第一篇：2009高考英語(yǔ)作文備考教案

2009高考英語(yǔ)作文備考教案

Ⅰ.NMET書面表達(dá)第五項(xiàng)要求

1.覆蓋所有的語(yǔ)言要點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。2.應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性。值得注意的是語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面雖有些許錯(cuò)誤, 但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。3.有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。Ⅱ.常見的不足

1.漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ) 2.無(wú)過渡語(yǔ) 3.句式單一,平鋪直敘 Ⅲ.如何增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果 1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯 2.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 3.使用較豐富的句式

一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯

1.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.5.As a result the plan was a failure.6.When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7.She went to Austria in order to study music.8.When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.You can find my house easily.二、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞

連接詞使文章語(yǔ)意通順，前后銜接緊密，可采用以下方法：

提示1：恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，如when，so，if，because，so that等。

提示2：巧妙使用意思有聯(lián)系的詞或短語(yǔ)，如First, Second, Third, Soon, What’s more, As a result等。

提示3：適當(dāng)使用過渡性語(yǔ)句，如The reasons are as follows./Every coin has two sides./On the other hand,/On the contrary, Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.(2007全國(guó)I)First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence.Second, she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace.Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills.(2007陜西)In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process.(2007浙江)連接詞、句型的選擇

1、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系

（肯定）Besides / What’s more / Also /In addition/Furthermore（否定）What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse

2、時(shí)間

一?就?：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly 不久：It was not long before ? / After a while / Soon 然后：After that / Then / So / Next 同時(shí)： At the same time / Meanwhile

3、轉(zhuǎn)折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although

4、順序：First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then

5、條件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless

6、強(qiáng)調(diào)：It was ?that / who ? / So she did./I do hope ? / She did help me./It really worked./ besides/ furthermore/moreover/what’s more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact

7、其它：

不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事：There is no need(for sb.)to do sth./It is necessary(for sb.)to do ? 最好 做某 事：You’d better do sth./ It’s better to do sth.做某事沒困難：have no difficulty in doing sth./ have no trouble in doing sth.感 謝 某 人：thank sb./ be thankful to sb./ express one’s thanks to sb./be grateful to sb./ Thanks to ?

求 助 某 人：turn to sb.for help / ask sb.for help / with the help of / with one’s help 驚

奇：To one’s surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外結(jié)果）

結(jié)

果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So 總

結(jié)：In a word / In short / Above all / After all/ generally speaking/ to sum up/ in all/altogether / as is known to all 表 達(dá) 觀 點(diǎn)：In my opinion / I think / I believe / I’m sure / I guess

原因如下（很多）：he reasons are as follows./here are many reasons for it.浪費(fèi)金錢（時(shí)間）：It’s a waste of money / time ?

Task: 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語(yǔ)。

1、Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help.2、He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the west.3、It was not long___________the police came.4、___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5、Do you agree with my arrangement ? ___________,do write to me soon.6、We can go downtown and do some shopping.___________ , we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends.___________ , I saved $80.8、Eating sugar is bad for our teeth.___________ , it may make us fat.Task: Writing Practice

請(qǐng)你給《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勣r(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的主要原因及你的看法。原因：

1、家庭貧窮，供不起兒童上學(xué)，他們不得不在家賺錢養(yǎng)家。

2、部分家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為女孩上學(xué)無(wú)用，不愿讓她們上學(xué)。

3、部分兒童對(duì)功課不感興趣，不愿上學(xué)?？捶ǎ?/p>

1、每個(gè)兒童包括女孩都應(yīng)有受教育的機(jī)會(huì)。

2、全社會(huì)都應(yīng)重視兒童教育，他們對(duì)國(guó)家的未來將起到重要的作用。要求：

1、不要逐字逐句翻譯。

2、語(yǔ)句要連貫通順。

3、字?jǐn)?shù)100個(gè)左右。

Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.Most families are poor and can’t afford their education.They have to stay at home and make money.Some parents think daughters needn’t go to school.They don’t let them go to school.Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldn’t like to go to school.All the children including girls should be educated.The whole society should pay attention to it.They’ll play an important part in the future of our country.診斷：

[優(yōu)點(diǎn)]

1、詞能達(dá)意；

2、語(yǔ)句表達(dá)基本正確。[缺點(diǎn)] 語(yǔ)句不夠連貫 [藥方]

1、使用常見句型；

2、每?jī)蓚€(gè)句子之間使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞或過渡詞。

Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁。▁▁▁，most families are too poor to send their children to school.▁▁▁▁,they have no choice but to stay at home and make money.▁▁▁,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school.▁▁▁▁,they don’t let them go to school.▁▁▁,some children are not interested in their studies.▁▁▁▁▁▁,some wouldn’t like to go to school.▁▁▁▁▁▁,all the children including girls should be educated.▁▁▁▁▁▁,the whole society should pay attention to it ▁▁▁they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.三、怎樣使用較豐富的句式

方法一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔 Rewrite the sentences

1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English.He studies hard.When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.Complete the sentences with non-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)5.聽到這個(gè)消息, 他們變的很激動(dòng)。_________the news, they got excited.6.盡管被告知許多遍, 他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò)。

__________________many times, he still repeated the mistake.7.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言, 你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默。

Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)8.面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。

9.引入市場(chǎng)后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。

10.做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。

方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力 Complete the sentences

1.He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home.Not until____________________________________.2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.Only ____________________________________.3.He is clever but he does not work hard._________________as / though ____________________________________.4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.On the other side of the street ____________________________________.Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒裝句)5.他從不說關(guān)于他家庭的事。

6.只有我們每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到水的重要性, 我們才能生活得更好。

7.只有用這種方式, 我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí)。

8.Describe the character（濟(jì)公）by using Inverted Sentence(倒裝句)

9.他是個(gè)孩子，卻知道很多。

10.墻上有個(gè)通知，上面寫著“請(qǐng)節(jié)約用水”。

方法三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式

1、感嘆句 e.g.1)How happy I was when I received your letter.2）What a kind boy he is!3）How disappointed he was!

2、強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.3、倒裝句 e.g.1)Only in this way can you solve this problem.2)There comes the police car.3)Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、省略句 e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.5、with短語(yǔ) e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定語(yǔ)從句 e.g.In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、各種名詞性從句 e.g.That’s what I should do.8、各種狀語(yǔ)從句 e.g.Use ifferent ways to describe the picture（連戰(zhàn)的破冰之旅）一?就受到歡迎

a.As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed.b.On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife?

c.Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.d.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were ? e.Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ? ??

Task: 按要求改寫下列句子,使其更具文采。

1.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)

2.I hope I can pay a visit to you next year.（強(qiáng)調(diào)）

3.Tom was puzzled.（感嘆）

4.It is great fun to climb the hill.（感嘆）

5.Tom and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒裝）

6.John likes to study and play.（否定倒裝）

7.Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort.(使用倒裝句)

8.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）

9.Soon the firefighters came.（表時(shí)間句型）

10.In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.a._____________________________________________which_____________________________________ b.With the development of ______________________ __________________________________________________ c.____________________________so ___ that________ ______________________________________________ Translate the sentences:

我校是一所市重點(diǎn)中學(xué)，位于樂陵西郊。校園很美,綠樹成蔭。

West of Leling lies our school, which is a key school of Dezhou city.It is beautiful, surrounded with many trees/with many trees.Task:書面表達(dá)：

聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國(guó)某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況： 1)大?。航?00戶人家，約500口人。

2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。

注意：1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。

2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school!① This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③.People here ④ are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small ⑤.⑥ Now it has been rebuilt.⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.⑨ They enjoy free education in it.⑩ Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school!① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.② However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast.④ People here live a much better life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school.⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.Ⅳ.習(xí)作分析

Task:書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)

某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)社正開展一場(chǎng)題為“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”

請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿。

老年教師

·教學(xué)耐心．講解細(xì)致．經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富

青年教師

·精力充沛．教學(xué)活潑．勇于創(chuàng)新

你的觀點(diǎn)?

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

2．短文必須包含表格的全部?jī)?nèi)容。要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫 學(xué)生作品1：

Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers.There are some reasons below.For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching.They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully.They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good

teachers!For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience.This is also the most important, especially for us senior students.This is only my opinion.I think young teachers are also good.點(diǎn)

評(píng)：

亮

點(diǎn)：

1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，詞匯句型的運(yùn)用比較靈活

2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。不足之處：

1、個(gè)別地方的表達(dá)需要改進(jìn)。1)Compared 2)more 3)try to make the classes lively and interesting

2、審題不全面，忽略了對(duì)青年教師這部分信息的處理。這一點(diǎn)是比較大的失誤。學(xué)生作品2:

Opinions are divided on this question.Some students who like the elderly teachers more than the young ones think that the elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience.However, the others have a different opinion.They think the teachers who are young are full of energy.Besides, their teaching is lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas.Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones because from them we both can learn a lot.點(diǎn)

評(píng)： 亮

點(diǎn)：

1、段落清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式表達(dá)比較靈活，能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)句。

2、過渡詞運(yùn)用也比較熟練。需要改進(jìn)的地方：

1)prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones 2)with explanations 3)the 去掉

4)The young teachers Some useful suggestions:

對(duì)于英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)不好的學(xué)生，可以這樣處理：把所給的材料分為幾個(gè)點(diǎn)，每個(gè)點(diǎn)用1-2句簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)出來；而對(duì)于英語(yǔ)較好的學(xué)生，盡可能地運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)詞匯跟適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用一些復(fù)合句，關(guān)鍵是要表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確到位。1.重點(diǎn)詞匯的處理跟運(yùn)用

1）Elderly teachers have more patience./They are more patient.2)Elderly teachers always explain things more carefully.They are more careful with explanations.3)Elderly teachers are rich in teaching experience.They are experienced in teaching./They have more/rich teaching experience.4)Young teachers are full of energy./They have more energy./They are more energetic.5)Young teachers’ teaching is more lively./They can make their classes lively and interesting.6)Young teachers like to think up/bring in new ideas.They are more ready to accept or create new ideas.2.句型的靈活運(yùn)用

1)Some students may think old teachers’ teaching is better.In their opinion, old teachers have more teaching experience and they are very patient.Also, they can explain things more carefully.13

Some students may like elderly teachers’ teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.2)Many young teachers work very hard.So their teaching is becoming better and better.Most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively.One possible version:

Opinions are divided on this question.Some students may like elderly teachers’ teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly, we students have much in common with them.So they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly, they are more.energetic and enthusiastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching.Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively.In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.Ⅴ.課堂小結(jié) 1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯

詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。2.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞

使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。3.使用較豐富的句式

運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。

第二篇：2011高考英語(yǔ)作文備考教案

課前預(yù)習(xí)案

備戰(zhàn)2014高考英語(yǔ)作文

Ⅰ.NMET書面表達(dá)第五項(xiàng)要求

1.覆蓋所有的語(yǔ)言要點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。2.應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性。值得注意的是語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面雖有些許錯(cuò)誤, 但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。3.有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

Ⅱ.常見的不足： 1.漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ) 2.無(wú)過渡語(yǔ) 3.句式單一,平鋪直敘 Ⅲ.如何增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果：

1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和表達(dá)方式 2.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 3.使用較豐富的句式

一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)的表達(dá)

1.The plan was not practical.As a result, we failed.2.We all think he is a successful man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4..You can find my house easily.5.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.二、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞

課前預(yù)習(xí)案

連接詞、句型的選擇

1、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系

（肯定）Besides / What’s more / Also /In addition/Furthermore（否定）What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse

2、時(shí)間

一…就…：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly 不久：It was not long before … / After a while / Soon 然后：After that / Then / So / Next 同時(shí)： At the same time / Meanwhile

3、轉(zhuǎn)折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although

4、順序：First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then

5、條件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless

6、強(qiáng)調(diào)：It was …that / who … / So she did./I do hope … / She did help me./It really worked./ besides/ furthermore/moreover/what’s more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact

7、其它：

不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事：There is no need(for sb.)to do sth./It is necessary(for sb.)to do … 最好做某 事：You’d better do sth./ It’s better to do sth.做某事沒困難：have no difficulty in doing sth./ have no trouble in doing sth.課前預(yù)習(xí)案

感謝某 人：thank sb.for/ be thankful（grateful）to sb.for / express one’s thanks to sb.for to sb.for / Thanks to …for 求 助 某 人：turn to sb.for help / ask sb.for help / with the help of 驚 奇：To one’s surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外結(jié)果）結(jié) 果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So 總 結(jié)：In a word / In short / Above all / to sum up/ in all 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)：In my opinion / I think / I believe / I guess 原因如下（很多）：The reasons are as follows./Here are many reasons for it.浪費(fèi)金錢（時(shí)間）：It’s a waste of money / time…

Task: 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語(yǔ)。

1、Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help.2、He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the west.3、It was not long ______ the police came.4、___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends，___________ , I saved $80.三、怎樣使用較豐富的句式： 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式

1、感嘆句 e.g.1)How happy I was when I received your letter.2）What a kind boy he is!3）How disappointed he was!

2、強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.3、倒裝句 e.g.1)Only in this way can you solve this problem.課前預(yù)習(xí)案

2)There comes the police car.3)Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、省略句 e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.5、with短語(yǔ) e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定語(yǔ)從句 e.g.In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、各種名詞性從句 e.g.That’s what I should do.8、各種狀語(yǔ)從句 e.g.Use ifferent ways to describe the picture（連戰(zhàn)的破冰之旅）一…就受到歡迎

a.As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed.b.On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wife…

c.Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.d.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … e.Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were … ……

第三篇：高考英語(yǔ)作文備考

新高三備戰(zhàn)高考：作文是拿高分的關(guān)鍵

1.字?jǐn)?shù)不要太少 至少在150字左右，不要寫出格子外就行。

2.開頭結(jié)尾很重要。第一段必須點(diǎn)題。文章分成三段寫，格式清晰。

3.不要用排比句。這會(huì)讓人覺得句式單一。不要重復(fù)使用同一詞語(yǔ)或詞組。語(yǔ)言不要太文學(xué)化，高考作文是將語(yǔ)言功底體現(xiàn)出來，但是又符合高考的模式和習(xí)慣，這才能保證自己拿高分的勝算大一點(diǎn)。

4.一個(gè)句子的長(zhǎng)度最少要有7到8個(gè)單詞，而一個(gè)句子當(dāng)中至少帶入了兩個(gè)點(diǎn)，如一個(gè)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的，一個(gè)詞語(yǔ)上的。但是句子不要寫的太長(zhǎng)，一層套一層也不好，最多兩層就行。

5.字跡潦草很吃虧，印象不好也會(huì)降檔。字不要寫得太小，間距也不要太小，讓人覺得讀起來吃力的同學(xué)都應(yīng)該注意。字也不要太大。

6.不要錯(cuò)得太多。寫完作文之后檢查一下自己的拼寫錯(cuò)誤，時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤等，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤當(dāng)時(shí)比較難檢查出來，這些錯(cuò)加起來有4.5出分?jǐn)?shù)又會(huì)有影響。

7.新概念的課文是很好的高考作文的模板，語(yǔ)言流暢自然，句型和詞組也很豐富，完全可以學(xué)以致用。

8.寫好作文的基礎(chǔ)就是多背書，不管是從雜志，報(bào)紙，還是閱讀的文章當(dāng)中還是課文中，遇到好的句子，實(shí)用的，都可以背下來，然后自己加以改造，成為自己用來描述生活中的事情，物體或人的語(yǔ)言，或?qū)κ虑檫M(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)的說法。

第四篇：高考備考：如何寫好英語(yǔ)作文（范文模版）

高考備考：如何寫好英語(yǔ)作文

高考寫作的實(shí)質(zhì)——變相的考察句型與詞匯的靈活應(yīng)用

英語(yǔ)寫作不同于語(yǔ)文作文的寫作，如果說語(yǔ)文作文是一個(gè)自由發(fā)揮的舞蹈，那么高考英語(yǔ)寫作就是帶著枷鎖在跳舞。我之所以這樣來形容，是因?yàn)楦呖加⒄Z(yǔ)寫作的內(nèi)容都已經(jīng)通過文字、表格、圖片這三種形式給定大家了，內(nèi)容方面，不需要學(xué)生進(jìn)行發(fā)揮，大家所需要發(fā)揮的就是給這個(gè)不變的內(nèi)容不要老去穿毫無(wú)變化的校服(簡(jiǎn)單句)，而要去穿一些不一樣的衣服，讓它顯得不那么單調(diào)，讓判卷老師能看到不同，而那些所謂的衣服也就是多變句型與詞匯。寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)——怎么去迎合評(píng)卷老師的胃口

我了解到目前很大一部分學(xué)生的作文都處在15分左右，寫作滿分25分，15分也就是個(gè)及格分，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?這個(gè)問題很容易回答。15分的作文中規(guī)中矩，該對(duì)的都對(duì)，包括內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的完整，語(yǔ)法與詞形的正確，但是全都是很簡(jiǎn)單句子的一個(gè)堆砌，沒有任何的亮點(diǎn)。而20多分的作文句型詞匯方面就做了很好的包裝，它的句子穿的衣服已經(jīng)不是校服，而是李寧、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以讓人覺得很“拽”，而高考英語(yǔ)寫作要的就是這種很“拽”的感覺。

寫作提分的三要素——句型，連詞，高級(jí)詞匯

句子是我們寫作文最大的單位，有了漂亮的句子，用好的連詞將其連句成段，在加上一些如星星般亮點(diǎn)詞匯的點(diǎn)綴，一篇好的高考英語(yǔ)作文就有了。而這三個(gè)因素中最容易把握的是句子，最難的是高級(jí)詞匯，限于大家的詞匯還比較有限，一篇文章中出現(xiàn)那么一兩個(gè)就夠了。我們應(yīng)該把重心放在句型上，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)最容易把握。

但是大家又有這樣的困惑，學(xué)校里老師也給了我們很多的句型啊，動(dòng)輒成五十上一百句的，大家背的挺多，但是面對(duì)考試的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)背的那些怎么也用不上。其實(shí)不是那些東西沒有用，而是它們太干了，就好比一根干骨頭，大家嚼起來很沒有味，也不知道該把他們往哪里放。

在這里我給大家提供一種比較切實(shí)可行迅速提高的練習(xí)方法，在接下來的時(shí)間里只要大家按照這個(gè)方法來，就一定會(huì)有收獲。找見歷年真題，一周只需要寫兩篇，但是要這么來寫。

1.把你要寫的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用九到十句的漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來。

2.逐一地進(jìn)行翻譯，不是用簡(jiǎn)單句，而是要刻意地去想。

(1)可以用什么樣的復(fù)雜句。

(2)怎樣去避開不會(huì)的表達(dá)，轉(zhuǎn)義。

例如：

這本書是如此的有趣，以致于我讀了一遍又一遍。

1)This book was so interesting that I read it again and again。

2)This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again。

3)This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again。

4)So interesting was this book that I read it again and again。

這四句譯文當(dāng)中無(wú)疑評(píng)卷老師最欣賞的是第四句，因?yàn)樗昧说寡b。

再例如：

如果征收門票，需要建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象。這句話中肯定“收”那個(gè)動(dòng)作很多同學(xué)不會(huì)表達(dá)，那能不能想一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)義的方式，既避開了“收”這個(gè)動(dòng)作還能表達(dá)原句的含義。

A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn't help the image of the city。

這個(gè)譯文中用一個(gè)大家很熟悉的經(jīng)典句型there be句型化險(xiǎn)為夷。

如何備考

其實(shí)這種思維大家都有，但是沒有成為一種思路，讓它能在考試中起到作用，那是因?yàn)榇蠹揖毜蒙?。英語(yǔ)寫作處在一種很尷尬的境地，一方面大家要分?jǐn)?shù)，但另外一方面大家一個(gè)學(xué)期里寫的作文也就是期中期末的兩篇。毫不夸張地說，有的學(xué)生上了三年的高中可能只寫了六篇作文，所以練習(xí)是很重要的，要是現(xiàn)在不練而把高考當(dāng)練習(xí)，那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那時(shí)你不要罵評(píng)卷老師不公平，而是應(yīng)該問問自己備考的時(shí)候?yàn)槭裁床欢嗑殠灼瑫r(shí)間都是擠出來的，希望大家可以擠出時(shí)間來練寫作。

第五篇：高考英語(yǔ)作文備考優(yōu)秀

英語(yǔ)作文備考優(yōu)秀范文

第一篇：

金錢是一切嗎？

In Money Everything? I don’t think money is everything, but we can’t do without it.Fox example, money can’t buy us happiness and a good education.And for another example, money can’t buy us good health and a long life.But we can not live without money.We need it for our daily necessities such as food, clothes and transportation.What’s more, we need it to live a better life.In short, we should learn the value of money and make the most of its advantages.第二篇：

1〃一些人喜歡住在城市，因?yàn)槌鞘猩钣性S多便利。2〃但有些人喜歡住在農(nóng)村。3〃我認(rèn)為，……

Where to live —in the City or in the Country Some people like living in the city because city life has many advantages.They think there are more job opportunities in cities, life there is more colorful and meaningful than that in the country, and there are more modern conveniences in cities for people to enjoy.But some other people prefer to live in the countryside.They say life in the countryside is closer to nature and better for their health, life there is quieter and that country people are more honest than city people.I would like to live in a city when I am young to earn enough money and I live in the countryside when I am old for having a quite life.第三篇： 你叫李平，是英語(yǔ)系學(xué)生會(huì)主席。寫一封信給王教授，請(qǐng)他做一個(gè)有關(guān)中國(guó)歷史的報(bào)告。注意信中要包括目的、時(shí)間、日期和地點(diǎn)。

May 19,2002 Dear Professor Wang: On behalf of the Student Union of the English Department, I am writing to invite you to give a lecture on Chinese history.We have planned to have such a lecture at 2:30 p? m.in Lecture Hall 419, on May 25.Looking forward to your lecture.Inform us in advance if you can not come.Sincerely yours, Li Ping

第四篇：

男女應(yīng)該平等嗎？(Should Men and Women Be Equal?)

Should Men and Women Be Equal? People have different ideas about this issue, Some people say that men are superior to women in ability because men are physically stronger, do most of the hard labor in the world and hold most important positions.Other people believe that women have the ability to compete with men.There have been many famous women state leaders and great scientists in the world.We should fully carry out the principle “to each according to his work” so that the enthusiasm of both men and women for work can be fully aroused.第五篇：

1〃在中國(guó)，自行車是最為流行的交通工具。2〃騎自行車有許多好處。3〃自行車的未來……

The Bicycle in China The bicycle is the most popular means of transportation in China.China is a country “on bicycle wheels”.People ride them for various purposes such as going to and from school and work.Bicycles are very cheap and easy to buy in China.There are many advantages to riding a bicycle.First, using a bicycle can greatly help reduce the air pollution in many big cities.Second, people can improve their health by riding a bicycle.The future of bicycle will be bright.In some European countries, city governments have arranged pedestrians to use “public bicycles” to travel round the city center free of charge.第六篇：

1〃假冒偽劣商品是個(gè)嚴(yán)重問題。2〃一些原因?qū)е铝诉@種現(xiàn)象。3〃為了掃除假冒偽劣商品，……

Fake Commodities Fake and poor quality commodities are a serious problem.Many things can be faked such as soybean sauce, vinegar, bicycles, and many other things.The interests of consumers are affected, and many enterprises keep losing money because of cheap fake commodities.There are some reasons for such a phenomenon.The major one is the desire of some people to “make easy money”.These people think nothing of the law of the protection of intellectual property rights.To get rid of fake and poor quality commodities, the government should educate people to obey the law of the protection of individual intellectual property rights and not to sell any fake goods.The government should punish severely and close down all the factories producing fake goods

第七篇：

你是 Alice。你的朋友 Bonnie 很快就要到你的鄉(xiāng)間小屋拜訪，但你卻要出去一會(huì)兒。留一張便條給她，告訴她 食品在哪兒，告訴她一個(gè)人在屋里時(shí)應(yīng)注意些什么。

May 18, 2002 Dear Bonnie: I will be away for a while.The key to the cottage is under the doormat, and the food is in the refrigerator.After entering the house, lock the door from inside at once.The cottage is far away from the nearest town, and the area is not quite safe from burglars.So I think the saying is right “Where there is precaution, there is no danger”.Have a nice stay here.Yours, Alice