證句就可以了。當(dāng)然有時(shí)候?yàn)榱苏撟C自然或擴(kuò)展字?jǐn)?shù)也可以加上一點(diǎn)鋪墊的句子。如2009年6月真題作文開頭一句既可以是Some people claim that names are of great importance.也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controversial topic whether names are important or not.然后再說Some hold the positive view.后面再加上兩三句論證的話。論證句或擴(kuò)展句之間最好有連接詞,如First, Second, Besides, Also, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。
語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練,論據(jù)得當(dāng)(concise):不要啰嗦,不要過于重復(fù)和堆砌。有些考生背誦了一些經(jīng)典的句型,為了湊字就全用上了,給人低層次的感覺。如最后一段用同學(xué)寫道:As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view.其實(shí)As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一個(gè)就行了。另外,盡管內(nèi)容不及語(yǔ)言重要,但也肯定會(huì)影響分?jǐn)?shù)的。考生應(yīng)盡量平時(shí)多練,以期在考場(chǎng)上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和貼切的例證。另外,要敢于表達(dá)自己的思想,不要一味地為了保證語(yǔ)言正確而裹步不前,只說一些小學(xué)生的話。如有同學(xué)寫09年真題第一段時(shí)寫道:Some people think that names are important.They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him.If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him.這樣的作文倒是沒有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,但肯定也得不了高分。
(三)檢查
其實(shí)考生應(yīng)該在下筆寫作的時(shí)候就謹(jǐn)慎,仔細(xì),避免錯(cuò)誤,但即便這樣,錯(cuò)誤也是會(huì)有的,包括語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤,尤其對(duì)于平時(shí)缺乏練習(xí)的同學(xué)來說。那么就需要留幾分鐘通讀一下,檢查和改正。注意,要改的是一些語(yǔ)法或拼寫錯(cuò)誤,而不是作內(nèi)容上的大的改動(dòng),換言之,是改一些詞或詞組,而不是改整個(gè)句子或段落,因?yàn)槟菢訒?huì)造成卷面混亂,導(dǎo)致低分。要想避免內(nèi)容上的錯(cuò)誤,構(gòu)思時(shí)就要想好,落筆時(shí)就要謹(jǐn)慎。還有改正錯(cuò)誤要注意方式,盡量不要用涂改液或涂改帶,以免有作弊嫌疑,也不要在一個(gè)詞上涂畫太多,影響卷面整潔。一般可以用一條斜線劃掉錯(cuò)詞,然后在其上方寫出正確的,或者用膠帶或刀片之類輕輕將錯(cuò)詞去掉,然后在原位置寫出正確的。沖刺方略
即使到考前剩的時(shí)間不多,寫作也是大有可為的。要做的事情有兩件,一個(gè)是背,一個(gè)是練。
背主要是背范文,從實(shí)戰(zhàn)出發(fā),可以背模擬題的范文。背的目的有兩個(gè),一是掌握一些常用的經(jīng)典句型,在考場(chǎng)上應(yīng)急,另外是學(xué)習(xí)范文的思路和文章結(jié)構(gòu),以期為己所用。背不要貪多,一種類型的文章背一篇也就差不多。如果按我課上講的把作文分為五大類,那差不多背五篇就行。而且實(shí)在不能一字不差的背下來也不要太擔(dān)心,背下大部分就行。其實(shí),與背范文同樣重要的是背誦一些自己在閱讀里看到的比較有感覺的好詞好句,那樣可以避免與別人寫成一樣的。練也是練模擬題,因?yàn)榭歼^的寫作真題再考的可能性幾乎是沒有的。數(shù)量大約5到10篇,也就是每種類型一到兩篇。練的時(shí)候可以用背誦過的模板,但最好還是能用自己的話,不敢肯定的話可以寫完之后去查查字典,實(shí)在不敢肯定的可以請(qǐng)教別人或使用范文的說法。其實(shí)練模擬題主要目的并不是為了押題,而是提高構(gòu)思和英漢轉(zhuǎn)換的速度,為了培養(yǎng)一批自己比較喜歡的好詞好句。寫作模擬題可參見我的博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/wangzhaofei6666 附:2010年12月六級(jí)作文范文
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on University Ranking.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.目前高校排名相當(dāng)盛行 2.對(duì)這種做法人們看法不一 3.我認(rèn)為……
My View on University Ranking There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for some individuals or organizations to rank universities.Taking a look around, we can find examples too many to list.To this phenomenon people’s attitudes differ sharply.Some hold the positive view.They claim that ranking universities can help high school graduates or their parents to make a sound choice when enrolling in a university or college.Besides, this practice can help promote the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their position.Others, however, hold the opposite view.They point out that the result of ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of colleting money.Furthermore, some universities overemphasize the result of ranking and waste large amounts of resources.Personally, I believe that we should not go to extremes.On the one hand, it must be admitted that ranking is an effective means to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work.On the other hand, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way.二、翻譯
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解題技巧
翻譯是很多考生選擇放棄的題型,因?yàn)樗旁谠囶}最后,建議時(shí)間只有5分鐘,分值只占5%。其實(shí)這樣做是挺可惜的,因?yàn)榉g的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)比大部分同學(xué)想象的要寬松的多。以2009年6月的翻譯真題第一題為例:
82.With the oil prices ever rising, she tried to talk ____-_____________________(說服他不買車).評(píng)分時(shí)給出的滿分答案有四種: 1.him out of buying cars 2.to him an persuade him not to buy the car 3.to him in order to persuade him not to buy a car 4.him into giving up buying a car
當(dāng)然,出題人希望考生給出的是第一種,或者說該題考點(diǎn)是talk sb.out of doing sth.這一搭配。但能寫出后三種答案也照樣得滿分,因?yàn)樗鼈円捕纪暾乇磉_(dá)了原文的意思,而且沒有語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。所以大家不要放棄翻譯,只要用自己會(huì)的詞充分表達(dá)了原文的意思,就有可能得分,甚至得滿分。
具體來說,像寫作一樣,翻譯也分為三步:
(一)理解
即通讀并透徹理解原文含義,包括理解出題人想考察的語(yǔ)法或搭配。語(yǔ)法如虛擬語(yǔ)氣、倒裝、不定式、分詞、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、各種從句等等;搭配如動(dòng)賓搭配、介賓搭配等等。
(二)翻譯
確定譯文句子的時(shí)態(tài)、句型、結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞。實(shí)在無法準(zhǔn)確猜出出題人的意向,就用解釋的方法寫出答案。
(三)審校
首先檢查譯文是否正確地轉(zhuǎn)述了原文內(nèi)容,是否有錯(cuò)譯和漏譯;其次,檢查是否有語(yǔ)言上的明顯錯(cuò)誤,如時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等。發(fā)現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤,及時(shí)改正。
翻譯沖刺方略
要備考翻譯,還是需要做比較多細(xì)致的工作的。
首先,大家應(yīng)該重視語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和句型??梢酝ㄟ^做我們給的語(yǔ)法專項(xiàng)練習(xí)來實(shí)現(xiàn)。有語(yǔ)法的盲點(diǎn)應(yīng)該通過練習(xí)和查閱語(yǔ)法書即使掃清。
其次,應(yīng)該重視搭配。記單詞的時(shí)候要養(yǎng)成記搭配的習(xí)慣,尤其對(duì)于動(dòng)詞來說要這樣。大家最好能夠了解到《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)要求》里面所規(guī)定的搭配,如09年6月第一題里考到的talk sb.out of doing sth.就在其中。當(dāng)然這并不夠因?yàn)橄褚酝歼^的deprive sb.of sth.這樣基本的重要搭配在《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)要求》里面又找不到,所以還需要大家自己在背單詞的時(shí)候盡可能多記一些搭配。
附:2010年12月六級(jí)翻譯:
82.There is no denying that you __________________________________(越仔細(xì)越好)in dealing with this matter.83.Only when I reached my thirties _____________________________(我才意識(shí)到讀書是不能被忽視的).84.Much _________________________________(使研究人員感到驚訝), the outcome of the experiment was far better than they had expected.85.Oh, my, I can’t find my key;______________________________(我一定是把它忘在哪兒了).86.I ____________________________________________(寧愿加入你們?nèi)プ隽x工)than go to the beach for a holiday.82.cannot be too careful(結(jié)構(gòu))
83.did I realize that reading could not be neglected(倒裝與時(shí)態(tài))84.to the researchers’ surprise(搭配)85.I must have left it somewhere(情態(tài)動(dòng)詞)
86.would rather join you to work as volunteers(結(jié)構(gòu)與搭配)
第五篇:專八寫作熱點(diǎn)話題預(yù)測(cè)
專八寫作熱點(diǎn)話題預(yù)測(cè)
作者:劉莉華
來源:《英語(yǔ)專業(yè)八級(jí)考試寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文背誦》
時(shí)間:2006-08-24
【寫作題目】
People used to regard college life as most carefree days, but now depression, anxiety and even suicide are creeping onto campus.How should college students react to this change? Write an essay of about 400 words entitled: How to Survive College Life In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details.In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.【范文呈現(xiàn)1】
How to Survive College Life
The college life should be joyful and colorful, but on campus you can also see the sights: some students are extremely embarrassed when it’s time for them to pay the tuition;some students may have difficulty in going to sleep, when it’s time for them to have final exam or hand in term papers;some freshmen are on the verge of breakdown because of loneliness or homesickness.Maybe you are suffering from one of these troubles.Do you want to get rid of it and enjoy a more pleasant and rich college life? Here is my advice about how to cope with financial, academic and emotional problems.First of all, there are several ways to reduce your financial pressure.The best way is to take a part-time job, such as being a tutor or a part-time cleaner.By doing so, you can increase both your income and experience.Next, if
have no extra spare time to take one, you can try to apply for a loan fund from government.The good news is that it is usually interest-free and you are allowed to pay back by installment after graduation.Then besides earning money, you should learn to spend carefully and wisely.Set priorities and avoid unnecessary expenses for luxuries such as new clothes or snacks.Besides, to release academic pressure, you can take the following suggestions into account.First, you can ask teachers for help directly when you have difficulty in understanding lessons.Most often, the teachers can not only help you solve the problem but also help you improve learning methods.Second, you should relax yourself after long time study.You can do some exercise, or listen to music to release your physical
you must keep a positive attitude toward your studies.Don’t feel frustrated when you fail an exam;stay confident and be eager to learn when facing excellent competitors.Above all, set yourself long-term goals and fix your eyes on them, which enable you to go ahead despite temporary setbacks.When it comes to the problem of homesickness, here are a few tips for freshmen.Obviously, you can write to your family or call home every few days.Meanwhile, you should adapt to the new environment as soon as you can by making new friends, joining some clubs, taking part in all sorts of activities.In addition, cultivating a hobby is another effective way to shake off the loneliness and enrich your life.Life is a journey full of stumbling blocks, dangerous traps and unexpected
as part of it, college days are no exception.However, those who survive and succeed are not lucky people who slide by, but tough nails that react bravely and positively.So, be tough, take right actions, and you will free yourself from the present predicament soon.【范文呈現(xiàn)2】
How to Survive College Life
Many high school graduates cheerfully receive university admissions, painting a rosy picture of college life in mind.However, after stepping onto campus, they are confronted with all sorts of problems and haunted by depression and anxiety.Therefore, it takes both a positive attitude and proper actions to lead a happy college life.Many freshmen, suddenly falling into a
frustrated to realize that their living and learning habits in high school are no longer practical at college.They have to manage their life and plan spare time on their own, while in high school almost everything is assigned by teachers and supervised by parents.This change may puzzle them for a short time, but certainly can be overcome with a little effort.In daily life, they should learn to do chores such as washing and shopping either by calling home or by consulting experienced roommates.In their studies, they should set up a busy schedule in order not to waste time, exchange ideas with juniors and seniors so as to improve learning methods, talk to teachers voluntarily when having questions or dissatisfactions.By following the above advice, a first year student can
adjustment.Money shortage also inflicts pain on a large number of undergraduates.Some may be tightfisted due to their family conditions;some may encounter a financial problem because of poor management of their pocket money.What can those students do? Both should try to balance between earning and spending.The former can do part-time jobs such as a private tutor or a salesperson of McDonald, or obtain a scholarship by studying hard, or get a bank loan.Yet, the latter ought to make better use of their money, spending only on necessities and cutting down expenses on luxuries.In addition to the above matters, many students suffer depression for unrequited love.Some become obsessed with his or her crush;some feel
there is a few who have tried murder or suicide at the time of breakup.How should they relieve themselves from such pain? An effective remedy is to pour out to closed friends, who can always listen to their worries, share their frustration, give rational advice and heal their confidence.In the meantime, they can divert their attention by developing more hobbies and engaging in various healthy social activities such as charity or recreational programs.Few expect to face so many problems in a short period of 4 years, but once it happens, provided one has enough confidence, courage and will to change, he can still achieve what he wants.Besides, as the old saying goes, every cloud has a silver lining.Looking back, he may even treasure and thank for
him strong and prepared him for his future.【范文賞析】
兩篇范文立意相近,但結(jié)構(gòu)安排各有特點(diǎn),展示了面對(duì)“問題解決型”寫作任務(wù)時(shí),同學(xué)們可采取的兩種基本組織模式:前者在首段通過描述了大學(xué)生活常見的三類問題,在文章主體分別從三個(gè)角度予以解決;后者則是在每個(gè)主體段落中,逐個(gè)描述分析問題再對(duì)癥下藥。
從選詞造句的角度來說,二者都大量運(yùn)用了平行結(jié)構(gòu)和排比句,這樣既加強(qiáng)了列舉事例的簡(jiǎn)潔性,又突出了語(yǔ)言的節(jié)奏感,例如:第一篇文章的首段中on campus you can also see the sights: some students are extremely embarrassed when it’s time for them to pay the tuition;some students may have difficulty in going to sleep, when it’s time for them to have final exam or hand in term
of breakdown because of loneliness or homesickness;第二篇文章中的Some become obsessed with his or her crush;some feel heartbroken when being rejected;even there is a few who have tried murder or suicide at the time of breakup。此外,兩篇短文雖都在提建議,前者采用了第二人稱,多處使用了簡(jiǎn)練有力的祈使句;后者采用了第三人稱,多處采用了分詞、動(dòng)名詞結(jié)構(gòu),表意主次鮮明,同時(shí)體現(xiàn)了句式變化。選詞的亮點(diǎn)分別在于:前者使用了on the verge of sth(在…的邊緣), fix one’s eyes on …(集中注意力在…;關(guān)注), stumbling block(絆腳石),tough nails(堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的人);后者使用了短語(yǔ)inflict pain on…(使…痛苦),cut down expenses(減少開支),及諺語(yǔ)every cloud has a silver lining(每朵烏云都鑲有銀邊)。