第一篇：托福寫作滿分作文怎么寫

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托福寫作滿分作文怎么寫？

首先，應(yīng)當挑選題目新、話題多樣、寫法全面的高質(zhì)量范文資料，這一點至關(guān)重要，倘若范文質(zhì)量欠佳，勢必會影響備考效率。然后，按照如下步驟使用范文資料：

第1 步，通讀30 篇高分范文，注意尋找文章的寫作思路和主要論點，把握整體框架。以《托福高分范文大全》中的文章為例，2013 年6 月15 日考題：

The way a person dresses in is a good indication of his/her personality and character.通讀此文時，應(yīng)找到文章主要論點：1.著裝習慣反映個人偏好;2.著裝習慣透露了性格的某些方面;3.除了著裝習慣，行為和舉止是性格的更真實體現(xiàn)。

第2 步，精讀10 篇范文，理清每句話之間的關(guān)系。如：Relatives were co-habitants inside a large house where more intimate relationships could be stably maintained and carried on.Nowadays, however, nuclear families are taking up the greatest ratio of social build-up...這兩句話之間形成了轉(zhuǎn)折的邏輯關(guān)系。又如：Minor setbacks might cause a loss of confidence, or even produce overwhelming distress.Therefore I think it is unrealistic to expect a person who is down in spirit to accomplish their goals.這兩句話之間形成了因果邏輯關(guān)系

第3 步，詳細分析10 篇范文，弄懂每句話內(nèi)部的關(guān)系以及每句話之間的關(guān)系。如：In addition, obsessed with computer games, children are gradually becoming slaves under the control of the pre-designed game modes.As a matter of fact, it is not only a waste of time, but may also considerably mislead children mentally...在這段話中，標志詞in addition 表明首句承前啟后，該句中，過去分詞短語obssessed with...表原因，children are usually...是原因所導致的結(jié)果。第二句是對首句的進一步解釋說明，注意not only...but also...這個典型句式的應(yīng)用。

第4 步，選取經(jīng)過詳細分析的10 篇范文題目進行仿寫練習。

第5 步，再選取另外10 道題目進行寫作練習，完成后與范文對照，尋找自己的優(yōu)點與不足之處。

第二篇：托福寫作兩次滿分一點經(jīng)驗

小生是在3月24日和4月28日考的托，其他的都太水，不過兩次寫作都考的不錯，都是滿分。所以在這里和大家分享下自己的經(jīng)驗。

首先，小生是考過G的，答過AW的人都知道打字速度是很重要的，而且小生的個人經(jīng)驗看來，T的寫作也是要拼字數(shù)的，兩次的獨立寫作都寫夠了600，綜合都寫到了400.所以大家練習打字是很重要的，在最后小生給大家留有一個練習打字的小軟件，可以幫助大家提高打字速度。

然后，怎么把字數(shù)寫到那么多？ 就獨立寫作來說，就一句正反兩方面說，寫到600字，除了天才，沒準備的人很難做到，這里如果大家考過AW，那么事情就會簡單些，按照Issue的反正正或正反反方式去說加上開頭結(jié)尾五大段，最后再加上一個建議端。即按以下的公式： 開頭+讓步（支持一小下你不贊同的那面）+轉(zhuǎn)折+遞進+總結(jié)+建議，大家不要覺得用Issue的方法寫托福作文會不會不好，一開始我也是這么想的，很多XDF的老師都說，G考邏輯，T考語言，實際上小生認為T也是考邏輯的，因為任何文章沒有邏輯都無法寫出。而且我以我的親身經(jīng)歷告訴大家，文章寫的很有邏輯至少是沒有害的，而且我認為會有好處。想想考官在看了那么神散形也散的文章后，看到了一篇結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的文章，即使語言稍差，也應(yīng)該是倍感輕松。

然后就是建議段最好要有，我覺得很重要，而且可以湊字數(shù)。

之后有了框架之后就是中間內(nèi)容的填寫，最好用例子，這里的例子就沒有G里的例子那么嚴格，小生覺得形式也不用那么教條，即使是你排比比喻或瞎編，只要切題就可以。但是例子一定要新，新例子從哪里找，我覺得在十天的那本書說的就很好。

例子是要準備的，考前可以根據(jù)機經(jīng)適當準備一些。

之后就是詞匯替換，我覺得詞匯替換很很總要，還是那個道理托?？脊倏戳四敲炊嗥恼氯且粯拥脑~，然后看你的文章里也充斥著那么多一樣的詞，你說他得有多煩。所以要學會把一樣話兩樣說，小生也準備了一些詞類替換，最后傳給大家。

另外，一些小細節(jié)就是名言的運用，和開頭，我認為開頭很重要，開頭寫好了，對后面也很關(guān)鍵。所以我的建議是開頭用名言和復合句，然后正文多用短句，因為開頭不是說理，不用寫的太短，所以可以拽下文采。

此外，減少語法和拼寫錯誤也是很重要，即使你寫的再好，拼寫錯誤太多，考官也不會好評你的文章。所以寫到一定程度后不要貪多，一定要留下時間檢查錯誤，這又是對打字速度的要求。

對于綜合寫作，我認為模板的作用很重要，聽力也是很重要的一部分，這個有點像AW中Argument，很多Argument中的套話也可以用在模板中，這里我覺得需要指出的一點是結(jié)尾段一定要寫，一是湊字數(shù)，二是起一個總結(jié)補充的作用，可以讓邏輯更清楚。另外，就是拼寫錯誤的問題，也是留出時間檢查的。

第三篇：托福滿分作文

托福滿分作文

很多新托?？荚嚨目加芽偸窃诟袊@，這個世界上能拿到的好作文實在是太少了，其實很多時候不是這些作文少，而是很多考友沒有努力去發(fā)掘這些作文。這不是太傻論壇就有考友分享了自己的滿分作文。無老師第一時間轉(zhuǎn)過來，推薦給各位考友！

拿這些滿分作文都該做些什么呢？看整篇結(jié)構(gòu)，要看一看這些作文的結(jié)構(gòu)是怎么展開的。要仔細的讀一下，這些作文每一段的寫作目的，到底是支持還是反對，以及哪幾段支持，哪幾段反對。看段落結(jié)構(gòu)，要仔細分析在一段之中，每一句話所起到的作用。到底是主題句，還是例證?？淳湫投鄻有?，要仔細想想這些作文每一句話說話的分寸。比對自己的寫法?？疵恳痪湓挼臅r候，腦中都要思考，這句話中文是什么意思，如果是我自己來寫，我會怎么寫！并且在下一篇自己的作文中替換為這些用法。5 用詞多樣性和準確性。如果有需要的話，再背一下是最好的了，沒有輸入就沒有輸出嗎！

比如：In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays anegative role in learning information.這句話，我們自己很有可能寫的就是，In this case, computer that is a equipment of modern technology

have a bad effectin learning information.這里的差距就很十分明顯了！因此，當給你美的東西，還要有一雙發(fā)現(xiàn)美的眼睛！2011-8-2

Independent Writing：Does modern technology help students learn more information and learn it more quickly?

Marvelousas it looks at first sight, modern technology does not help students

learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency in most cases;

or it could work towards the opposite direction which led students to lose theirinitiative to learn and explore.First of all, one property of modern technology is latently harmful to any

learning mind – it distracts.One thing we feel about when we are searching forinformation online is that the internet, as an outstanding example of modern

technology and even regarded as the innovator of education, provides us with notonly relevant results to make use of, but also external links to click.More

than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but

ended up watching Youtube videos.In this case, computer as a representative ofmodern technology plays a negative role in learning information.We do acquiremore information with the convenient tool, yet most of them are irrelevant andin the end procrastinating would lower our learning.Also, students would easily become disoriented in the huge sea of information.Although modern technology could equip us with easy access to information, thehuge amount of resources would actually leave us discombobulated.Therefore, itis only we possess information more quickly rather than we learn it more

quickly.An illustrating example is my experience with a HK digital library

which stores almost all the books I desire.At first I enjoyed downloading them

from the database, however, one month later I ended up with hundreds of booksstored in my hardware yet none of them finished or ever clicked.Furthermore, modern technology gives students an illusion that information andreal knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse or watching videos.Butin fact this forms only the first step towards useful information and effective

learning, as learning of any kind requires full concentration and interactive

thinking, which are almost absent in the pocess of popular e-learning

experience.To summarize, modern technology does not help students learn more informationand learn it more quickly, though it does make access to information and

resources much more easily.The popular e-learning still lacks the

concentration, depth, and interaction that are the hallmarkof traditional ways

of educating and learning.2011-8-10

TPO Independent writing：我們生活的時代比父輩們年輕時生活的時代更好還是更壞？ It seems that people always have a desire to compare: am I prettierthan others?Are we living in a better age? Or, as the question goes, is our life easier and

more enjoyable than it was several decades ago? I would say no, as I have

witnessed the struggle and paradox of our generation.First of all, we are now living in an age of revolution with no previous human

experience that could be referred to.Living in such a fast-changing world wouldnot be easy and comfortable at all;with everything keeps changing, everyone hasto move fast in order to catch up with the majority.However, people were muchmore stable and care-free when our grandparents were children;they did not haveto learn a second language in order to get a better job, or read a lot in order

to get informed.Yet in our age, these are supposed to be the responsibility of

young people.Another discomfort of our age is that we are experiencing interpersonal

alienation.With the development of communication technology, people in factbecome alienated with friends and relatives since they could be so easily

accessed via phone or email.Too often we feel that few of our friends are true

friends, without the traditional feeling of mutual affection which could only becreated by longtime apart.But several decades ago, people treasured their

friends and maintained relatively close interpersonal relations, which is much

more enjoyable than the estrangements we are experiencing.The last factor that has made our age so uncomfortable is the abusive use of

technology.Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human –we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices.We rushto metro station in order to catch an early train, sit in front of radioactive

computers all day long in order to get our work done, and stay in

air-conditioned rooms all summer without experiencing the natural changes

outside thick cement walls.Several decades ago, people could still live closer

to nature and make rational use of modern technology, which to me is the essenceof human living experience.However, the comparison between different times is itself ridiculous.Thecriteria could not be easily determined, and opinions are highly personal.Anyway, we have a longer life span, more advanced medical facilities, and easiertraffic than our grandparent when they were children, and we should treasure thepresent experience.Imagination of the past might only be nostalgia – if I askmy grandparents the same question, they might as well say that our life is muchbetter than the past generations.Who knows? As long as the world is stillpeaceful, life at any time would not become too difficult to handle.

第四篇：托福滿分作文

題目，環(huán)境保護和醫(yī)療改革哪個更重要）(這個是那篇據(jù)作者說是托福滿分作文）

“Water and air are the sources of people's lives, and the bases of the world.” This was said by the ancient Greek philosopher ThalesLooking at the dirty air in the sky, smelling the gross smell from Yangtze River, I can't agree with him any more.The environmental issues are always the most important to a country, especially the country I live in, China

When the environment is becoming worse and worse, I have to say it is the most serious problem in this country.My junior high classmate , Anita, lived by the end of the Yangtze River.The industrial area is around there and all the factories pollute the water day by day.Unfortunately she got cancer, like many people who lived there If the polluted environment wants to “kill” you, there is no doctor in this world can save us.Looking at her face in the funeral, I finally understood the importance of protecting environment

It is always early to improve the health care, but never the environment.My dad is the president of the city hospital, and he always tells me “If the government gives us enough money, this hospital can be the best one in this country very quick by hiring best doctors and buying newest equipment but we all know that the environment is always harder to save.After second industrial revolution in Britain, the pollution in Thames River became horrible.When the British government realized that problem, it took them tens of years to solve it.Just like my mom always told me, ” It's easy to make something dirty, really hard to make it clean again.“

It's kind of like the paradox, but many times, the environmental problems cause many health care issues Many data do prove that, the people who live in a good environment have better qualities of lives.In 1970s, LBJ, the president of United States, passed a proposal which was called Clean Water Plan It was made to make the water clean in the US, and it did work.The most amazing thing is that the data show the numbers of patients in hospital decreased rapidly during first 15 years.That does prove my point, the environmental issue is a important factor of the health care issues.As I said, we do realize the seriousness and importance of the environmental issues.We do need a ”Heaven“ with clean water and air, green trees and beautiful mountains.The ”Hell" with doctors and hospitals is always our last choice.

第五篇：TPO1 托福綜合寫作 滿分案例

The professor think that by 4-day workweek rules, the company may probabely cost more and cut in their profits.Firstly, more employees means more work space and more computers, this is a large budget that the lecture didn,t include.Even thought they accept that they can be payed less if they go on the four-day workweek, the amount of work doesn't change.To fullfill the company's business goal, they need to hire more empolyees, therefore more private work space and computers and stuff like that are needed.Since the new employees take up the salary which the others gave up, the cost of the computer and workplace cannot be solved without investing more money.Secondly, by reducing the work hour, one emploee's assignment cannot be accomplished as much as before, and then the leftover must be shifted to another employee.Also, with less time to work, the employees should work much harder than they used to be.This will lead to a high work expectations that make one's pressure more intense.How can a man live a good life under a huge stress? On the contrary to the lecture, less work time will oppositely lead to an unpleasant life than a better life which can improve one's work efficiency and make more benefits to the company.Finally, as the competition is so high in the work market, one who just work for 4 days a week cannot match those who work as hard as they can and at least 5 days a week.Being less competitive, one cannot keep their job stability, and may be the first sacrifice of the job competition.Since the boss must give their credit to those who work 5 days a week other than those who work only 4 days a week.Therefore, the delegant ones get promoted for they can be relied on crucial tasks and they will supervise the company constantly with lower absense-error happening.