第一篇:2013年12月21日托福寫作預(yù)測
杭州新航道
2013年12月21日托福寫作預(yù)測
2013年12月15日托福寫作考試特點(diǎn)總結(jié):
獨(dú)立作文:話題方面:2013年12月15日題目:The students nowadays do not respect the teachers as much as the students in the past.和20120817NA類題目重復(fù).和12月15日寫作預(yù)測題題2和題8類型相似,都是屬于過去與現(xiàn)在對比類題目.2013年12月21托福寫作預(yù)測如下:
獨(dú)立作文:
1)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict.2)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In the past young people are more depended on their parents in making decision.Today, young people are better able to make decisions in their own lives
3)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors.4)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: For the development of a country, it's more important to spend money on education of very young children(5-10years old)than to spend on universities.5)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for government to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for future generation.6)Which of the following contributes most to an enjoyable vacation: good food, good location or good friends to travel with?
7)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Is there a good reason to be impolite to another person?
8)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is easier to maintain good health than in the past?
杭州新航道
第二篇:托福寫作
Agree or disagree A university should focus more on its facilities, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers
Nowadays, highly education has been attached more important than before.A argue that school facilities should pay more attention than professor lecture.From my perspective, although such hardware like computer centers and science lab provide some benefits to university students, university depends on quality of stuff.Admittedly, a school equipped with great facilities is more appealing the applicants.The reason is that it can make study easier.A bright library offers such a quiet condition for knowledge absorption;a computer center provides a self-govern ways to study;a science lab make student get more practice about miracles.However, this factors become less considerate when it comes to the quality of the professors.For one thing, not only do famous teachers can impart the knowledge, but instill the angle that to solve the problem.To pass on knowledge, a human is no better than a machine or a high-tech tool.The difference lies in the
special ways to get the solutions and the potential inspiration by the former.Take my favorite teacher for example, she often shows us some different way to solve the difficulties.And then she tells us the angle to work out the problem.As for me, it was not until her explanation, that I know about the easier way to work the problem.That is something that high-tech can barely achieve.For another, universities with qualified teachers tend to have higher graduate employment.It is not hard to imagine that a teacher with connections can bring more opportunity to get internship.As an old saying goes, knowledge starts with practice.It is still true now.Students who swamped in labs, would never face the brutal fact that you need a window for people to see what you’ve got.In this way, a well-connect professor can open that for you, instead of lifeless labs.In conclusion, though facilities could promote learning, but it fail to generate more practical merits to students.Recruit more qualified teacher should be paid more attention and stress.
第三篇:3月22日、23日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測
3月22日、23日托福獨(dú)立寫作預(yù)測
1.Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.同意:(1)技術(shù)使人們需要掌握的知識和技能變多了,因?yàn)轳{馭和使用技能必須要學(xué)習(xí)很多使用方法神馬的,而且技術(shù)更新的很快,就要不斷學(xué)習(xí)和吸收;(2)技術(shù)讓選擇變多了,需要考慮的也變多了,因?yàn)榧夹g(shù)豐富了產(chǎn)品和服務(wù)咩,人們就在選擇的時(shí)候需要去比較和思考呀,像買個(gè)洗衣機(jī),要考慮神馬牌子的,全自動(automatic)還是半自動的(semi-automatic),要不要有集成烘干功能
(combination washer with dryer)等等;(3)技術(shù)帶來的一些負(fù)面作用給人們的生活帶來了很多的麻煩咩,容易產(chǎn)生連鎖反應(yīng)(domino-effect),例如車子方便了人們的出行,但是車增加了溫室氣體,北京開始限號了,萬一忘掉了單號和雙號還要被處罰,煩躁。
2.In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.同意:(1)廣告可以讓企業(yè)的產(chǎn)品更為人所知,口碑營銷(reputation marketing)有地理的局限性(geographical barriers),廣告比較無孔不入(rife),可以接觸到更多的潛在客戶(reach people in a larger scale);(2)廣告可以促使消費(fèi)者作出購買決定,因?yàn)楹玫膹V告能激發(fā)出(stimulate)消費(fèi)者的潛在需求
(inner desire),讓消費(fèi)者產(chǎn)生購買這個(gè)產(chǎn)品的欲望,從而促進(jìn)了產(chǎn)品的銷量;
(3)讓步:但是在廣告上花費(fèi)多少企業(yè)要掌握好,必須根據(jù)財(cái)政情況(budget)來合理分配,防止在產(chǎn)品的生產(chǎn)和員工的待遇上資金不足,否則光靠廣告效應(yīng)吸引了消費(fèi)者,但是沒有辦法留住消費(fèi)者也是不會成功的。
3.Should the government support artists or should artists support themselves?
應(yīng)該由政府資助:(1)有利于保護(hù)文化,因?yàn)楹芏嗨囆g(shù)家進(jìn)行的藝術(shù)創(chuàng)作是一個(gè)國家的文化的符號(symbol),體現(xiàn)了一個(gè)國家的文化特征(cultural identity),但是這些藝術(shù)往往都不怎么賺錢,政府不資助的話從事這個(gè)藝術(shù)的人就會越來越少的;(2)讓藝術(shù)家可以專心藝術(shù)創(chuàng)作,藝術(shù)是比較燒錢的(money-consuming),像是買畫布之類的,很多藝術(shù)家不得不去做兼職來維持開銷,如果政府資助的話,避免他們因?yàn)榻疱X問題分散(distract)時(shí)間和精力;(2)可以保持藝術(shù)的純碎和本質(zhì)(authenticity);因?yàn)樗囆g(shù)家可以不用為了金錢去迎合(cater to)消費(fèi)者和市場,可以堅(jiān)持自己的藝術(shù)理念,就不會讓藝術(shù)的本質(zhì)被扭曲了(distort)。
4.People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’
s no need for the government to help them.偏向不同意:讓步段承認(rèn)有些問題確實(shí)不需要政府來解決了,個(gè)人解決問題的能力比過去強(qiáng)了,因?yàn)槭艿搅肆己玫慕逃╳ell-educated),并且技術(shù)也更加發(fā)達(dá);但是這并不是意味著就不需要政府,很多問題的解決依然需要依賴政府的(1)在面對很多問題的時(shí)候,個(gè)人依然是缺乏能力的,很多問題的解決需要投入大量的資金或者需要有比較大的影響力或者威懾(deter),個(gè)人都不具備;(2)個(gè)人在解決問題的時(shí)候往往沒有政府處理的更好,因?yàn)閭€(gè)人容易受到個(gè)人利益或者情感因素的左右(sway),而且眼界也會比較狹隘。
5.Teaching is harder than it was in the past.同意:(1)技術(shù)的發(fā)展讓人們可以自己在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上搜尋到很多的信息,學(xué)生經(jīng)常會在課堂上問老師各種各樣的知識,老師在上課的時(shí)候需要了解更多的東西和知識,這樣才可以應(yīng)對了解的東西越來越多的學(xué)生;(2)現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生不像過去那樣那么尊重老師了,隨著家庭結(jié)構(gòu)(family fabric)的改變,孩子的數(shù)量變少了,父母對孩子都比較寵溺(spoil),孩子都比較自我(self-oriented),管理起來比以前困難;(3)現(xiàn)在的老師除了專業(yè)知識以外還需要掌握更多的技能,隨著多媒體(multimedia)在教學(xué)中的運(yùn)用,老師必須要學(xué)會使用多媒體豐富課堂內(nèi)容,學(xué)會用電腦制作PPT。
6.It is better to have a secure job with a low pay than to take a job wit a high pay but is easy to lose.選擇工資高但是可能會丟失的工作:(1)有失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)但是工資高的工作能夠提高一個(gè)人的工作能力,因?yàn)樘幵诳赡苁I(yè)的壓力下就必須非常努力的去完善自己,而穩(wěn)定的工作容易消磨(sap)人們的進(jìn)取心,變成混日子(idle);(2)有失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)但是工資高的工作可以提高生活水平(living standard),因?yàn)榭梢韵硎艿礁玫纳唐罚╟ommodities)和服務(wù)(service),即使失業(yè)了,也有足夠的資金能維持一段時(shí)間;(3)有失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)但是工資高的工作給人更強(qiáng)的成就感(a sense of achievement),因?yàn)檫@樣的工作往往更加具有挑戰(zhàn)性,而穩(wěn)定的工作基本都是重復(fù)性的勞動,容易讓人厭倦。
7.In twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisure life.同意:(1)技術(shù)的發(fā)展使得人們的休閑方式更加多樣化了(diverse),技術(shù)的進(jìn)步是日新月異的(daily and monthly increasing),20年內(nèi)會有巨大的飛躍(giant leap),讓人們能得到更好的放松(refresh);(2)人們的觀念在20年內(nèi)也會有所改變,人們越來越意識到(be conscious of)休閑的重要性,不會把大量的時(shí)間都放在工作上,不愿意成為工作機(jī)器(working machine);(3)生活水平的提高使得人們更加能夠去享受休閑的生活,20年內(nèi),社會福利
(social welfare)會越來越完善,人們滿足基本生活需求所需要的金錢越來越少,有足夠的資金去享受更加休閑的生活。
8.Your job has greater happiness than your social life.偏向不同意:讓步段承認(rèn)工作還是灰常重要滴,工作可以確保生活品質(zhì)咩,因?yàn)楣ぷ骱檬杖氩鸥撸拍苤Ц兜闷鹨恍┥唐泛头?wù)的說;但是social life給我們帶來的快樂時(shí)更多的:(1)social life可以使人們得到放松(refresh),緩解工作中的壓力(alleviate pressure),如果只有工作沒有social life就和工作機(jī)器一樣,人生就非常的單調(diào)(monotonous);(2)social life對于工作會有促進(jìn)作用,在人們進(jìn)行social life的同時(shí)往往也在拓展社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)(social network),可以認(rèn)識一些對于工作有幫助的人。
9.The effective leader should tries to make others feel they have been part of a decision.同意:(1)增強(qiáng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力(leadership),因?yàn)樽寛F(tuán)隊(duì)成員參與到?jīng)Q策中會增進(jìn)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和團(tuán)隊(duì)成員之間的距離,讓交流會變得更加的順暢,互動(interaction)會更好,下屬(subordinate)也更加容易跟從;(2)提高團(tuán)隊(duì)成員的工作表現(xiàn)(work performance),因?yàn)樽寛F(tuán)隊(duì)成員參與決策是對他們的一種認(rèn)可,這是一種非常好的激勵(lì)機(jī)制(incentive system);(3)能減少團(tuán)隊(duì)的失誤,因?yàn)椴煌某蓡T有不同的想法,彼此可以互補(bǔ),想的比較全面(comprehensive),減少犯錯(cuò)的可能。
10.In 20 years from now on,students will not use printed books any more.不同意:(1)printed books對學(xué)生的身體傷害比較小,在20年內(nèi),電子書的技術(shù)沒有辦法發(fā)展到消除輻射(radiation)的地步,printed books不會有輻射,比如對學(xué)生眼睛會比較好;(2)printed books成本更小,電子書的使用往往依賴于高科技設(shè)備,像IPAD,Smart Phone之類的,在未來的20年內(nèi),這些設(shè)備不會普及到所有學(xué)生都能負(fù)擔(dān)得起(affordable),所以不用紙質(zhì)書不太現(xiàn)實(shí)
(practical);(3)使用電子書有很多時(shí)候會讓學(xué)生分心(distract),因?yàn)閷W(xué)生自控能力不太強(qiáng)(self-discipline)的能力不強(qiáng),這一點(diǎn)20年以前和以后都是一樣的,學(xué)生會利用看電子書的設(shè)備打游戲,上網(wǎng)什么的。
11.Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age
偏向不同意:讓步段承認(rèn)年長的朋友在很多方面給出的建議是非常有用的,他們的經(jīng)歷比年齡相仿的人要多,很多問題的解決時(shí)需要經(jīng)驗(yàn)的;但這并不意味著年齡相仿的朋友給出的建議不珍貴,在很多時(shí)候,年齡相仿的朋友能給出更有價(jià)值的建議(1)年齡相仿的朋友的建議更加實(shí)際(practical),因?yàn)槟挲g相仿的朋友更了解我們,而且經(jīng)歷背景也比較相似;(2)年齡相仿的朋友給出的建議更容易被接受和采納(adopt),因?yàn)槟挲g相仿的朋友之間沒有什么代溝,相處交流的時(shí)間也更多,提出的建議影響力更大。
12.The telephone has greater influence on people’
s lives than television has.同意:(1)電話的使用頻率(frequency)比電視更多,人是社會動物(social animal),一個(gè)人可以一個(gè)月不看電視,但是不能一天不聯(lián)系他人;(2)電話比電視更加多功能(multifunction),現(xiàn)在的電話,特別是智能電話(smart phones)不僅包含了電視看的功能,還有很多其他電視沒有的功能,像是上網(wǎng),玩游戲什么的;
(3)電話比電視更能滿足人們,特別是年輕人DIY的需求,比較彰顯個(gè)性,因?yàn)榭梢愿鶕?jù)自我的喜好進(jìn)行裝飾(decorate)。
13.The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individuals.偏向不同意:讓步段承認(rèn)有些環(huán)境問題個(gè)人確實(shí)很難搞定,因?yàn)橛行┉h(huán)境問題的解決需要投入大量的資金,比如治理一條被污染的河流(contaminated river),有的問題的解決需要有影響力,比如全球變暖,需要政府出面的;但是得出上述結(jié)論并不意味著所有的環(huán)境問題對于個(gè)人來說都太復(fù)雜了,個(gè)人還是可以在環(huán)境問題上采取措施發(fā)揮作用的:(1)個(gè)人的努力能夠從根源上解決很多環(huán)境問題(address many environmental issues from the root),因?yàn)楹芏喹h(huán)境問題就是由于個(gè)人的生活方式不當(dāng)造成的,而且雖然個(gè)人的努力很微小,但是由于每個(gè)人都有社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)(social network),微小的努力可以積累(accumulate)并且傳遞,產(chǎn)生的作用就很大(make a great difference。(2)個(gè)人可以影響到更有實(shí)力的政府和企業(yè),政府是公民的代表(on behalf of),如果公民都愿意為環(huán)保做些事,政府就不能違背公民的意志;企業(yè)必須要迎合(cater to)消費(fèi)者,當(dāng)企業(yè)的行為不環(huán)保或者生產(chǎn)了不環(huán)保的東西就得不到消費(fèi)者的認(rèn)可和支持。
14.Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language,science and history.同意:(1)可以給孩子的生活增添很多的樂趣(enjoyment),因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)藝術(shù)和音樂讓學(xué)生在閑暇時(shí)多了打發(fā)時(shí)間(fill time)的方式,可以去聽聽音樂會,去看看藝術(shù)展之類的;(2)讓學(xué)生找到了成功的其他可能性,因?yàn)橛械暮⒆硬皇翘瞄L學(xué)術(shù)型課程,但是在藝術(shù)和音樂上面比較有天賦(talented),學(xué)校沒有這樣的課程孩子接觸不到天賦可能就被埋沒了;(3)開發(fā)孩子的智力
(exploit intelligence),因?yàn)閷W(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)音樂和藝術(shù)的時(shí)候使用的是平時(shí)用不到的另外一個(gè)大腦半球(brain hemisphere),能夠活躍大腦(activate brain)。
15.Movies and television programs should present stories in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.偏向不同意:讓步段承認(rèn)給小孩子看的要這樣呈現(xiàn),避免誤導(dǎo)孩子,因?yàn)樾『⒆舆€不成熟,無法明辨是非(tell the virtue from the evil),如果不這么呈現(xiàn),孩子發(fā)現(xiàn)壞人做了壞事也沒有獲得懲罰可能也會去做壞事;但是這并不意味著給成年人看的電影和節(jié)目也要這樣呈現(xiàn):(1)削弱了電影和電視的可看性,因?yàn)榭吹搅碎_頭就知道了結(jié)尾,就會顯得很無趣(monotonous),而且把本來很復(fù)雜的人性就簡化(simplify)為好人和壞人顯得很弱智;(2)這樣呈現(xiàn)的電影不夠震撼人心(stunning),印象也不深(impressive),莎士比亞說悲劇是把人性中最美好的東西撕裂給人看,所以讓人記憶深刻的往往都是悲劇居多。
16.Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their ownmistakes.同意:(1)能夠幫助孩子避免再犯類似的錯(cuò)誤,為下次的成功奠定基礎(chǔ)
(lay foundation for)。人們都需要在錯(cuò)誤中吸取經(jīng)驗(yàn)和教訓(xùn),所以錯(cuò)誤其實(shí)是不可避免的(inevitable),孩子犯了錯(cuò)誤并且吸取了經(jīng)驗(yàn),印象深刻,能取得進(jìn)步;(2)培養(yǎng)(cultivate)孩子的面對挫折(frustration)的良好的心態(tài),孩子在以后的學(xué)習(xí)和工作中一定會犯錯(cuò)的,家長允許孩子犯錯(cuò)會讓孩子在面對錯(cuò)誤的時(shí)候不會去逃避(escape),而是以比較積極的心態(tài)去面對;(3)有利于家長和孩子之間的親子關(guān)系(family bond),如果父母不允許孩子犯錯(cuò),孩子一旦犯了錯(cuò)就會非常的緊張和害怕,會采取隱瞞甚至撒謊的方式,這樣不利于父母和孩子的關(guān)系。
17.Professional athletes, such as football and basketball players, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid.不同意:(1)高工資是對他們的艱苦訓(xùn)練(extraordinary tough training)的一種回報(bào)(reward),運(yùn)動員都是從很小的時(shí)候就開始訓(xùn)練了,每天的訓(xùn)練量都是比較大的,而且訓(xùn)練是很枯燥(monotonous)的,在訓(xùn)練中還有可能受傷;(2)是對運(yùn)動員短暫職業(yè)生涯的彌補(bǔ)(compensation),運(yùn)動員由于生理?xiàng)l件的限制,無法一輩子從事這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動,在20-30歲期間都要退役,之后需要金錢來維持生計(jì)的(sustain themselves);(3)是市場經(jīng)濟(jì)的(market economy)的結(jié)果,在現(xiàn)在的市場機(jī)制下,價(jià)值由需求決定,既然很多人喜歡看運(yùn)動,喜歡某個(gè)運(yùn)動員,愿意花錢去看比賽,這就是值得的。
18.If you own a lot of money, would you prefer to spend money on something that lasts a long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry, than on a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation.選擇投資維持時(shí)間長的:(1)持續(xù)時(shí)間長的東西帶來的快樂會更加持久,因?yàn)槊看慰吹蕉紩X得比較開心,就像珠寶可以在很長時(shí)間讓女生看到就高興,而短期的愉悅的東東過去一般就沒有了,會隨著記憶淡忘的(fade);(2)投資持
續(xù)時(shí)間長的東西用處比較大,因?yàn)樵谶@方便進(jìn)行投資以后也許會升值
(appreciate),而且當(dāng)需要金錢的時(shí)候,這些東西可以去賣掉解決問題的;(3)持續(xù)時(shí)間長的東西更加具有紀(jì)念意義(memorable),可以傳給(pass on)子孫后代的(offspring)。
19.Patience is usually not a good thing and we need to take action at once.偏向不同意:讓步段承認(rèn)在緊急情況(emergency)需要立即采取行動,因?yàn)樵谶@樣的情況下,當(dāng)機(jī)立斷可以避免損失,例如遇到有人心臟病(heart attack)發(fā)作的時(shí)候;但是在很多的時(shí)候還是有耐心會比較好,(1)耐心可以避免一些錯(cuò)誤的行為或者決定,人們有的時(shí)候在采取行動或者作出決定的時(shí)候是不夠理智的(not rational),可能是出于沖動之類的(impulse),不立刻做決定可以理智分析,采取比較有利的行動;(2)有耐心在很多時(shí)候能帶來更好的時(shí)機(jī)(timing),因?yàn)橛懈嗟臅r(shí)間去洞察(have an insight into),并且獲得更多的信息做好充分的準(zhǔn)備(well-prepared),例如在商業(yè)談判中。
20.Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place.不同意:(1)人類的好奇心(curiosity)會促使(motivate)人們不斷去探索和發(fā)現(xiàn),因?yàn)槿祟惖谋灸埽╥nstinct)就是對未知的東西好奇,了解了一個(gè)東西以后,會有更多期望了解的東西出現(xiàn);(2)人類先進(jìn)的科技水平(advanced technology)使得現(xiàn)在人類科技發(fā)現(xiàn)的平臺(platform)比以前更加的廣闊,在現(xiàn)有的基礎(chǔ)上稍加改變可能就會帶來無數(shù)可能,產(chǎn)生巨大變化(make a difference);(3)有很多東西存在,但是人類目前還沒有發(fā)現(xiàn),因?yàn)檎J(rèn)知能力(cognitive ability)或者科技發(fā)展的限制,當(dāng)未來人類發(fā)現(xiàn)的時(shí)候,這些對人類的產(chǎn)生的影響可能是超乎想象的(beyond imagination)。
21.the car had has a greater effect on society than the airplane has
汽車對社會的影響更大:(1)汽車比飛機(jī)更加實(shí)用(practical)和靈活(flexible),飛機(jī)一般只有長途旅行才會用上,但是汽車短途的,甚至從家到公司都能用上,而且汽車想開的時(shí)候隨時(shí)都可以開,沒有什么時(shí)間,地點(diǎn)的限制;(2)汽車比飛機(jī)更加的流行(prevail),很多人一年坐飛機(jī)的次數(shù)比較有限,而且飛機(jī)也比較貴,汽車更加的便宜(affordable),使用的人更多;(3)汽車提供了人們一個(gè)緊密感情(strengthen the emotional bond)的很好的場所,在汽車開車的時(shí)候,人們可以一家人或者朋友之間相互交流,但是在飛機(jī)上一般都是要保持安靜的,個(gè)人基本都是各自干各自的說。
第四篇:2014年6月15日新托福寫作預(yù)測
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2014年6月15日新托福寫作預(yù)測
2014年5月24日托福寫作考試特點(diǎn)總結(jié):
獨(dú)立作文:話題方面:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: it is important for government to provide money for things that are beautiful not just for things that are practical.2014年5月25日托福寫作考試特點(diǎn)總結(jié):
Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful.24號考的是金錢類話題有關(guān)政府投資的題目,25號考的是關(guān)于成功類話題但是涉及到家庭教育。延續(xù)agree/disagree類型作文。
2014年6月15托福寫作預(yù)測如下:
獨(dú)立作文:
1)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views.2)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office
3)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Young people now are more willing to help others than those in the past..4)you agree or disagree with the following statement: Is there a good reason to be impolite to another person?
5)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Governments should focus more on preservation of environment rather than economic development
6)Compare to people live in the city, people who live in the village and farm areas are more satisfied with their lives
7)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Teacher's performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers.8)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict.9)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: For the development of a country, it's more important to spend money on education of very young children(5-10years old)than to spend on universities.杭州新航道
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10)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for government to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for future generation.杭州新航道
第五篇:托福寫作欣賞
托福寫作范文欣賞:a new university in your community
摘要:新托??荚噷懽魅绻忌肽酶叻?,腦子里一定要有幾篇文章,背上幾篇范文,能以備不時(shí)只需。托福寫作是中國考生的弱項(xiàng),只有在日常生活中多讀些范文,了解托福寫作中的邏輯思
新托福考試寫作如果考生想拿高分,腦子里一定要有幾篇文章,背上幾篇范文,能以備不時(shí)只需。托福寫作是中國考生的弱項(xiàng),只有在日常生活中多讀些范文,了解托福寫作中的邏輯思維,才可更好的進(jìn)行鍛煉。下面我們一起欣賞這篇托福寫作范文。
這篇托福獨(dú)立寫作滿分范文的主要內(nèi)容是討論了如果政府宣布計(jì)劃興建一所新的大學(xué),而有些人認(rèn)為你所在的社區(qū)是個(gè)建大學(xué)的好地方,那么請你也對比一下在你所在的社區(qū)建新大學(xué)的好處和壞處。The government has announced that it plans to build a new university.Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.Use specific details in your discussion.①優(yōu)點(diǎn):學(xué)生上學(xué)方便;促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)氐慕逃l(fā)展
②優(yōu)點(diǎn):促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)禺a(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)展,提供就業(yè)崗位
③缺點(diǎn):本區(qū)很多老人,將極大影響他們的生活,其他人的生活也不再安寧
④缺點(diǎn):交通、環(huán)境問題轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng)-[Examw.Com]
My community is located in a quiet and small town with very
beautiful natural sceneries.The environment is very suitable for a new university.Everyone in my community would without doubt enjoy a sense of pride when informed that a new university will be built here.However, just as any other constructions, this action will bring many advantages as well as disadvantages to my community.The most essential and exciting advantage is that a new university will definitely enhance the education on all levels in my community.Usually, children living nearby a university would frequently visit or play in the university, and thus they can be unconsciously influenced by the academic environment.This influence might be more effective to them than any preach from their parents about the importance of studying.By building a new university, children in my community will develop a greater motivation for studying hard.Moreover, with a university located nearby, all the primary schools, middle schools will have a greater sense of competition.The teachers may encourage the students to work harder to get a university degree, since it would be very embarrassing that the students of their own community could not be admitted by the new university.Besides, a new university in my community will boom the local economy.As we all know, universities are always surrounded by a wide range of stores, restaurants and markets which provide services to the students and faculty.Thus it is very likely that the new university will
encourage the local residents to offer their services around the school.As a result, more people will be employed and the employment rate which bothers the government for years might eventually drop.However, with closer examination, the disadvantages of building a new university in my community could also be formidable.Since my community is far from the city, most of its residents are seniors.Even for the younger people living here, they prefer a quiet environment and are afraid of any major changes made to their lives.Therefore, the attention brought by a new university might be unbearable to these local people.To be specific, traffic will no doubt increase in the near future.With more cars and people on the roads, it is possible that the local environmental quality will decrease.If the air is no more clean, our community might lose its strongest attraction.Then current residents might feel quite reluctant to live here in the future.In sum, the advantages of building a new university in my community seems very promising, yet we have to consider the undesirable consequences it might bring about.The government should really be cautious and take all the possible factors into consideration before making such a decision.'
我們并不主張考生死記范文,考試時(shí)如果遇到類似題目照搬上去,這并不能考察考生的寫作能力。新托??荚噷懽鞫啾骋恍┓段?,可以積累一些素材,像好的短語、詞、句等,靈活運(yùn)用。